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Posted: 14 years ago
arey sami....kab continue karoge yaar? we are waiting eagerly....
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writing re....kute biliyaan peecha nahi chod rahe the but writing this very momment pe so......
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Originally posted by: sami01

thnaks kezia...kahaan rehti ho tum re.....aur abhi to anmol aur bhi beemar hoga......tum ko sach mein pasand aayi na update....ya aise laga ke sami di bhi rajan ki tarha romance mein kanjoos ho gayi hai😆



Of course!! I L-O-V-E-D the update..Yeh bhi koi poochne wali baath hain? Lolzzzzz....😆

Arey nahiiiiiiii..Don't make Anmol more sick now

Bechara mera babyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy 😭
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The conclusion

Ragini was not herself in the car ride. So anxious she was to reach the hospital that she forgot everything else. In Back of her mind she knew kids and alekh will be fine ..There were many adults in the house gudi and guni are responsible enough.

Ragini he will be fine..

Despite his initial disappointment with her, Inderjit knew she was under stress and needed some reassurance.

Haan papji he will be fine bhagwan aisa nahi karenge mere saath...he has to fine hai na papji..she turned to him.

Ragini beta bhagwaan hain na,he sent him to us when we needed him, so we still need him he is not going anywhere.

Ragini leaned back in the car and stared at city lights through blurry windows and falling rain was making it hard to see anything .She stared for few seconds and transferred into another time..

She remembered the first 2 months after Ranvir had died.. How despite his coldness he had arranged everything, taken care of everything in Missouri itself .Somehow even then her heart had let him do what was best for her as if her soul knew.

even then she had felt her voice brought a calm over her . She had felt safe in leaving everything to him, she could close her eyes and curl up in her grief and knew he will take care of everything..Now that security was threatened;she shivered unconsciously.

Honking of traffic horn startled her; kya hua papaji

Wo beta kuch nahi yeh riksha fasi hui hai beech sadak mein Hmm she started thinking again; and this time got transported to another car ride, similar to this one, but on winding road from Mussoorie; two strangers bonded in a strange bond .It was pitch dark and they had already done all antim rasams of Ranvir as per his wishes, his ashes were immersed in ganga at rishikesh as it was so close to masourie and ranvir had wanted this way. Seemed like the chapter had closed for her and this stranger whom she married for sake of everyone else was now her destiny too.

Earlier that day they had a simple ceremony at mandir, her parents did kanyadaan and inderjit gave his blessings. Inder and vasu had done inquires about anmol and were as satisfied as they could be .Vasu had created a huge scene with Anmol and then had gone for a confidential talk with him, what happened there she couldn't say but with Anmol having papers from Ranvir, he had upper hand in the dealings ,she could guess it from brooding and cruel expressions of vasu that deal had been done but she still was under Anmol's mercy, though the thought did not even scare her even back then. He had given up everything, his heritage home was being converted into a hotel and rest of Hotel Empire was to be run from Agra from now on. His second cousin who lived in America and was his business partner was going to look after business for at least sometime, so Anmol could understand Rajvansh empire. Though theirs was good business but he was a tycoon...still he married her , thought always lingered in her mind. So she was leaving Ranvir, his memories while he was leaving everything, his identity so understandably he seemed quiet brooding yet very attentive. His eyes on road he was concentrating hard on this hairpin turn driving slowly as if protecting her with his every gesture;she closed her eyes and sighed.how he had become pillar of strength for her from day of Ranvir's death;and she was realizing it now when she and her family had driven him to this mess A sob escaped her.eyes became unfocused again and she was back in time one more time on same trip that changed her life forever.

Her heart had felt sudden warmth when his fingers had gently put sindoor on her forehead earlier, his touch impersonal and did not linger for a second more than necessary.

Her parents and in laws had left immediately after ceremony along with little girls, leaving the newly weds alone for some time, though both had insisted at inappropriateness of the arrangement, vasu had cut her by saying..

Ab shadi to kar li tumne,mere bete ki chita to thandi hone nahi di ,ab is natak ki kya zaroorat hai jo keh rahe hain karo.

They had to stay at Anmol's hotel in dehradoon but the distance of 38 kms was like eternity in poor driving conditions. It was expected of them to stay in same room and anmol had requested not to do any special arrangements. He had told them his close friend had recently passed on so he was mourning still. She was bone tired when they reached there, there was fire in fire pace and atmosphere was almost magical .She remembered how anmol had acted as a gentleman and dismissed porter to give them privacy .He had then told her that he wanted to check on some hotel work and left her so she could freshen up. She was so worried about their sleeping arrangements that she had dozed off on the sofa in front of fire.

Anmol was feeling as if there was a huge weight on his chest and he was gasping for breath, he could hear commotion around him and some one shouting Dr he is slipping;

He found himself in a room with cozy fireplace and there was a woman sleeping on the sofa, golden light from fire was making her look like a mystical goddess,there was a tear slipping down from her eye..his finger went ahead to wipe it off suddenly he was hit by a force so powerful that he felt he was constricted again ..

Commotion around him making more noises;as if some one was saying yes it started again..he slipped into deep slumber.

Ragini woke up with a start; what was it had she felt a finger brush her tears earlier.she looked around papaji was still driving..bus 10 min aur he said to her..She nodded..And started thinking again.

She remembered how she had slept on sofa.and how she had woken up when Anmol was covering her with blanket ,he had his eyes cast downwards and said wo..

Sardi bahut hai their eyes had locked together with intensity that she could even feel now.after few awkward seconds she had nodded and went to bedroom. He told her then

Ragini please don't ever think I will cross my maryada with you..

She looked up startled.

We will have a relation of respect, understanding and mutual goal of making life better for Ranvir's family..

She nodded as she couldn't trust herself to speak..

Ragini aage kya hoga main nahi janta;bus itna jaan lijiye;.ke sirf jiunga to Ranvir ke wade ko nibhane ke liye.I know how hard it is for you, being married to me ,a stranger but I wont ask for any rights Ragini.Wo haq mere nahi '.aap mat sochiye ke main maangoonga aapse'

God has chosen this path for us let him decide and just live.

Haan bus sans lete jao..zindagi khud hi aage badhegi..

Even after 6 years she could feel those unshed tears in his voice.

Suddenly she felt so small, how he had done so many small things for her.

Please now come sleep in the bedroom, I will sleep on the sofa..

Nahi koi baat nahi main wo....

Please Ragini you need rest we have early morning flight to Agra .Please..

The way he said please..ufff....She got up and got caught in the blanket and lost her balance, his hand came to support her and in process she was engulfed in those powerful arms, even today she could recall the feeling of intense awareness that had gone though her at that time her eyes had roamed shamelessly on his dangerously handsome face, her soul recognizing her destiny and She had no strength to break the contact , He had looked equally affected and surprised but was first to recover; she recalled unhappily. Anmol had stabilized her and said Ok now..

Way he said in such sweet casual way she was so grateful to him even today that he never ever took advantage of that fact.

That night resentment started to build up inside her at her own lack of control, she was ashamed of herself and she had blamed him in her mind in order to build up her defense. She had become almost rude, indifferent and she had created a wall between two of them. Which had grown so big in past 6 years;that both of them had become weary ..It had only started to crumble after Tammy's 7th birthday celebrations..but now.life was a mess and he was fighting for his life .just because of her stupidities, insecurities..

Now she knew how he felt ..a sigh escaped her again and she shivered.

Why now ;she had to know this ..

When she had taken that step towards him

Ragini beta..utho hospital aagaya.

Inder had just ran to the main door ,he did not linger to wait for her and she could tell car was not properly parked.she ran after him using her hand to shield her eyes from falling rain.

Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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The journey'''conclusion.........

They reached hospital ER department and were told Anmol was in ICU with acute bacterial pneumonia, he was on ventilator and they were trying their best. Ragini went to look from window'

She saw the very pillar of her strength surrounded with machines and tubes and stood by a wall ,her legs unable to carry her weight'.

Everything else forgotten she ran to the mandir in hospital..

Bhagwaan I wont let my pride come in between, I will do what is best for him,for once I will think about him first'.

Bache aur ghar is chinta mein bhool gayi ke wo insaan hai''

Bhagwaan nahi''..phir bhi bheja to aap ne hi than a..

Sahara bana ke'..please don't let me down'..

Suddenly she felt a hand on her shoulder'..he is fine out of danger, he has been shifted to a private room Ragini and he has woken up, asking for you'..

Ragini ran'..and then reached the door and just broke crying in the door'..he turned his head'.and smiled'.wo' ro mat Ragini tumhare aansoo nahi dekh sakta main'.

She ran forward half smiling half sobbing and hugged him, crushing him almost'..

A soft smile played on his face, she touched his forehead sweetly and said WELCOME BACK'

Never do this to me again..

Ahmmmm beta use saans to lene do'.

Wo maa '..

Sharmaji and kaushalya were smiling and said Ragini beta bhagwaan ne sun li tumhari'..

Ab anmol ji theek hain ghar jao aur kum se kum kapde to badal lo'

3 din se mandir aur ICU ke ilava kya kiya tumne'

Anmol smiled softly and said Ragini please jao

Kids must be missing you too'..and wondered I was unconscious for 3 days'..

The Recovery phase of Anmol went very smoothly as he was normally a strong person. Ragini couldn't come as much because of children, but she tried to bring food once in while, though he couldn't eat it.

There were lots of questions in their minds'.

Does he really love me'
Has she forgiven me''

Finally it was day he could go home. He was hoping Ragini would come too but he curbed his disappointment when Mr. Rajvansh walked in and said ..

Beta ghar chalein'..

Ji'

Ragini had gotten the room ready for him, He should sleep on the bed, while I can take the sofa she mused'.

He walked in and saw his beautiful wife arranging his favorite daffodils in the vase'the butter cream color was his favorite and it constricted his heart..

Ragini was avoiding looking at him

He cast his eyes downwards and said''its nice to be home ..

Sach mein she blurred before she could stop herself

His forehead creased and he ignored the irritation'.that crossed his mind..

WO bed pe'.

No ragini I will be taking the sofa as usual'.

He looked at her intently and held her gaze for few seconds and softly said'Nothing has changed

She looked down , expression of hurt covering her face '.

Life settled this way for both of them

Sofa for him'.

Bed for her..

Occasionally Tammy demanded to sleep between 2 of them then it was ''bed for both and'.both tried to avoid each other's eyes'.

They did not speak directly, tried to talk though family members..

Festival season came and went'.Winter brought foggy mornings and short dark cold nights'.

It was February now'.

The whole family could feel the tension between Anmol and Ragini'

Vasu was on her own mission to bring Pratham back from USA, but he had to study for one more year, selfish woman inside her admitted that Anmol was only one who could keep things going'.

One fine day Anmol had to go to his ancestral haveli in Mussoorie .

Ragini I need to go for atleast 4 days..

I will fly to dehradoon and then go by car'.

Ji'..

And she started packing things for him and smiled to herself''..

HE was supposed to leave at 5 Am in moring ,she woke him up at 4 ,she was fully dressed ,his eyes showed surprise but he masked it by looking down''.

He was surprised when Mr. rajvansh came with a twinkle in his eye'..

Beta both of you need break'.so enjoy and show her your heritage''

Mr. Rajvansh bache''Ragini you don't need to go'

But I want to'came a firm reply, kids know and they are very excited so '..

Whole flight he kept looking at her with strange expressions'

She seemed preoccupied and nervous'.

They took car right away from Dehradoon

With driver in front they could not talk what was occupying their minds'..

He pointed out some of land marks on the way and occasionally driver would give his thoughts, so overall it was pleasant drive, but both of them were emotionally drained by the time they reached Mussoorie at night.

Haveli looked grand and they entered from the private side. Manager explaining to her about residential area ''.

They were shown into master suite with its two grand bedrooms with attached baths'.and a private sitting area overlooking valley.

They ate in the sitting area and strangely fire was burning still''..like it was those 6 years ago when they started their journey into unknown''.she smiled softly and thought..

I have nothing to loose, He will never take the first step'.He needs to know I will support whatever decision he takes'

He needs to know he matters''.most '

He deserves this'..

All of us robbed him of his chance at happiness

I will give him the chance to live for himself'.

Anmol got out of shower when he caught Ragini smiling dreamly , he went to her and snapped his fingers twice'

Hey where are you..

Oh she blushed ''.na wo'

Ok..Come let's eat'..he laughed softly covering his nervousness, Ragini was in strange mood and it was frighetning him and also building a hope inside him ..

Could he dare to dream and hope?

After meal,which was pleasantly relaxing as he had told her stries of his childhood, memories of this home ,his parents'his mother'she seemed interested enough'..and it was like a dam had burst and his memories flooded '..and poured , Ragini kept watching flickering emotions on his face,eyes bright,intent she just graabed what he was offering.

Suddenly he stopped..I am sorry , I got carried away'.you must be bored and it is way passed midnight'just go to bed '

And he got up hurriedly'..

Anmol'.

Did he hear right'''Anmol Anmol Anmol a echo went through his mind'''his soul''.

He turned ,his eyes sleep weary'.a question in the eyes''

Thank you ..

For what ?

For telling me all this ,he swallowed tears'and said anytime'..my pleasure'.

Good night'

Good night'..

He tossed and turned in the bed..While across the room he could hear her pacing in her bed room'

He knew she was confused, but it was high time she came on her own'.

Sun rose across the mountains..he was kept busy and he arranged for some sightseeing for her

She went out for a stroll then decided to look at his house,the private side of haveli had a attic where she found his old photographs and she explored them whole day'..every page of those scap books and albums told story of a lonely boy who lost his mom at age of 6 and then lost his brother sister dad and grandparents in single car accident at 18''.

Her heart cried for that boy who had grown up too fast and then his own life was saved by some one and '''''''''''''''.

please see on this link continuation as whole thing posting giving me error😃 too lamba na...anmol ki baat ho kalam nahi rukti kya karoon....



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Edited by sami01 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
wah sami....dil khush ho gaya.....so beautiful.....so touching....BRILLIANT!

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Posted: 14 years ago
Sam mail this to our stupid CT's they will know how to write fantastic emotional Scenes👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️⭐️
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Posted: 14 years ago
sami di
its so wonderful that I cant even give my not-so-cool😎 & not-so-funny😆 comment.
what we actually want to see you have actually wrote that.I am 1000000% confident something like this must had happen in their first night.👍🏼
u r amazing di.just loved it.
the way you blend past & present from Angini's POV its just outstanding👏.
will come after 2 hrs just to read ur next part & cant wait to know what happened when ragini reached hospital...
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Posted: 14 years ago
anjana or sami di do one thing post this to rs blog..
I did it
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww thanks re..for this yaar mere do ghate kite bane batao..but neend nahi aaayegi mujhe jab tak mere do sitare manzil pe na pahunch jayein.......please bear with me,

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