Unfaithful-Michi FF 2nd climax

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Prachi is dressed in her bridal costume.She looks absolutely beautiful as a bride in her red bridal outfit.But the bridal happiness and excitement are missing from her face.Her eyes are not filled with joy or shyness.Her eyes are welled up with tears.
"Prachi!You look so upset".Her mother Avantika says.
P:How can i smile mom after what you did to me?
Avantika's tears flow down.Neev enters the room.
N:Prachi...why are you talking like this to your mom?She gave birth to you.She nurtured you.You did'nt know the hardships of life because of your mom.
P:I don't know the hardships of life?You both have not suffered like me.And what about the mental trauma i undergo now?It's only because you both.Neev..being my best friend instead of being truthful to me,you cheated me.You both lied to me that the truth has been told to Milind Mishra.But thankfully atleast now mom confessed that Milind does'nt know anything.The truth is hidden from Milind.How can i marry him happily?
N:We can understand your feelings.We lied to you only to make you happy.You remember your first meeting with Milind Mishra?

Prachi remembers that sweet moment.She met Milind first during the holi party filled up with colours.While dancing Milind Mishra and Prachi Shah bumped into each other.Just a glance.That was more than enough for Prachi to fall in love with Milind.It was love at first sight.But due to a bitter personal experience she suppressed her feelings.It was a pleasant surprise for her when she realized that Milind also feels the same for her.She realized it when his parents Mehen Mishra and Nikhila Mishra came to her house with a proposal.

Neev:You were so happy when Milind's parents came with a propsal.How can we break your happiness by revealing the truth to them?
P:But this is cheating.I will tell everything to Milind now.
N:It's not cheating Prachi.You are innocent.You have not done anything wrong.
Avantika:Please don't tell Shiv anything.We will get embarassed before everyone.In this age i don't want to see our family name getting ruined.Your father's heart will break in the heaven.After my death,how will you live Prachi?I can die peacefully only if you get married to a nice guy.Promise me that you won't talk to Milind about your past.
Prachi's tears flow down.It is a like a waterfall.

Prachi enters the mandap with a gloomy face.Milind's chocolate eyeballs roll over her.His smile seeing Prachi is cute like a blossomed flower.His eyes and smile are filled with his love for Prachi.Milind and Prachi enter into the bond of marriage.
While walking around the fire,Prachi's heart pains.
She thinks:This fire is witnessing us promosing each other that we will stand by each other for seven janmas.But the truth is that even if i stand by my husband during his diffuclt times i will always be tagged as an unfaithful wife.What a fate!

Prachi enters the room which is decorated with rose petals.Milind's entry makes her nervous.
She thinks:He is the only man i have ever loved in my life.I'm supposed to be happy now.But i'm not able to smile.
Milind smiles at her.She smiles back.
She thinks:He serves my smile.But do i deserve atleast his smile?
M:You look gorgeous in your red bridal outfit.You are beautiful like a princess.
She blushes forgetting everything for a moment.Milind keeps his arm on her's.Unexpectedly Prachi faints.Milind is shocked.
M:Prachi!
He sprinkles water on her face.She opens her eyes slowly.
Milind is relieved:Are you okay?
P:Yes..
M:What happened?
P:Stress...i'm really tired of the wedding rituals.Lots of functions...busy schedule.
M:I got worried.Prachi..you need to take rest.A complete rest.Sleep well.
P:Thank you Milind.Good night.
M:Good night.
They both close their eyes in the bed.
Prachi says in her mind:I'm sorry Milind.I had to pretend to faint.

Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago
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brilliant michi ff jasmine..really enjoyed reading....eagerly waiting to see what happen next....plz cont soon...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey jasmine..beautiful update hun..luvd it❤️
continue soon
thnx 4 pm🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey Jasmine thanx 4 another ff 🤗 🤗 🤗.
Aww it was luv at 1st sight 4 our MiChi 😉 😳 😳
luved d start So MiChi is married now 😳 😃.
D suspense u hv put up is really vry interestng
Guess wats Prachi's secret 😕 😕.
Hope our MiChi luv remains 4ever 😃.
Gr8 job hun ⭐️ 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 ⭐️
Plzz update d nxtr part soon dieing to knw more 😛
Thanx 4 d PM 😃
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Beautiful update jasmine
pls continue soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hi jasmine...🤗

nice start ff dear...👍🏼
loved the first part....
so michi is married
nice twist wonder wat is Prachi's secret..??😲
continue soon...

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👏Hi jasmine beutiful ff and thank u for the pm dear pls do continue eager to see whats more.👏
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Hai jasmine
very nice michi ff dear
plz continue soon
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hieee jasmine di
thank you for listening to me. i always look forward for your work.
thank you for the pm.
the ff is really very awesome and even the idea is also good.
do update soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
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I wrote this 4 other couples also.So if there is any diff in names plz 4giv me.I edit in a hurry.

Plz check my post everyday even if i don't pm u all.Everyday i'll b posting a part

Unfaithful Part 2


Prachi freshens up and comes out of the bathroom with wet hair.Milind catches her from behind.She is shocked.He laughs.
P:Milind?You?I got scared.
He grins.
M:Why are you scared when i'm here?I will not let anything bad happen to you.
She thinks:Now it's too late.I wish you had entered my life long ago.
M:Yesterday my dream came true.I was waiting to get you.I
just can't believe that now you are mine.Only mine.
M:You know what I felt when I saw you first?I felt that you are made for me .What did you feel when you saw me first?
She is shy.
He smiles:I know that you also felt the same.
Prachi thinks:Shiv is so loving.I don't deserve him.

He holds her hand and keeps it on her chest:You are
my luck.
She feels uncomfortable and tries to get away from him.
M:Prachi!What are you thinking?
P:I was thinking that you are an understanding husband.Do i deserve you?
M:No Prachi..we both deserve each other,because we
are made for each other.
I'm lucky to get you.So sometimes i doubt whether I deserve you.
Her face becomes dull.
She thinks:Milind trusts and
respects me so much.If he comes to know the truth? I have to stay away from Milind.If i go closer to him..no..no..that's cheating.I can't cheat him always.Poor guy.He loves me very much.But he is
not getting anything from his me.


Prachi brings bed coffee for Milind.
M:Thank you.
He starts drinking.
M:Did you drink coffee?
P:No.
He extends his cup:Drink this.
She smiles.She thinks:I have always dreamt of having such cure romantic moments.
But suddenly her mind tells:No Prachi..you have to control yourself.
P:This is your's no?
M:We will share it
P:I'm sorry,i don't like drinking from other's cup.

He becomes dull.
P:PLease don't feel bad.
M:It's ok.

Evening.
M:Prachi,get ready.We have to go for
a party.
P:Sorry.I'm not coming for the party.
M:What are you telling?My friends arranged this party
for us.Please come with me.
P:Ok,let me wear a new saree.
M:Thanks for coming with me.
He sits there.She takes the saree.
P:I have to wear saree.
M:Ok..
P:If you are here how can i change my saree?So can you please go out of this room?
He is embarrassed by her unexpected request:Ok,I'm sorry.
He goes out.
He thinks:Why do I feel that Prachi is
avoiding me?Is my feeling true?

Prachi comes in a grand black saree.Milind can't
take his eyes off her.
M:You look really nice.
P:Thank you..You also look nice.
He is excited:Reallly?I look good today?
P:Not only today.I have always felt that you are handsome.
He is thrilled by her compliment.

Party....
The song 'Kurbaan hua
Teri tishnagi mein yun
Kurbaan hua
Teri aashiqui mein yun

Bekhudi mein bekali mein
Bekasi mein hua
Tujhko har duaa di, aur dagaa bhi
Aur fanaa hua

Kurbaan huaaaaa?
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa..
Ada pe?wafa pe?.jafa pe
Kurbaan huaaaa
Kurbaan hua ha haaannnaaa?'{Kurbaan}is played.
One guy announces:We ask all the
couples especially the newly married couple Milind & prachi to
dance to the song.
Milind smiles at Prachi.
P:My mind is not allowing me
to dance.
He is shocked:Why?
P:I'm not feeling well.
M:What happened?We will go to a doctor.
P:No need.I will be ok if I take rest.
Her cell phone rings.It is Avantika:How are you?
P:Fine mama.
A:How is Milind?
P:Fine.How are you?
A:I'm fine. ?keep Milind happy.Don't give him the
chance to worry.He gave you a new life.

Prachi becomes upset:Now we are at a party.So bye mama.
A:Bye.

She thinks:I should'nt make Milind sad.He deserves to be happy.
She looks at Milind.He looks sad. She smiles at him.He smiles.
P:Now I'm ok.We will dance together.
He is thrilled:Really?
P:Ya.
He leads her to the dance floor.They dance together.
She thinks:How can i become so intimate with Milind while i know that it is cheating?

Milind looks at Prachi. Seeing her dull face,his face becomes dull.
Some stylish girls are watching them dance.
One girl:What a breathtaking dance performance!
Another girl:They both look hot together.
Another girl:Milind's face expressions are superb.It suits the song very well.He is so romantic with Prachi.
After the song gets stopped she moves away from him.He becomes dull.
He thinks:Why do I feel that Prachi is keeping a distance
from me?

Edited by jasminerahul - 14 years ago

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