u r my friend ,philosopher and guide (SAJAN OS)

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hey guys 😃last week was really gave us beautiful ,cute and also brooding moments on sajan on this forum ppl shared their pov abt career abt sajan's track ,cvs see made us to think again in this matter 😉😆 choosing this beautiful track(i really hope they will handle it beautifully )from 2 epi i am wondering this story is moving like and all my friends also shared their beautiful thought as story is moving somehow ROCK ON way or 3 IDIOTS way and i also saw glimpse of LAKSHAYA in it as well all 3 meaningful movies

as last day we saw glimpse of 3 IDIOTS and day before yesterday like LAKSHAYA care free sam no any aim only partying his pass time 😆 and i really hope then this story will move like ROCK ON way as gun will understand him and help him to choose and make him understand reality and also full fill his desire

so here i want to share one OS on this track this OS is only and only based on sajan's talk abt this matter so only one place and one eve ,

my OS starts with gun realizing something is in sam's heart and his confusion she decide to ask him to make him speak out his heart and suggested to go on beach so they can share their views

here u go

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evening covered with darkness of clouds ,and sun setting behind the edge without brightness, winds blew fast and on beach standing one couple in same condition in their heart , his heart and mind fighting with emotions and she can hear clash of both but couldn't understand the battle as well bcz he himself closed his heart infront of her he is agreeing with her pov but she can find something unusual in his heart which he never did before he shared all his feeling with her as a friend today he needs his friend his best friend who can guide him and here she is waiting for him to speak his heart so that she can understand him again in piercing silence they can here their heart bits which is unusual one distance which is piercing her why he is hiding his heart but she won't let go this time bcz its abt his future , their future she has a right to know what he feels but she failed and distrusted him once how can see initiate her first step to ask him but for his future she has to

The lonely wanderer, who watches by the seashore the waves that roll between him and his home, talks of cruel facts, material barriers that, just because they are material, and not ideal, shall be the irresistible foes of his longing heart.

samrat:chashmish lets go its too let and sun is also setting and it will be dark

gunajn : ya it will be dark samrat if we won't catch it brightness in our life

samrat: brightness ,what r u talking abt chashmish and why u said u wanted to visit beach today as u know this is my fav place and today u want to visit it why ?

gunjan: samrat look at that seashore ,and sea , its destiny of sea , on seeing it ,it looks so beautiful and peaceful but in inner side of sea filled with mystery , we don't know what 's in its inner side and can't predict as well , sea has a heat inner side but we can't see as well but we can feel only when we touch its inside we can feel it

samrat: chashmish tum.......

gunjan: samrat our hearts r same way , we can hide our pain our anger our guilt and our confusion in it n none can find it till he/she doesn't want but who can touch their heart can feel it , i think u forgot but i think i was , is and will be ur best friend

what r u hiding in ur heart samrat what's matter what is bothering to u , when i asked u to close ur eyes u saw ur dream and what u want to do but after that u r feeling low what's in ur heart samrat please tell me

samrat: chashsmish nothing is like that actually i m feeling awkward that's why all this ( turning his face so she can't catch him speaking lie)

gunjan: samart u can turn ur face with me but u can't lie to me and to urself as well
tell me what's in ur heart i told u whenever u need friend i will be there

samrat: of course chashmish

in mind( my dreams r different chashmish n u know very well u always saw me with BB and know my passion abt it so its really easy to u to get this point but as u don't i don't want to bother ur self more )

gunjan: samrat r u want to or thinking to be a BB coach (samrat feels shock with her direct query )
samrat: i won't lie more chashmish u know BB is my dream , my passion my life and in this whole year i was parted with my life and i lived my life without BB , from childhood i am bound to BB and its my dream as well u know i was hoping to make my career with BB but things changed and nothing happened what i guessed

i guessed after our engagement i would convey to my dream to u and u will be there for me with my dream and my both dream of marry u and choosing career of BB would be completed but nothing had happened as i thought


samrat: all was finished when i heard abt nup's death and ur and mayank's silent exit from my life i was shattered i didn't have any way how can i think abt my career when i was not alive i was dead from my heart i was living in burden of killing my friend nup and to lessen my burden i agreed with my mom's proposal to be one of trustee of excel bcz only excel was the place where i could live my life with u all three's memory , i kept myself busy without thinking myself i was not that samrat who was more lively and cheerful i was only one body working like machine whole day , as college was the place where in burden of work i can forgot my all pains and it happened bcz whenever i came home after my working duty i again thought abt u all three and my mistake to lose u all

a silent tears escaped from gun's eyes as if cursing herself for all this

gunjan : samrat woh main........

her voice broke with her words and sam notices her eyes filled with tears
samrat holds her by her shoulder

samrat: chashmish please don't cry i didn't want to hurt u but after all this today first time i thought to share my views i didn't mean that's why i never shared my feelings of this 3 years to u bcz i know u can't take this anymore n i dont' want my chashmish cry only bcz of me bcz i promised u at time of confession main kabhi tumhari aankho main aasu nahi aane dunga please don't cry

gunjan: no samrat i always think abt me abt di and only abt jiju but never thought what happened to u what u felt after our silent exit from ur life what have u passed through in this 3 years and ur personal life failed u to get ur dream which u craved from childhood you always initiated first step for our relationship but i always misunderstood and didn't see what u feel abt it , u were not in fault still u always apologized me and i always insulted u and also made u back off from ur love and always thought u only think abt u but i am really sorry samrat i am so guilty abt what i have done to u

samrat covers her mouth with his hands

samrat:chashmish ye tum kya keharahi we love each other and in love none has to say sorry or thanks as we always says no sorry and thanks in friendship just like that bcz its only formality and in any relationship there is no any formalities and abt ur guilt no chashmish if i was in ur place i would have done same as u did

yad haina suhani time when i came to know u broke my trust i was so angry for first time that i wanted to break up bcz u didn't trust me as it was only suhani's lie matter i was so angry on u and abt accident i was driving car at that time and u were lost u ur di so ur reaction was justified chashmish but if u remember after suhani's tiff when i opened my arms for new starting u was the one who ran to me and covered urself in my arms , then why not i initiate for our relation

chashmish in relation its not that who initiate first but its just that one is not ready to initiation then other should do bcz its their love who made them together and its their love's test for initiation and i did

chashmish u need not to apologize bcz our love is beyond all this emotions our hearts can speak and confessed as well so now no need to waste words bcz heart connection is more imp than this words

gunjan hears all this with proud , with love first time after 3 years she let go herself in his arms and he caressed his back with love which she was craving for this 3 years

after sometimes gunjan breaks hug

gunjan: samrat whatever happened was not in our hand but now u have one chance to prove and to full fill ur dream as well but samrat u r also responsible person and the way u left job of trustee is not right way , u r running away from ur responsibility just face it , i know this is not ur choice for profession u have ur own dream but u have also gave ur precious 3 years and excel college also gave its precious years to u so now its ur duty to live not only for u but also for others who trusted u who joined college only bcz of ur trust , u can't back off

samrat:but chashmish i can't relate myself to this job i didnt' want this in my life i never think myself being trustee and serving college like this i am from heart BB player and always thought to be BB coach as well

gunjan: ya samrat but it is ur dream and by profession u r trustee its ur identity its excel college's identity ,samrat think abt once if in ur place other will be trustee of college and with his will he can do anything for college he can misuse or he can also dominate excel then what will happen to students who want their guide if trustee like u will be there they will get one of role model in u excel needs true trustee who can think by heart and also with mind as well , as now not for u but for others u have to take ur responsibility u made urself superb example infront of them with ur devotion and dedication towards excel college

and abt BB samrat its ur dream and i am with u for u dream i always saw u in BB court and in BB suit i also want u will be BB coach , samart who say that trustee of college can't be BB coach bcz practically u r eligible as BB coach and BOD will be happy to see their trustee following their duty so sincerely ,

samrat u become trustee was ur destiny but u can also full fill ur dream with this profession as well and i am with u for this rest of decision is yours bcz in any decision i will support u 😳 in this 3 years i never gave my support to u but now its my duty to support u in ur any decision

samart sees her with love and hugs her tightly bcz after so many years he gets back his support his chashmish his real chashmish ,friend ,philosopher and guide

darkness of clouds was fading aways and sun sets in edge but with one ray of hope of tomorrow's rise 😳













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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome oneshot.....very emotional.....both side convos were meaningful...in all very gud starting and ending.
Edited by lucario - 15 years ago
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Oh God Aashiiii 🤗, this was more than beautiful 😳 .. Goshh im in love with this OS, one of the best you've written so far ! Loved the way you potrayed each emotions and how Gunjan understood Sam Aweeh ! Beautifully written and explained, thank you sooo muchh for sharing 🤗 .. Keep writing more :)
Edited by MoNayaKiDeewani - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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omgg resss
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OMFGG aashi this is just gorgeous hon, u write soo well 🤗 ahh love it 🤪 thanks for sharing yaar 🤗
Edited by -Ragini- - 15 years ago
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*edited*

ok
first of all sorry for being late
omg
loved it dear have not watched this new sajan track yet
but ur os was just superb
awesome
every single dialogue was amazing
perfect os dear
just loved it to the core
sajan roxxxxxxxx
Edited by chilluppp - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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res i ll read tomrw. i am loving the current track n therefore wud love to see ur flavour added to it!

edit :

ok i admit i cudnt resist😆 so i just read now itself..lolz.

lately i have been reading very less OS n FFs. but this one caught since its on the recent track.

my take is tht u have very nicely analyzed the current track as well as samrat n gunjan and written the OS.

ofcourse there is no one better than gunjan who will understand samrat and vice versa. and therefore it was but obvious for her to know wht was going inside sams mind. hopefully cvs will show tht.

secondly, the link; the connection between samratss dream and their past was beautifully made. made me feel tht there is still scope for the most awaited scenes of gunjans realization we sajanians have been waiting for. though not intentionally but inorder to say wht he dreams, samrat told her wht he had been these 3 yrs and tht is how gunjan realized. tht was the best thing. and i hope cvs shw this as well. hopefully cvs make a connection like this.

gunjans words to samrat abt forgiveness were well written as well and samrats reply were obvious as well. he always does it and then feels sorry tht he made her cry. this was original aashi! original as in it was totally hw we knw our sajan..it was totally sajanish.

next, they hug and gunjans decision after the hug break was also gunjanish.. gunjan being practical wud say something like this, yes even after she knows tht BB is sammys PASSION!. and i m proud of her. she made a right decision for him. instead of mba, going bk to his origin is better. though BB is sams dream n ofcourse she is always there to help him....

and last but not the least the happy ending as samrat has his one and only family back.
Edited by talkativetaurus - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: lucario

awesome oneshot.....very emotional.....both side convos were meaningful...in all very gud starting and ending.

thanks a tone avi 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chilluppp

ressssssss

will read tomorrow
severe eye pain right now

oh take care honey 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: aashizin

thanks a tone avi 😳

no need to say thanks...my mood was off...and ur OS made it better....so i shd thank u.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: talkativetaurus

res i ll read tomrw. i am loving the current track n therefore wud love to see ur flavour added to it!

ow that's so sweet of u hon i will wait for ur reply 😳

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