Written Update - 14th september

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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hello folks,
I hadn't seen any updates for bitto since past few days so I just thought of doing a write-up for today's episode since I just saw it. Also, this is my first time writing so please bear with me.

NOTE: I DO NOT KNOW IF I AM SUPPOSED TO WRITE OR NOT SO IF I AM NOT THEN FEEL FREE TO SHOOT ME A MESSAGE REGARDING WHATEVER.

Ok so here it goes...

Recap: Tej meets with an accident and dies on the spot. Bitto breaks down in front of Tej's body and doesnt let go of the body. Everybody including Tej's mother are now against Bitto blaming her for Tej's death except Jai. Sugandha drags Bitto to a room. Bitto points the gun to her head to commit suicide.

Starts with Sugandha opening the room door to see bitto with the gun to her head. Sugandha runs in and takes the gun from bitto. Dadi bua enters and sugandha tells her to look at what bitto was about to do to put their family into trouble, if something happens to her than the village people will think they killed her. Bitto starts crying pleading to let her die 😭 as she has no reason to live without her husband. Dadi bua says whether you want to live or die, you decide after crossing the borders of the haveli. In this haveli you are only Tej's widow and you will step outside the haveli as Tej's widow. After that you can do whatever you want. Sugandha drags bitto out of the room where bitto's sindoor is wiped off and mangalsutra and bangles broken. All this while bitto is seating remembering her moments with Tej. Now bitto is in white sari with few women surrounding her. Dadi bua says widows dont have long hair and to cut it so that people will know that she is Tej's widow. A man was about to shave bitto's head when Jai comes to rescue and says "RUKO" Jai says that just because her husband died doesn't mean she has no right to live. Dadi bua and Jai have confrontation regarding bitto. At last dadi bua says bitto is not allowed to live in this house and blames bitto for Tej's death again. Jai goes behind dadi bua to stop and asks where will bitto go now, she is this house's DIL but she doesn't listen. Jai asks her mother to say something against dadi bua's decision but amma says she can't support bitto today and walks off.

Rudra is in his room with tears in his eyes when Sugandha comes in and says you are mourning for your brother's death after getting him killed yourself. To which Rudra replies I am not mourning but these tears are for happiness. Sugandha says don't be too happy only Tej has died and the property is still not in our hands. To which rudra says property will come in our hands only, jai is not going to stay here and Rudra is the only one left in this house. You don't worry, I have everything planned. Once we have buaji's trust, the property will itself come in our hands.
Cut to Bitto and Jai entering Bitto and Tej's house where bitto picks up Tej and her picture that jai gifted with Taj mahal in the background and remembers their moments together. BItto breaks down and says everybody is right about me. I am responsible for everything that happened with him and tells jai to leave her alone or else he will also fall into problems because of her. Jai says you are not responsible for Tej's death, life and death is in God's hands. Bitto says if that were true than why ma who considered me a daughter has turned her back on me. Everything is my fault.

Cut to thankur who comes in Tej's room and cries looking at Tej's picture. Amma comes there and says how can Thakur have tears in his eyes. Thakur says the one who died was my ladla beta. Amma says sorry but I just found out today that he was your son after he is dead. Until he was alive I just thought that Tej was your pawn, whom you used for your benefit. Thakur says what nonsense are you talking to which amma replies I m not talking nonsense just trying to make to realize that because of your "swarth" I lost my son and for this I will never be able to forgive you.

Cut to Rudra coming into dadi bua's room where he says don't know what mess our family has gotten into, one brother is gone and the other is supporting the same girl. Dadi bua says don't worry I will get jai on the straight path. Rudra says I also came here to talk about something else and says that tomorrow is the hearing date for the land case that's going on and I also have to go for asthi visarjan of Tej with you all. Dadi bua says you don't worry about it; I and your parents will go for the asthi visarjan. All the land stuff and court stuff you take care of it. Rudra gets happy and says please keep your hands on my head always acting all emotional.

Cut to Bitto and Jai…Bitto is still crying holding the picture and jai asks her to stop crying as Tej will not come back however much we cry and takes the picture from her. Jai goes to a side with the picture and talks to Tej saying "accha dhoka dia aapne bhai, you left me all alone. You should have at least thought about others and how will I be able to take care of all, where will I get the strength. Then he sees bitto still crying and wipes his own tears. Jai says goodbye to bitto and asks her to take care of herself and not to think of herself as alone as he is with her whether or not the family accepts you. I have lost a brother, now I don't want to lose a friend too. As soon as Jai is about to leave, a man arrives there whom jai recognizes talking to Thakur earlier. The man says wow jai, pehle bhai ko kandha dia aur ab bhabhi ko. There in the haveli everybody is depressed and instead of them you are more concerned about this girl. Good going jai…suddenly Bitto gives him a tight slap before he could say anything else 😲. END…

PRECAP: Bitto says to jai that her sorrow is going to stay with her forever, how long will he support her. Dadi bua asks for some papers to sign (looks like she is going to transfer property onto Rudra).

Pardon me for any mistakesšŸ˜Šā€¦Hope this helps as to where the story is now, for the people who haven't been able to watch it.

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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks for the detailed update, these writers have just lost it still cant belive why kill Tej just to have jai play a prominent ole in bitto
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks for the update you did a wonderful job for your first time.
I really don't understand the reason for killing tej šŸ˜• unless his death was staged because I just don't see the point. Bitto is probably going to be pregnant now and the family would say the child isn't tej and call bitto all kinds of names. 🤢
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Posted: 14 years ago
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aww thankyou for appreciating my writing...


I think the story is going to lead towards making jai the next lead and make him marry bitto to support her against the family...looks like the cvs will try going towards kindda Kumkum track. Its just a thought

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