SS:An Angel from -DISCONTINUED check *21 & 23*

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hii deshianz''..

I am back in action again after the end of my FF''.
This time i have come with an SS''''
It will be small SS which will completed in 4 chapters.....

so please read it and tell me whether u liked it or not'''
I hope u will like'''.. so here it is''''.


PROLOGUE

Prem pressed the horn of his car irritated when he found the vehicles which were moving ahead of his car stopped in the midway blocking him from moving further. Why? Why this has to happen now. How desperately he was driving to reach his home and why not he? He is going back to home almost after a month, in prem's words it is 27 days 16 hours and 48 minutes. After giving a disgusted look at the time shown on his wrist watch, prem raised his head and his eyes fall on the red light burning on the traffic post standing few meters away from his car.

Immediately a smile flashed on his lips as it reminded him of the red bindi that highlighted the broad forehead of his sweet wife. It's not that her bindi is as large as the traffic light or it can be seen from meters away. But the truth is that in each and every small things in the universe he finds some relation with her. That's the effect she had on him and he realized it only in the past few weeks when he was away from her.

The moment he thought of her all the irritation and frustration created by the traffic got vanished from his mind replacing with joy and peace. He had this same feeling when she stepped into his life ''''. According to him she is an angel sent by the god''' an angel from the heaven''''.

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One year back he was not the same prem juneja''''.. he was a man who hated this whole world and who assumed that the world hated him the same way he does. He was actually jealous of others because they had what he don't had''''.. the parents'''.

When he was at the age of 7 his mom gayathri juneja ran away with a man who was the business partner of his dad. On those days in his little mind he had thought that mom is just staying away from some reason and her absence never bothered him as he was always attached to his dad and not to his mom. His mom was always busy with parties and other activities in the name of social welfare where social remained only in the name.

But after few days the things changed upside down when dad committed suicide unable to face the world. From that day he started to hate his mom when came to know that his mom is the reason behind his dad's suicide even though he didn't understand the seriousness of that reason. But as he grew up he started to realize the seriousness of the deed done by his mom making his hatred to grow along with him.

When he reached the high school his hatred had grown to the extent to hating the whole women community. He neither talked to any of the girls in his school nor to any of his teacher who is a woman. His visualized his mom each and every woman in the universe except in his dhadhi.

His dhadhi was the one who took care of him after his dad's death. She was the only woman in this universe whom he didn't hate instead he loved and respected her from the core of his heart. His dhadhi always reminded his dad as both of them had the same characters and qualities. His dhadhi always tried to fill the absence of his parents with her love and she succeeded in it to some extent, but that was not enough to bind his broken heart.

Whenever he went outside his heart shattered at the sarcastic looks and smile of outsiders. There was a time when after the school he ran to the home and cried heart out in dhadhi's lap. that was the only place in the universe which provided his heart with the peacefulness it wanted. He used to forget all his pain when dhadhi trail her fingers through his shaggy hair while laying on the lap.

And likewise days, months and years passed''''' and in the flow of life his heart got more and more stiffened and he didn't know when it became a hard rock'''

But was it really a rock''.. no''.. it was a rock only to the persons who look at his exterior characters but one who penetrates into the interior of his heart could easily recognize that it's not a hard rock, but a smooth feather'''

And one day she came to his life making his feather like heart to fly with the clouds of the heaven'''..

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Actually I had thought of making it an OS, But later I understood that I can't complete it in one phase as the flash back story will be lil long'''..i hope it will be completed in 3 or 4 chapters'''..

So friends tell me fast whether I have to continue it or not'''
Eagerly waiting 4 ur comments and those who want my PM please inform me'. And don't forget to click the like button'''
Love
greeshu


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-Jyo- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I loved it greeshma, continue soon.............
Edited by premheer19 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Res *am gg to read from my phone agn*
Dont worry.. i'm not in class now..😆[BR

Ok comment time.
firstly, yeah am really happy we're getting another os from u 🤗
what can i say, amazing start. cant wait for u to update. so pls pls please update soon. 😳
Edited by Additi_sjfan - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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please continue... and please keep me on your PM list
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Posted: 15 years ago
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well i want you to continue coz I can see sumthng different here. It will be fun to watch how heer entered his life and chngd him upside down.
The way u expresses flicker of emotions was very nyc, in small words u captured big things.
Hope to see next part soon and a big one
Ashlesha
Edited by Ashlesha09 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yaar its too good yaar!!!!
pls do continue!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Additi_sjfan

Res *am gg to read from my phone agn*
Dont worry.. i'm not in class now..😆



I kw at 10.50 PM there wont be class 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I want you to continue With this Ss...One thing i always love about yior sories are that PH are always Married together that make me "SIGH" 😳😳😳😳
Will be eagerly waiting for the update and do i need to say that Add me to PM list"rolls eyes"





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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: -Parisa-

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I want you to continue With this Ss...One thing i always love about yior sories are that PH are always Married together that make me "SIGH" 😳
Will be eagerly waiting for the update and do i need to say that Add me to PM list"rolls eyes"







hii u didnt read my last OS that's y u r telling in my stories PH will be married...........😆 anyway its good that u didnt read it........... it was horrible 😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEy Greeshu!!😛

woohhooo SOO different idea Yar!!⭐️Great👏
Do continue cant wait to read more!!😃
update soon and PM me!!
Edited by Noor_PremHeer - 15 years ago

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