Tera Shukriya....Humara Dil Tod Diya

Sept/10/2010: after Geet's confession and Maan's heartbreak.... this is the only solace I can find, in memories..

kal kay liye shukriya,
aaj jo aap nay dard diya

oos kal ke bina nahi seh paatay,
maut ke mooh mein chalay jaatay

yeh raat jo kaali dikha gaye,
eid ka chaand bhi na roshan kar paaye

oon yaadon ke saharay hain ab toh,
joodtay nahi jab tak dil ye doh

Originally posted by: KriHaan_GurMaan

Sept/10/2010: after Geet's confession and Maan's heartbreak.... this is the only solace I can find, in memories..

kal kay liye shukriya,
aaj jo aap nay dard diya

oos kal ke bina nahi seh paatay,
maut ke mooh mein chalay jaatay

yeh raat jo kaali dikha gaye,
eid ka chaand bhi roshan na kar paaye

oon yaadon ke saharay hain ab toh,
joodtay nahi jab tak dil ye doh

Originally posted by: vista90pro

Very nice.....kiska kalaam hai?

arey Vista..mera hai,kisi aur ka thodi daalungi.....the instant epi ended had to write...to get it out...I had been saying this for days...even posted on FaceBook that we need to keep all the MaanEet moments tucked away, treasure them for when the heartbreak comes they are going to be our picture book to look back and savour, until the dark night passes us by and when I realised aaj Eid hai to just HAD to put that in there.

Originally posted by: KriHaan_GurMaan

arey Vista..mera hai,kisi aur ka thodi daalungi.....the instant epi ended had to write...to get it out...I had been saying this for days...even posted on FaceBook that we need to keep all the MaanEet moments tucked away, treasure them for when the heartbreak comes they are going to be our picture book to look back and savour, until the dark night passes us by and when I realised aaj Eid hai to just HAD to put that in there.

Originally posted by: vista90pro

To sher 'o'shaayeri ka shauq bhi farmati hain aap..........mashallah, mashallah....allah nazar'e'bad se bachaye.........😃😃😃

So sorry, I certainly didn't mean to offend you.....didn't think your interests lay in that direction....when you mentioned in your pm this being a couplet, I automatically assumed you were quoting some great shaayer!!!! I am doubly impressed!

Eid mubarak!

arey Vista...offend vagayrah kuchh bhi nahi. oolta when you asked like that,achha laga. to know that it was good enough to make you think that kisi aur ka hai...In fact, had written one in English too after the kehna hi kya scene. btw..kalam?? exact meaning nahi malum.