SaJan OS-Living Life For The Sake of Our love..

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"I'll complain 2papa if u don't drink d milk." Suhani said, running after neha, samrat n gunjan's daughter.

"main doodh nahi piyungi phui......main papa k haath se doodh piyungi...." replied neha, still running.

"papa ko aane mein der ho jaayega neha." Suhani said.

"maine keh dia na....main doodh nahi piyungi!!" saying this, she ran in her room n started 2play wid her dolls. Suhani also came with her.

Meanwhile samrat came in hall n searched suhani n neha.

"ye dono kahan hain? Shayad upar room mein hongi." Samrat goes in neha's room.

"papa aa gaye.....papa...papa.....maine aapko bahut miss kia papa......i love u papa....." neha happily danced to see samrat n went 2hug him as tight as possible.

Samrat was tired due to office work, n one cud clearly make it out 4m his face, but as he saw his daughter smiling n dancing, his all tiredness vanished at once. Neha's little arms encircled samrat's leg, as she ws not able to reach till his waist.......samrat felt very nice at this moment.

"papa ne bhi apni princess ko bahhoooot miss kia...! n love u too princess!" samrat took her in his arms n kissed her both cheeks.

"tumne doodh piya?" he asked.

"tumhare bina kabhi isne doodh piya hai kya jo aaj peeti?" suhani said n showed him d glass full of milk. Samrat made a fake angry face 2neha.

"very bad girl neha......doodh kyun nahi piya? Jao, papa tumse naraaz ho gaye hain....ab main tumse tab baat karunga jab tum doodh piyogi." Samrat made neha stand on bed n turned aside. Neha made a cute crying face.

"par main to aapke haath se doodh peena chahti thi...isliye main aapka wait kar rahi thi....."

Samrat looked at neha. She loved him so much tht she always wanted 2drink milk 4m samrat's hands.

"agar aisi baat hai, to glass do suhani.....meri princess ko mere haathon se doodh peena hai na?" samrat smiled n took d glass 4m suhani. She went downstairs.

"yayyy papa....aap kitne acche hain...aapki princess doodh piyegi.." saying this, she forwards her mouth 2drink milk, samrat makes her drink. Within 2minutes, she drank d milk.

Samrat made her lay on bed and sat beside her.

"bahut der ho gayi hai princess......tumhe ab so jana chahiye...." samrat said.

"papa, aaj phui ne mujhe mamma ki bahut photos dikhai.....mamma bahut beautiful thi na??" she asked innocently.

"haan princess......tumhari mamma bahut beautiful thi....aur dekhna, tum bhi unki tarah beautiful ho jaogi." Samrat smiled.

"sachchi papa???" neha's eyes glowed brightly.

"muchchi.....lekin uske liye tumne wo har cheez karni hogi jo tumhari mamma kia karti thi.....wo raat mein jaldi so jaaya karti thi." Samrat replied

"to agar main bhi jaldi so jaaun, to mamma jaisi ho jaaungi na?" neha asked again.

Samrat shook his head to say yes n smiled.

"papa.....aap mujhe chhodke kahin nahi jaayiyega na??

Samrat looked at neha with very concern n tears in his eyes.

"nahi meri princess......papa aapko chhodke kahan jaayenge? Papa yahin tumhare paas rahenge. Now close ur eyes." Samrat said.

"I love u papa.......gudnite..." neha kissed his cheek softly.

"love u too princess...gudnite." samrat kissed her forehead n made her 2sleep.

As he was making her 2sleep, his mind went 5years back, when an incident changed his life completely.

***FLASHBACK***

Samrat was standing near the window in his bedroom, n looking up at the sky.

"tumne apna vada tod dia chashmish......tum bahut buri ho.....humne saat phere lete wakt ye kasam liya tha....ki ek dusre ke saath jiyenge, aur ek dusre k saath hi marenge.....magar tumne vo wada tod dia.....kyun chashmish kyun?? Kyun tumne vada toda......kyun tumne mujhe is nafrat bhari duniya mein akela chhod dia?kyun....kyun....kyun kia tumne aisa.....kyun tumne apni zindagi chhod di chashmish kyun........." with dis samrat broke into tears. He couldn't bear the pain of gunjan's death anymore.....he was weeping very badly. "main....main tumhare bina is duniya mein kya karunga.....tumhare bina meri zindagi maut se bhi badtar hai......main.......main apni jaan de dunga.....maar daalunga khud ko....sirf tumhare liye...main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta hun....main khud ko maar daalunga....i'll kill myself......."

"aur hamare pyaar ki nishaani ka kya samrat??" a voice came 4m behind.

Samrat turned back n was happy 2see gunjan standing there. He came 2her.

"chashmish....chashmish tum.....tum zinda ho.......tum mere.....mere saath ho na......mujhe yakin nahi ho raha hai...tumne apna vada nahi toda chashmish....tum vaapas aa gayi..." samrat caressed her cheeks.

" maine kabhi apna vada toda hi nahi samrat....main tumhare saath thi, saath hun aur hamesha saath rahungi.......lekin is waqt tum hi ho jo apna vada bhool rahe ho." Gunjan said.

"kya?"

"tum ye duniya chhodna chahte ho....sirf meri duniya mein aane k liye....tum khud ko maarna chahte ho......lekin....hamare pyaar ki nishaani ka kya hoga samrat? Hamare beti ka kya hoga? Tumne ek baar bhi uske baare mein nahi socha, ki use tumhari zarurat hogi......."

"aur main? Chashmish kya mujhe tumhari zarurat nahi hai?? Tum meri zindagi, mera sabkuchh ho....main tumhare bina nahi jee sakta hun." Samrat said.

"lekin ab main chahti hun ki tum hamari beti k liye jiyo.......wo hamare pyaar ki nishaani hai samrat......kya tum use is duniya mein akele chhodna sahi samajhta ho? Abtak main tumhari zindagi, tumhare jeene ki vajah thi, lekin abse hamare beti hi tumhare jeene ki vajah hogi.....' gunjan said and cupped his face.

"main to hamesha tumhare saath rahungi samrat......jab kabhi tumhe meri zarurat mehsoos hogi, apni aankhein bad kar lena....tum mujhe apne saamne paaoge....." she said n kissed his forehead slightly. Samrat looked at her with tears in his eyes.

"tum mujhe chhodkar jaa rahi ho chashmish???" he asked with a teary voice.

"bilkul nahi samrat.....hamara pyaar itna sachcha aur gehra hai ki bhagwaan bhi hame alag nahi rakh sakta hai......main hamesha tumhare saath rahungi......lekin tumhe mujhse vaada karna hoga ki tum apni ek nayi zindagi shuru karoge, jisme sirf hamare beti hi tumhare jeene ki vajah hogi.....use tumhari,apne papa ki zarurat hai..." gunjan spoke.

"I love u chashmish.....aur marte dum tak karta rahunga...." samrat said.

"I love u too samrat...." she kisses his cheek slightly n moves her hands on samrat's eyes n closes it.

After a moment, samrat hears a baby's crying n so he opens his eyes, but he found his chashmish nowhere......he then looked at bed, n saw his daughter crying....as if she badly needed samrat.

Samrat remembered gunjan's words n cannot see his baby crying..he quickly goes n picks her up in his arms. She stopped crying n looked at samrat.

"im sorry princess.......thodi der k liye main selfish ho gaya tha.......bhool gaya tha ki meri ek pyaarisi beti bhi hai jisko meri zarurat hai.....lekin tumhari jo mamma hain na....wo bahut samajhdaar hain....unhone mujhe samjhaya hai ki abse main sirf aur sirf tumhari khaatir jiyun. Abse tum hi meri jeene ki vajah ho princess.....main tumse vaada karta hun ki tumhe wo saari khushiyaan aur pyaar dunga jo tumhe milna chahiye......tumhari aankhon mein kabhi bhi aansun nahi aane dunga.....tumhe maan-papa ka pyaar dunga...." samrat slightly kisses her forehead n looks up

"thank u chashmish....for being wid me always........"

***FLASHBACK ENDS***

A drop of tear escaped thru samrat's eyes as he remembered tht moment....d moment when he was all alone.......when he lost his love n wife gunjan in a car accident.

When he saw neha in deep sleep, he quietly tried 2go 4m there, but neha was holding his one finger very tightly...as if he'll leave her n go. Samrat smiled at this n kissed her hands gently. He decided not 2go 4m there as she wud b disturbed....so he remained there n within 15minutes...he went in deep sleep.

ok guyss dis ws my first evr os on sajan.....hope u liked it....please comment n press like tab......agr nahi achha laga den complaints r also welcome...😊
luv,
ria
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautiful OS dear!
seriously SaJan were just perfect.......
do wirte more nd pm wen evr u do (by adding me in ur buddy list)

--Adya!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautiful OS dear...really very touchy! it doesnt seem like ur first attempt...u have written so brilliantly! awsmmm wrk.👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aww...!! Lovely OS!
The part after the flashbackk was like.. OMG
You wrote the whole thing really well!!
Neha was sooo sweet...
N as usual SAM ROXX!!!
Loved it!
--Manjari
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear superb and outstanding OS loved it superb yar 👏
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyy dear...
ur 1st os was simply mindblownggggg
amzingggggg concept n beautiful presentation...
lovely....

Richa
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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautiful yaar
u expressed his feelings so beautifully that...👏
loved ur os

Edited by mohit_rockstar - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This Was So Beautiful!!😍
You Are Very Talented...!!
Pllzz Keep Making MORE!!😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its wonderful os dear
superb
muahhhhhhhhhh
hugsssss....
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its awesome dear
loved it to the core
do write another one sooooon

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