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Posted: 14 years ago
very nice update..... pls add me in ur pm list...
continue soon dear
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Posted: 14 years ago
nice update liked it so much.........
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geet was shocked to hear this
she looked at him
geet: aap nay dadi maa ko bta dia k may.....

she started crying


TOGETHER FOREVER
PART 6


maan: nai geet may nay unhay aisa kuch nai bataya (maan said quickly)
(he then looked down) may nay unhay yae bataya tha k tum..... mujhay chor k chali gai ho
he remembered what he had gone through after reading the letter

maan looked at her and saw that she was still crying
maan: geet sachchi may, may nay daadi say us baaray may zikar tk nai kia
geet please rona bnd karo

geet listened to what he said
she wanted to stop crying but couldn't
tears were running down her cheeks

maan leaned towards her
he held her hand and wiped her tears with the other

he then held her both hands in his and said
maan: geet
geet meri taraf dekho
meri aankho may dekho geet

geet looked up and into his eyes
she saw care and concern there
they were so deep, so warm, so full of need the need to make her happy to see her happy
geet still crying

maan: geet may nay dadi maa say kuch nai kaha aur na tmhary marzi k baghair kahu ga. agar tm

chaho tou may kabhi b nahi kahu ga geet laikn please rona bund karo. may sub kuch bardasht
kar skta hu laikin tmhay yu rota hua bardasht nai kar sakta

geet tried to compose herself as she saw pain in his eyes
the pain she caused him with her tears
she could not see him in pain whether its physical or mental
she tried to stop her tears and did it
she then wiped the tear trails from her cheeks and put up a faint smile
maan was looking at her when she wiped the tear trails
he just could not resist anymore after she smiled and cupped her face
he leaned in closer to her face
his warm breath falling on her
geet closed her eyes enjoying the feel of his breath
maan moved his lips to her forehead and kissed her
geet's eyes flew open and she just looked at him and then down on to the gear
her cheeks going red
maan realising what he did backed away

maan: wo..... umm.... may wo..... tumhay ye btana chahta tha k... uhh....may tumharay sath hu ga...

hamesha
geet just nodded her head

there was an awkward silence between them
geet was fidgeting with her dupatta

maan was about to start the car
he noticed geet's restlessness

maan: tumhay kuch kehna hay geet?
geet: ji... uh... wo may nay puchna tha k may dadi maa ko kya btau ge k may kyu.... gai thi?
maan smiled
maan: kuch nai.... tum kuch mut kehna.... awal tou dadi maa puchay ge he nai aur agar dadi maa nay

kuch kaha tou wo meri taang kheenchnay k leay he kahay ge

geet smiled and looked at the road in front of her
maan ignited the car and started driving

geet was lost in her world
the rain had stopped by now and it was dark
geet rested her head against the head of the seat and closed her eyes
she was exhausted after the long day and dosed off instantly

they reached the mansion
maan looked at geet and found her sleeping
she looked so innocent in her sleep as well
he was just mesmerized by her beauty

maan: geet

geet utho hum ghar pohanch gaye
utho geet

geet didn't open her eyes
she was deep in her sleep
maan tapped her shoulder and called her but she did not wake up
maan got out of his
he opened geet's door
tried waking her up again but she didnt wake up
he didn't want to wake her up knowing what she went through the whole day
he just didn't wanted to ruin the peace she was in right now
so maan held her by her waist with one hand and put his other hand under legs and lifted her up in his
arms
he carried her carefully into the mansion
looking at her angelic face all the way
as he entered into the lounge he saw that dadi maa was sitting on the couch
she came towards maan
worried seeing the blood on his shirt
seeing the worry in his dadi's eyes he gestured that he'll tell her later
dadi seeing a sleeping geet in his arms indicated maan to take her upstairs in is room
maan nodded to her and started ascending the stairs

savetri devi was so happy for his grand child that she wanted to dance around the big mansion
but was also worried after seeing the red patch on his shirt
she was going to get the first aid kit for him when she heard a voice fromm behind

dev: dadi ye bhaiya kis ko UTHA kar lay jaa rahy hay?
dadi: dev beta wo aap ki bhabhi aur maan ki honay wali....
dev: bhabhi... dadi you mean k meri BHABHI anay wali hay
yeh maan bhaiya he hay na??? mujhay tou shaq hay k wo maan bhaiya nai unka koi humshakal

hay bhaiya aur aik larki..... dadi ye sub hua kaisay? yeh kon budnaseeb larki hay jo bhaiya ki biwi
bannay ja rahe hay? mujhay in ki himmat ki daad dainy paray ge. kisi aam insaan ki biwi nai
bulkay the MAAN SINGH KHURANA ki biwi bunnay ja rahi hay. mujhay tou in say milna he paray
ga vsay dadi yeh larki bhaiya ki wo wali secretary tou nai jo in ka office may thi jin ki vaja say
bhaiya khoey khoey rehtay they?
dadi: dev aisi batay nai kartay. aur han yeh wohi hay jo maan ki secretary THI laikin ab maan ki
mangetar hay. agar aap ko itna he shoq hay apni honay wali bhabhi ko dekhnay ka tou jaeyay
dekh lejeyay


dev ran upstairs behind maan
he wanted to see who was maan CARRYING and into his ROOM
dev: (thought) wah bhaiya dadi maa k samnay he aap unhay apnay room may lay jaa rahay hay
maan was about to enter his room when he heard dev calling him
maan was irritated

hope you guyz liked it 😃
and sorry for the delay in update been busy with the college work
our princi is the biggest dusht danav ever he has scheduled sooooooooo many tests for our class 😭😡

hoping to get loadz of comments/ criticismz/ juttas/ chappalz 😃😆
eagerly waiting for them
and hit the like button incase you liked it and if you don't still hit the like button (mera dil rakhne k leay)


love you

Noor
link to PART 7
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
that was awesome noor...really loved it...
so really nice....i so loved it..do keep writing
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Posted: 14 years ago
Awesome update dear loved d Maneet Converstaion. but i m scared nw. Hope dat Dev will not see Geet. i m dying to read next part. pls pls pls update it soon
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: ansah

that was awesome noor...really loved it...

so really nice....i so loved it..do keep writing

thanx ansah 😳
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

Awesome update dear loved d Maneet Converstaion. but i m scared nw. Hope dat Dev will not see Geet. i m dying to read next part. pls pls pls update it soon

thanx 😳
and will try updating soon
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Posted: 14 years ago
Toooooo gudddddd update.
Can't wait to know what will happen next.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.



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Posted: 14 years ago

this part was superb lyk the other ones.............

tooo gud.......... superb piece ov work.........\
liked it wen maan carried sleeping beauty in his arms....... choooo cute.........
please update soon......
wid luv,,
Adeena,😛
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetcherry96

this part was superb lyk the other ones.............

tooo gud.......... superb piece ov work.........\
liked it wen maan carried sleeping beauty in his arms....... choooo cute.........
please update soon......
wid luv,,
Adeena,😛

thanx adeena 😳
😆 was going to use sleeping beauty instead of sleeping geet

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