SS on maaneet TOGETHER FOREVER part 15 page 51 - Page 17

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Posted: 14 years ago
@ reea88 thank u
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Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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dev ran upstairs behind maan
he wanted to see who was maan CARRYING and into his ROOM
dev: (thought) wah bhaiya dadi maa k samnay he aap unhay apnay room may lay jaa rahay hay
maan was about to enter his room when he heard dev calling him
maan was irritated



TOGETHER FOREVER
PART 7

geet was slipping from his arms
he positioned her again in his arms with a small jerk
geet snuggled into his chest hiding her face in his shirt as the light was disturbing her
maan noticed this and was about to enter his room when he heard dev calling him
this really irritated him
maan turned around just in time to see dev skid to a stop
maan raised his eyebrow at his behaviour

maan: dev kya hua?
dev: huh...... haan wo may nay aap ko kisi larki ko uthatay uuper jaatay huay dekha tou may nay dadi

say pucha aur unho nay kaha k wo aap ki honay wali biwi hay yani MERI honay wali bhabhi tou
may unhay dekhnay aya tha. milna b tha laikin lagta hay k ye tou soi hui hay
dev was trying to see maan's miss secretary.... no no maan's mangetar and soon to be MRS MAAN
SINGH KHURANA
dev: (thought) oooh looks like it'll be a tough job for her, being MRS MAAN SINGH KHURANA doesn't
seem to be easy
but dev was happy that his brother was in LOVE and is getting married
dev thought that before now bhaiya didn't even believe in love and now look what this mr. ego is doing
carrying a SLEEPING GIRL in his ARMS into his BEDROOM maanna paray ga apko bhaiya

maan:dev abhi nai mil saktay tum yeh soi hui hay. tum kal mil laina

maan opened his bedroom door with his foot and was about to enter
dev: (smiling like a devil) good luck bro (and then winked at him)
maan could not uderstand as in why his brother did that
dev went to his bedroom
maan enterd his bedroom he did not turn on the lights the only light that was coming was from the hall

he then closed the doors with his foot
he bent down to place geet on the bed
he put her down softly then removed his hands from around her waist and legs
put the quilt over her
he straightened up and turned around to go and change
he felt somthing tug his wrist watch
he turned around and saw geet's dupatta was stuck to his wrist watch
and it was not around her neck but was lying on the floor
he removed the dupatta from his wrist watch
then picked it up and bent down to place it carefully around her neck
maan looked at her face and could not take his eyes off of her
he again bent down
he cupped her face and kissed her on the forehead
geet who was still sleeping smiled and maan felt her cheeks radiating heat under his hands
she moved one of her hands over maan's and held it tight
maan was loosening her grip from his hand so that he may go and change
but stopped when geet's smile faded from her face

geet: aap mujahy chor kar kyu jaa rahay hay? (sleeping)

maan sat down besides her
maan: may yahi hu geet tumharay sath
may tumhay kabhi chor kar nai jau ga

maan caressed her cheek with his free hand and then kissed her
she then hugged maan around his waist and placed her head on his lap
maan was surprised by her action
he then started to undo her hair as it was a total mess
then started running his fingers through her hair
maan opened up his shirt butons cause he was feeling hot
he didn't turn on the air conditioner as he knew very well that she would feel cold
as she was already wet the last thinghe wanted would be her being sick

remembring their night in a locked conference room he smiled
he then rested his head on the bedpost
he closed his eyes and instantly dosed off


dadi came in maan's room with a first aid box but was surprised to see the both of them in this position
she the saw piece of geet's dupatta tied around maan's waist
she smiled to herself
she left the box on maan's bedside table and left knowing that geet would bandage the wound herself


maan opened his eyes and saw that geet was still sleeping but her hold around his waist had become
more strong
maan caressed her cheek then he patted her shoulder to wake her up
he didn't wanted her to sleep in those wet clothes and then the wet bed
he tried waking her up but she won't open her eyes

geet: sona hay mujay
please mujhay sonay dijeay

maan smiled at her innocence
he again tried to wake her up
geet just cuddled into maan's lap and tightened her hug around his waist

maan: AAAAGH
he then closed his eyes in pain

geet sat up straight on the bed hearing maan scream
geet got scared seeing that maan's wound had started to bleed again
she panicked
she quickly got out of the bed and looked around to find something that would help
she then saw the first aid box on the bedside table
she picked it up and opened it
she sat down on the floor
geet then untied the cloth from around his waist
she got scared after seeing the blood but then quickly wiped it with the piece of dupatta and some cotton
she put on the ointment blowing softly on it as she knew that it causes a burning sensation
maan on the other hand had his eyes shut in pain when he felt something cool on his wound
he then opened his eyes and saw that geet was putting ointment and blowing softly over it
he didn't even feel the burning sensation he knew happened due to the ointment
but geet did it so much care that he didn't even felt it
when geet was done with the ointment she lifted up a bandage from the box
she then stood up and bent down a bit so that she would dress the wound easily
their faces just inches away
geet got busy in dressing while maan was going crazy
he was going crazy because of her closeness
her angelic face having a worry over it, her seducing smell, her touch on his waist were sooo inviting
he was losing control over himself and.................

hope you guyz liked it
and sorry noor was feeling 😈😈
so guess wha'll happen next
Note: my parents are going out of country and have to stay at my khala's for a week so no updates till then
hoping to see loadz of comments when i return
remember me and my SS
hit the like button too 😃
love
Noor
link to part 8
Edited by NoorFatima - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago

awesome dear...i really loved it

keep writing...

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh noor dear it was such an Awesome Update👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 d way u described it was so Beautiful😳😳😳😳😳😳😳😳 thank god Dev havent seen Geet's Face😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊. Awww that Dressing part was so Cute❤️❤️❤️. oh no u r nt going to Update soon😲😲😲😲😲. i'll really miss u nd ur SS.😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭😭 pls come back Soon😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊😊
Edited by aakritisri1111 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww... i loved it do coninue soon... no woreries will wait for your update... u write woww...! maan taking care of geet was sweet
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loved the update...thanks
no more updates for a WEEK???
don't torture us.....anyways its okay...
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Posted: 14 years ago
lovely update dear... will wait for the update...
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Posted: 14 years ago
awesome update......happy journey😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
great work dear
hmmm hav to wait for a week im crying
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Posted: 14 years ago
Loveeee the part.
Veryyy cute maneet scenes.
Continue soon.
Thanxx for the pm.



Fatima

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