POEM FOR KARAN ---(1)

(KAISE JEUN TERE BEEN)

( JAB RIDDHIMA NE KAHA THA...ARMAN KYA TOOM AAGE BADH PAYYE?...I WROTE THIS POEM ....)

AAGE BADHNA KYA HAI?
JIWAN JEENA KYA HAI?
AGAR YAHI JINDAGI HAI
TO FEER MARNA KYA HAI?

MAI TO JEE OOTHA THA
TOOJHPER KHOOD KO MITAKAR
TU HI MUJHKO BHOOL GAYI
EK NAYA SUNG PAAKER

MERE KISH JOORM KI
ITNI BARI SAJA HAI?
ITNA KEUN ROOTHI TU
KYA ISHKI WAJAH HAI?

THA POOKARA EKDEEN MUJHKO
TUNE HAATH BADHAKAR
KISMAT HUNSKAR CHAL CHALI
MUJHKO KAMJOR BANAKER


WADA KARTA HOON MAI APNI
JAAN KO NA SATAOONGA
BUS EK BAAR POKARO MUJHKO
DOUR KE MAI PAAS AAOONGA

PER TERE BIN MERE JIWAN KE
HER RAHEN BAND PARI HAI
AB TO DEKHO MOUT MERE
SIR PER AA KHARI HAI


KOI GUM NAHI ,CHAHE MERI
JAAN BHI AB NIKAL JAYYE
BUS ARMAN HAI ITNA TERE
BAHON MEIN MERA DUM JAYE


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HEY FRNDS..HOPE YOU WILL LIKE THIS POEM...PLZ.GIVE COMMENTS ...A LOT OF THANX....

LOVE YOU
PUNAM

hey poonam
great poem loved it a lot

Hey Punam!! 😊Great poem luved it dear. Emotions were nycly described. Keep on writing more and more. Thanx for d pm.

Oh wow! That was so good that I have a lump in my throat and I'm trying to hold back my tears, but I guess my tears have a different story!

Keep up the good work! Hope to read more in the future

heyyy dear,
nice poem
do write more
thanks for PM.



love
Riddss

Aww
Punam
Fantastic!
N pics dekhkar to aur rona aa raha hai
Thanks for the PM
Take care
Love,
Teacherji 😆

hey punam
fantastic yaar
tum ne jis tarha se jazbaat ko words ka roop diya hai amazing.
bhut dard hai is poem mein bhut depth hai har ek ek words mein wahi samjh sakta hai jo in sub feelings ko jo in sub se guzar choka ho.
very nice plz keep writing.
tum ne itni acchi poem di tu yeah shear tumhare liye

(kabhi jo khayaloon mein tha gumaan ki tarha
ab wajood mein gum ho gaya hai jaan ki tarha
mere wajood ke parde pe khil utha hai tera rang
tu mis-le- qoseqza (mis-le-qoseqza mein rainbow colour)
mein aasmaan ki tarha.

matalab ager mein aasmaan ho tu tum us ke 7 rang ho kiyoon ke aasmaan ki khubsurti us ke colours mein hai.urdu mein rainbow colour ko qoseqza kehte hai tum is ko kosekza bhi read kar sakti ho but sahi word qoseqza hai.
good job punam 👍🏼 👏 😛

awww loved it

Awesome poem
Totally loved it
Bought tears 2 my eyes
Beautiful
Thanks 4 da pm