Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 43

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Posted: 14 years ago
You have captured Maan's frustration beautifully in this piece....i see it shouting out in the entire update. Thanks....I so badly wanted an update strictly from his perspective...trying to delve into why he does what he does, and says what he says. Maan is a man of total control, yet he cannot control his feeling for her.....and as much as that irks him, he has finally admitted to himself that he cares for her...he wants her.....and in his mind he has crossed this huge mountain...only to get rejection form her....no way...that's unacceptable!!!




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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

Di yeh aapnay kya kardiya? 🤢 i am speechless!!! I was restless this whole day......whole flippin day.....i worked out for a hour and a half at the gym.....came home ate dinner....and then 2 hours later i ran outside for another half and hour.....AND I AM STILL RESTLESS!! Now came back and noticed that u had updated....and read ur scene and now i am even more restless!!!!😭

I think i need to go run more......but it is late already.......it is 9 pm!! maybe i should do crunches!!! By the way di, i almost fell off of the treadmill today!! 😆 I was running and then suddenly my ipod started to play the original background score of Maaneet.....and so i closed my eyes for a second and saw Maan wink at me!!! I lost my balance a little.....but i grabbed a hold of the handles in front of me and prevented myself from falling!!! Wink??? whatever lets not go into that!!!😆 I just think that my mind is all turned upside down.....

now to ur scene (sigh) it was just (i need to drink water so i can stop myself from screaming outloud)😆


just beautiful!!!! I loved everything about it.......Maan's perspective......was just.....excellent! It made perfect sense of what was going on in his mind!!! Di now i am suspicious....are u sure u didn't make the characters of maan and geet?? 😲
Everything was just mind blowing........all the way till the end.......i was going crazy.....when i finished i sighed extremely loud and just sat on my seat with my left hand on my head......just running through everything that u had wrote....seeing every image of what u have written!!! lolz then i shook my head screaming DIIIIII!!! I am telling u i will die early!!! (lets just hope not) I can't believe that u think u will fall flat on ur face!!! More like every time i end up falling flat on my face when i read ur scenes!!! I am the one who gets anxious nervous hoping that i won't croak....or hoping i won't break my jaws with the constant blushing......every time i read ur scene i go crazy.....craving for more wanting more.....reading it over and over again!! Tryin to capture everything that u have written and just play in my head......this is what ur scenes do to me.....it drives me insane! Di aapka yeh magical scene mujhe pagal kardega......more like pagal kardiya!!! I can't believe i asked for more...😆especially even though i know what happens to me after i am done reading it....

I go into some unknown land......i get soooo quiet.....u get me thinkin Di......😆
wow......di u really really are an amazing, mindblowing, magnificent, awesome writer!!! U r rocking!!! U capture everything in ur writing and just make it beautiful as ever!!
U r just amazing and very expressive with ur words that it touches my heart in such a way that i can't even imagine!!!

No i am not buttering up anythin i am truly saying this from the bottom of my heart!!! My heart is just going extremely restless.....isn't working out supposed to calm a person down?? Here i am still going nuts....why isn't it helping me?? Hell i worked out an extra 30 mins....and then another extra 30 mins....after dinner.......i ran with flip flops.......almost tripped a couple of times 😆 lucky didn't fall.....it was dark the streets.....then i dropped my cell phone because it slipped out of my pocket.....so i had to hold my ipod and cell in my hands and run back home like that!!! 😭

Thanks for an amazing.....amazing....amazing scene di!!! U totally totally rock......keep it up....u have it in u.....there is no way that u should be anxious and nervous.......we need good writers......and u just have that talent......and so show if off!!!! Show it off well....why hide it right??? 😉

Oh man.....i wish i can continue....but right now my head itches soooo much after that last run....i got bit by a couple of mosquitoes.....i am going to jump into the shower and wash my hair!!!!!😆

But di, u just keep on writing whenever u can.....i and many others are always ready to read ur awesome scenes!!! ⭐️
u r a true rockstar......so keep rocking those magical hands......and keep the smile on ur beautiful face....and with that smile keep shining like a star!!!! ⭐️

love
-Shivani!!!!






Shivani...there is one positive in all this madness.....kum se kum...Maan ki waje se ..you will be as fit as afiddle with all this extra exercise!!!😆
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

madam nags..where is your post for today..
now i have to go out...do write something..will come back and comment...




Maan has left me so in awe today with the Ghena scenes...that meri tau BOLTI hi BAND HOGAYI....kya karoon?? I cannot for any coherent thoughts................I am like a blabbering teenager in LOVE!!!! Help me!!
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ shivani..

your reply is as long as my post..wow..i am amazed at what you right..
first magical now i am a rock star..i am laughing her thinking of myself..as Elvis Presley..hee hee

i agree with Nags on the fit as a fiddle because of Maan and ..your fingers also seem to be getting..exercise because of me... ;-)

thank you so much for your comments..i know thank you is actually too inadequate..however..i hope you understand what i am trying to say...for an expressive person otherwise..my fingers stop trying to find better words..

now stop being a disaster zone..but then i am one..so...i know what happens to you...

@Nags..well after all the discussion we had..i have better work hard is it not boss.. ;-)

do tell me if i did justice with your expectations..
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Posted: 14 years ago


thank you so much...happinezz...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: rushtrip

@ shivani..

your reply is as long as my post..wow..i am amazed at what you right..
first magical now i am a rock star..i am laughing her thinking of myself..as Elvis Presley..hee hee

i agree with Nags on the fit as a fiddle because of Maan and ..your fingers also seem to be getting..exercise because of me... ;-)

thank you so much for your comments..i know thank you is actually too inadequate..however..i hope you understand what i am trying to say...for an expressive person otherwise..my fingers stop trying to find better words..

now stop being a disaster zone..but then i am one..so...i know what happens to you...

@Nags..well after all the discussion we had..i have better work hard is it not boss.. ;-)

do tell me if i did justice with your expectations..



You did great justice....met all of my expectations....were you in a rush for this update...i see a couple subject verb tense mix ups...nothing major....but just wanted to make you aware..the perfectionist that you are..

What we discussed is similar yet different the the promo...have you seen it...here is the link:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iwXq1WBgmoo
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Posted: 14 years ago
Di.......i know wat u mean no need to say anymore!!! But being a disaster zone.....is my middle name as it is....lolz after replying to ur post i had to go down to get my bottle filled up with more water....cause i drink water like crazy...as i was going i almost fell.....thank god for my brother....he grabbed me from my shirt...cause at night I wear huge shirts they are comfy 😆😳....thank the shirt too then i guess!!!
😳
his exact words "why do i always have to catch u doing something stupid"😆

well i washed my hair and showered!!! No more workout for today now i will relax and rewatch the episode after replyin to u again!! 😉


then i will watch it again with my mom when she comes from work!! 😳😆
She loves the show too!! 😊

but truly di, i don't mind writing soooo much for u because u deserve it.....if u can entertain us with such awesome scenes i can entertain u with my daily teen gossip and stupidity 😆 and then of course me just yapping!! 😉


Nargis.....hmmm i guess u r right....i will be fit a benefit for me....😆 will help me out in the long run!!! Maybe tomorrow morning i will meditate!! It might help me make my mind mine again!!! These days my mind and heart belongs to Maaneet....so i can't control it!!! 😆

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: mysterygurl1427

Di.......i know wat u mean no need to say anymore!!! But being a disaster zone.....is my middle name as it is....lolz after replying to ur post i had to go down to get my bottle filled up with more water....cause i drink water like crazy...as i was going i almost fell.....thank god for my brother....he grabbed me from my shirt...cause at night I wear huge shirts they are comfy 😆😳....thank the shirt too then i guess!!!
😳
his exact words "why do i always have to catch u doing something stupid"😆

well i washed my hair and showered!!! No more workout for today now i will relax and rewatch the episode after replyin to u again!! 😉


then i will watch it again with my mom when she comes from work!! 😳😆
She loves the show too!! 😊

but truly di, i don't mind writing soooo much for u because u deserve it.....if u can entertain us with such awesome scenes i can entertain u with my daily teen gossip and stupidity 😆 and then of course me just yapping!! 😉


Nargis.....hmmm i guess u r right....i will be fit a benefit for me....😆 will help me out in the long run!!! Maybe tomorrow morning i will meditate!! It might help me make my mind mine again!!! These days my mind and heart belongs to Maaneet....so i can't control it!!! 😆



I wish I had as much time and energy to devote to the GYM too...for i need to so badly!!!😊
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis



I wish I had as much time and energy to devote to the GYM too...for i need to so badly!!!😊



don't wish....just go for it!!! 😉 if u make time for it.....u can!!! try!! it is really good for u.....u become more energetic....and aware.....but i don't think the "aware" part will work on us....since we are just always thinkin about Maaneet.😭
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Posted: 14 years ago

If only letting go were that easy..continued from earlier..

Only If...You Want to

He held on to the dupatta, not letting go. She tugged a bit more at the dupatta to be free and he pulled her close using her dupatta as a link between them.

She said, "Let me go, Maan!" with a catch in her voice. He pulled her close, her back almost touching his chest and asked in a whisper, "Only if...you answer me!"

"What do you want to know, What do you want to know now! Why don't you leave me alone!" she whimpered almost at the end of her tether. Her mind was screaming her to run but legs were not supporting.

He came closer and muttered, "Why do you look away, Geet, why do you walk away when I ask you personal questions? I know you feel something, I can see, but why don't you tell me Geet!" he frowned as he knew he needed to solve this puzzle he saw. He knew it but there was something troubling her. He wanted to get to the bottom of that.

She said, "Nothing, I don't feel anything Maan, you are my boss and I work here nothing more."

"You are lying!" he accused. "Why do you cower away from this?" he turned to him, lifting in her chin the same way he had done a few minutes back. She kept on looking to the ground stubbornly.

"Look at me Geet, why do you get affected when I am near you. Why? How long are you going to run away from me, this, what we have?" he asked in a husky murmur, letting her know that she affected him as well, that every time they were in the same room, he could not take his eyes off her. But she turned her back to him. Every time she was close to him, all he wanted to do was take her in his arms, he thought and letting the feeling take me over, he put his arms around her waist from behind her and pulled her close. Tilting her head on his shoulder, he rubbed his stubble from her neck to her cheek, then kissing her cheek, then ear.

He whispered, "See what you do to me! See what happens to you! Now tell me you want to deny this between us!"

Geet closed her eyes and whimpered, a cry of surrender. She felt herself go weak. She put her hands on his to remove them, but instead felt a jolt run from his hands to hers that reached her deep within.

"Oh!" she muttered. "Let me go, Maan!" but her voice lacked conviction. Her body betrayed her. She knew she needed to be strong but her heart was giving in. she turned then in his arms and put her hands around his neck, letting her head lie in the crook of his neck and shoulders and she held him close to her.

"Geet!" he breathed her name, "Give in to me, say it Geet!" as he held her close, letting her hear the rhythm of his heart that seemed in sync with hers.

She came to her senses and sprang out of his arms with a jerk.

"I can't!" she screamed "I can't!" as she ran from him, putting her hand on her stomach.

He let his outstretched arm stay that way for a minute and told himself.

"You can, Geet, you can, Only if'you want to..!" he murmured behind her with determination even stronger than before to make her say it.

Only If' Enya

When there's a shadow near, reach for the sun
When there is loving here, look for the one
And for the promises, there is the sky
And for the heavens are those who can fly


If you really want to, you can hear me say
Only if you want to will you find a way
If you really want to you can seize the day
Only if you want to will you fly away


When there's a journey to follow the star
When there's an ocean to sail to far
And for the broken hearts there is the sky
And for tomorrow are those who can Fly

Bridge:
Je voudrais voler, comme un oiseau d'ailleurs
(bis) d'ailleurs

Translation (I want to fly like a bird indeed)

Edited by rushtrip - 14 years ago

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