OS - Out comes the Truth...part 2 page 3 - Page 2

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Fatima

To all my lovelies,

I cannot tell you how overwhelmed I am with your responses. Thanks so much for reading, and more importantly for commenting.

I am not a writer and this was just a small figment of my imagination. I cannot write an FF because I'm really not good at making up story plots. And I'm being very honest here. However, I do some write-ups when an episode urges me - like my hug analysis, Maan's diary and Geet's dialogue.

At this moment nothing comes to my mind to continue this scene. But I promise, if something comes up, I'll surely work ok it.

Lots of love,
~dolphin~

AMAZING!!!👏👏

it is really awesome ..i loved the way you wrote you are a genius

Thanks guys. You guys compelled me to think ahead and I think something is cooking in my brain. Hang tight folks 😊

Thats Awesome

OMG dolphin that was really good.... who says u r not good.....

Beware - this is LONG!!!! Hope it lives up to your expectations.

Geet was on the floor crying out loud. Her hair had covered both sides of her face and she cared little about it. Maan was nowhere in the room, he had left long back. After hearing the entire truth - truth about her fake marriage, her pregnancy, why Brij wanted to kill her, why her family abandoned her, he stood still like a statue for long. He kept looking at her while she fell on her knees and started crying harder. She didn't have the courage to look up to Maan. She didn't realize when he had left, but when she finally looked up, he was gone. Her heart broke into a million pieces. She had not expected him to understand her plight and support her, but somewhere deep down she wanted him to assure her that he will still be there for her. Now that he was gone, she got the hint.

Maan was aimlessly walking along the trail, Geet's words ringing in his ears. 'Meri shaadi hui thi', 'Who mujhe chod ke chale gaye', 'Badnaami se bachne ke liye mera bhai mujhe maarna chahta tha'. He tried hard but he couldn't get these thoughts out of his mind. Kyun Geet? Tumne mujhe yeh sab pehle kyun nahi bataya? Tumhe koi haq nahi banta meri zindagi ke saath is tarah khele ka. Par kis haq se who mujhe kuch bhi kehti? Aakhir main lagta hi kaun hoon uska?Ab main kya karoon?

As he recollected all his times spent with her, what stood out to him were the times she had tried to stay away from him. He was now able to solve the puzzle - put 2 and 2 together. He now knew why she had been denying her feelings for him. Itna pyaar? Itna pyaar karti hai who mujhse ke who mujhpe koi bhoj nahi daalna chahti? Itna chahti hai who mujhe? Aur maine? Maine kya kiya? Hamesha use satata raha.

He kept thinking about all this for a good amount of time. His eyes now filled with tears - not because he was hurt or upset, but because of anger. His eyes reddened in anger at the thought of the men in her life. Her fake husband, her family and her brother. It seemed to him that all had conspired to make her life miserable. But he soon softened in his expressions when he recollected all the sweet moments he shared with her. How she had suffered so much yet how strong she was. She never frowned at her fate, nor she ever complained about her life. How? How did she manage to live her life so joyfully even after going through such hardships? A small smile formed on his lips at the thought of how innocent, how goofy and how adorable she was at times. He wondered at her strength.

He walked back to the guesthouse. He hesitantly turned the door knob and slowly opened it. It was dead silent. He entered and first looked at the corner where she had been sitting on the ground when he left the room. She wasn't there. His heart skipped a few beats. He quickly looked around, everywhere, in the bathroom, in the lobby. Not a sign of her. The room even looked empty for her belongings were not there either. His heart sank. What? She left? Where could she have gone? With a heavy heart he asked the receptionist about her whereabouts who handed a letter to him. She left a letter for Maan. He was happy and nervous at the same time. Happy because she still thought about him and nervous with the thought what if she had left him forever? He quickly opened it and read

Maan sir,

My life is yours. If it wasn't for you, I would have been burned to ashes by now. I can never be grateful enough to express it in words. I do have feelings for you, I love you. But I cannot do this to you. You deserve to be with someone better, someone more pious, someone purer than me. I have scars all over my body and soul, and I cannot let you suffer with me. I started this journey on my own and now that you know the truth, I trust you will understand my leaving. I'm sorry sir. Please convey my love and regards to daadima and tell her that she made me feel at home with her love and warmth. You and daadima supported me when my own family abandoned me. And so I have to leave, because I cannot bring disgrace to such wonderful people - those that are closer to my heart than my own family. I'm sorry sir. I love you and I always will.

Yours forever,

Geet

He read the letter over and over again because he could not get enough of the fact that she loved him. She loved him so much that she couldn't bear to bring disgrace to him. He kissed the letter with a tear trickling down his cheek. He went back to the room, took his belongings which Geet had very neatly packed for him and left.

Geet looked out the bus window wondering where her life was going to take her next. Life in the past few months had been very aggressive on her. She no longer had the zeal to live, she no longer wished to live without him. But she had to, for she had made a promise to Babaji she would keep her child safe. She had to fulfill her promise. The bus came to a halt for a short break at Ambala. It was a beautiful place where they had halted. While everyone went to the dhaaba to have a quick bite, Geet went over by the flowing river for hunger had abandoned her long ago. She was silently crying, not over what happened, but knowing that she would never be close to him again. It pinched her to the core when she thought of her life without him around. She didn't know what she was going to do. She was aimlessly looking at the river and tears formed in her eyes which blurred the beautiful scene - not that she was enjoying it. She rubbed her eyes and looked at the water again only to find Maan standing next to her. She rubbed her eyes again in astonishment - he was still there. She turned to him. He was looking at her with utmost affection. They stood that way looking into each other's eyes for long until they heard the driver start the bus. She panicked and began to walk towards the bus saying 'Ruko, mera samaan'. Maan held her hand and said 'Mere gaadi mein hai. Maine pehle hi tumhara samaan utarwa liya tha.' She stopped and looked at him again but then lowered her eyes for she did not have the courage to look at him again knowing he now knew all about her. Maan softly lifted her face up by her chin but she still looked away.

'Kya tumne mujhe is kabil bhi nahi samjha, ki main tumhara haath thaam sakoon , tumhara dard baant sakoon? Kya itna hi jaan payi ho mujhe?

Geet's tears started to flow again when she said 'You deserve someone much better. Main aapke kabil nahi hoon sir.'

'Kabil toh main tumhare nahi hoon. Tum mein jo shakti hai itna dard sehne ki, shayad kisi mein ho. Itna kuch ho jaane ke baad bhi tumne apni zindagi se mooh nahi moda. Aur maine tumhari zindagi mein aur mushkilein paida kar di. Kabil toh main tumhare nahi hoon'. He looked away, guilt overtaking his emotions.

Geet took both his hand into hers and said 'Nahi sir. Aapse achcha aur koi ho hi nahi sakta. Aapse badhkar aur koi nahi hai mere liye, main khud bhi nahi.'

Pee loon started playing in the background....

Pee loon tere neelay neelay nainon se shabnam

He drink the tear drop that formed on her cheek,

Pee loon tere geelay geelay hoto ki sargam

He kissed her on her forehead and they both hugged. And God blessed their bond with rain!

Pee loon hai peenay ka mausam
Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mujhko
Tere sang bekraari hai
Tere sang ishq taari hai
Tere sang ik khumari hai
Tere sang chain bhi mujhko
Tere sang bekraari hai
Tere bin jee nahi lagda, tere bin jee nahi sakda
Tujhpe hai haare maine vaare do jahan, kurbaan, meharbaan, ke main toh kurbaan
Sun le zara, tera kurbaan

Originally posted by: blueyRu

😭 😭
seriously beautiful..

Hey babes, why the tears? It was a happy ending, no?