some sg and mn moments written by me...!!

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A big hii to on n all here...guys as we all know that yesterday we all were upset with the epi n the uniun being stretched so far.what all all of us actually want r small cute moments between our fav. couples...that we can relish so even before this track starts off...i thought why not tell to all that what this track shud be in my view...that is an array of lil cute moments of sg n mn put together.so i tried to write a few in my style.hope all of u like it.Pls feel free to comment/critisize.It starts from last nite's epi...


Mayank samrat and gunjan are finally able to stop nupur with them for seven days. The trio is really delighted as they are sure that they will be able to make nupur remember everything abt her past lyf. Now mayank turns around to go towards the kitchen as he has to prepare dinner for all of them.

N:hey mr sadu…by god..tum to bahut ajeeb ho…mujhe yahan rok kar khud ja rahe ho???
M(with a notorious smile on his face): main sabke liye dinner banane ja raha hoon…but I am sure tum to nahin aana chahogi…miss nupur verma…
N:wht???kya matlab hai tumhara???
M:matlab ye ki tumhe dekhkar main ye 100% surity ke saath kah sakta hoon ki tumhein khana banane mein koi interest nahin hoga…tumhein to ek simple si coffee bhi shayad hi banani aati ho…
N(dumbstruck):by god..teri to……gunjan ye tumhara jeeju hameshan se aisa hi kya…sada hua karela…for ur kind information mr sadu Sharma…mujhe sirf coffee hi nahin balki world ki best coffee banani aati hai….!!!!
Nupur's words n mayank's heart misses a beat…now his belief that she is his nupur only was becoming stronger n stronger….
M:world ki best coffee...woh to sirf meri nupur hi banati thi…
Mayank's words n Nupur's eyes turn moist…but she immediately tries to hide her tears n speaks up…
N:to…kya tumhari nupur ke alawa koi aur world ki best coffee nahin bana sakta kya???aur waise bhi mujhe sirf coffee hi nahin balki bahut achcha khana bhi banana aata hai…
M:achcha! Okk agar aisa hai to prove karo…
N:what??? ye kya tum har baat par prove karo..prove karo shuru ho jate ho...pichle janam mein vakeel the kya...??? but Theek hai agar yehi baat hai to…main bhi tumhare saath khana banaungi…phir dekhte hain kiska khana zyada tasty banta hai...mrrr saduuuu!!
M:theek hai!!
Saying so both of them go towards the kitchen but from opposite ways!😆
SG:

Seeing mayank n nupur lyk this gunjan has a wide smile on her face and samrat too is smiling seeing the three of them finally happy…seeing three of the most important persons of his lyf.
G:(looking towards samrat with tears in her eyes)samrat ab mujhe poora yakeen hogaya hai ki yehi di hain…woh chahe kitna bhi chupa le par main janti hoon…ki wahi meri di hai…ab main use kabhi kahin nahin jaane dungi…
S: haan chashmish ab hum nupur ko kahin nahin jaane denge…

Hearing his words a sweet smile spreads on gunjan's face n she nods slightly to samrat…
G:samrat main dekhkar aati hoon kahin di aur jeeju ko kitchen mein kuch chahiye to nahin…
Hearing her words samrat nods to gunjan and turns around towards the door…
G:samrat!!..tum...tum kahan jaa rahe ho??
S:ghar…waise bhi ab to sab kuch theek hai…tum bas mayank aur nupur ka dhyaan rakhna chashmish…
G:aur mera dhyaan???
Samrat is left shocked to hear her words…
G:aaaaaaa..I mean…mera matlab hai ki…bahut raat ho gayi hai…tum itni raat ko akele jaoge to mera dhyaan laga rahega…aur phir tumhare paas to car bhi nahin hai…
S:don't worry chashmish ill manage.
Saying so samrat moves towards the door but only then gunjan speaks up…
G: samrat pls! plss aaj mat jao…I..i need u.
Gunjan's words leave samrat still…for the first time in the past three years she called him back…she accepted that she needed him…there was no way samrat wud have not agreed to her tonite…he turns around n slightly nods to her that he wont leave…making gunjan smile.
Scene shift(MN in kitchen):
Both mayank and nupur are preparing their respective dishes n obviously more than cooking they r busy in arguing with each other…
N:mr sadu zara woh dhaniya pass karna…

M:jisse chahiye woh khud aakar le sakta hai…

N:by god...itna besharam insaan maine apni lyf mein kabhi nahin dekha…

M(moving her closer holding her thru her waist):aur dekho gi bhi nahin….

As mayank kept his hands around nupur's waist...for a moment she felt as if a wave of current ran thru her body…n she is totally lost in an eye lock with mayank…
M:miss verma mujhe aise hi dekhti rahogi to…to tumhein bhi mujhse pyaar ho jayega…aur waise bhi main tumhein pehle hi warn kar doon…nupur naam ki ladkiyon ko mujhse bahut jaldi pyaar ho jata hai..by god!😳
hearing his words nupur is left...😲😲😲
N(showing him the knife in her hand):dekho mr bahut hogaya tumhara drama…chup chap mujhe chod do warna…
M:warna????
N:warna..warna main isi chaku se tumhara murder kardoongi…
M:nahin kar sakti!
N:kya!! Tum ye baar baar mujhe dhamki kya dete rahte ho ki main ye nahin kar sakti woh nahin kar sakti…main sab kuch kar sakti hoon samjhe…
M:I know par abhi mera murder nahin kar sakti…kyunki main abhi paneer ki sabzi banane wala hoon…tumhari favourite….
N:kya???paneer!!!!…wowwwwwwwww…but strange haan agar mujhe koi dish pasand naa hoti to main to use kabhi na banati…lekinnn ek minute…tumhein kaise pata ki mujhe paneer pasand hai???
M:mujhe nahin pata…meri nupur ko paneer bahut pasand thi…isliye laga ho sakta hai tumhein bhi pasand ho…par tumhein kaise pata ki mujhe paneer pasand nahin hai???
Nupur is left shocked to hear his words…
N:woh…woh main…haannnn mera ek dost tha…bilkul tumhare jaisa….SADUUU NAKCHIDA…use bhi paneer bilkul pasand nahin thi…isliye I was sure ki tumhein bhi paneer bilkul pasand nahin hogi…
M:achcha???
N:ab yeh bhi kya prove kar ke dikhaoon!!!…by god I wonder tumhari patni tumhare jaise sadu insaan ke saath kaise rahti hogi!!
M:simple…ek baar mere saath rah ke dekhlo…apne aap samajh aa jayega…
His words n the floor beneath nupur's feet slips for a moment…he said sumthing which was equally beautiful n equally painful for her…she is just left still luking deep into his eyes…
SG:
Both samrat and gunjan are sitting in the dining hall waiting for mayank n nupur.gunjan suddenly notices samrat pressing his fingers against his forehead again n agin…seeing him do so she gets up n goes to him…
G:bahut dard ho raha hai kya??
S:nahin to…I am ok chashmish(gives a lil smile)
G:main balm laga deti hoon…
Hearing her words samrat feels a lump in his throat…she still cares for him so much…his slightest of pains n she turns all worried…
S:uski koi zaroorat nahin hai chashmish...halka sa dard hai…theek ho jayega…
G:balm laga doongi to jaldi theek ho jayega.
Saying so gunjan goes inside without listening to him to get the balm n samrat is left mum.after a few minutes gunjan comes out with the balm...and asks samrat to rest his head on the sofa.

Samrat follows the same. Within a few seconds samrat feels her warm fingers massaging his forehead gently. Three years had passed since samrat felt gunjan's touch on him...this was surely the most beautiful moment of his lyf in these three years.As gunjan continues to massage his head…samrat felt his pain washing away on its own…to him the mere touch of her warm fingers seemed therapatic enough to cure his headache.
S:bas chashmish mera dard ab kafi theek hai…
G:r u sure???
S:hmmmm…tum jakar mayank aur nupur ki help karo…main ab theek hoon.
G:theek hai…(saying so she turns around towards the kitchen)
S:chashmishhhh…
G:haan…
S:thnx…for the..for the balm….
Gunjan nods her head to samrat with a lil smile…n he turns around from her…
G:samrat…
S:haan…
G:thnx…for..for everything…

her words n samrat is left all spellbound lost into her eyes
Scene shift(mayank nupur samrat and gunjan on the dining table having dinner)
N:waise mr sadu aur gunjan its so strange haan…tum dono mujhe apni patni aur apni behen batate ho…but tum dono khud hi use contradict bhi karte ho…main sach mein kabhi tumhari patni ya tumhari behen nahin ho sakti….
Mayank n gunjan r shocked to hear gnupur's words…
M:matlab???
N:matlab ye mr sadu ki main tum dono ki kabhi kuch nahin lag sakti…kyunki main tum dono ki tarah itni emotionless nahin hoon….
G:kya!!! Emotionless???di tum ye kya kah rahi ho???

N:aur nahin to kya…I mean I cant believe ki tumne apni di aur mr sadu tumne apni patni ki death ki saza apne hi dost ko di!!!! Tum dono ne bina kisi galti ke use doshi karar kar diya????? UNBELEIVABLE!!! Ek baar bhi nahin socha ki use kaisa feel hoga??? I mean ab tum dono hi dekho…tumhari nupur ko mare teen saal ho gaye…tum dono ne samrat ko teen saal tak nupur ki death ka zimmedar mana par phir bhi woh tumhare saath hai…tum dono ko uske liye thoda sa bhi bura feel nahin hota????
Nupur's words peirce thru gunjan and mayank's heart lyk needles…suddenly after three years for the first time gunjan realizes how much pain she has given to samrat. her eyes r left all teary…n she is not able to look into nupur's eyes…
G:main...main abhi aati hoon..
S:chashmish…
M:nupur ye sab abhi kehna zaroori tha kya???
N:haan…tumhein nahin lagta ki tumhari saali sahiba jitni jaldi sach ko apna le utna hi achcha hoga…sach bhale hi pehle kadwa lage par at the end ye uski khushi ke liye hi hai….
Somehow mayank understood what nupur meant to do…n again his belief was becoming more n more strong...he knew she is his nupur only.
M:okk ab dinner to hogaya…miss verma if u don't mind to ek walk ho jaye???
N:walk????

M:haan walk…kyun dar gayi kya…kahin phir se mujhse pyaar na ho jaye?

N:by god…tum kabhi flirt karne se baaz nahin aa sakte na…main kisi se nahin darti…chalo jahan chalna hai.

Saying so nupur n mayank go out for a walk in the small garden in front of mayank's house.

While samrat is left alone in the dining room. first he thinks to go n talk 2 gunjan but then realizes that giving her some time alone wud be the best option…so he goes inside the bedroom…
Scene shift(mn in garden…its getting all cloudy):
M:waise nupur…u know mujhe believe nahin hota…
N:kis baat par???
M:yehi ki tum ek dancer ho…
N:ab ismein yakeen na karne wali kya baat hai???
M:nahin but generally jo log dance mein dilchaspi rakhte hain woh bahut he sweet aur innovative hote hain...u know bahut hi artistic …but tummm…

N:tumhara matlab kya hai hunnn…???mere jaisa dance pure bollywood mein koi nahin kar sakta!
M:ho sakta hai…par tum mere saath dance kabhi nahin kar sakti…mujhse steps milana…nope its not ur cup of tea!!!
N:KYA!!!! Kya kaha tumne…not my cup of tea!!…to theek hai aaj main bhi to dekhun aisa kaunsa dance aata hai tumhein…come on dance with me…

Saying so she takes out her hand in front of him.
suddenly it begins to rain as well…

N:chalo karo mere saath dance …dar gaye kya????
Mayank has a wide spread on his lips….
M:nahin…
Saying so mayank keeps his hand on nupur's and grabs her in his arms….the rain becomes even fiercer making them drenched completely n both of them dance heavenly with their eyes locked into each other…
SG:
Nupur's words finally make gunjan realize that whatever samrat may have done three years back but treating him like that was surely wrong on her part.She really feels guilty for her behavior towards him…trying to control her feelings she realizes that she must go n talk to samrat.

She wipes her tears and goes towards the bedroom.Samrat hasn't slept yet but hearing the sound of her footsteps he closes his eyes n pretends to sleep.
Seeing him fallen asleep gunjan enters the room…she is totally mesmerized seeing him sleep like this…like a cute innocent baby…
Gunjan goes n sits near samrat.She thinks that he is deep asleep.
G(softly…n slightly moving her fingers in his hair): I am…I am sorry samrat…pls mujhe maaf kardo...maine…maine tumhein bahut dard diya na…tumne hamesha mera saath diya…hamesha meri khushi chahi...par maine…maine us samay tumhara saath chod diya…jab…jab tumhein meri sabse zyaada zaroorat thi.mujhe maaf kardo samrat…pls mujhe maaf kardo…(saying all this her throat feels all chocked up…it seems difficult for her to say anything else…)
N a lone tear escapes thru the corner of her eye…
G:but i..i promise samrat ab main sab kuch theek kardoongi…I ll make everything alrite samrat...ill make everything alrite...

Saying so gunjan bends and softly kisses samrat's forhead with affection n moves out of the room. as she goes out…samrat opens his eyes…a bright smile shining on his lips…n blows a flying kiss towards the heaven.

Thats it guys...pls tell how were my innovative scenes.waiting for ur feedback.😊

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Posted: 15 years ago
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awesome scene dear i loved it alot plzzzzzzzzzz do write more on MN scenes
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Posted: 15 years ago
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thnx dear...😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: achoose

aesome scene dear..loved it..........



thnx so much dear...glad dat u liked it...feels so gud.😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: zarfishan1983

awesome scene dear i loved it alot plzzzzzzzzzz do write more on MN scenes



awww thnx so much dear for such a touching feedback...so happy dat u kiked it...i ll try 2 write more😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sanjay01

Awesome yaar plz continue



thnx a ton dear.though i didnt intent it to write more but if everyone will lyk it ill surely continue😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: mayadika11

awesooome..

very nice loved it........



thnx so much mayadika(i hope dats ur real name)...its so nyc to see ur feedback everytime i write something...thnx sooo much for ur constant motivation yr...it feels so gr8.luv ya...😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWW......awsome 1 .....plzzz do write more!...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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i loved it....sajan scenes were fantastic
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Posted: 15 years ago
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awsum.... kash is show k directors wud hv been as innovative as u... kash aise scenes show me ho jaen... it wud b so much fun.... gr8 job.....

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