A SCENE WANTD-GEET POUR OUT HER FEELINGS TO MAAN..

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Ok guys...have been trying to write this scene from last night for at least two three times..but kept deleted..but now finally i am going to pour it out...well this is a scene i thought on afeter the shaadi function...provided tithat within the hsadi...still there are few more maanet moments..like a cute si bangra dance or romantic one..then wehn the ceremony is on they give each other the ehsaas ki stare at each other...so hope still today at which the scene of shaadi is to continue will be shown..😃

my scene comes after the precap scene..where that aunty is asking geet are u alright ..u came here for ur family..to which geet is in chillness and numbness..se cant get sleep...she tosses and turns over...gets the striking thoughts rushing thru her mind of her brother screaming at her..runnning behind her..her mother and father..she sits up sweating and shivering..she finally decides to get some fresh air..some freedom of her mind ..she goes and drinks some water..walks into the dark but half glowing moon lit veranda..and stands onto a pillar looking into the full sky of stars..tears again gushing her cheeks...

there at the opposite was another shadow ..pacing up and down with no sleep...maan also was in complete disturbance thinking on geet..his feelings..her reaction and going back..the present state of being here..why she had she taken so much risk to come to place her she was ruined and going to be destroyed...he was soo lost but then a soft sobbing made him stirred up and look at the other side ..where geet was standing..he satred in disbelief whther that was his geet standing ther with the most angelic glow on her beautiful favce with the light of the moob pouring onto her eyes..showing her mesmerization so immensly..he pinched his thoughts ..no was that geet or was he agiaain dreaming of her..but then he relized geet was there in pain and sorrow..tears rolling down her soft rosy cheeks..he never ever was able to take it..see her in distress..pain or sorrow..never was able to bear her in this state..he wrenched his fist as he couldnt take it..he slowly closed in her from the back ...trying not to scare her..then put his hand gently on her shoulder...geet...but she at one jolt turned in fear.thinkng someone had to come to catch her..facing maan..about to scream her lungs..maan knwing her very well..that she was scared of lonliness..darkness..and also here...suddenly closed her mouth with his strong hand and made her hushed..sayng..main hooon..chup raho..geet lost in maan;s voice and eyes..she just was soo stunned..thinking..kyun..kyun hamesha aap mere paas hothe hai..jab bhi mein darthi hoon..kuch bhi mushkil mein hoon..tho aap waha hothe hai mujhe sambaalne ke liye..man also equally lost in her ocean filled eyes..wiped her tears and asked her..took few strands of her left open hair falling on her forhead..to the back of her ears...wat happned..tum itni raath hui yaha kya kar rahi hoo..she was in shiver and fear..she said..woh main..mujhe neend nahi aayi..he slowly moved his hand from her mouth..brushing her sweet lips..they bought caught in each other..suddenly as heaven wnted..a strong thundering voice roared ..whihc made geet to jjump and melt into maan;s half open shirt chest and covered her face into his bare body...she tugged onto him saying..mujhe chodke math jaana aap..maan was soo shocked but at the same time soo concerned and protective..this time reciprocated the hug with no hestiation..held her back tightly..crushing her onto him..feeling her hair with his fingers..she was all scared and in quiverness..he assured her and rubbed her back slowly and kept saying geet..kuch nahi hai..tumhe darne ki koi zaroorat hai...mein hoon na tumhare paas..geet all the time saying aap kahi math jaana..maan all soo happy in mind but still mkaing her feel strong and calm down..he slowly cupped her face and made her look him into his eyes...he said geet..jab mein tumhare saath hoon..koi bhi tumhare paas nahi aayenge..kuch nahi karnege..samje tum..geet all calmed but not able to take her eyes from his face.the messiah of her life..her destiny bought true love..her life and heart was only wanting him..to be with him..tilting her head just wanting to keep her eyes on him..he slowly let her stand alone..leaving her ..not at all wanting to seperate from her..but had to...he spoke out...geet bahut raath hogaye..tum jaake aaram karna chahiye..subah se tum baag daud kar rahi hai..todi der ke liye sau jaao...geet not listening..but just staring at him..he was about to leave..but geet with no control this time over her emotions...was in another world..caught onto his arm..and whispered ..aap math jaayiye..mujhe akel mahath chodke jaayie..maan all again once more shocked and stuuneed..wat is with geet..why is she reactin like this..geet was lost..she was in fear at the same time..thinking abt maan..she could nt bear to see him go..she softly opened her heart..app woh insaan jho mere zindagi mein aisie aaye jab mein sabse mushkil daur se guzar jaa rahi thi..aapne mujhe aapne app ko smabaal ne ki himmat aur takkat diye..har mod pe mujhe sahaara diya...rulna se rok diye...besathi se bachayae..hasana sikya phir se..pyar karne ko..meri jeevan aaj hai tho aap ki bathlouth pe...aap nahi tho mein bhi nahi hothi aaj..maan was not bale to hear all the lines clerly but was knwing she was speaking on him and her..he asked her..wat are u saying geet..darro math..mein hoon..koi bhi tumhe choo nahi payenge..mein usko jaan se maar dalenge..tum mere liye bahut ahemiyat rakhthe ho...geet listened with complete love..care...concern..passion..again saying this time onto him..which clearly maan heard..aapke bina ab mujhe...stopped..maan asked this time..wantting to knw..kyun geet ..kyun tum mere liye itni dhoor tak aayi jahan pe sirf katra hai...kyun mere liye aapni jaan ke uppar kel rahi ho..geet couldnt control how maan was shaking her ...trying to open her up...crushing her btwn his hold..she closed her eyeys..and bursted ..kyun ki mere jaan aap mein hai...aapke bina mein jee nahi payenge......kaise aapko ko ke mein zinda reh paungi...mahiiiiiiiiiiiii
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an uncontrollable maan with mixed emotions flowing on his face...he was not able to hear the words that came like honey from geet;s mouth now...wat did she say..was he dreaming..or was this another trick of hers to play around...geet was shoked this time..she knew she had spoken something unexpectedly to maan..she was not able to think..she tried to cover her lines again..maan asked her kya kaha tumnhe geet..she said woh mein..meri matlab..😆but she was not geeting any other lines to defend her feelings just poured out onto her loved man..maan with complete authority this time pinned her both arms onto the pillar sofly but yet strong enough to not make her run from him..😉the light from the full moon was half on maan and almost on geet;s ever so angelic and gorgeous face..her open hair brushing on her cheeks..he was lost into her..he was soooooooooo happy..he couldnt believe wat she said..but this time he wanted her to say it properly..he forced her to speak..geet was weak and knew she was not going to be left..she looked onto those dark hot and addictive eyes of maan..his lips movin in gesture to open her feelings..his voice husky and strong..his breath of love and heat on her😊..she was not able to bear it..she wanted to be ther forever and time to stop,,,she whispered..finally..haan..main aapko chaahthi hoon..aapni jaan se bhi zyada..aur dekh nahi payenge aapko koi bhi muskhkil mein aur kisi aur ke saath..aap mere khuda hai...aapp..she was not able to get the next words..as maan covered her lips yet again..and said..bas.geet..bas..yahi shabd kis pal se aur samye se sunna chahthe the..mehsoos karna chaahthe the..mein batha nahi saktha ki mein aaj duniya ka sabse khush nazeeb insaan hoon..geet..mein bhi tumse bahut zyada pyar karthi hoon...mera dil sirf aur sirf tere liye dhadktha hai ...mein tumpe hi hamesha martha hoon..aur kartha rahoonga...hamesha..alll silence only some cool light breeze flowing onto them and their closeness.😛.he felt the passion build up..the warm lips of hers open up...he looked onto those wet cozy lips..ready to be kissed..she closed her eyes..he closed in...all was in perfection...maahiiiiiiii😊😊😳

all into a clattering seperation..😕geet got the flash of truth in her mind all of sudden..and flicked her eyes open to see maan coming so close to her..breathing on her..about to be united..noooooo..this is not to be..i cant let this happen to us..to maan..no i cant spoil his life..she agian pushed him and gave a disasterous torn apart look at maan who was shuttered and at shock..she just fled from ther..not even turning around once to look at him..a complete satisfied yet so confusing maan looking from behind..seeing the woman of his life..his dreams just few moments back was in his arms..completely his...made him the happiest..now ran away...into darkness..making him broken..he couldnt get it..geet loved him was his realization..but yet something was there that made her always away from him..keeping a distance not wanted by both...he needed to knw that unexpected..the bold..unbearable naked truth which will decide the destiny of maaneet..their love..their trial of their relation!😳

So frends..did u like it..i know..i knw..its the most least expected scene to happen..but atleast to an extent if this happens in this upcoming situation it will be so satisfying to me and a wish fullflied..its just perfect..waise bhi ,maan knws geet does feel somewher for him bu she is not accpeting it.😊.so tell me guys if u liked it or not.ok..its just a scene ok..not a ff ..😛

By the way ..kal ki episode was just unstrikingly sooo beautiful..👏.loved each part..from wher maan held onto geet;s arm making her go back with him..but our geet all the ziddi and wanting to do this for him..then the sardaji frends and shadi invitation..too good..ab yeh mere mangetar hai..omg..he doesnt leave a chance to open his right on her anywhere..maan ur tooo good..too sweet..then the dressing of maaneet..uffff.it was like they are soo heaven send couple ..just perfectly blended for each other..right....pink kurta khameez with sooo stunning jewellery..maked drashti sooooo amazing..she is soo pretty in all costumes..hot gal..maan ..gurmeet as always hotttest and coolest at the same time..loved the room stare scene..lovely..expecting alot of dhaaga knot scenes in future..the chase and the button scene was toooooo romantic and hot.😃🤪..finally the icing was the lines form maan..jhoota hi..ho tho tum meri mangetar ..koi bhi mere mangetar ko aise dekhe 😳🤢..yeh mein kabhi dekh nahi sakhhe..and this kids are too sweet making them realize all the more they are meant for each other.and the lines of geet actually made me even more think on this shot of mine.she said in her mind..yeh har din ehsaas ko dhabana aur bhi mushkil hothe jaa rahi hai...maahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii😳


So all my crazy maaneetians...come and give ur ideas and comments..like it or not...i will wait to see ur reactions..😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow thats Lovely
Kaash aisa hota
Loved it sooooooooooooooooo much
If u can pls continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome post

i also want a scene like this

send this to cvs yaar

i m already imagining it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thanx all..abi..yaar patha nahi.cvs ka num or contact..anyways they are just awesome ..they have great ideas already..so i beleive in them...

well i told u its not ff so dont knw wat to continue..just thought and imagined.thats it...i thank all who liked it!

do keep reading !
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Posted: 15 years ago
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it was just too much sweet..I loved it yaar..:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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amazing part
i realky liked the way u described geets emotions and how maan is always their to take care of her.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Anjii as usual i love the way you write, its so involving, it brings the characters to life 😃 lovely post yaar Xxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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loved it dear . your is more better than mine .
sorry for late comment.
loved it
can we be buddies

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