SR (Siddhima) FF-The proposal (update sept18th pg3

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hey guys
So this was a litter faster update and hope you guys enjoy it! and Please comment (motivated me to update faster)
part before this
Parts before this one
Part 1-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1443254
part2-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1444985
part3-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1445499
part5-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1446573&TPN=4
part6-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1446573&TPN=7

As soon as the words "Will you marry me?" registered in Riddhima's minds her heart felt as if it had been revived and her face became the reflection of pure and true happiness. Sid, on the other hand, was an image of furious pain as he continuously attempted to get the chilli poweder out his eyes. His scream of agoy brought Riddhima back to her soon-to-be again husband, who was running mad in circles as he couldn't see.

"Sid, Sid!"-Riddhima as she tried to stop her crying husband.

"RIDDHIMA!!! Ow, meri anhken chal rahi hain! Tuk toh really aaj Chilli Sid's Eyes special bana ki soch rahi thi! Thank god I didn't say I love you, warna pata nahi tum mera kya haal karti!"-Sid

"Kya?!"-Riddhima as she grabs Sid's collar and Sid tries to shrink into his shirt and hide.

"Agar tumne phele yeh bolo hota toh aaj tumhari anhken mein chilli nahi meri ankhen hoti. Stupid fool. Tum na ek number ke budhu ho!"-Riddhima

"Toh phir dusra number kis ka hai? Aur yahan meri aankhen jal rahi hain aur tum mujhe ghali dey rahi ho?"-Sid

Riddhima forgets her anger as she realizes that Sid is in actual pain and quickly rushes him to the sink.

Sid

Yaar yeh ladkhi har samhe lar thi rehti hai aur ghali toh mujhe aise deti hai jaise diwali ki sweets baati rahi ho! Sid beta jab teri iss ke saath shaadi ho jayegi toh best yeh hoga ki dinner tu khud bana warn yeh to gaali ke saath saath mar aur lat dono khilyegi! Yaar I wonder if there is like a pati rehka to protect me as I am sure my biwi toh iss janaam ki female Ravaan ke mutabik hai!

Riddhima opens the sink, but no water comes out of it. She looks at Sid, and his eyes were shedding more than enough water.

"WHY isn't there water running from the sink? I TOLD YOU to get that fized a WEEK ago!!!"-Riddhima once again. She looked for the nearest thing, and grabbed a balan and she started hitting Sid with it.

"Men yahani nahi thi toh tumne meri baat bhi nahi suni. I tell you to do ONE thing, One thing"Riddhima as she continuously beats Sid with the balan.

Sid grabs Riddhima arms and pulls her towards him. Riddhima stared into Sid's still burning eyes and for a moment he opens his eyes fully to look into her.

"Tum yahaan nahi thi toh ghar kiya mujhe apna bhi diyaan nahi tha. Sirf aur sirf tumhare barre mein sochta tha"-Sid

Sid softly brushes Riddhima's hair and holds her face in his hands. He brings her face closer to his, almost touching his lips with hers. Riddhima's heartbeat quickens and she took in a deep breath as if she was struggling to breath.

"Riddhima! Meri Riddhima'Meri Aankhen Chali Rahi Hain!"-Sid screamed!

Riddhima got out from Sid's hold and started hitting him with the balan.

"SID, what would happen if I went deaf? Huh!"-Rid

"Toh phir pati andha aur biwi behari aur phir hum mil kar black 2 film baneynge! RIDDHIMA meri aankhen chal rahi kuch karo!"-Sid

"AND what about my ears, when you screamed. Ghade chalo washroom mein"-Ridddhima as she grabs a hold of Sid's hand and drags him to the washroom. Once in the washroom she tried to open the tap, but it was stuck. She continues to struggle and Sid constant screaming like a baby begins to get on her nerves. She finally loses it and pushes him into the shower and turns the shower on.

"Lo, dholo apni aankhen. Aura ab bache ki tarahan rohna band karo!"-Riddhima.

Ridz

Wow, he look so good! The way his wet shirt clings to his well built chest and the way his hair 'stop! Stop staring at him, remember he still hasn't Fully. But he's so cute and nuts!

Riddhima continues to stare at him and Sid notices this and looks into her eyes. She quickly break the gaze and starts to walk away, but Sid pulls her into the shower with him. He pulls her so close that he could feel her breath on his lips.

"Riddhima..I Love You! I never thought I could love anyone so much'so much that she becomes a part of me."-Sid as he takes Ridz into his arms. Ridz looks into his eyes and tears star to flow from her eyes, but the water from the shower washes them away. She slowly and shyly takes her hand and traces Sid's jawline. Sid exhales as if the weight of the world had been lifted of his shoulders.

"I love you so much that I can't bare it when you are away. I live my life through the moments I spend with you and I want to spend my life holding you in my arms even at the cost of a few bruises."-Sid slowly goes down on one knew while still staring into Ridz's eyes.

"Riddhima Gupta I promise that with her breath, with every heartbeat, with every moment of my life, to love you to no bounds. Will you marry me?"-Sid

Riddhhima couldn't stop the tears from flowing as she finally was gifted the moment she had been dreaming about. The tears blended with the water coming from shower, but her glittering eyes reflected the bliss she felt in her heart.

"Yes!!"-Riddhima whispered as that was all she could say. Riddhima slowly lowered herself to Sid's level and she whispered "Yes" again. Sid placed the ring on her finger and then took her face into his hand and brought it closer. He slightly smiled and he kissed her with the passion that could bring together heaven and earth.

Riddhima was in the bedroom changing and reliving the moment she had a moment ago in the shower, with Sid.

Ridz

Sid finally! Finally! I have never been so happy, so much at peace. I wish I could live my whole in that moment because at that moment I felt like a saw a glimpse of heaven. I Love you Sid, so much that there is no way I can express it. Just know that I feel like living only when you are with me.

Riddhima comes out of the bedroom to find Sid standing in the kitchen, with his back facing her. He had changed clothes and was now wearing the white shirt. The very one he had worn when she first meet him and the one he wore at the airport when she has kissed him.

Ridz

He looks like a Greek god in that white shirt, okay he looks like a Greek god in anything. I can't wait to become Mrs. Riddhima Siddhant Modi (again) without the "Modi" part in my life I don't feel like myself. And without you near me I feel an emptiness. Turn around you idiot and hold me in your arms. Make me realize that this isn't a dream, that you aren't a dream, that "we" aren't a dream. Turn around, you moron!

As if Sid had read Riddhima's thoughts he turns around and looks at her. She was wearing his clothes, but her face was glowing as if the first rays of the sun had just showered themselves upon her face.

Sid slowly walks up to her and takes her in his arms. He kisses her forehead and moved down her face until he reached her cheeks. He could feel her heating up and he smiled quietly to himself.

"Mujhe jana chahiye"-Riddhima whispers. Sid snaps his head back "Kyun"-he says with a slightly worred tone.

"Kyunki raat hogayi hai aur mujh ghar jana chahye"-Riddhima smiles as she could clearly see the disappointment in Sid's face.

"YEH tumhara ghar hai. Is ghar ki deed bhi tumhara naam kardi hai. Dehkni hai?"-Sid

"Nahi Sid, but before marriage the girl lives with her parents and then moves into her hubby's house"-Riddhima

"We are already married. Hum bas phir se shaadi karen hai!"-Sid as he pleads with her not to leave.

"Rasaam hai Sid!"-Riddhima

Suddenly Sid gets an idea.

"Fine rasaam hai ki ladki ko apne maa baap ke ghar rehna parta hai shaadi se phele. Toh main tumhe drop kar deta hoon!"-Sid

During the car ride Riddhima put her head on Sid's shoulders to rest, but she was actually feeling his movements as he breathed. She felt safe and at peace when she near him. She felt as if the world had been created just for them, that she had been created just for him, for the moments she had spent with him. Finally they reached the Gupta's residence, to Riddhima's great disappointment. Sid and Riddhima got out of the car and Sid walked her to the front door.

Sid hated the word "good-bye" especially when he had to say it to Riddhima. So he just pulled her close to him and kissed her cheek. He moved closer to her lips, but she pushed him away.

"Papa dekh lenge! Bye Sid"-Riddhima walked into the house.

"See you really soon, Riddhima"-Sid said to himself and chuckled. He then walked around the house and beneath Riddhima bedroom window. He smiled as he slowly began to climb up the pipe.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely OS.........👏👏

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Loved the OS Prachi.👏

Its written brilliantly and needless to say it was sooo romantic!😳 Thanks for adding me to the PM list and plz update soon.😊
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Will definitely continue😊
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Originally posted by: barkha_31390

Lovely OS.........👏👏

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and added u to my pm list
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Originally posted by: Wafa_94

Loved the OS Prachi.👏

Its written brilliantly and needless to say it was sooo romantic!😳 Thanks for adding me to the PM list and plz update soon.😊



Thank you so much!!!
and added you to my pm list with pleasure!!!!
will try to update soon (just been busy as my first year in uni started!)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey prachi great work yaar...i have read your fics all along but this time i really wanted to appreciate your work...please write soon and pm me if you can for the next update...
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Originally posted by: QueenbeePallavi

hey prachi great work yaar...i have read your fics all along but this time i really wanted to appreciate your work...please write soon and pm me if you can for the next update...



Hey!
Thanks and so glad you commented and continue to comment
so i will update faster😃
And i will definitely pm you!!

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Wow yaar!!!
It was so romantic. I could picture every scene, and the one where Sid proposed in the shower was original. It seems everything Siddhima couple does is unique. Sid proposed in the shower and they get married in the rain, LOL.

Continue soon, much needed Siddhima ff and thanks for the pm!!

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Originally posted by: Jessie92

Wow yaar!!!
It was so romantic. I could picture every scene, and the one where Sid proposed in the shower was original. It seems everything Siddhima couple does is unique. Sid proposed in the shower and they get married in the rain, LOL.

Continue soon, much needed Siddhima ff and thanks for the pm!!


Thanks Jessie
And i think i will be able to post the next part tom or the day after, depending on my work load. But it will be soon, or sooner then the last time, lol.
I don't know with the recent episodes sometimes i don't feel like writing about them, as Ridz is so confused. But lets see! Glad you enjoyed this part!!

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