MARS (mjht) part 11 (pg 111) - Page 40

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"so finally u both get it" samrat said

"hamein tum py pura believe tha" nupur said

"tum dono sirf believe hy karna or kuch mat karna" maynk said giving an angry look

"kuch mat karna matlab??? " nupur said "jo chicken gunjun roast kar rahy hy wo hum dono hy to khaein gy right samrat"

"absolutely right"

Gunjan forward the leg piece towards them, samrat was going to take it but before nupur jumped in between, catch the piece suddenly n run away

"nupur ye cheating hy" samrat said running behind her

"mujhy leg piece khana hy" nupur replied running "is mein cheating kya hy???"

"but ye to mera tha na"

"ab mera hy" she replied dodging him

"kya bachon ki tarha lar rahy ho???" mayank said "second leg piece ly lo, chicken has two legs, do u know that???"

"nae is sy bolo" samrat said trying to catch the piece "mujhy yehy wala chahiye"

"nae jo cheez aik bar mein ny pakar ly, it means that's mine" nupur replied trying to escape "tum second waly lo gy"

"never ever"

And then nupur escaped trying to move away n samrat ran behind. Nupur was moving ahead looking behind towards samrat.

"u cannot catch me"

Both of them in order to snatch the piece were unaware of the waterfall coming in their way. Both were moving close n close. But when nupur looks forward it was too late, she was already at the edge. She suddenly applies break but samrat was who was at the back was not ready for this sudden act. Both of them collapse, tried their level best to save themselvs but fail badly n the next moment was a''''.. SPLASH

Both of them were in the water producing a huge blast, scattering the liquid outside. N followed by them was a small sound n the next second the leg piece was in water shattering the dreams of both.

Mayank n gunjun, witnessing everything from behind start laughing. Both nupur n samrat looked towards each other n then give a smile

"ab tum dono wahan kya kar rahy hy???" nupur said "come join us"

Majan moves towards them n sat on the side with their legs half in

"bola tha na mat kro" mayank said "lekin tum log sunty ho kisi ki"

"jany do na mayank" nupur replied "jo hona tha wo to ho gya na"

After a few seconds of silence the surroundings were filled completely with their laughter

"gunjun" samrat said holding her hands "y r u sitting out, come in na plzzz"

"nae mein idhar hy thek hn"

"plz na dear, it will b more fun"

"oho zid kyun kar rahy ho" she said giggling "pehly zid ka anjam nae dekha"

"come on na dear, promice mein tumhy dobnein nae dn ga"

"samrat"

"ok cum"

He hold her both hands n push her calmly in the water, increasing the closeness between them, removing all the distances. It seems that the world stops for them. They looked in each other eyes n feels some unusual in them. Behind these eyes was something, something really strange but what they were unaware. Suddenly the sound from behind distract them

"nupur mujhy geela mat kro" mayank said protecting himself from the droplets of water trying their level best to make him wet

"mayank ab tum baher kyun ho ao na yar" nupur said stoping her mission to make him wet

"nupur mery baat man lo" samrat said "mayank nae kar sakta"

"kya nae kar sakta" mayank asked surprisingly, n all three was waiting for him to reply

"mein nupur sy bol raha tha" samrat said ending the curiosity "k tum normal insaan wala koi kam nae kar sakty"

Ye kya bol raha hy nupur thought

"excuse me" mayank said making an angry face "asa koi kaam nae hy jo mein nae kar sakta"

"acha" samrat replied " to nupur ko propose kro right now"

All three of gave shocking expressions

"what???"

"tumhy kya lagta hy" mayank said "mein ye ne kar sakta???"

"lagta to asa hy hy" sajan said in union

"ok wait a minute"

He take a small flower grown close by, move in , forward the flower n said

"well, log kehty hein mein buhut boring hn, buhut jaldi gussa hota hn. Mujhy apni life mein koi chahiye jo ya to mujhy badal dy ya phir mujhy bardasht kar ly. kya ye janty hue bhi will u b a part of my life??? Will u b the one to share my loneliness???"

All three were looking at him with open mouths.

Unbeleivable all three of them thought

"By God mayank itna sweet n innocent proposal, I literally wanna accept it"

She said taking the flower from his hand

All four of them were in the water

The sparks in their eyes, the innocent smile of their face, their mischief behavior was enough to enlighten their relationship. Everything around them was witnessing the change, in the bond between them , from strangers to friends. It seems that for all four of them life just stops over there, they forget the realities of their bitter past n the evils of the future that were waiting for them.

"ok now just stop" mayank said "v have to move ahead towards the next place, no more time to waste"

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Hey nice update 😃.U have a good sense of humour.Dat chicken leg piece part was so hilarious🤣.do continue soon

Loved the update,and would love to read the long update.Thanx for the PM,and do PM me when you update.