Suniye.. sweet dream (goodnight)

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Posted: 14 years ago
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*have a nice sleep ...sweet dreams ..it is just a fairy tale ...or a bed time story*
as we all have seen precap ..Geet sleeping thinking of her home flash back...


Geet: hi Babaji kyu mujhe ko baar baar ghar ka khayal aa raha ha...she grab her blanket.
Maan: pata nahi yeh pagal larki soai bhi ha ya nahi.. he is sleeping at roof looking the black sky filled with stars
Geet: why i am feeling so restless Maan sir theek tou ha...kahi un ko machar (mosquito ) na kaat raha hoon aik dafa mein unn ko dekhe lati hoon
Maan: kahi daar na rahi ho....recollected how scared she was when she came out of bus... mein iss ko aik dafa dekha lata hoon.
both got up walk in dark at their toes.
Maan: kon ha wah
Geet: uff yeh Maan sir kya kar raha ha yahan per.she turn back but she was too late his arm catch her.
Maan: tum kya kar rahi ho itni raat ko? he pull her closed her hand rested at his chest
Geet: woh mein.. woh mein
Maan: kya ? stare in her twinkling eyes
Geet:woh mein paani peena aai thi
Maan: chaat per paani peena... he pull her more close
Geet:woh mein rasta phool gai hoon...
Maan:acha rmoved her culrs
Geet:chora mujhe ko koi dekhe laga
Maan:dekhna do waisa bhi tum meri maghatar ho
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Geet: shy try to removed his hand...
Maan:daar lag raha tha kya he whisper.
Geet: nahi ... but her eyes said something else to him
Maan: mera hota huwa koi tum ko haat nahi laga sakta...
Geet: per mein daar to nahi rahi thi.
Maan: acha tou tum kyu upper aai ho
Geet; woh mein aap ko dekha paused...
Maan:bolo
Geet:aap ko dekhna
MAan: shocked why?
Geet: aap ko machar na kat rahi ho
Maan: laugh at her
Geet; kya huwa?
Maan: tum pagal ho jao ja kar sojao we have to leave early.he left her arm
Geet:aap haasta bhi ha
Maan :stared her in anger
Geet :turn but her duppata stuck … aap chora ga to mein jao gai
Maan: looked around her duppata was fix in his watch. He removed it
Geet:turn to see he was just behind her
Maan: brush his face with her open hairs.. whisper jao mein na choor diya.. placed her duppata at her back.
Geet: starting walking.. he was watching her going
Maan took a deep breath.. pagal.he turn back to go to roof
Geet: suniye. Maan: stopped..
Geet: thank you kissed his cheek good night
Maan : was shocked he just carch her arm … for what?
Geet: for closing… shy
Maan: kissed her forehead go & sleep

*have a nice sleep ...sweet dreams ..it is just a fairy tale ...or a bed time story*
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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no one to read or comment 😭
Edited by naddiya26 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
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hey naddiya dear
wow omg so cute and lovely



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Posted: 14 years ago
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i m loving it.........
continue soon............
loved the way u narrate....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: pooja83

i m loving it.........

continue soon............

loved the way u narrate....

thx it is just a piece ....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sravani899

hey naddiya dear

wow omg so cute and lovely




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sweet dreams 😉
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: priza

nice...pls continue

it is just a small piece
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Posted: 14 years ago
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Originally posted by: sravani899

hey naddiya dear

wow omg so cute and lovely



That's me after reading ur story...... any more anxiously waiting....
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Posted: 14 years ago
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it was reali gud plz pm me next u count...

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