Childish Dosti (Mayur ff) Updated 16/05/11 - Page 54

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Posted: 15 years ago
awwww it was so
cute update loved mayu's gift
and daily updates gr8 waiting
for next update
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Posted: 15 years ago
amazing update...
it was sweet n cute...
do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
daily udpates tahts amazing

i loved this update
so sweet of mayank to ask the boys to agree to the girls condition

waiting for tonites udpate
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Posted: 15 years ago
awwwwwwww

nice update........

hey this is wonderful.
u were saying u wanna close it plz don't do that.........m loving it.

mayur scene wa so cute........

updte soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
nice, lovely part.loved it.
continue soon.
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hi nice update
very sweet and simple
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awesome update
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Hey dear
awesome promo
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sweet update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey guys this is the next part enjoy

Part 13 B

Next Day

Nupur woke up and called mayank

M-hello

N-main bol rahi hu

M-good morning sweetheart

N-good morning sweetu, ab yeh batao ke koi plan socha

M-haan socha hai na, raat ko stars ke neeche beach pe ek romantic date, hows that

N-mayank mera matlab humare doston ko milane ke plan se tha

M-how boring, maine kuch nahi socha

N-fine, toh ab socho

M-soch hee raha hu, tum aur main beach par akele, tum bahut hot lag rahi ho

N-arrrrrrrrrhhhhhhhhh tum rehne do, mainkhud soch lungi

M-as you wish jaan

After Sometime

All were sitting in the hall, boys together and girls together

N-gunjan, dia ab bahut hogaya na

D-nupur unhone hume dumb kaha tha

N-toh ab hogaya na, kyat um log unhe miss nahi kar rahe ho?

G-haan yaar puri vacation aise waste nahi karni chahiye na

D-hmmmmmm

N-toh tum log tayaar ho

G,D-hmmmmm

M-toh tum log patch up ke liye tayaar ho na

B,S-haan

Girls and boys came infront of eachother

Girls, Boys-sorry

N-so sweet, ab chalo beach par chalke enjoy karte hain

M-good idea, chalo

At beach

All are enjoying at the beach throwing water on eachother but mayur are busy in eachother

M-mera gift kaisa laga

N-awwww it was so sweet bilkul tumhari tarah

M-toh mera gift kahan hai

N-mujhe samajh hee nahi aa raha ke kya du

M-theek hai main batata hu mujhe kya chahiye

He whispered in her ear (you all must have guessed) and her mouth fell open

N-mayank yeh kya gift hua

M-arre jo mujhe pasand hai wohi toh lunga

N-nahi yeh nahi

M-kyun

N-shut up mayank

D-yeh in logo ko kya hogaya hai, dono kaise hass hass ke baatein kar rahe hain

S-haan, I think inke beach kuch chal raha hai

G-you are right samrat

B-chalo dekhte hain

From back-oooooooooohhhhhhhhhhh

M-kya hua guys

S-yeh toh hume puchna chahiye ke ho kya raha hai

N-matlab

D-matlab yeh ke tum dono relationsip mein ho yeh bataya kyun nahi

Mayur (shocked)-tum logon ko kaise pata

S-oh toh yeh sach hai, hum toh sirf guess maar rahe the

M-aisa kuch nahi hai

B-ab toh maan jao yaar

G-haan

N-fine yeh sach hai

D-yeh hui na baat, so guys ab tum log couple ho toh party toh bati hee hai

B-ya right

M-ok ok guys so kahan chale

S-pub chalte hainM,N-Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii not at all

G-chill yaar, theek hai ghar pe hee sahi

N-so ghar chalte hain

In the evening

Boys were standing in the hall waiting for girls and then their eyes stopped as the girls enter, all were staring at their partners, nupur was wearing a white knee length dress n mayank was wearing white shirt and jeans

M-wow nupur tum bahut beautiful lag rahi hu

N-tum bhi kafi handsome lag rahe ho

G-guys tumhe mayank se kuch seekhna chahiye, dekho who kitna sweetly nupur ki taareef kar raha hai

S-dekh le mayank teri wajah se hume sunna parh raha hai

B-chalo na guys dance karte hain, music start karta hu

Woh Pehli Baar Jab Hum Mile (boys forwarded hands infront of girls)

Haathon Mein Haath Jab Hum Chale (girls gave their hands)

Ho Gaya Ye Dil Deewana (boys pulled their partners and holded them)

Hota Hai Pyaar Kya Isne Jaana (girls kept their hands on boy's shoulders)

Teri Aankhon Mein Jannat Basake Chala (they looked at eachother eyes)

Teri Zulfon Ki Chhaaon Mein Chalta Chala (all moved on the music)

Tere Neinon Mein Chein Tere Labh Pe Khushi (boys twirled girls)

Tujhko Hi Main Mohabbat Bana Ke Chala (all sways)

Woh Pehli Baar Jab Hum Mile (mayur remembered their childhood masti)

Ho Gaye Shuru Ye Silsile (remembered their confession)

Ho Gaya Ye Dil Deewana (smiled at eachothed)

Hota Hai Pyaar Kya Isne Jaana (mayank winked at nupur)

Khilti Kaliyon Mein Dhoondhoon Bas Tere Nishaan (mayank pushed her holding her hand)

Main Na Jaanoon Hai Aakhir Ye Kya Karvaan (pulled her back with her back touching his chest)

Tujhe Dekhoon To Aaye Labh Pe Khushi (holded her from the waist)

Khuda Na Kare Ho Kabhi Dooriyaan (nupur kept her hand on his)

Woh Pehli Baar Jab Hum Mile (he turned her around)

Haathon Mein Haath Jab Hum Chale (kissed her hand)

Ho Gaya Ye Dil Deewana (twirled her around)

Hota Hai Pyaar Kya Humne Jaana (pulls her back to in his arms)

All were dancing, nupur holded mayank's hand and took him to the garden

M-kya hua nupur, aaj akele mein milne ka bada mann kar raha hai

N-mayank

M-arre achi baat hai bolo kya kehna hai

N-woh mayank main keh rahi thi ki mijhe tumhara gift bahut acha laga

M-ohhhh thanks, mujhe usko dekh ke tumhari yaad aayi toh main le aya

N-aur woh main keh rahi thi ki

Before she can continue mayank stopped her by kissing for the very first time, her eyes got wide open he broke

N-yeh kya tha

M-main kya karu jab bhi tum se kehta ho toh tum mujhe bhaga deti ho toh maine khud hee le li

N-mayank yeh kya baat hui

M-yeh mayank sharma ki baat hai tum nahi samjhogi (tap her head) dumbo

He moved towards the door when nupur stopped him by holding his hand, he turned and nupur kissed him and now he was totally shocked

M-nupur yeh yeh

N-yeh nupur bhushan ka style hai tum nahi samjhoge (taps his head) stupid

She went inside and mayank was standing their with his mouth still open

M-seriously yaar yeh ladki kuch bhi kar sakti hai, isse panga nahi lena chahiye

Mayank also went to his room, on the other side nupur was thinking about what she did

N-nupur yeh tune kya kiya, par usne bhi toh mujhe challenge kiya tha toh usko sabak sikhana jaruri tha, dekha kaise bolti band karadi uski, well done nupur

She slept with a wide smile on her face and blushing while mayank slept with still in shock but smiling

Precap-All back to home and Exam announcement


Guys this was a longggg part and hope enjoyed it, so now i want LONG COMMENTS or else i won't continue, this is a open dhamki to all my readers lolzz 😆 but i am serious

You Have Answer one question also - Which was your favorite scene or dialouge in this ff till now

SO DO COMMENT AND PRESS THE LIKE TAB

Edited by mayur-ki-diwani - 15 years ago

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