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Posted: 14 years ago

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see annie
i commented on each n every part of ur story
i hope u didnt mind so many posts
i had loadz of fun reading it n hope u update the next part soon
n do pm me

luv
shruti

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Posted: 14 years ago

#662

Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan
see annie
i commented on each n every part of ur story
i hope u didnt mind so many posts
i had loadz of fun reading it n hope u update the next part soon
n do pm me

luv
shruti

hey shruti dear tht ws really sweet of u to comment on each and every part of mine....thank u soo much i wasnt expecting dis from anyone.....and thanks for wasting ur time reading my bakwas....and one more thong...i will love to pm u

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Shruti_0505

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: annie98
hey shruti dear tht ws really sweet of u to comment on each and every part of mine....thank u soo much i wasnt expecting dis from anyone.....and thanks for wasting ur time reading my bakwas....and one more thong...i will love to pm u

oh common dear
dis was not at all bakwas
to the contrary it was awesum
n i gained so much pleasure reading this
n i will love to receive pms from u

P.S. very soon maybe today i will read ur ff as well
so be ready for the comments 😆 😆

Edited by mayur_my_jaan - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: mayur_my_jaan

oh common dear
dis was not at all bakwas
to the contrary it was awesum
n i gained so much pleasure reading this
n i will love to receive pms from u

P.S. very soon maybe today i will read ur ff al well
so be ready for the comments 😆 😆

awww i am eagerly waiting dear

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Kiely

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Posted: 14 years ago

#665

wen r u continuing annie?????????im waiting ...

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Posted: 14 years ago

#666

Originally posted by: Kiely
wen r u continuing annie?????????im waiting ...

yaar seriously no time....main kal likhoo gi....just pray keh mujhe tym mil jaye......hope everyone understands

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Posted: 14 years ago

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hey guys here the update goes
now as u know
sammy is in a plan of takng kids to the icecream parlor
now at mayu's room
shilpa sitting near mayu and nupsie
reading the thermometer
shilpa:mayu.............tera bukhar kam hone ki jagah badhta hi ja raha hai aur tu hai keh rest hi nahi karta.........😡
mayank:maa..........mein theek hoon
shilpa:chup kar........theek hoon ka bacha..........woh dekh nupur ka toh bukhar bi uter gaya........aur tu..........mahan sahab..........aik degree ooper chala gaya
mayank:maa.........
shilpa:chup kar...........mujhe aur gussa mat dila........samjha
mayank:samajh gaya.........dekha nupur agar tum ne pranam par aisa rop jamaya hota toh woh kabhi apni teacher keh neeche pataka rakhne ki himat na karta..........
shilpa:chup..............bas.............yani tu direct mere pote aur bahu par nishana maar raha hai......chup kar keh let jaa ...samjhe...........aur ab agar tu hila toh apna hashar dekhna.........ab tu yahi let........nupur tere paas hai.....aur ab koi taana dia na toh
mayank:toh
shilpa:yeh thermometer tere pet mein ghussa doon gi samjha
mayank:ok maa......
makes a cute face
shilpa leaves
nupur:aur karo baarish mein romantic kisam keh dance......mr shahid kapoor😆
mayank:nupur tum bhi
nupur:yani tum bhi
mayank:kya matlab
nupur:tum bhi shahid kapor keh fan ho
mayank:nahi.......main toh eh raha tha keh ab tum bhi mera mazak banane lagi
nupur:main toh bohot pehle ka banati thi.......tumne notice ab kia
mayank:nupur........
he sits on the bed
nupur:tum phir uth gaye.....chalo leto
mayank:leikin nupur.......
nupur:kuch nahi.......let jao
samrat enters
samrat:kya hua nupur
nupur:yeh mayank....dekho na.........let hi nahi raha
samrat:chill........waise mayank....yahan iss situation mein karele ka soup kaisa rahe ga
mayank:samrat.......please ab nahi........mujhe sach much mein bukhar hai......beshak thermometer koh shake kar keh check kar lo........
samrat:toh maine kab kaha keh tumhe nahi hai......mayank tum bhi na........acha waise main anjali pranam neha aur preeti koh le kar jaa raha hoon
mayank:kahan
samrat:jhumritalaiyan😆......ofcourse kahi jaa hi rahe ho ge na
mayank:magar kahan
samrat:woh......woh...woh main un sab koh child specialist keh paas le kar jaa raha hoon
mayank:kyun
samrat:mayank mujhe lag raha hai keh bukhar tumhare dimagh par charh gaya hai......ham doctor keh paas kyun jaate hain
mayank:check karwane keh liye
samrat:toh..........
mayank:mujhe pata hai........magar tum bacho koh kyun le kar jaa rahe ho
nupur:ofcourse mayank........ab tumhe toh leja nahi sakta na
mayank:urghhh.........mera dimagh pagal kar dia hai tum dono neh.........gud night........main sone laga hoon
sanu:THANK GOD
mayank:kya kaha........
samrat:kya kaha ham ne(acting as he doesnt knows)
mayan:urghhhhh...........gud night
he takes his blanket and sleeps
now cut to kids
pranam:i hope keh permission mil jaye
neha:i hope papa permission le hi aye
samrat comes running
pranam:inke bhagne keh style se lag raha hai.....keh jaise
preeti:jaise mayank uncle inke peeche apna joota le kar pade ho😆
neha:nahi nahi.........aisa kaise ho sakta hai
trio:kyun
neha:pata nahi😆
now wen samrat returns
neha:bohot zor se laga kya😆
samrat:kya
neha:mayank uncle ka joota
samrat:kya matlab
preeti:ap koh mayank uncle neh bohot maara kya
samrat:guys.......thats the limit..........mayank ne mujhe nahi maaraa......ulta main mayank ka dimagh kharab kar keh bhag raha hoon.......agar uski tabyet theek hoti aur ooska joota door na pada hota na.......toh zarur maar deta

ok guys that was enuf for today
aj maine apne hectic schedule se thoda tym nikal lia
precap:fathers day🥳
do rate and comment
love,
annie

Edited by annie98 - 14 years ago

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Posted: 14 years ago

#668

heyyyy annie..
lovely update
realy vryy awwwsum

i luvvvvvv samrat n d kids part lawaz in ur updates
reading dat z sooo mch funnnnnnn...maza aaagya
cont sooooooooooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm

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Posted: 14 years ago

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Originally posted by: ar4evr
heyyyy annie..
lovely update
realy vryy awwwsum

i luvvvvvv samrat n d kids part lawaz in ur updates
reading dat z sooo mch funnnnnnn...maza aaagya
cont sooooooooooooon
n
thnx 4 d pm

hey thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear..........i was just waiting for a comment..........tu ne dil khush kar dia...........bata teri kya request hai mere aka😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

#670

Originally posted by: annie98

hey thank u soooooooooooooooooooooooo much dear..........i was just waiting for a comment..........tu ne dil khush kar dia...........bata teri kya request hai mere aka😆

n tunee mera dil khush kardiya wid sch a masti n fun lovvng update..😃
well meri request- hmmmmm.....sajan k naam ek update likh de 😳😆😆