a topic truly u will agree...

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Posted: 14 years ago
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see i have to complete a report, and look where im?? grrrrrrrrrrrrrr
i hate this addiction and i hate this intoxication...
i know its not right...
i know my life is going in a whirlpool of emotions..
yet i cant get a grip of myself.
my days begin with thoughts of u..
and my nights end with the same thoughts...
in dream i hear the voice of maaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiii and maaaaaaaaaaaaahiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii....
when im awake i crave to hear the same voice...
no fool can be as foolish as im...because this is called as insanity.
i walk on road, eat food and live my life
yet the life which i live is leading with shadows of u...
your a fragment from my heart...
your a illusion which no one will believe
your a part of my past, my present and wishing even in future...
to your happiness i pray...cox thats what makes me happy too.
heart to heart im bounded to be with u..
destiny has shown me the way..
drawn me so much into you...that no words can express how i feel.
no words can convey the warmth and emotions you created in me...
maaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii

press like if u like, u r welcome to continue the poem...😉
press nothing if u think im insane.

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Veenu_Vivian thumbnail
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Posted: 14 years ago
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i know its a too long poem..couldnt stop myself from writing...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Woh sab tho teek hai...
magar is se bahar aana kaise????
din rath is IF mein attak ke rahthe hain...
Maaneet ke saath hansthe hain hum aur woh roye tho hamara din be bigad jatha hai...
hai kya karen....
CVs hampe thoda raham kijiye....😔
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: Anandana

Woh sab tho teek hai...
magar is se bahar aana kaise????
din rath is IF mein attak ke rahthe hain...
Maaneet ke saath hansthe hain hum aur woh roye tho hamara din be bigad jatha hai...
hai kya karen....
CVs hampe thoda raham kijiye....😔


a poem for ur thoughts..

its all true...
how can i leave all this and move on..
day and night im stuck inside IF forum...
i cry with maneet and smile at their happiness..
ohhh what shall be done....
pls Cv's have mercy on us....

is my understanding ok in translating your words??😉 anyone else??
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@venu: thanks for the translation...that is what i meant...this addiction is killing me.....i've come to hate the much earned weekends too....😭
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Posted: 14 years ago
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yea..even me too...not only one pain...but two pains.
one is i cant watch geet in weekend, other pain is falling into an unknown world full of "not knowing" whats going to hapen...
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Posted: 14 years ago
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thanks deeply ☺️
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Posted: 14 years ago
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👏Amazing Post.👍🏼
Geet is an amazing show which has become the part of viewers lives.
You just cannot totally avoid Geet.
Have to watch geet and then the repeats and sitting on IF day and night 24/7 only posting on Geet Forum and on Maaneet Paradise.😊
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Posted: 14 years ago
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@venusgem u wrote it?????????? awesome, amazing n beautiful......loved it.......

i can very well relate to it....v all r sailing in d same boat........cant get enough of dem....cant stop myself frm visiting d forum....just love being here vd u guys and sharing d feelings....

i have started hating weekends just like u guys........


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Posted: 14 years ago
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lovely .... I am not a writer or poet but loved ur poem .... can' t do any value addition ... but must say awesome👏

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