Tumhara Anmol -My first ff arranged properly. - Page 19

aww di just dont take so much pressure.

na re neend na mujh ko aaye...
dil mera ghabraye..
chup ke chupke koi aake soya pyaar jagaye.....
dekhte hain kab post karoongi,na am not pushing but i know will be crazy busy for next 2 days......so wanted to do it today....

Sam, loved this part too.👏👍🏼
Wish to know what happens next.🤔
Indu and Ragini's reaction we can expect as Ragini understands Anmol better these days, even cares for him.😳 But I don't want to even read any collar holding scenes. I find it too insulting for Anmol's character.😭

wow sami awesome [art loved the way u have described everything cont soon

Wow sammy conclusion part1 is fantastic

Such a gentle maqn tha Anmol Tabbhi when he got married

Wow masoorie reminds me of Kaajjal and Dev whenre they met

Ragini is one lucky perswon that he has been a stranger who was such a gentleman who kept his seema alwaqys even in the worst circumstances

This part truly shows how much he cared being a stranger and a gentleman

She remembered how she had slept on sofa….and how she had woken up when Anmol was covering her with blanket ,he had his eyes cast downwards and said wo..

Sardi bahut hai their eyes had locked together with intensity that she could even feel now….after few awkward seconds she had nodded and went to bedroom. He told her then

Ragini please don't ever think I will cross my maryada with you..

👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

Only anmol can do this for Ragini and she needs to know that he is the most precious man she has been gifted !!!

sami darling
*hugs*. .brilliant part . .

Sami diiiiiiiiii Mindblowing di. Superbbb. Ihad always wanted to know how there marriage took place. The part i just loved was where ragini is thinkin to herself in the car ' how their marriage took place and how he was so considerated towards herm not only that i just loved everything....😍.

Dii from where do you get such ideas,😳 , becoz if i sit and think i can remember olny your FFs and not a single new idea crosses me. You should be in the gunnis book for being so creative and sooooo expressive.. You are truly Fantasticcccccc👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

continued from previous post.........here is link....https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/sapna-babul-ka-bidaai/1477767/tumhara-anmol-my-first-ff-arranged-properly?pn=23

She left her to think ''.and reflect how self centred she had been all these years'..

By evening she had a huge migrane'..she knew she won't be able to swallow any thing. she drank some tea and decided ot lie down in dark bedroom.

Anmol came home and worried servant told him about ragini'.

He went to her bedroom ,softly knocked on the door'thinking that if she is asleep she wont resond and then he would go back'.

Aajao came a muffled response'.

It took him a while to get accustomed to dark room ,then he saw her outline on bed..

Kya hua Ragini'.

Sar dard hai'.

Oh

Aao baitho mere paas'

Hmm

He sat beside the bed and very softly said kuch chahiye la doon'

She almost broke down in grief'.

Na

sar daba doon'

There was no response..

He started to massage her forehead'''..feels better

Thoda sa..

Change kar lo na aap she said'

Ok I will go freshen up and get balm ok..

Hmm

He came back in 5 minutes and started to massage the balm '..pain started to wear off and Ragini was feeling calm and relaxed.

She smiled and asked kahaan se seekha'

Dadi used to suffer from them'and mostly I used to be the reason he chuckled'.

Suddenly a lump formed in his throat and he turned to side hiding sudden tears of nostalgia'.

She held is hand and then got half up to move his face towards her'

U miss her''haan

Har pal Ragini har saans mein..

But with you and kids I learnt to laugh again '.here in haveli I am missing more..

Ya she yawned'I understand

so jao tum''he said

Kaam aap ne kiya aur thak main gayi''

Yahaan mere paas baitho na 'baatein karo'.she said..

Kya bataoon '

Kuch bhi bus apki aawaaz sunti hoon to lagta hai ke bansuri baj uthi kahin'

Suddenly she realized what she had just said.. and then smiled

His heart skipped a beat'

Ragini wo'..jaane kahaan kho jate hain shabd jab tum se kuch kehna chahta hoon'

Yahin ruk jaiye aap mere paas she moved over to other side of the bed..

He nodded and brought his own blanket and they started talking

And slept'..

In morning the servant came to bring some tea'..

Ragini suddenly felt very shy ..

Anmol wanted full confession'he knew she was trying but he wanted to make sure she wanted him, not accepting him out of duty or guilt.

Ragini he said I will be busy today , we need to go tomorrow early morning ,kids must be missing us na..he said'

Jhoot kyun bolte ho'.she said you are missing them she smiled'half turning to see him getting ready'.

He looked at her through mirror holding her gaze with twinke in the eye'.

Pass'.

Aap bhi na she laughed'

HE sighed deeply and said Ragini you look so good when you smile'..please keep smiling always'.

I will finish the work ,then we will walk to bazaar to buy presents ''

Ok

Whole day pass din nice companionship'relationship was taking one small step at time but both were still insecure and unsure of the feelings of other''.

At night they settled in covered glass balcony to enjoy the quite time'..

Chupa lo yun dil mein pyaar mera..

Ke jaise mandir mein lau diye ki'.

Ragini turn on the Radio '..

Ok'

Both looked at each other ,atmosphere became thick''

Yeh sach hai jeena tha paap tum bin'

Yeh paap maine kiya hai ab tak'.

Ragini's eyes were pleading to him to understand her''..both kept looking at one another'

Magar hai man mein chavi tumhaari'.

Magar hai man mein chavi tumhari..

Ke jaise mandir mein lau diye ki'

A tear slipped from her eye'..

She got up and sat on floor beside hi s chair , both hands holding his hands strongly''

Phir aag birha ki mat lagaana..

Ke jal ke main raakh ho chuki hoon'..

She felt pressure of reassurance from his hands and she looked up '..

Yeh raakh maathe pe maine rakh li''

He seem to be singing this line again'.

Yeh raakh maathe pe maine rakh li

Ke jaise mandir mein lao diye ki'.

Chupa lo yun dil mein pyaar mera'.

The song finished and it ended the magic with it''..

Suddenly anmol couldn't bear it any more''.

He just pushed himself to stand up and went to his bedroom'

He wanted to hold her,reassure her,yet he wanted ot hear her confession first'.he was being greedy '

He wanted her soul and full surrender'''..

He lied down and closed his eyes'

Suddenly he heard a click'.

Ragini

Anmol ''

You needed something '

Yes'..

What '

You

Aap anmol aap''milega jo mangungi ,,,she asked intent suddenly reaching the bed and holding his arm'.

But I am yours already Ragini we are married'.

Kya khaak shaadi hai '''jisne aap ko dukh ke ilava kuch diya hi nahi she sobbed'.

He sat up and made her lift her head'..

Ragini look at me''

You gave me purpose in life , you gave me Tammy ,khushi ,parents in fact two fathers'.alekh bhaiya guni''..how can you say I got nothing in return..

I got my life you lost love of your life'

No'came a firm reply..

He was my first love''he is part of me'but you are my destiny ''..only you..

What I feel for you''.i have never felt this way before'..

He kept gazing at her,his eyes intent and never leaving her face'''.

Ragini please don't give me hopes'..dont give me dreams''what if they shatter'.and I am dreaming'.

No anmol no you are not dreaming'..it is not a illusion'..please..

He got up and pulled her up and hugged her,she hugged him back suddenly she pulled him more towards himself'as if she wanted to end all distance between them''.

He broke the hug and looked at her,she was not able to meet his gaze'

Say it..he said softly'.

I love you

Ragini.a sob escaped from him

I love you Ragini'.

And pulled her towards him again'.

After some time he held her face in his hands and kissed her forehead'her eyes'''

Welcome home sweatheart''..and she melted in his arms'.

Outside '''.moon was shining extra bright ''and breeze was extra fragnant and'

2 hearts became'one'finally Ragini found her anmol'''..

Yeh hariyaali aur yeh raasta'

In rahon pet era mera jeevan bhar ka wasta'.

Yeh hariyaali aur yeh raasta'

They got super busy when they were back to agra'..in fact anmol slept in his study..on chair itself'.while ragini dozed off in kids room''..

Next day anmol had twinke is his eye''..kyun biwi ji'subha kamre mein nahi thee..

Hato aap bhi na'..

She laughed'

In evening anmol returned from work and found out his biwi was enjoying''..a walk in garden..

He wen t there and found her on her fav bench''..she was smiling softly and her skin was glowing,she turned when she herad him and smiled''.and held her hand'..he took her hand and sat beside her looking at her'.while one finger caressing her face slowly''.

Butterflies''..fluttered in her stomach and a melody''..played outside'..

Finally'.

2 souls were staring at mystical moon in garden, air was crisp but fresh and a song was playing on radio...

raat bani dulhan bheegee hui palkein ..

bheenee bheenee khushboo ke sagar chalkein..

aise mein naino se naina ho chaar..

naina ho chaar..

rahi matwale...

tu ched ek baar..

dil ka sitaar

jaane kab chori chori aayi hai bahaar..

they came inside and Anmol got shock of his life'..

his dear sofa was no where in sight'..

he turned ;both hands on his waist asked in mocked anger''..

where is my janam janam ka saathi'

she laughed'..uski taraki ho gayi..

wo kaise''

mummy ji ke kamre mein shift kar diya'

kyun'

papaji would need na.mummyji is angry with him she burst out laughing''.he laughed too'

and then he took his blanket and started to leave'

a pillow hit from behind'.

Yeh kya hai'

She said '

Yahan rukne ka kya loge'.

Nahi hum yun na maanege..came a lyrical reply'.

To kaise tum ko samjhaun' she smiled

Dikha do dil hame apna'

Kahaan se dil ko hum layein'.she sang back...he suddenly looked with question''

And her reply was'

Ke de rakha hai wo tumko dikha sakte hain kaise hum'.

And ran into his outstretched arms''

Finally ''..sun smiled on Anmol too'''..

PS. last part dedicated to my friends who ..participated in bed lao back bachao andolan😆😉

sami awesome just kept grinning towards the end its so cute loved it but i want to read more

awsome di..............

they came inside and Anmol got shock of his life'..

his dear sofa was no where in sight'..

he turned ;both hands on his waist asked in mocked anger''..

where is my janam janam ka saathi'

she laughed'..uski taraki ho gayi..

wo kaise''

mummy ji ke kamre mein shift kar diya'

kyun'

papaji would need na.mummyji is angry with him she burst out laughing''.he laughed too'

and then he took his blanket and started ot leave'

a pillow hit from behind'.

Yeh kya hai'

She said '

Yahan rukne ka kya loge'.

Nahi hum yun na maanege..came a lyrical reply'.

To kaise tum ko samjhaun'

Dikha do dil hame apna'

Kahaan se dil ko hum layein'.he suddenly looked with question''

And her reply was'

Ke de rakha hai wo tumko dikha sakte hain kaise hum'.

And ran into his outstretched arms''

Finally ''..sun smiled on Anmol too'''..