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Posted: 15 years ago
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'Ruko ruko bhaiya jee, main bhi aa raha hoon'
Conductor signalled driver to stop d bus..
Ek young sa banda andar chadha .. Uske chehre p alag si khushi aur excitement thi.. Woh jaldi jaldi andar chadha..
'Bhaiya, yahan koi baitha hai?'
'Nahin'
Woh uss seat par baith gaya..
Thodi der chup rehne k baad usne poocha 'Aapkaa naam kya hai'
Dusrey insaan ne apna naam Vinay bataya.. Phir usne poocha k appka naam kya hai?
'Manav' , jawaab aaya..
Dheere dheere dono ne baat shru ki.. Phir..
Vinay- Aap kisi dost k paas jaa rahe ho?
Manav- yehi samajh lo, main kisi ko dhoondhne jaa raha hoon..
Vinay- kisey?
Manav- nahin pata!
Vinay- matlab?
Manav- mujhe uska naam nahi pata..
Vinay- aap mazak kar rahe ho? Hai naa?
Manav- nahi.. Main sach kah raha hoon..
Vinay- main samjha nahin..
Manav- pichhli baar main Shimla aaya tha kisi kaam se.. aur phir main bas yehi ka hokar rah gaya hoon..
Vinay- aap CID se ho?
Manav- nahin.. Kyun?
Vinay- toh yaar, ye paheliyan mat bhujhao.. Seedhi baat, no bakwaas..
Manav- Asal mein pichhli baar main jab shimla aaya tha toh main raaste se guzar raha tha.. Tabhi kuch log ek ladki ko chher rahe the.. Maine uss ladki ko un logo se bachaya..
Vinay- typical filmy style..
Manav- not exactly.. Muje bhi kaafi chhotein aayin..
Vinay- phir?
Manav- Usne mujhe thank you kaha aur maine uski ore dekha toh..
Vinay- toh ??
Manav- bass dekhta hi reh gaya.. Chehre p ek masumiyat, aankho mein bholapan aur main apne saare dard bhool gaya..
Vinay- achha, phir kya hua?
Manav- usne dekha k mujhe kaafi chhot lagi hai aur phir woh mujhe apne ghar le gayi...
Vinay- phir?? pehli milakat mein hi ghar.. Hmm
Manav- phir usne meri dressing ki.. Woh akele hi rehti thi apni ek chhoti behen k saath.. Usne mera naam poocha..
*aapka naam kya hai? Aap kahan se ho? Aapko kabhi shimla mein nahin dekha?*
Ek saath itne sawaal sunn kar main nervous ho gaya aur maine kaha ki MERA NAAM MUMBAI HAI AUR MANAV KA REHNE WALA HOON..
*Yeh sunn kar woh zor se hasi*
Vinay- hmm.. Hasi to phasi..
Manav- phir maine uske saath lunch kiya.. Usne mujhe rukne ko kaha... Lekin mujhe ussi din nikalna tha.. Naa chahte hue bhi mujhe jaana pada.. Par jaane se pehle usney mujhe apni aik anguthi di aur thanks bola... Maine usse kaha k main wapas aaunga..
Toh bass main ussi se milne jaa raha hoon 1 mahine baad.. Aur mujhe to uska naam bhi nahin pata..
Vinay- hmm.. All d best.. Shimla aane hi wala hai..

After reaching shimla
Manav- chalo bhai, aapse milkar khushi hui
Vinay- mujhe bhi nd all d best..
Manav- shukriya.. Alvida

Manav daurta hua Uske ghar pahuncha.. Wahan usne dekha ki kaafi bheer hai.. Woh andar gaya.. Usne dekha k ek chhoti ladki kisi tasveer k saamne ro rahi hai aur wahan kisi ki laash padi hai... usne jabb laash dekhi toh woh hakka bakka rah gaya.. Woh wahi ladki thi aur shayad woh bachhi uski chhoti behen thi...
Manav uss bachhi k paas pahuncha.. Uss bachhi ne uski taraf dekha..
'aa manav ho?'
Haan , manav bola.. Tumhe kaise pata..
'Didi ka accident ho gaya, marne se pehle unhone bataya ki Aap aaoge aur unhone kaha k main aapko request karu k aap mujhe kisi anathalaya mein bhej do'
Manav khud ko sambhalte hue- anathalaya nahin , tum mere saath rahogi.. Magar tumhari didi ka naam kya tha?
'ARCHANA' Jawab aaya..
Manav ne khud ko sambhalne ki koshish ki phir bhi gham k aansoo uski aankho se beh padey..

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Posted: 15 years ago
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beautiful but sad ..... wow u rite well Ali 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nyc 1
bt very tragic story

Ek saath itne sawaal sunn kar main nervous ho gaya aur maine kaha ki MERA NAAM MUMBAI HAI AUR MANAV KA REHNE WALA HOON..

its 2 funny
tum bhi yehi ans dete rite😆😆😆

nyc concpet very touching😃😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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😭😭 that's a lovely but a very tragic story ....
Why Ali , why so tragic ...?????
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow Ali..awesome piece of writing.........
But tragic😭.....
do continue...
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Posted: 15 years ago
#6

One common question frm u all is WHY TRAGIC?
An swer is that tragic stories r more touching nd all stories dont have happy ending.. So just fr a change, i decided a tragic story..

In fact, i didnt write it in better way.. I just wrote it in casual way lol..

But still thanks all fr liking it..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#7
write more u write well 😃

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