continuation of hospital scene

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet comes out after check up and

Geet : aapne mere liye itna kuch socha.....thank you
Maan : I understood my responsibilities yesterday and I thought you would have never thought about visiting a doctor and wouldn't have taken care properly
Geet is overwhelmed and is crying

Doctor: she is perfectly alright Mr.Khurana....but she needs to be very careful and from what I learnt from her, she is not taking a proper diet
Maan : matlab doctor
Geet : She is taking a lot of spicy food I guess....and I also noticed that she is very careless....she just jumps on the bed like a small kid
Maan just gives an angry glare to Geet and then back to Doctor
Maan : aah doctor, I will take good care of her, she will not do any such things from now on

after the dotor leaves
Maan : Geet yeh sab kya hai
Geet : aap bhi na....kuch nahi hoga chaliye
Maan : nahi Geet...doctor is right.....I know how you run up and down from stairs like hoshiarpur express....I have seen you doing this many times, but at that time I didn't know you were pregnant...you were even about to miss a step and fall down from stairs once, you remember
Geet is quiet and tries to avoid the topic
Maan : Geet I am tellng you take it seriously.....you are going to become a mother of a baby and you are acting like a child aur haan aaj se tera saara teekha khaana band
Geet to herself : el le, hey babaji, doctotr ko inse yeh sab kehne ki kya zaroorat thi...pehle hi inko mujhe daantne ki bahane khatam nahi hothi thi, ab isme yeh bhi shaamil ho gaya....inko mere khaane se bhi problem....inke jaise mein rookhi sookhi thodi na hoon ki rookhi sookhi khaana khaoon....
Maan hears what she said and holds her by her waist and asks her what she said

Geet : nahi nahi kuch nahi
Maan : acha main rookha sookha insaan hoon? haan?
Geet : woh toh, woh toh, she keeps stammering and couldn't find anything to tell, so she says aap mujhe aise pakad rahe hain hospital mein? koi dekhega toh kya sochega?
Maan : tumne shaayad teek se suna nahi ki doctor ne tumhe kaise pukara Mrs.Khurana
Geet blushes
Maan : aur haan hospital mein na sahi, ghar mein aise pakdoon toh tumhe koi problem nahi hoga? Maan smirks
Geet blushes even more and releases herself from him and starts running

Maan becomes angry...kya karoon mein do do bachon ke saath....abhi abhi toh daant khayi aur phir se baag rahi hai

Geet stops as she couldn't due to pain....Maan notices some discomfort and asks her Geet tum teekh toh ho....
Geet is embarassed and nods her head telling yes....but Maan still thinks something is wrong and then later realises that it could be due to check up and Geet is finding it uncomfortable to tell him
Maan holds her softly and helps her in walking
Maan : Geet tumhe mujhse uncomfortable hone ki koi zaroorat nahi hai......main koi paraya nahi hoon.....tum meri hone waali patni ho aur tumhe mujhse apni saari takleefen share karna padega.....haan.....samjhi tum?
Geet looks down and nods her head

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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it!! wish that happens!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigirl1991

loved it!! wish that happens!



actually the scene tomorrow might not be this lengthy I think.....this is just my wishful thinking....because I guess tomorrow will be the engagement party.....


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Posted: 14 years ago
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kash aisa ho gaye loved it
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Very Nice post Priza...I too wish something like that is shown...Maan being careful for Geet & her condition...😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i wish dis happens..........its so cute and sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
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half way through reading it, i forgot it wasn't real, lol
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Posted: 14 years ago
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awww the last bit is supercute....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it........tooo gud hope this happen
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Posted: 14 years ago
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great love ittttttttttttttttttt......I still feel like the engagement party will start tomorrow but the most of it will be on monday....

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