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Posted: 14 years ago
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OMG shreya name one thing that u dont do amazingly?
ur an insanely phenomenal vm maker
ur an awesome sig maker
and today i found out that ur a freakin mindblowing writer too!!!
both prologues were so well written, and gosh lots going on - very intriguing!! cant wait to find out who the 'he's' and 'she's' are...! am guessing for some reason the guy who is betrayed in the second part is Maan.. and the Lady Dr who is unable to help the man in the 1st part is Geet.. only assuming.. lets see what u have in store for us..
Loved the way both parts were totally different too. The events seem completely disconnected and I cant actually even speculate as to what'll happen next..
absolutely Cannooottt wait for you to update, so I hope u do so, verryyy soon!!
Lots of Love,
Saz
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Edited by Chotii - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hellooo everyone!! sorry for the late update..i'll probably only be able to update on weekends actually, because of my uni workload 😔 sorry about that.
eeek i read your comments and i really really hope i dont let you guys down!!
so heres the next part..sorry its a little boring, more like a filler part just to get the story going..hope you guys like it though!!
aaand the characters from the 1st prologue should be clear after reading this part 😃
and please leave comments!!






Chapter 1
January 5, 2010


Geet dragged her three enormous bags out of the back seat of the taxi. "Thanks, Bhaiyya," she said, handing the money to the driver. She turned around to look at the mansion. Her lips formed a small smile as she immersed herself in all those sweet memories, back when they were all here together. Her thoughts were disturbed by a sudden pat on her back.

"Geet Ma'am?"

"Nakul!" she said, turning around to face the servant. "How have you been?"

"I'm as good as always," he replied cheerfully. "But where were you? Dadimaa thought you were coming yesterday," his tone was becoming stern. "We were all so worried!"

Geet actually smiled properly for the first time in seven months. This is why she loved it here. Everyone, from the servants to dadi, was always so caring and thoughtful of everyone else. She always felt like she was around home when she was here. "Actually, Bhaiyya, my flight got delayed. You know, snow storms and stuff in the winter...the planes couldn't take off. So I got here late. I meant to call, but my phone ran out of battery," she replied, trying to bring Nakul back into his usual cheerful mood.

"You and your snowstorms! I've told you so many times, why don't you just move here? Anyways, it would have been nice if Arj- " he stopped and looked at Geet apologetically.

The small smile on Geet's face faded. Geet knew Nakul hadn't intentionally brought up the subject. It just sort of slipped out of his mouth. She could see it in his eyes. "It's okay," she nodded to Nakul."

"Umm, I'll take in your bags then, Ma'am," he said awkwardly. Geet watched Nakul effortlessly place her three massive bags on his head and walk in through the front door.

Geet closed her eyes tightly as the sudden evening breeze stroked her face. Suddenly, she thought she could hear his laughter, she thought she could feel him right next to her, she could even see him. Arjun. She opened her eyes, which were slowly filling with tears. She softly caressed the small diamond ring she wore on her ring finger. Taking a deep breath, she turned to the door and stepped into the house.

Geet wiped away the few tears that had escaped her eyes as she walked in. She didn't want anyone to see her cry. Tightening her grip on her backpack, she turned to go through the hallway that led to the staircase. Instead she came face to face with a woman she had never seen before. "Oh!" Geet gasped. "I'm sorry, I didn't see you there."

Sasha stared at Geet in disbelief. She examined Geet from top to bottom. Geet was wearing a light green salwar suit. She had the two ends of her dupatta tied at her right hip. Her thick long black hair was braided neatly and rested over her left shoulder. "What the hell?" Sasha finally said, after staring at Geet for at least two minutes.

Geet was confused. "Umm, are you okay?"

"What the hell are you doing here?" Sasha finally said. "And what's with the clothes?" she questioned.

Geet looked down at her salwar and fingered her braid and then at the woman's red short sleeveless dress. She really wasn't in the mood to talk to anyone right now. "I live here." she told the woman. Geet was even more confused when she saw the shock on the woman's face. "And I'll wear whatever I want. What's it to you?"

"You, you, live here? Since when?"

"Look, umm...what's your name by the way?" Geet questioned closing her eyes. Sasha opened her mouth to tell Geet, but she cut her off. "Anyways, my point is I really do live here, believe it or not, and I'm really tired. It's been a long trip, and I really want to go to sleep. So if you'll excuse me..." Geet walked around Sasha and started walking up the stairs.

"Geet?" a voice called from behind them.

"Dadi!" Geet said, turning back to face her.

"Geet?" Sasha was thoroughly confused.

"Geet! When did you get here?" Dadi asked.

"Just now," Geet answered, bending down to touch her feet.

Dadi's cheerful face suddenly turned serious. "So how have you been? Vicky told me you didn't even go to the hospital for three months and when you did start going to work again, you didn't even see patients? He said you moved to a completely different department and just looked over medical reports and suggested what treatments should be given? Is that what you're planning on doing here as well?"

The smile on Geet's face was gone now too. "I don't know dadi, I just can't do it anymore. I don't think I have it in me anymore," she said turning away. "I was offered the position in the emergency room, but I didn't take it. I'm going to be more like a supervisor sort of person."

"What are you talking about? You were one of the best doctors in the emergency room!"

"I know, but after that day. I don't know what happened to me. I couldn't even hold the equipment straight. When I saw him like that..." Geet began to silently cry.

Dadi placed her hands on Geet's shoulders. "Geet beta, you have to move on with your life. It's done. He's gone. And it wasn't your fault," dadi tried to calm Geet. "Vicky told me it was impossible to save him. It was already too late."

"Yes it was!" Geet cried. "Yes it was my fault! Maybe I could have done something before it was too late, but I froze. I couldn't think properly. I..."

"Geet, it's been seven months. I'm not asking you to forget about him. I'm just asking you to get on with your life and do everything normally. I'm sure he wouldn't want to see you like this. No one does."

"I cant dadi! I've tried. I tired so many times after that day, but my hands shake every time I try to do something. It's so difficult without him around anymore. How am I supposed to move on? I love him!"

"Geet -"

"Dadi, he was going to propose to me that day!" Geet ran off crying.


Edited by shrezzj - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@Iqbal Neha1, @Sofna, @lody, @roopareddy, @shalini_s, @Nanthini9, @.sireesha., @sufikhan, @Arshi_sahni, @Starry_night, @FIRESafiReFIRE, @kooliio thankyouuu sooo much guys 😊
@charmed ones thanks!! yep you're getting there 😃
@tanya_vi thankyou!! hope i dont disappoint you!
@ansah thanks!! dont worry, that lady was not geet 😊
@macho_muffin lol thanks!! mmm.....you're partially there. but not quite. hope you figure it out after chapter 1!!
@-afsha- thankyouu! sorry its confusing, but i didnt want to reveal names at first. hope you can guess who's who after chapter 1 😃
@nisha.munim awww thanks soo much!! i hope i dont disappoint you!! lol
@Chotii wow!! thanks so much lol! i really hope i dont disappoint you later on! you're guesses are pretty good
😉


Shreya
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Posted: 14 years ago
#34
Awesome update! But that was sad too......so it was Arjun then who died that day......I am getting it now, atleast I think so....lolz......so maybe it was Maan who caused that accident and also he was the once who was cheated by that girl......lolz....am just too curious.....hehe. Anyways......do continue soon and thanks for the PM!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oh i was waiting for ur update this passed weekend,, i m soooooooo happy ....thank u for the pm...pls update soon.... waiting for Maan's part...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Great track. please add me to your pm list :).

Thanks,

Neha
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Posted: 14 years ago
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oooo wow! poor geeet! i loved that part.. cant believe 'sasha' has already made an entry into the ff lol
this is gonna be one interesting ride!! its a great part - needed, so to understand the story i suppose and defo not just a random 'filler' ok! its great!
mmm... geet already knows dadi.. and vicky too.. arjun seems to be vicky's brother.. but i could be so wrong! and maan isnt even in the picture yet.. is the dadi not maans dadi in this fic? gosh.. i wonder what sorta situation will bring maneet face to face...!
update when u can! but try n make it soon plz ;) lol cant wait to find out whats gonna happen!
superbly written Yet Again!! lol
xxxxxxx
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Hey!! Sorry i forgot to comment on part 2...loved it...kind of sad though!! even part 3 is sad...but i loved it...it's so addiciting!!! Please update quickly....you don't understand it's so good!!! Love you writing sweetie!!!!!! Thanks a bunch!!!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Awwwwwwww...tht was sad.....eager to knw wat hpnd
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Thanks alot 4 filling ma words...reali done great work...i knw..even im startin ma col on tue means today....reali l8 knw.....bt awesome update....😊

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