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Pinka

@pinka28

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

very very beautiful dhara

i didn't knew it you write so well

so so cute and emotional

really why didn't you write any fic or you did and i don't know ... is it

i like the past scene between naina and naveen and the last line of naina so much

really really incredible work

want read more your write up

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-serenity-

@-serenity-

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

Hey Dhara...

Amazing n lovely OS yaar 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏

The scenes between Naina n naveen r awesome

loved the whole os

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@Amour_Reet

Voyager

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

hey di ................

loved it so much ...!!!!!

on the eve of rakhi .....that was really a very good os

yaadein taja ho gayi ...

thanx for informing .....!!

love u

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Naina

@Kool_Naina

Navigator

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Hey Dhara
How r u?

sorry for late reply
awesome OS.........just loved it.......
do write more
thnx for pm

Luv'
Naina

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ChhalkiSyaahi

@ChhalkiSyaahi

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

Hi Dhara...

So you once again took up your pen on the eve of Raakhi....It was really heart touching yaar.... All the Naina Naveen scenes were so nice.... I wish I had a brother....though Raj didn't have much of a role here, but you brought him in beautifully.... Keep writing more...

Love
Guglu

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Vertika Srivastava

@Vartika07

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

G8 yaar,
Gud gift for Rakhi.
naina always miss her bhai on Rakhi from last 4 years and now she has two brothers.
Ali n Yudi are really sweet n caring.
Gud work dear and keep on writing these OS.

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