Valentine Encounter [Mayur OS] - Page 2

Awwww.........that was so cute.......typical mayurish..........plz write more.......

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I don't watch mjht so don't really know about Mayur and since you had that note at the start, for some insane reason- I kept imagining you as Gunjan. and some other random couple bickering.😆 Their kid was the same kid as Nisha's in Rishta.com as I just got around to watching the last epi 😆 you are getting there, with UnB slowly I see...till the last line when you had to spoil their bliss...and what's with all that talk of romanticism, ! geez, I feel like there is a message there to us filmi UnB types. But what do you think, may be sometimes a candle light does what a blanket does not! hmm...now before you start getting crazy ideas, all I meant to say was that it lights up the dark! 😆 I still maintain you should read BKP! and finish the other one too. You are probably pullling your hair off in frustration at my comment, but the one shot, I really enjoyed after a long time, it was so much lighter and I see, a headache is the trick! Really enjoyed it eventhough I dont know much of mayur.

😆 It was funny...cheesy...yeah! but still a good one. Gunjan is watching 'Popoye' show with a kid? 😎 hehe...

When it is a Mayur story, you always add in a humour element. :-)

Anu

Hey sookie*
Just came across this from my hundreds of PM's which i couldn't see due to my exams..but can't miss u rs..

So its mayank n nupur this time arguing for the valentine day's n gunjan seems to be making more troubles than helping them..lol..and its a real life experience?Woow..!!Great!!!

And yes please update Lapsus Linguae n Infinity...its been a long long time..please..(if possible :) )
Good wishes..
sri:-)

hey sookie...this ws so refreshing n new...i loved it
and wow gunjan too was amazing :) and thy have a 7 yr old kid yet thy fight like a bunch of teenagers!!

simply amazing n awesome !! loved this os 😊

love u
-fatima

What a awesome and true ff
loved the perspective on valentines day, the cynicism
hmm that's a different Gunjan then in the show! but it was good!

oh and i loved Mayu and Nupur here, going ga-ga over each other, and having a 7 year old son! aww
it was not cheesy, it was a lot less cheesy and clichd then many other one-shots and ff's i've read, believe me! 😳
please write more Mayur ff's!