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Posted: 14 years ago
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The Concept is like this

One guy who always dreams actually nightmare ki uski shadi hone wali hai aur achanak se bahut se log aakar uska aur uski hone wali biwi ka khun kar dete hai,
par uska ye sapna uske bachpan se use pareshan kar raha hai,use ye nahi pata hai ki jisase shadi ho rahi hai wo kaise dikhati hai aur uska name kya hai??Samay ke sath kabhi achhe pal to bure pal yahi dikhata hai use ,par aaj tak wo uska name aur surat nahi dekh paya hai.


One girl from small town who also has the same issue ,uske sapne bhi aise hi daravane se hote hai ,par use bhi nahi pata ki uska name kya hai aur kyon wo aise sapne apne bachpan se dekh rahi hai.Wo bin maa ki bcahhi hai aur uske dard ko samajhane wale sirf uske Bauji hai ,par wo bhi kabhik kabhi samajh nahi pate hai uske is dar ko ,uki baichaini ko.

Ek jyotishi ne ye kaha hai ki jis din ise us ladke ka name ya surat dikh jayegi ye us din ke bad in sapno se nahi daregi ,par tab tak iski jindagi me aise khaufnak sapne aate hi rahenge jaha ye kisi se alag ho rahi hai ,iska iske dimag par bura asar bhi ho sakta hai

To kya hoga inka bhavishya ,kya ye mil payenge sapne se haqiqat me ya rah jayenge sapno me hi

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Posted: 14 years ago
#2

Part 1

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One girl is sleeping peacefully on her bed.She is extremely innocent and beautiful.But suddenly she screams and sweating and crying too ,her father came to her room

and she hugged him (bauji mujhe phir se wo sapna aaya tha ,par main kisi ki shakal hi nahi dekh pati hu.sab dhundhala dhundhala sa dikhata hai.mere hath me khun hi khun laga hai and her heart beat increased like anything)

Yeah she is none other than our Nupur bhushan

Her father makes her to lie down and leaves kyonki ye to pichale 20 sal se chali aa rahi kahani hai.Par nupur ko pata hai ki uski aankhen ab sapne ke dar se palke bhi nahi jhukane dengi

At the same time at Sharma's home

One guy is sleeping and gets up same as nupur he too sweting badly but for him the dream is different (some one pulling his loved once from him and he is unable to do any thing).He feels very much scared and now not able to sleep.

His mom comes and "Kyun beta phir se same sapna dekha".

Haan maa ,par is bar maine khun nahi dekha, some one was back of that girl ,i do not know ki wo meri kaun hai par mujhe laga jaise main use sadiyo se janta hu.par is bar bhi main uska chahra hi nahi dekh paya.

SS : Koi bat nahi hai mayu ,sab thik ho jayega so jao abhi ,

M : neend to aankho se koso dur hai ab maa

his mom knows the truth and she leaves as she can not do anything,it is happening from his child hood and still no one has solutions.

They have shown many doc ,sy but no solution.

Nupur's POV ( aakhir aise sapne mujhe hi kyon aate hai ,kya rishta hai mera main kyon aam logo ki tarah nahi rah pati.Jab bhi ye sapne aate hai main 2 din tak to sambhal hi nahi pati .man me khalbali machi rahti hai aur aankho ki neend gayab rahti hai,Dar lagta hai ki kahi phir se wahi sapna na aa jaye.)

Mayank's POV ( Log sapne dekhane ke liye sote hai aur main sapne na dekhane ki koshish akrta hu.Mera us sapne se kya nata hai.pahle lagta tha ki main bachkani bate soch raha hu par ab lagta hai kuch to hai jo mujhe hi aise sapne aate hai.Kahi man nahi lagta hai aur aankho ke samne ek hi chij dikhai deti hai khun,aur main pura khun se sana hua)

Because of this Nupur's father shifted to mumbai.He thinks probably change of the place will make some differences.

They are at Samrat's place.

Well Samrat is nupur's childhood friend and loves her like sister.Gunjan is his wife.She is doing her PHD where nupur is in last year of her PG in same college.

He treats her father same as his father as his parents died long time back and he does not have anyone other than nupur and her family.

He is a Engg and working in an MNC.He helped them to reallocate to mumbai.

All are staying together

Next day morning

Nupur went to college with gunjan.Gunjan went to princi's room ans being a new student nupur was scared like hell.

She was shivering badly ,she was about to reach her class suddenly there was a guy who hold her hand stopped har ,she started breathing heavily.She was afraid who did this and she was not able to see the guy she just turned.

Guy : He babe nayi lag rahi ho?

N (apna hath chudate huye ) : ji

Guy : oh to tumhe kya yaha ke taur tarike sikhane padenge ,hum yaha ke prince hai samjhi na tum,ab hum jo kahenge tumhe wo karna padega,vaise tum ho to badi kamal ki chij lag raha hai ki hum kafi lucky hai jo aisa maal hume hi pahle dikha (his look is devil)

Nupur is gone totally ,use to jaise kato to khun nahi hai aisi halat ho gayi hai.she said sir hamara hath chodiye

Guy : are tumhe kaise jane de bulbul ,abhi to maja baki hai

By now nupur started crying and requesting to leave her but that bad guy did not listen her.

But kahte hai ki bura karne wale ka hi bura hota hai ,

One guy was passing that time and usane us Banbe ka hath se nupur ko chudwa diya.

Nupur was crying badly so was not able to see him

Bad guy is RV and the other is obvious hai Mayu hi hoga

RV : tumhari himmat kaise hui hamara hath rokane ki ya achha item dekhkar tum bhi hath saf karne aaye ho

One slap on RV

by now mayank nupur aur RV ke bich aa gaya hai and nupur can see his back only

M : mujhe tumhare jaise ghinoni harkate karne ka koi shauk nahi hai RV.main yaha apne doc lene aaya tha aur jab ye dekha to samajh gaya kit um phir kisi masus ko pareshan kar rahe ho.jane do use warna tumhara treatment kya karunga tum bhi nahi jante samjhe na

RV was scared because mayank jo kahta hai wo karta hai he knew that

M did not see her : tum jao apni class me aur agar kabhi bhi ye pareshan kare to princi ko bata dena.

Nupur told everything to gunjan

G : are kaun tha wo banda job hi tha achha hoga tabhi to itni help kari aur kuch kaha bhi nahi,

N : haan gunjan sahi kah rahi ho ,amain to bahut dar gayi thi par bhala ho uska ki wo RV kuch nahi kar paya

Nupur's POV (After the incident nupur was scared but uske dil me ek ajib sa sukun tha.aisa sukun jo usane ab tak kabhi feel nahi kiya.wo use shabdo me baya nahi kar pa rahi thi.par aisa kya ho gaya un kuch palo me jo main itna calm feel kar rahi hu.shayad us ajnabi dost ki sadgi ya achhai ki wajah se.nahi pata par ye sukun mujhe achha lag raha hai.)

Mayank's POV(aaj main itna fresh sa kyon feel kar raha hu ,kal rat ke us daravane sapne ke bad maine kabhi bhi aisa feel nahi kiya hai.par achanak se aisi feeling kyon aa rahi hai man me,aaj khush rahne ka man kar raha hai,lag raha khub nachu gaun mauj manau.Khushi ki lahre hi uth rahi hai man me.par kyon aisa kya hua hai aaj?

Aur is question ka answer dono ke hi pas nahi tha

Almost after a year ,ab tak nupur gunjan ki family se nahi mili hai

Mayank at his home

M : Maa aur kitna waqt lagega sare restaurant band ho jayenge aur mujhe aaj Chinese khana hi hai plz

SS : are beta Chinese khane ka kya hai ghar par noodles bhi to ubal sakte hai na

M : very funny par ab chaliye main car nikal raha hu

In the restaurant

SS : mayu ab to shadi kar le beta

M : nahi maa please mujhe shadi ke name se hi dar lagta hai aur agar aap mujhase wahi bat karna chahti ho to please maa aisa mat karo.

SS : achha thik hai (par main aise har nahi manungi tujhe shadi to karni hi padegi - in thought)

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Posted: 14 years ago
#3

SSH part 2

Nupur was working as a financial advisor in an org and mayank also joined a good org.

Gunjan used to visit mayank but nupur did not join her once and when mayank was visiting their place nupur won't be there and he used to prefer not to disturb their life.

Meanwhile nupur's marriage was fixed with RV.She was not ready but because of his royal family.

Their engagement took place ,she was doing all with force and with the days coming near for her marriage she was getting more bad dreams where she could fine some one is pushing her in the well or in the valley.
or someone is leaving her in middle of the fire.

She was afraid but knew nothing will work because her father was very much eager for her marriage with RV where she was not at all.she did not tell to Sam also.

One day RV came to home and asked her father can he take her out.
He agreed and said ha beta ab to jald hi tumhari shadi hone wali hai to isme puchane jaise kya hai


He took her to the very silent place jaha sirf wo dono hi the aur dur dur tak kisi ka koi pata nahi tha.They came out and sat on the bench.
Nupur was scared.RV came and sat next to her ,he hold her hand and said nupur tumhe kya laga tha ki hum tumhe itni asani se jane denge.par humane bhi kachhi goliya nahi khai hai samjhe na.
Then he moved very close to her and tried kissing her and then she got up and went away

RV : babe we are soon getting maried aur uske bad to ye sab legal hoga hi to whats issue now?
N : to shadi tak wait kar lo RV

Rv : no babe ab hum aur wait nahi kar sakte
Nupur begged but he was not listening her
He pulled her very close and tried to kiss her but she just pushed him and he got angry he pulled her very forcefully and tore her sleeves.
He was about to pull her clothes but she was screaming continusioly.

when nupur started from home mayank was feeling ache in his heart he did not know the reason he just took his car out and went in the direction where his heart was telling him to go and when he heard her voice he came running their.
She was strugling to free herself.
and RD was trying to finish his devil thought.
But her luck mayank reached their and one punch on his face

Rv : dude tumhari himmat kaise hui hum par hath uthane ki
M : tumhe kya lagta hai ki tum kisi ladki ko beizzat karoge aur main audience ki tarah ali bajaunga.
RV : she is my fiance and i have the right
M : if she is ur fiance and ready for this she will not shout so badly RV
he saw the girl her eyes were on the floor and she was trying to cover herself.
Mayank gave her jacket to her and asked her to come with him.
Nupur was able to make out the voice it is the same voice which saved her a year ago.
She took her dupatta and covered her face ,she was feeling shame and helpless.

M : tension mat lo main tumhe tumhare ghar se kafi dur hi drop karunga ,aur main nahi chahta ki tum mujhe ya main tumhe dekhe aur kal ko agar hum dono mile to is incident ko yad kare.

Nupur was relived ki ye insan hamesha hi meri madad bina kisi karan ke karta hai par ye hai kaun aur mujhe bachane hamesha kaise pahunch jata hai
Kyon isase milkar hamesha man ko sukun milta hai isko thanks kahne ka man bhi nahi karta lagta hai koi apna hai

Other side mayank
Mere man ko rahat si mahsus ho rahi hai aisa lag raha hai jaise ise bachane ke liye hi wo khalbali machi thi par ye hai kaun aur maine ise kyon bachaya.

PAr her bar ki tarah dono hi chup the dono ke pas answer nahi the,

Mayank dropped her away from her home and took a uturn and went
Nupur ran to home and saw gunjan she too saw her in this condition and cried ,kya hua nupur tum??
N : gunjan wo RV gunjan RV ne
and gunjan understood this
She called samrat and Bauji
G : mujhe nahi lagata hai ki nupur ko RV se shadi karni chahiye Bauji,RV ne shadi ke pahle aise kiya hai shadi ke bad to pata nahi kya karega wo.
S : haan bauji mujhe to RV shuru se pasand nahi hai
Tabhi RV came with his parents
RV'M : are smarat beta ye sab to hota hi rahta hai
RV'P : haan beta kya ab iski wajah se koi shadi se mana karta hai
RV : yes dude ,c'mon tum to aaj ke gen ke ho .don't be so orthodox


S : main kis bhi jamane ka hu par mujhe girls ki respect karni aati hai aur bhale hi aap bade log hai par mere liye meri bahan ki khushi mayane rakhati hai aur mujhe lagta hai ki she will not be happy with you
RV : You are not here real brother so shut up and one more thing if i break this relation no one will come to ur house got it
S : main khush hu meri bahan mere liye bojh nahi hai aur mere liye pyar ka rishata her rishte se bada hai
RV parents : To Mr Bhushan aap kya kahna chahte hai ,aur nupur tum
N : Mujhe kuch nahi kahna mere parivar walo ne na kar diya hai so i am with them aur haan RV main kisi bhikhari se bhi shadi kar lungi par tum par thukati bhi nahi hu main aur ab aaplog ja sakte hai
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Posted: 14 years ago
#4

Part 3 a

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Gunjan came to her mothers place and then She was talking with her Mom Shilpa

Sharma

Gunjan : mom aur kitne din hai mayu ki shadi le liye mujhe to aapne kitni jaldi

bhaga diya hai na

Shilpa : are beta tujhe kya kayu ka nature nahi pata wo meri sunta hi nahi

hai,aur haa maine tujhe bhagaya nahi hai samjhi na.

Jabse tu gayi hai tab se ek din bhi aisa nahi gaya hai jab maine tujhe yad na

kiya ho ya mayu ne teri bat na kari ho.Par beti to hoti hi hai paraya dhan kab

tak apne ghar rakh sakte hai.

Gunjan : phir bhi 1-2 sal to rakh sakte the na ,amin kya kahi bhage ja rahi thi

Shilpa : nahi beta bat tere bhagne ki nahi thi bat thi Samrat jaise achhe rishte

ki ,hum sab jante hai ki wo kitna achha hai aur uske parents na hone ki wajah se

uske rishtedaro ne jaisa kaha humne vaisa hi kiya hai ,tu kabhi bhi hamare liye

bojh nahi thi aur na hi kabhi aisa sochana.

Gunjan : Achha baba thik hai ,main aapke against kabhi gayi hu kya aur vaise bhi

mera achha hi hua hai aapki bat manane se.Aapka decision sahi tha wo sahi me

achhe insan hai ,phir bhi mujhe mayu ki shadi ke bare me aapse kuch kahna hai

Shilpa : to kahna tujhe mana kisne kiya hai

Gunjan : maine aapse kaha tha na ki Samrat ki ek mani hui bahan hai aur wo bhi

hamre sath yaha shift ho gaye hai

Shilpa sharma : haan ,aur main bhi dekh pichale ek sal me ek bar bhi unhe bula

nahi pai ,jab main free thi to tum log busy the .par ab aur nahi soch rahi hu is

week bula lu

Gunjan : offo maa ,main kuch aur kahana chah rahi thi.Aap bhi na duniyadari me

sabse aage ho.

Shilpa : Achha baba ab ekdum chup rahungi thik hai

Gunjan : haan ab thik hai.

Haan to main nupur ki bat kar rahi thi.Maa wo bahut achhi hai.Padi likhi hai aur

Bina maa ke pali hai.Par her chij me expert hai use kisi bhi bat ke liye kuch

kahna nahi padta hai aur ek aur bat dekhane me bahut sundar bhi hai

SS : to ab tak kyon nahi bataya uske bare me

G : oh actually uski shadi uske bauji ne kahi aur tay kar di thi,par ab wo

engagement toot gayi hai

SS : Engage tut gayi matlab?

Then Gunjan told the entire episode to SS.

G : abhi last week me hi use dekhane ke liye 2 gharo se aaye the par rishta toot

gaya hai jankar sab use aise dekhate hai jaise usane paap kar diya ho

SS : sach me ye log bhi ,khair mujhe in bato se koi fark nahi padta hai aur main

mayu ko bhi janti hu wo itna narrow minded nahi hai par phir bhi main Nupur se

milana chahungi.

Kal mil lu use agar koi objection na ho to

(Note : Gunjan is still not aware with Nupur's dream)

Gunjan : thik hai main usase bat kar leti hu

So in the evening Gunjan came back and told Nupur regarding the meeting with SS

N : par Gunjan wo kyon mujhe pasand karengi unke bhi to apne armaan honge na

G : Nahi nupur tum meri mom ko nahi janti ho,wo actual me meri mom bhi nahi

hai,par mujhe apni beti se jyada pyar kiya hai infect Mayu ko to hamesha yahi

lagta hai ki maa mujhe jyada chahti hai

N : tumhari maa nahi hai matlab

And Gunjan told her whole story

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Posted: 14 years ago
#5
Part 3 b
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N : tum bahut khush kismat ho Gunjan.

G : haan wo to hu aur main ye chahti hu ki tum bhi utni hi lucky bano,I am sure

maa tumhe palko par bithakar rakhegi.To ready milane ke liye

N : thik hai

Next Day Shilpa came to meet nupur in the evening time

SS finally convinced Mayank to see the girl.

SS came and ask mayank to come after an hour time

Nupur touched her feet and took blessings.

SS :mujhe tumhara name to pata hai par tumhare munh se sunana chahungi

N : Ji Nupur Bhushan

SS : Oh Ji Nupur Bhushan hai tumhara name (Nupur was very serious but this name

crept a smile on her face)

N : Nupur bhushan

SS : ab thik hai ,Haste huye bahut sweet lagti ho.Kisi ki bhi wajah se khud ko

dukhi karne ka haq hai hume par isase unhe kuch samajh nahi aata ,balki hum apne

aap me hi ghutate rahte hai aur isase hamara hi loss hota hai nupur isliye

hamesha aise hi muskurate raha karo.

They spoke almost for 30 min and that to on different topic.Nupur liked SS and

she was thinking while talking to her (Gunjan is really lucky to have her as mom)

SS : dekho nupur mujhe pata hai ki tumhare sath kya hua hai.Yakin mano mujhe

tumhare past se koi fark nahi padta aur Mayu ko bhi nahi.Main apne bete ko achhe

se janti hu.

N : par phir bhi aap unse puch lijiye Aunty.

SS : maine use yaha bulaya hai nupur wo aata hi hoga.

and then only the door bell rang

Gunjan opened the door and took him to Nupur's room where there mom was sitting

SS to Mayank : Mayank mujhe to Ladki pasand hai ab tum hi bat kar lo

and G and SS left from there

but suddenly current gone

So again they can not see each other clearly

Gunjan : main candle lekar aati hu

M : mujhe koi jarurat nahi hai ,abhi bhi halki halki roshni hai yaha (Shayad ujale me wo nahi kah paunga jo kahna chahta hu)

N : mujhe bhi nahi chahiye (In a low tone but same thing in her mind achha hai light nahi hai warna ek aur inkar karne wale ko dekhana padta mujhe)

M : dekhiye mujhe aapka name nahi pata hai aur main aapse puchana bhi nahi chahta

lekin aapko koi jhuthi ummeed bhi nahi dena chahata hu.Maa ne mujhe forcefully is

shadi ke liye ready kiya hai ,main to shadi hi nahi karna chahta.par janta hu ki karni padegi,isliye aapko jhuthe sapne dikhane ka haq nahi hai mera

N : Shadi karne ka man to mera bhi nahi hai par jaisa aap kah rahe hai mujhe bhi usi halato se gujarana pad raha hai,par main is samaj ke against nahi ja sakti hu aur apne Bauji ke bhi nahi

M : par aap unhe bata to sakti hai na

N : maine bahut bar kaha hai par koi sune tab na isliye to ab maine kahna hi band kar diya hai,aur Bauji mujhe is rishte ke liye bhi force karenge hi kyonki Aunty ne unhe pahle hi kah diya hai ki main unhe pasand hu.

M : oh,par aap mujhase shadi karke bhi khush nahi rahengi

N : par dukhi bhi nahi rahungi , hum dono hi shadi nahi karna chahte hai ,aur gharwale aise manenge nahi.Main Gunjan aur Aunty se mil chuki hu aur jitna unhe samajh pai hu uske hisab se to yahi lagta hai ki aap kisi ki zindagi me dakhal nahi dete hai.isliye mujhe etraj nahi hai par main aapko force nahi kar rahi hu.

M : Kafi samjhdar ho i mean tum bina mujhe mile hi mujhe itna jan gayi.To thik hai main bhi is shadi ke liye ready hu.Duniya ke liye ye rishta alag hamre liye alag thik hai na

N : haan thik hai, jab se shadi ki bat hui hai wo pahli bar shadi ki bat se khush thi.

M : par mujhe to tumhara name hi pata nahi hai

N : Nupur aur aapka name Mayu hai kya?

M : Mayu (oh no ye maa aur gunji) nahi Mayank hai maa aur gunji mujhe Mayu hi kahte hai

N : oh Sorry mujhe nahi pata tha.

M : Koi bat nahi hai ,chaliye ab bahar chale

N: ji

MN kisi tarah se andhere se bahar aaye aur bahar bhi sirf candle ki roshni thi

jaise hi hall me pahunche nupur went to gunjan

M said to his mom that he is ready for the marriage

No one is bothering to ask any thing to anyone.

So they called panditji also on the same time and Date fixed for a very auspicious day after 15 days.

While going back mayank took Nupur's number from Gunjan and she was teasing him

But only they knew ki what is the truth?

They have to show like a real couple,so as part of that before marriage they should show all this stuff.

After reaching Home mayank called nupur

For nupur it was a unknown number and she was scared because she was getting all the unknown calls from RV

So she did not pick on first time ,but when it rang for 2nd time she was like

N : hheeelllo

M: Nupur main mayank bol raha hu

Sans me sans aai

N : han boliye na, kaise phone kiya

M : ab in logo ko dikhane ke liye to phone karna hi hoga na,tum nahi janti maine shadi ke liya haan kah diya isme bhi maa ko 100 que hai isliye main unhe koi mauka nahi dena chahata hu

N : Haan sahi hai

M : vaise bhi hum as a friend to bat kar hi sakte hair rt?

N : haan bilkul,aapko pata hai aapki maa bahut achhi hai

M : haan pata hai sab yahi kahte hai ,kyon unka beta bhi to achha hi hai na (Kidding)

N : Ab ye to nahi pata hai mujhe (blushing and speaking in a very low tone)

They spoke for some more time and went to sleep.

On the bed

Nupur (POV) mayank itne bure bhi nahi hai jab unhone mana kiya to main dar gayi thi par bahut honest hai aur main bhi to khush hi hu is rishte se mujhe bhi freedom hi mil gayi hai ki duniya ke samne bhale hi pati patni ho par rahenge dosto jaise.Hope fully tab tak main us chehre ko dekh pau jo bachpan se andekha hai

Maynak (POV) Nupur ,kitna sweet name hai warna ladkiyon ke name suno ena ,teena sheena

Pata nahi kya kya rahte hai .Aur uski awaj bhi kitni sweet hai ,par maine nupur ko to dekha hi nahi pata nahi kaise dikhati hogi.Par hai kafi suljhi aur sahi mayane me samajhdar bhi.Usane meri bato ka bura hi nahi mana.

Nupur' Heart : maine to mayank ko dekha hi nahi par man ki aankhen kahti hai ki job hi hai bahut achhhe hai warna aajkal ke ladke to pahle shakal dekhenge phir education aur phir family background aur uske bad 100 sawal aur tab jakar batayenge ki shadi karenge ya nahi,par mayank aise nahi lage.par ek chij to maine dekhi unke chehre ke dimple ,mujhe aisa kyon lag raha hai ki maine ye dimple pahle bhi dekhe hai,main janti hu is smile ko.Are nupur itna mat soch aaj hi mayank se mili hai aur aaj hi itna sochane lagegi kya?

Mayank's Heart : Nupur ,ye name itna pahchana sa kyon lag raha hai par maine ise pahli bar hi to suna hai aur kisi nupur ko to main janta bhi nahi hu to kyon uske name se itna jyada attraction feel kar raha hu,uski awaj jaise kano me ek mithas hi ghol rahi thi.

Kya ho gaya hai mayank sb so ja.

And he too slept.

Mayank and nupur were talking with each other to show others but slowly they liked talking to each other.

Now it is just 7 days for their marriage and they have to get the last thing and the most needed thing ,haan unke kapde and for this SS asked mayu and nup to go together.

Par mayank ne nupur ko ab tak nahi dekha tha aur nupur ne mayank ko

M Called to N : Nupur

N : haan mayank ,boliye

M : hume shopping par sath me jana hai main tumhe ghar se pick kar leta hu

N : par main to office me hu

M : achha thik hai to main office me aa jata hu ,par tumhe pahchanunga kaise ,maise to tumhe dekha hi nahi hai

N : App aa jao maine ,white color ka suit pahna hai ,main bahar hi rahungi.

Mayank reaches to her office par badluck waha do ladkiya same dress pahankar khadi hai (white)

Aur dono ka hi back mayank ko dikh raha hai.again he calls and because nupur has kept her cell in the purse she does not pick it.Ab aur confusion kisase puchu ki kaun hai nupur

Suddenly nupur turns but her hairs are open and she is struggling with it

Mayank sans lo aram se aur aankhen band karo koshish karo kaise dikhati hai pata chal jayega

Mayank jaise hi aankhen band karta hai use sirf 2 aankhen hi dikhai deti hai ,aur wo aankhen itni jayda sundar hai ki wo apni aankhen hi kholana bhul jata hai he is in deep thought of those eyes.

Jaise hi aankhen khulati hai nupur use dikhai deti hai ,bina kisi kashamkash ke wo uske pas pahunch jata hai and M : nupur

N : mayank

Both do not see each other and goes inside the car

M in thought haan ( Iski aankhen to bilkul uske jaise ,aur ye kitni simple and sweet hai)

N in thought (Mayank ko maine pahli bar dekha hai ,par phir bhi is chehre ko kai bar dekha hai aisa lag raha hai,inki smile kitni sweet hai aur no doubt ye khud bhi kafi dashing hai)

Both were silent and reached to mall

Nupur tried first : She selected blue color and mayank gave ok ok look

Then she selected the dark maroon again mayank like thik hai chalega par nothing for marriage type

Then she selected a red color lehnga and near to that a Brown color saree : Mayank gave a 1000W smile and nupur selected that.

She went to the trial room and came back ,she was adjusting her dupatta and not her hair strained is disturbing her ,mayank use dekhata hai and just pushes back to her ear

She takes a back she does not know what made her to take a step back only thing she knew ki use aisa kici aur ne bhi chua hai par ye kaun hai she did not knew

M : Sorry nupur par tumhare bal tumhe pareshan kar rahe the isliye

N : Koi bat nahi hai main achanak se dar gayi thi ( Thank god)

M : Chalo koi bat nahi hai maine bhi apni sherwani dekh li hai ,kaisi hai?

N : Bahut badiya hai ,

M : tum bhi is lehnge me kafi sundar lag rahi ho.

N : Thoda sa blush and then ab chalte hai kafi late ho gaya hai

MN left for their home.M dropped nupur and then came to his house.

On the day of marriage

Nupur wore the red lehnga and got ready

Same mayank wore his sherwani and came in the mandap

Nupur was looking extremely beautiful and mayank was handsom

Both were complimenting each other.

Nupur did not see mayank where mayank refuse to look anywhere other than nupur,

Mayank was lost in her beauty ,her innocence and her blush and smile

When thw marriage started with the effect of mantra slowly they felt ki aisa unke sath pahle hua hai,when mayank was putting sindur nupur felt ki aisa hua hai par kaha kisne mujhase shadi kari thi but she controlled herself ,probably wo sapne ki wajah se aisa lag raha hai.

Otherside mayank started feeling when they were doing the fere

Maine kisi ko apni jindagi ki aankhiri sans tak bachane ka faisala liya tha par main bacha nahi paya,meri shadi pahle bhi hui hai aur maine aise hi phere liye hai aise hi uski mang bhari hai,shayad ye mere sapne ki wajah se hi ho raha hai.

Both were trying hard and controlling.

At the end everything went fine and MAYUR came to Sharma's House

Nupur is sitting in the center of the bed and room has been decorated for the first night.She is very nervous and does not know what to do ,hears a knock on the door and mayank enters in the room

He too is very nervous he goes and sits on the sofa.

No one is aware what to speak

M initiates : Nupur tension mat lo mujhe apna promise yad hai main yaha sofe par so jaunga tum wahi bed par so jao.Aur haa tum kafi thak gayi ho to i guess jakar change kar lo.

Nupur obeys him and goes into the bathroom comes in the night dress

Mayank is sleeping happily on the sofa.

She puts quilt on him and goes to sleep

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#6

sapne se Haqeeqat - Part 4


Nupur got up in the morning and took bath and went to kitchen she prepared tea and breafast too
and took the tea and paper for mayank in the bedrrom

She was feeling awkard to wake him

par still she called Mayank ,mayank
par mayank kaha uthane wala tha
she went near him and touched his shoulder and said mayank uthiye chai thandi ho jayegi

Mayank got up aur apni aankhen masalane laga

Nupur ne bed thik kiya aur use Tea aur paper dene aai

M : nupur main lemon tea pita hu
N : maine wahi banai hai aur ye raha paper

M : nupur thanks a lot ,dono hi chije meri fav hai lemon tea with papaer but wait a min tumhe kaise pata ki mujhe lemon tea pasand hai aur wo bhi paper ke

sath

Nupur was thinking but did not get an answer and in a while SS called both of them down

Nupur went down aur sochane lagi main kaise janti hu ki mayank ko Lemon tea pasand hai aur wo subah sabse pahle paper padna pasand karte hai

She was thinkin all the way on the stear case and was about to fall when mayank catch hold of her and his hand touched her soft waist and she was holding his

strong arms.For few min they both were lost but SS called so both of them stood properly and came near her.

SS : dekho mayu shadi jaldi me ho gayi hai aur main janti hu ki tum dono hi itne jaldi ready nahi the par ab dono hi ye jan lo ki shadi ho gayi hai thik hai

na

N : Ji maa

M : Thik hai mom ,ab kya phir se wahi se bologi aap

SS : nahi buddhhu main sirf ye kah rahi thi ki nupur ne subah uthkar apni respo to sambhal hi li hai par ab tumhe bhi ye ghar sambhalane ki adat dalni hogi

samjhe na

M : ok maa jiase aap kahe and saying this he went to his room to get ready

Nupur ne ek achhi biwi ki tarh uske kapde nikalkar bed par rakh diye aur wo nashta lagane dianing room me chali gayi

SS : Nupur tumhare hath ke parathe to wow ,khushboo se hi halat kharab ho rahi hai bata ,dekhane me bhi achhe lag rahe hai ab khane ka wait kar rahi hu main

to

N : are maa aap kha lijiye main unke sath kha lungi (she was blushin because in front of others only she was calling him as a hunband)

SS : nahi beta ek sath hi karenge

And nupur goes to call mayank ,Nupur is wearing saree in home

she goes to the room and finds mayank searching for shirt wo apne blue jeans aur white shirt

N : maine ,tumhare kapde nikal diye the na mayank

M : are nupur us shirt ka button toot gaya hai
and he showed her

N : ok main button laga deti hu and wo sui dhaga lekar button takne lagti hai and that too they are very close her hand is touching his chest and he is

controlling himself to hold her,he is looking at her constantly she is looking no less than an angle.
Her open hair and her sweet smile are very innocent.

M :nupur dekhkar sui chubhati hai
N : Tum hamesha aisa hi kahte ho mayank par sui chubhati nahi hai pahle hi rone lagte ho

M : achha to lagne ke bad kahunga kya ?( par nupur ko kaise pata ki main aisa kahta hu mom ne to nahi bataya hoga)

They ignored this also and had breakfst mayank loved her paratha and all the time he was praising them.
Nupur took a break from office and arranging all the stuffs after marriage and SS is happy to have nupur her DIL.

Like this one week went one fine day SS was watching the TV and in one Aid she saw ki there is a program where couple has to participate and they should

understand each others like dislike aur SS ne mayur ko enrol kar diya

At the dinner time

SS : mayu tumhe is week saturday ko Lonavala jana hai nupur ke sath
M and N : Kyon?

SS : wo actually maine tum dono ka name ek program me diya hai aur mujhe pata hai ki tum dono ko ek dusare ki pasand napasnd achhe se pata hai

M : par maa

SS : mayu ab please phir se sadu mat ban

M : achha thik hai kab jana hai

SS : good boy saturday jana aur monday aa jana

M : monday kyon ?sunday kyon nahi

SS : are bewkoof shadi ke bad pahli bar nupur ko kahi lekar ja raha hai ,to ek din extra ruk jana na

M : achha thik hai hum chale jayenge ,nupur mera bag pack kar dena saturday pahunchana hai means hum kal hi chalenge

N : thik hai (thye were not hus -wife but she was happy to go our with him but why ,why she is not feeling awkard ,she is hapily ready)

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#7

Sapne se haqeeqat -

Part 5 :

The event was postponed for a month but SS did not leave them and they needed to go.

So now they completed almost 1.5 months and then going to participate in the event.

Mayank and nupur left for lonavala

SS made this trip for 3 days because she did not want them to come back in a day only so she booked the hotel for another 2 days.

On the way they played some songs ,It was from DDLJ

Nupur liked them and started singing with the tune ,This movie was released long ago still it was her fav

Mayank : nupur tumhari ye fav movie hai na

Nupur : haan par tumhe kaise pata hai

M: main to ye bhi janta hu ki SRK tumhara fav hai from ur child hood but ab to wo buda ho gaya hai

N : dekho Mayank shahrukh ko buda mat kaho plz ,but how do u know maine to kabhi tumhe bataya hi nahi hai

M : mujhe laga ki main janta hu isliye kaha par mera guess sahi nikala rt?

N : rt.Aur tumhe kitabo se bahut pyar hai movie to tumhe time waste lagti hai na

M : bilkul i do not like movies ,kuch meaning ful ho to samajh aata hai

N : Mayank tum kitne sadu ho,thode se bhi romantic nahi ho

And then she felt ki usane kya kaha just to avoid his gaze she looked outside from the window

Mayank was shocked how does she call him sadu when she does not know about him whether he is romantic or not and y am i feeling ki nupur mujhe hamesha sadu bulati hai

Kyon aisa lag raha hai ki maine ye pahle bhi suna hai.

Same nupur also felt ki sleep of toungue hi sahi par wo Mayank ko hamesha se aisa kahte aai hai

They kept quiet and reached to lonavala.

The place was beautiful and romantic.They were having control over their emotions and went to the room.Room had a balcony towards a valley.(Lonavala is a hill station as of my knowledge).

Night will be very cold and they went there in rainy season so the beauty of the place was on the top.

Mayank and nupur were getting ready and thinking what to wear as nupur took bath and came out Mayank was lost in her wet hair and the water drop on her body,where nupur was feeling shy as she felt strong gaze on her.

Still she just cough and said : Mayank main confuse hu ki kya pahnu

Mayank came in sense and said tum par to kuch bhi achha lagega nupur

Nupur was happy to hear that he really mean what he says and he thinks that she is beautiful too

N : par phir bhi Mayank

M : tum ek kam karo tum wo blue saree pahan lo you look beautiful in that

N : par main to lekar hi nahi aai hu ,aur tum kya pahanane wale ho

M : main bhi yahi soch raha hu ,par tension mat lo tumhari saree ka complete set meri bag me hai maine ise rakh liya tha.

N : par tumhe kaise pata ki main ise pahnungi agar na pahnu to (She winked her eyes)

M : Tum par ye saree bahut khilti hai aur main janta hu ki ladkiyon ko apni tariff sunane ka kafi shauk hota hai mrs Sharma and he too winked

Nupur blushed badly : thik hai MR Sharma tum jite main hari ,tumhara black shirt aur Blue jeans hai meri bag me tum wahi pahan lo handsome lagoge and she left from there before he says anything.

When both came out they were complimenting each other .Every one was staring this stunning couple.Nupur ne Mayank ki hatho me hath dala aur pahunch gaye event ke liye .

There was one more couple RV and Sheena ,they were thinking that they will win and when RV saw nupur he came to disturb nupur ,Mayank went to meet organizer and nupur was alone.

RV : oh babe to tum humase compete karne aai ho ,par jitney nahi denge hum tumhe aur vaise kisane shadi kari hai tumase?chalo aaj hum tumhari naa ka badla lekar rahenge use pata to chale ki tumhe kisane chua hai

Nupur was shivering after seeing only after listening this she was afraid as she did not want Mayank to meet RV.

Even though they were not hus wife but still nupur was happy with her married life so is Mayank.

When Mayank saw them talking from far he recognize RV from the distance and came fast to nupur

By now nupur thar thar kamp rahi thi jaise hi Mayank aaya she went back and hided herself.

RV : oh to tumhari hi najar thi is par isliye shuru se tum hume iase dur karte aaye ho

M : what do you mean RV ? She is my wife

RV : oh to is bulbul ne tumhe fans liya ,Dude don't you know ki ye hamari fianc thi and with her only i wanted to and he stopped

Mayank was shocked was she the same girl he saved

M : Kya bakwas kar rahe ho tum?

N : ye sach hai Mayank aur maa bhi janti hai ki meri sagai tut chuki hai aur wo maine hi todi hai and she told him entire story

M : oh to wo ladki tum hi ho jise maine drop kiya tha

And nupur was shocked because wo nahi janti thi ki Mayank is the same guy wo saved her

RV : oh to tum fans gaye iske jal me dude ,she is very clever

Nupur was very nervous she was afraid what destiny has written for her

M : Yeah she is smart but not clever RV ,and she did not hide anything from me or from my family

She was ur fianc but now she is my wife so better be away because that day i left you but if you even think of insulting her i promise you ki apne pairo par khade rahne layak nahi rahoge samjhe na?aur main kisi ko kori dhamki nahi deta so mind it ?and he took nupur holding her from her waist.

Nupur was in shock as she did not think that Mayank will not only scold him infect will support her

She respected from her heart,and tear roll down to her eyes ,which was noticed by Mayank

M : ro kyon rahi ho?

N : kuch nahi ye to khushi ke aansoo hai main dar gayi thi Mayank,iske pahle bhi RV ne mujhe pareshan kiya hai college me us din bhi kisi ne aise hi mujhe usase bachaya tha.Par main aaj tak us insane ka shukriya ada nahi kar pai aur aaj mujhe ek aur insane ka pata chala jisne mujhe RV ka shikar hone se bachaya ,Mayank maeri najro me tumhari respect aur bad gayi hai Mayank.Thank you for everything

M : oh to tum mujhe ab thanks kahogi.Vaise tumhe RV se bachane ka kam aaj tak main hi karta aa raha hu ,tum wahi ho na jiska hath RV ne pakada tha clg ke pahle din.

N : haan par tumhe kaise pata ,iska matlab tum wahi ho

M : Yes madam main wahi hu aura b jyada khush mat ho hume koshish karni hai ki hum ye event jite thik hai na

Nupur to mare khushi ke haan bilkul koshish to karni hi hai

They both went in the event and event was all about how much the couple knows about each other.

So they took them first alone and asked their like and dislike and later the cross round started.

Questions for Husbands:

1. what is her favourite colour

Mayank's Answer: I think Red and Blue

2. What she likes in food

Mayank's answer: Paneer tikka

3. What is her favourite whether

Mayank's answer: Rainy season

4. What is her favourite Pass time

Mayank's answer: SRK movies

5. What was the best date according to her

Mayank was thinking about it now (kya likhu aaj tak to date par Gaye nahi hai – ab tak to sab guess hi tha par ab kya karu –still he wrote

Mayank's Ans : She loves beach and would love to go there

6. She calls you to irritate (mayu thinking ab kya likhu isme ,nupur mujhe irritate karne ke liye kya kahti hai )

Are haan sadu yahi to kaha tha usane

Mayank's Ans : Sadu

7. What nupur likes most in you (meri aankhen nahi nahi,meri well built body nahi mayu kuch aur soch and smile crept on his face

Mayank's ans : Smile and dimple

8. When she looks most beautiful

When she blushes ( sahi me wo bahut sweet lagti hai)

Questions for wives :

1. What he dislikes most

N's ans : Jhuth and insulting girls (i guess

2. What is the favourite dish

N's Ans : Karela (making faces – hey bhagwan)

3. What he can make best

N's Ans : Coffee (world ki best coffee – she thought)

4. What is his fav color

N'Ans :Black and White (sure I think kya likhu)

5. Who is his idle

N's ans : Maa

6. Which was the best moment you shared with him

Nupur was feeling shy because she has some eyelocks but still can't write

But she has to answer

N's Ans : I was about to fall from staircase but was saved in his arms

7. What he likes in you

Kya pasand hai Mayank ko mujhe to ye pata hi nahi chalo kuch to likhana hoga

N's Ans : Eyes

8. When you feel he looks most handsom

N's Ans : (aaj Mayank bahut dashing lag rahe the ,haan yahi likhati hi )

Black shirt and blue jeans

Both of them gave their answers and when they came out

Mayank asked : kya lagta hai hum jitenge ya nahi ?

N: pata nahi mujhe to jo laga maine likh diya

Result to be announced next day and it was already night ,so they went to the hotel and had dinner .

In the room

M : nupur tumane 6th que ka kya ans likha

N : kaunsa que ?(she was blushing as that was the que where she herself felt shy while writing the answer)

M : When was the most romantic moment (he was enjoying the moment) aisa hi kuch tha na

And nupur could not help but blushed

N : hamare bich aisa koi moment hai kya (she was trying to hide her smile)

M : hai to bahut sare bhale hi logo ke samne par huye to hai Mrs Sharma

N : achha to tum hi batao mujhe to yad nahi hai vaise tumne answer kya likha

M : main kyon batau

N : are wah hum dono ka answer to same hona chahiye to batao ki tumne kya bataya

M : wo us din tum jab staircase se girte girte bachi thi wahi wala

N : Sach me ,wahi wala

M : haan ,kyon tumne aur kuch likha hai kya

N blushed ans looking at floor : nahi mujhe to wahi yad aaya tha to maine wahi likha

M : wow hamara ek ans sahi ho gaya good

N : aur aur wo last que ka ans

M : kis last que ka ans ( he knew still making fun of her)

N : kuch nahi (she was blushing again)

M : answer bhi yahi hai Mrs Sharma Sharmate huye bahut sundar lagti hai.

Nupur sharm ke mare gadi ja rahi thi so she got up so that she can avoid his gaze.But Mayank pulled her and she fall in his lap ( he did not know why he did but he felt that he knows her the spoke everything what was asked in the event)

He pulled her to make her sit but fortunately she landed on his lap and they were very close.

Nupur and Mayank can feel their heart beat and almost lost.his hand was moving on her waist and her hand was back of his neck.

He was staring her angelic face where she was lost in his brown eyes.They would have been in same state forever par pyar ka dushman zamana (Mayank ka cell bujane laga and they broke the eye lock)

Both were feeling awkward

M : hello

P : MR Mayank Sharma

M : yeah speaking

P : aap dono event jeet gaye hai aap dono ke sare answer sahi hai kal hum winner announce karenge please aap log subah pahunch jaiye

M : oh thanks a lot will be there

M : nupur

N : hmm

M : hum event jeet gaye hai ,humare sare answer sahi hai

N : kya kah rahe ho ,par mujhe to 1-2 ke alawa sare answer guess par hi kare hai

M : maine bhi same kara hai mujhe to 1-2 ke alawa sab gap marne jaisa hi laga tha .manana padega ki hum kafi samajhdar dampati hai kyon?

And both burst out laughing.

Both went to sleep par neend koso dur thi and moreover they need to share the bed as there was no sofa so Mayank thought of sleeping on the floor

N : koi jarurat nahi hai Mayank mujhe tum par pura bharosa hai.

Mayank janta tha ki they are aware with the limits so both of them were sleeping on the edges.

Par kismet ka likha hi hota hai aur kismet shayad unhe aur dur nahi rakhana chahti thi.

In the night Mayank got some dream and he was sweating badly ,nupur got up and gave some water to him.

He was afraid and was not able to sleep he was just turning on the bed.Nupur can feel his restlessness .she got up and sat next to him and asked him to keep his head in her lap.Mayank was confused what to do ,but she said we are good friends also so u need not to worry.

E kept his head in her lap and she was ruffling his hair.He slept soon and for change the dream did not dare to disturb him.nupur slept in the same postion without moving a bit only thing now Mayank was holding her hand and it was near to his heart.

When he got up in the morning he saw nupur in the same position he felt bad for troubling her and without disturbing her sleep made her to lie down properly on the bed.He was touched because of her caring nature he kissed her forehead and went to get fresh.

Nupur felt his lips on her forehead and she liked it ,she does not know y,she saw him going and slept with the smile.

When Mayank came back it was 8 and they suppose to reach at 10 so he woke her up,

And for a change he wore white kurta and jeans.where as he took a Black saree for her,

She got up and took the same saree which he wanted her to wear.She always liked his choice,it is very decent yet pleasing and beautiful.

When they reached to the event place

They announced them the "Made for Each Other" couple

Mayank was happy and nupur was happy and blushing.Org said Mr and MRs Sharma aapko to dekhkar hi lagta hai ki aap bane hi ek dusare ke liye hai.Humane aako gift ke taur par honeymoon package diya hai aapko Manali jana hoga next two days me hi.Do not worry humane sare bandobast kar rakhe hai and it is just for two days and three nights.

MAYUR were shocked: manali?

They both were not shocked ki unhe honeymoon pkg mila hai par manali sunane ke bad hi unke sharir me current daud gaya.Dono hi nahi jante the kyon par ye ehsas unhe bahut ajib lag raha tha.

They called SS and told SS said main to pahle se hi janti thi kit um hi jitoge.She said ki abhi mauka hai jakar aa jao aane ke bad phir jana nahi hoga.

MAYUR came back to hotel and sat

M : kya mushkil hai manali hi kyon

N : haan mujhe bhi nahi jana ,manali sunkar hi mana karne ka man kar raha hai

M : tumhara bhi man nahi hai

N : nahi

M : par ab kya kare

N : chalte hai ghumkar aa jayenge ,mana karenge to maa aur gunjan sawalo ki jhadi laga denge.

M: Achha thik hai chalo kal nikalana hai to filhal aram kar lo.

N : hey bhagwan shadi karne ke bad kitne pange hai na

M : sach me nupur par ek fayda bhi hai

N : wo kya?

M : tum jaise biwi milane ka fayda ,life kitni easy ho gayi hai smaay par khana.samay par sona.Sab kuch ready wow

N : oh to yahi fayde hai kyon and she raised her eyebrow

M : nahi ek aur hai ,ek samjhdar dost jis par main trust kar sakta hu jaha main sirf Mayank hu aur kuch nahi and this made nupur to smile.

Both dozed off soon

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Posted: 14 years ago
#8

Part 6

They both start back to Mumbai and they need to catch the flight.Mayank and nupur both had fear with the name Manali par aisa kyon ho raha hai they were not able to figure it out.There was a complete silence on the way back to Mumbai.They reached Mumbai soon and SS welcomed them with the broad smile both took blessing from her.

SS : kaha than a maine tum hi jitoge?

M &N : haan maa aura b hume manali jana hai for 3 days (both were upset while speaking)

Ss: ye to achhi bat hai na ,sirf 3 din ki to bat hai na .chalo ab fresh ho jao tumhari flight kal ki hai na aur rat bhi kafi ho gayi hai

They freshen up and went to bedroom after dinner

M: nupur mera bilkul man nahi hai ,pata nahi par mujhe manali se itni irritation kyon hoti hai

N : haan same main bhi,par kisase kahe maa to kitne sare sawal karegi,dekhate hai chalkar aage kya hoga dekha jayega

and both slept soon

In the morning they started for Manali

In the plane

Mayank was at window seat and nupur was in middle as she was scared of height

There was a guy sitting next to her and he was constantly staring nupur.

Initially Mayank did not notice but soon nupur fall asleep and her head was resting on his shoulder and her veil fell down from her shoulder she was feeling cold too.She was holding Mayank with her hand ,when Mayank turned and about to cover her with shawl .Mayank noticed something but he first placed her veil on her shoulder and then covered her with the shawl and kept his hand on her shoulder without disturbing her sleep. He was feeling angry who the hell this guy is staring at her.After that guy understood and did not dare to look at Nupur.When nupur woke up she saw herself wrapped in the shawl and mayank's hand on her shoulder she felt extremely safe the way he was holding.

When Mayank felt some movement he pulled his hand back.Mayank and nupur came out of the airport and something strange started hitting them. They took a taxi and the driver told are mayu baba aap kab aaye?

M:kya mahu baba main to yaha pahli bar aaya hu ,but he said abhi aaya,App is hotel me challenge

And driver spoke many thing which they were not understanding, soon they reached hotel and when entered the receptionist gave a warm welcome as they completed 25 years and MAYUR were the first couple to come they offered them beautiful and grand room

MAYUR were happy and entered in the room suddenly after seeing the room nupur felt giddy and was about to fall when mayu came running and supported her ,he made her to sleep on the bed

He was going to call Dr when nupur came back in sense,he asked her

M : nupur kya hua hai tumhe?Tabiyat thik nahi hai kya chalte hai Mumbai wapas?

N : nahi Mayank main thik hu par jaise hi yaha enter huye aisa laga jaise maine ye hotel dekha hai aur phir bahut si dhundhali chije yad aane lagi aur meri kuch samajh nahi aaya aur main gir padi

M : matlab,tum to yaha kabhi aai nahi ho na?

N : haan par aisa lag raha hai jaise main ye jagah janti hu.mujhe road par bhi kai bar laga ki main janti hu ki ye road kaha kahtam hogi?Wo driver jo kah raha hai kuch kuch yad aa raha tha par mera sir bahut dukh raha hai ab.

M : kabhi -2 aisa hota hai nupur tension mat lo tum aram karo main tumhe bad me bahar le chalunga tum achha feel karogi.

Nupur slept and Mayank sat next to her and was keep on thinking mujhe bhi aisa hi kuch lag raha hai ki main yaha aaya hu par main to is jagah ko janta bhi nahi hu,Soon he too slept sitting there

When he got up his hand was on nupur's forehead and it was roughly around 5:30 in the evening,He got up and got ready and nupur also got up she was feeling better .

Both were ready and hired a car ,when they were going out Manager asked if they need a guide Mayank said no he doesn't need.

He started driving and reached to a very beautiful place it was on top and can see entire manali from there .Nupur was also enjoying when suddenly she shouted : nahi Mayank ko kuch mat karo use waha se dhakka mat do please and fainted again ,Mayank heard and came but by the time she was on ground

He rash to Hotel and asked Dr what has happened to nupur:Dr said "Uske dimag me kahi koi dar hai use aisa lag raha hai ki uski koi pyari chij usase chin rahi hai"

Mayank was in shock aisa kya ho raha hai nupur ke sath ab tak to thik thi.

But he washed off those thoughts and went in the room

Nupur was looking ok but kind of scared

M : nupur kya hua hai tumhe aaj do bar tum faint hui ho?

N : Mayank mujhe nahi pata aur mujhe kuch yad bhi nahi aa raha hai bus kuch parchai ki tarah yad aa raha hai ,main kya kah rahi thi us waqt?

M : girne se pahle tum chillai thi ki Mayank ko niche mat pheko,par nupur waha to hum dono hi the phir tumane aisa kyon kaha?

N : pata nahi Mayank mujhe achanak se aisa laga jaise koi tumhe dhakka de raha hai aur phir mujhe kuch yad nahi hai.

Now Mayank was worried he sat next to nupur to console her but he was confused,why we both are scared of manali and nupur is dreaming all this me too feeling something.

But again he did not think much aur nupur ko kaha ki tension mat lo sab thik hoga aur ab rat kafi ho gayi hai so jao.

N : Mayank tum yahi so jao mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai (her face was sweating though outside it was snowing)

M : thik hai main yahi hu

Nupur slept and soon Mayank also ,his hands are around nupur and her head resting on his chest holding him tightly.

Today they both saw the dream but nothing was clear sirf itna pata tha ki wo shaks jise wo dono dund rahe hai wo manali me hi milega ye unhe unke spane se pata chala par kaun aur manali me wo kaise pahchanenge.

Dono subah uthe aur dekha ki they are close to each other ,but both were unaffected they were in their own world of dream.

Dono tayar huye aur breakfast table par jab unhone order kiya tab nupur ne ek aise chehre ko dekha ki uske hatho ne Mayank ke hatho ko bahut jor se pakad liya

Mayank ne nupur ko dekha aur uske bad samne ki table par dekha,use laga wo us insane ko janta hai par ye hai kaun?aur nupur aise kyon react kar rahi hai?

He asked nupur tum itna dark yon rahi ho ?aur aise use kyon dekh rahi ho?

N : Mayank yaha se chalo pahle yaha se chalo please

Both went in the room :

Nupur closed her eyes and sat on the bed her eyes were closed par aansuo ko khuli aankho ki jarurat kab hoti hai.mayank sat next to her holding her hand in his

M :kya hua nupur tum ro kyon rahi ho?[he was worrying like anything]

N : Mayank mujhe us chehre se bahut dar lag raha hai aur main use shaks ko janti hu maine use bahut bar apne sapne me dekha hai aur aur and she stopped

M : aur kya nupur ,tum use sapne me kay kah rahi ho?

N : haan Mayank tum ye nahi jante ki mujhe ek sapna bachpan se dikhata hai ki meri shadi ho rahi hai aur kisi ka khun hua hai main usko to nahi dekh pati par use dekh pati hu jisne uska khun kiya,and she started crying and hugged Mayank

M : kya tumhe bhi aise sapne aate hai?matlab mujhe laga tha ki main hi hu jise aise sapne aate hai

N : matlab??

M : aise sapne mujhe bhi aate hai par mujhe kisi ka chehara aaj tak nahi dikha hai aur main us chehre ko kab se dund raha hu ,par kal ke sapne me manali ka jikr hua tha

N : mujhe bhi kuch aisa hi laga kal ke sapne me

M & N : matlab hum manali me sach ka pata kar payenge

N : haan Mayank shayad

M : chalo thik hai phir hum chalte hai bahar dekhate hai ki kya sach hai yaha

Both went and missed the path

N : Mayank left lena hai

M : nahi nupur right lena hai?

N : Mayank kafi rat ho gayi hai ab kya kare aur yaha to coverage bhi nahi hai mobile ka

M : haan nupur aur ye jagah mujhe kuch thik nahi lag rahi hai

They do not know ki someone has eye on them and those bad ppl are waiting for the right time

M:nupur yaha se aage ek temple hai

N : par tum kaise jante ho ki yaha temple hai

M : pata nahi man me aisa laga to kah raha hu

They reached to the temple and when they entered ,Toofan chalne laga aur bijli joro se kadakane lagi Mayank and nupur were shocked

M : abhi to badal itna saaf tha aur itni tej tufan ki kuch dikhai nahi de raha hai nupur tum yahi ho na

N : haan Mayank main yahi hu par mujhe kuch dikhai nahi de raha hai

They were proceeding inside the temple and something hurt mayank's hand and blood was coming but it was not a big wound so he did not realize

Uske bad bijli itne joro se kadki ki nupur ne Mayank ko dar ke karan hug kara ,Mayank :are nupur bijli hi kadak rahi hai tension mat lo

N : nahi Mayank mujhe is aaj se dar lagta hai,

M : par main hu na tumhare sath aur usne nupur ke sir par hath fera

They reached deep inside the temple where they can see god and they closed their eyes and prayed the Goddess , but after closing the eyes Mayank saw nupur and nupur saw Mayank

Both opened and looked at each other with ? on the face

But before they could speak a single word they saw goons are around them and one guy came fwd

BP : to tum dono wapas aa hi gaye haan

M : Matlab (nupur holding his hand)

BP : matlab mujhe laga tha kit um marker jinda ho gaye par aisa kaise ho sakta hai tumhe to maine apne hatho se mara tha to jinda kaise hoge dono

MN were not able to understand but nupur was damn scared,she hided herself back of Mayank

M : humse kya chahte ho?

BP : Purab kisi se kuch chahta nahi hai wo khud hasil kar leta hai mujhe nupur chahiye

M : bakwas band karo aur apni limit me raho nupur meri patni hai

He was in full anger and someone hilted him from back but it hurt only Mayank's shoulder

Then Mayank also started giving them back and it became dark he was holding nupur's hand aur use pata tha ki ye log khatarnak hai aur kuch bhi kar sakte hai so he took nupur and ran out

He went back of the temple and then inside the basement

Nupur was shocked because she did not know how come Mayank know this way

N : Mayank tumhe kaise pata ki yaha jagah hai chupane ki

M : pata nahi nupur par filhal hum yaha safe hai ,agar tum nahi hoti to main unhe batata ki main kya kar sakta hu par tumhare sath kuch bhi galat hua to ill not bare.

Nupur saw the blood on his shoulder she was upset and started crying

Inside the basement it was dark but it was kind of complete home thode bahut jale ho gaye the par phir bhi sab kuch tha they swithed light on

Nupur ki aankho me to flood hi aa gayi thi usane apne duppatte ko fada aur Mayank ke shoulder par bandha so that blood kam nikale aur light on karne ki wajah se they were able to see where they are aur jab dono kin ajar wall par padi they were shocked ye un dono ki photo thi jo waha thi aur wo bhi same to same there was no difference

M : ye kaise ho sakta hai nupur?

N : par ye hua hai Mayank aur main khud bhi samajh nahi pa rahi hu

M : Mayank agar ye sach hai to hume yaha aur bhi surag milenge

They both started searching par kuch nahi mil raha tha achanak se Mayank ko kuch sujha aur usane almera ke niche dikha jaha use ek diary mili it was all dusty par phir bhi padne ki halat me thi

Usane dust saaf kari aur panda shuru kiya

Inside Diary

Main Mayank aaj nupur ko propose karne wala hu aur janta hu ki ye sirf formality hai kyonki wo chahti hai ki main use sabke samne propose karu ,par wo bhi to mujhase pyar karti hai aur uske mujhase expectation karna galat to nahi hai na.

He turned some more pages and then

Aaj nupur ke dad yani uncle ne bhi hamari shadi ki bat ko accept kar liya ab wo bahut khush hai aur mere aur nupur ke to pai hi jameen par nahi hai

Somemore pages

Aaj ki date hai 11th sep yani nupur ka janmdin aur kal hamari shadi hai.

Main bahut khush hu ,par ek ajib sa dar kyon lag raha hai main nervous hu ya kuch aur kahi kuch bura to nahi hone wala hai.Nupur pahle bhi mujhe us Purab ke bare me bata chuki hai dhoke se usne unki property ka kuch hissa hadap liya hai aur wo mujhe aur nupur ke bich me bahut bar aa chukka hai aur itne easily wo hume shadi nahi karne dega.Mujhe nupur ko bhi savdhan karna hoga.

And there was nothing on the diary

Both read and then saw each other

M : nupur matlab ye Purab hai aur main aur tum hi wo do shaks hai jinhe hum sapne me nahi dekh pate hai

N:haan Mayank par kismet ne hume dekho mila hi diya hai ,she hugged him and he too responded back

M : to iska matlab hai hume job hi lagta thaw o waham nahi sach tha jise hum nahi jante the,aur hum ek dusare ke itne pas hokar bhi kitne dur the.

N : haan Mayank mujhe bachpan me ek baba ne bataya the ki jis din main us insane ka chehra dekh lungi uske bad mujhe wo daravane sapne nahi aayenge aur asia hi hua hai par main ye samjh nahi pai ki wo tum hi ho.

M : aur main bhi kaha tumhe jan paya,tumhare bare me mujhe itna sab kaise pata ho sakta hai par main hamesha talta raha bhagwan ne hume hamesha se hi hint diye par hum bewkoof un isharo kosamjh hi nahi paye.mujhe to shadi ke din bhi aisa lag raha the ki main ye sab pahle dekh chukka hu aur hamari shadi bhi to 12th sept ko hi hui hai na

N : haan Mayank mujhe bhi ehsas ho raha tha par maine use waham samjhkar jhatak diya,par ab aur nahi,her grip was more tight on him

Both were in danger zone still one thing was good they are together

M : is bar main is purab ko uske maqsad me kamyab nahi hone dunga.tumhe us din joy ad aaya tha ki mujhe kisi ne dhakka diya thaw o sach hai nupur mujhe us khai me dhakka diya gaya tha aur uske pahle maine apni jan ki jan jate huye dekhi his eyes were moist

N : haan Mayank ab mujhe bhi sab yad aa gaya purab hamesha se hi mere piche pada tha par daddy ne hamesha hi mujhe usase bachakar rakha.par hamari shadi ke waqt usane dad ka khun kar diya tha uske bad wo mujh par attack karna chahta tha par tumne use aisa karne nahi diya,humari ladai adhuri thi Mayank par ab uska bura samay aa gaya hai par ab aur nahi kal uski zindagi ka aakhiri din hoga.

Saying this she again hugged Mayank .

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aruna..y did u start in a new thread???
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: achoose

..y did u start in a new thread???

not exactly mine
one of my friends so using her
i felt account is hacked so i may close mine anytime
i get the same feeling again nothing else
Edited by ardramn - 14 years ago

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