Forbidden Love {Samrat-Gunjan FF--pt 1 pg 1

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Hello, and welcum my beautiful SaJan maniacs!😳 For those of u who don't know me, let me just mention that I am a ginormous SaJan fan myself! And frankly, I just cannot stop dreaming up scenes for my januables!☺️ Thus, I have started writing on two of the most amazing ppl on the face of the earth!
My writing story is actually a really funny one! Actually, I didn't even know about Indiaforums previous to this incident! The first time I came onto this website, was to read an amazing FF on SaJan, which, if I'm not mistaken, was written by Xaviara!
Aaaahhhh..those were the times.... when we had SaJan as best friends... and then, the unforgettable chaddi aunty🤣who had "enitced" our Sammy with her multi coloured Chaddis!🤣 Ok enough of Sheena talks.... bechaari ko buhot zyaada pareshaan kar rahi hoon!😆 But I know, Xaviara's, was one of the best SaJan stories I have read till date.... And of course, my mania for SaJan and writing got the better of me! And for the very reason for writing SaJan stories, I joined this Forum!😛 And now, thx to u guys, I have successfully started my...mmm...8th FF, and finished three of them!😆 (actually, to be honest, after I finished EPK, mujhe dher saare joote bhi pade iss liye dar ke maare ek aur likhe rahi hoon!😆) Enough of joking around though! Let me just pen out the character sketch, and then the decision will be up to u.... I will only continue this if I have ppl who r interested to read it!😃

Samrat Shergill- He's the jaan and shaan of the college! Total hunk and popularity follows his every footstep! Smart? Ehhh....
Gunjan Bhushan: Acedemic champ, and singing star! A really shy and reserved girl! Has a huge crush on Samrat, but is too scared to tell him.
Usha and Shekar Bhushan: Gunjan's parents! Love her to the core! The problem? They believe only in arranged marriages...and they don't accept the concet of love
Pratap Shergill: Samrat's father.... He's a widower.... but nontheless, he has not loved Samrat any less. The problem? Believes in arranged marriages, and hates Love with all his heart.
Forbidden Love....
Kya itni mushkilon ke beech SaJan kabhi ek ho paayenge? Jaane ke liye padhte rahiye... Forbidden Love... sirf Indiaforums pe!
And plz tell me if my idea is any gud! I will only continue if u want me to!! Thx a lot! And if u want to be PMed please add me to ur buddy list! Thx a lot!
Luv,
...Babydoll...
P.S, I would also extend my heartfelt thx to my friend wardah, who has made the above sig for a totally clueless sig maker like me!😆 Thx so much dost! And it looks simply wonderful!
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😳Hello my friends!😊 Really very happy to be continuing this FF! 😃And am glad at the response I got for this story! 👍🏼And as I do with most parts, I am dedicating this FF to some very spl people...⭐️ and those people r ALL OF U!😉 I could never choose one over the other! U guys all hold a lot of importance to me! Thus, this first part goes to all my friends on India Forums!👏
But I would like to mention a very special thx to Xaviara! If it weren't for her, I would have probably never written an FF b4!😛
Thx frnds!! And I would like to end my bak bak😆 rite here so that u all can read (and hopefully enjoy😳) the first part! Do leave me with ur wonderful comments! Am eagerly waiting to read them!😳

My story starts three years ago. I had just joined in newly to Excel college. And I was already nervous.😲 Ever since I was a child, I had lived in Morena.... I had lived a simple life..with simple people...😊But the teens I saw in this college, seemed anything BUT simple.🤢

***

'Di, yahan log kaise ajeeb kapre pehente hain na? Mujhe dar lag raha hai....'😲 I had whispered to my older sister Nupur, who at the moment was rolling her eyes.😆

'Off oh Gunjan. Tu bhi na? Ye ek college hai aur tu yahan padhne aayi hai. Tujhe yahan ki logon se kya matlab?😕'

I shook my head, trying to force the fear out of my heart. 'phir bhi....😭' I could feel thousands of eyes, staring at me....☺️ Look down Gunjan. I had commanded to myself. Just look down and pretend they r not there. But I still felt the heat from their glares.

Di seemed to be loving the attention.👍🏼 She had her back straight and was walking proudly in while I was wishing that the ground would just suck me up.😆

'Diiii...' I moaned. She clasped my hand tightly. 'Main hoon na tere saath? Dar mat aur chal mere saath.'😃

She pulled me further into the building. Just then, I noticed a man, with squared glasses and a collar shirt pop up in front of us.😉

'Namaste ji! Myself Bhavesh Kumar! Nice to meet u ji!'😆

I slowly raised my head. And I found him staring at me.😳 At that very moment, I had noticed something magical in his eyes.😲 There was some sort of mischief...childishness...hidden beneath those chocolaty brown eyes. 😲

I couldn't help but smile.😊 He was the first person who was even slightly like me. 'Oh ji! Namaste ji!' Called nupur.😆 'A ji, achcha hua ke aap hume mil gayyi! Warna meri behen tho sharm se behosh ho jati! Waise, aapko Shahrukh pasand hai? Who mera favourite film hero hai! Aur mera favourite movie! My fav is DDLJ! Tumhe DDLJ pata hai na? DilWaale Dulhaniya Le jaayenge! Shahrukh ka sabse romantic film!! Shahrukh aur kajol ke jodi kitni achi lagti hai na? By god, agar mujhe bhi shahrukh jaise koi ladka milta na, tho samjho, life set! Arre arre! Shahrukh jaisa hi kyun? Agar meri shaadi shahrukh se hoti tho??! Just imagine! I mean, Mujhe pata hai, uski shaadi already ho chukki hai, par I don't mind being his second wife! What say kumar ji?! Idea kaisa hai?!'😆

I couldn't help but giggle at the pleading glance that Bhavesh had given me. I could tell he regretted introducing himself!🤣

'Um, Di? Hum class me challein? Mujhe lagta hai ke time ho gayya hai....'😳

He smiled, relieved from Nupur's Bhashan.😛 'Arre haan! Main tho bhool hi gayyi! Ye class bhi na? Morena me kitni boring thi! 🤢I hope ke yahan pe boring na ho... aur morena me humaara teacher! Kitna akdoo tha who! Humesha lectures lectures, aur lectures! By god, Bhavesh ji! Aapko pata hai? Who aadmi baatein karne se kabhi thakta hi nahi! Agar do minute ke liye chup hota na, tho buhot baddi baat hoti....'😆

Bhavesh was grinning. He knew someone else who spoke without exhaustion!😃

'Waise Gunjan, kumar ji? Aap dono baatein kyun nahi kar rahe hain?😕 Kuch maun vrath rakha hai kya?😕' She asked finally. Bhavesh laughed. It was the most wonderful thing I had heard. Like church bells chiming.😳

'Agar aap hume kuch baat karne de tho hum baat karenge na ummmmm....😆' She blushed brightly. 'Uh, Nupur. 😳Aur sorry... woh...baatein karne ki thodi aadat si ho gayyi... Gunjan jo itni chup rehti hai....'😳

He looked at me. 'Tho aap gunjan hai...right?😉 Nice to meet u! Aur koi baat nahi ji! Waise hume bhi baatein karna buhot pasand hai! Fark sirf itna hai ke mere saath koi baat karne ke liye hai hi nahi!'😭

I felt a pang of hurt fill my heart.😭 'Um, koi baat nahi! Ab hum aa gayye hain na? Aap humse baat kar sakte hain!' He smiled towards me.😃

'Thank you ji! Ab chalein? Tum dono ki class leni hai!'😈 Nupur and I looked at each other, confused.😕 'Uh...class...?' He shook his head appologettically.😳

'Sorry ji! I mean, humaara class!'😳

***

SaMrAt'S PoV:

I almost felt guilty for pretending to be someone who I was not.😭 And these girls had fallen for it.😭 But I knew that if I backed out now, it would definitely have a horrible impact on my reputation. Thus, I continued the teasing.😭

'Chaliye ji! Iss taraf!' I hoped that the two girls wouldn't take it too badly.... 🤢

I pulled them into the classroom, and in front of the entire gang.😉 They were all seated on various desks, and I knew that they had been waiting for me.

'Gunjan ji, nupur ji, yeh hai humaara gang! 😃Gang, yeh Nupur aur Gunjan ji hain!' I heard snickers echo around the room.

'Uh, Namaste! Main Nupur aur ye hai meri choti behen Gunjan!'😃 they laughed. 'Ummm...Aap log gaun se aaye ho kya...?' Asked Dia. I felt myself stifle a laugh. 'No no, I mean, aap dono ki kapre....'

Nupur smiled. 😃'Arre! Kapre pe mat jaayie! Who kya hai na, humaare bauji kabhi hume western kapre pehene nahi dete the. Waise mujhe western style buhot hi pasand hai u know? Dekhna, ek din main zuroor western pehenke aaongi!'😆

Diya and Benji high fived each other. 'Oh!! I see! Anyways, it was nice to meet u gaun waalons! So waapis gaun jaane ka kab program?'😔

I glared at Dia. 'Bas Dia ji! Buhot ho gayya!😡 Hum inko class le jaa rahe hain aur agar ho sakke tho please paanch minute ke liye chup rahiye!'😡

I lead them out of the room and itno deodhar sir's class. 'um...Bhavesh ji.... kya who log humaara mazaak ura rahe the...?'😕 Asked a confused Nupur. I felt a pang of guilt.😔 Man, these girls were so innocent!😳

'Uh, nahi ji! Who tho aise hi hain! Sab hi logon se aise baatein karte hai! Bilkul besharam! Aap inse thoda bachke rahiye ga!'😲

Gunjan smiled. 'Thank you...' She mumbled. 'Kis liye?' I questioned. She gazed into my eyes. 'Humme bachaane ke liye.'😳

***

I rushed back in to the classroom, feeling more and more guilty by the minute.😡 'Guys!' I hollered once I breathlessly ran in. 'Humme unpe aisa mazaak nahi karna chahiye tha....Godddd!! I feel horrible! Ye maine kya kar dia?!'😔

Benji jumped down from his seat on the desk and slapped my back.😆 'Dudeee!! What's up with u?!! Tujhe ho kya gayya hai?! We do this with all the newbies na?!! And anyways, they r moreners yaar! Unhe tang karne me tho aur bhi mazaa aa gayya!! Kahin...tujhe pyaar tho nahi ho gayya...?'😕

I glared at him disgustedly. 'What rubbish Benji!? Tujhe pyaar ke ilaawa bhi kuch aur soojta hai ya nahi?!! Humesha jab dekho pyaar, pyaar, pyaar!!'😡

He shrugged, 'Kya karoon bro? Tujhe dekh kar tho aise hi lagta hai!!'😉

I felt irritated. 'Get lost benji! Aur tum log! Tum dono me bhi kuch sharam bachi hai ya nahi??!"😡

Dia looked stunned.😡 'Sammy... Benji theek kehe raha hai. Tum badal gayye ho... Kya hua?'😕

I sighed, and freed myself from the bhavesh avatar. 'Agar tum un dono ki saadgi dekhti na, tho tumhaara haal bhi yehi hota.'😳

Uday grinned sheepishly. 'Really? I didn't think that they were so innocent!'😕 I placed my hands on my hips.😡 'Tu kabse sochne lagga?! Aur waise bhi, tujhe burger ke ilaawa kaha kuch aur dikhay deta hai?!'😆😡

He nodded. 'Haan, who bhi theek hai!'😳

I turned to the rest of the gang. 'Guys, I'm going to tell them the truth. Main un dono se sach bol doonga...ke main bhavesh nahi, balke Samrat hoon.'😛

I heard murmurs of disappointment. 😲'No! dude! U can't do that!' Wailed jacko. I grinned. 'Wanna bet? I'm gonna tell them rite now!'😃

But little did I know what a thunderstorm I was getting myself into! 😲😲😲😲

Precap--
'I'm really sorry guys...😭 Mujhe buhot burra lag raha hai....😭' They didn't reply... 😒But their expressions said it all.😭 They were still upset.😭
I sighed. 'Look. I can make this up to u. Me and my friends are having a get together on the beach tomorrow...at 6:30. I would love it if u both came.😳'
Narrator--Tho kya ye dono moreners beach par jaayengi?😕 kya hoga wahan pe, aur kya hoga gang ka reaction?😕 Janne ke liye parthe rahiye, FORBIDDEN LOVE...Sirf India-Forums pe! :))😳
(And once again, I hope to see ur lovely comments!😳 I will only continue his FF if u guys want me to! Thx a lot!)
luv,
...Babydoll...❤️
Edited by baby_doll_2305 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow!!!!What a concept.Loved it.Thank you for starting another Sajan Ff so soon after EPK.Please write first part soon.Add me to pm list too.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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woww nice concept

loved it

I m glad that you are starting another ff

continue soon

plzzzz add me to your pm list

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Sanju😲Ye kya kar dala?Now this is a big surprise!Abhi EPK ka khatam hua and you started this one but i,m so glad that you are starting this one🤗.Ok first of all your tlak on Miss SHEeeeeeeeee naah(Patjhar ka mahina)Was so hillarious🤣🤣🤣
I mean itni IZZAT SHEEENAH ko i was rofling and still can,t stop and it,s all because of you🤣
Ok now leaving her,The concept is NEW in my opinion cause i don,t think i,ve never read this kind of concept in any other ff.
COming to the CS,it,s too awesome👏Mindblowinggggg start dear!Love it to the core and do cont soon
Love
Ash
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ammykhan

woww nice concept


loved it


I m glad that you are starting another ff


continue soon


plzzzz add me to your pm list



Thx yaar! Will defo pm u!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: ash_sajan

Sanju😲Ye kya kar dala?Now this is a big surprise!Abhi EPK ka khatam hua and you started this one but i,m so glad that you are starting this one🤗.Ok first of all your tlak on Miss SHEeeeeeeeee naah(Patjhar ka mahina)Was so hillarious🤣🤣🤣
I mean itni IZZAT SHEEENAH ko i was rofling and still can,t stop and it,s all because of you🤣
Ok now leaving her,The concept is NEW in my opinion cause i don,t think i,ve never read this kind of concept in any other ff.
COming to the CS,it,s too awesome👏Mindblowinggggg start dear!Love it to the core and do cont soon
Love
Ash



Aww...thx Ashi! I'm glad u think it's different! Lolz, actually I have been wondering why no one has used this concept b4! So I decided to try it!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey sanju tht was awesomee new ff plzz contuied soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wonderful concept jaanu 😳Sam is cool dude and Gun is academic champ as usual😉 when I was reading about sam's father's character I was like again he doesn't love him I was 😡 on you but after reading complete sentence I as like thankgod He loves him Kya guma ke bataya unke love ke baare me
But their parents hate the concept of love omg😔 BUT I know their love will get their parents in favor of love marriage😉😳
Loved it completely continue very soon😳😳😳😳(I think longest comment till now koi na dheere-2 ff ke part se bade mere comments honge😉)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: Shafoo

hey sanju tht was awesomee new ff plzz contuied soon



Thx yaar Shafoo! 🤗

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