Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 36

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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: amrita2010

oh! my g.ggggGod!!
This is heavenly 👏
I read all your Maneet scenes and omg, this is way too hot to handle, I really need my AC to chill me...so freaking hot and sexy..I know some bits of these won't happen in Hindi soaps, but at least to read this about Maneet isn't a small thing...Thanks alot for these Maneet scenes, and if you can pls pm me too 😊



ah amrita..

we all know..that those eye locks are the kisses...and that is as much as we are going to get..most of the time..now a hug is nice to see that they have progressed.. but i hope to see some sizzling scenes even without the eye lock..cos it can be done..and they showed how Nissar can play with angle to show us that standing one foot apart..he can make it look like they are walking over each other...

i hope..they do...the kiss...there's always a first...
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Posted: 14 years ago

Vrush, did I forget to ask you your pms ? please add me if possible, am as addicted to your posts as this serial...

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Posted: 14 years ago
@mahi...so sweet of you to use these emoticons..i so dont have the patience to find and use them... i use words to express..kaam chala leti hoon..shabdon..se..even tho i know most ppl are visual...

i loved the bye one..it is so cute..made me smile..

@ shivani...you are officially declared as a crackpot like me..i thot i was the only clumsy, absent minded character around..who puts the potato in the fridge, drops everything as i have butter fingers, cuts myself, bumps into things and when makes food forgets to serve it...

i thot that was the heights...i made idli sambhar and rice, i served the idli sambhar but forgot the rice and hubby asked, rice nahi banaya? and i said, banaya hai na, but this conversation took place after almost completing lunch..is it any use?

have become useless..i keep getting glares from him for mooning around...i forgot seems to be my latest litany...

@Sonu - ah girl warning..dena mera kaam tha...i am glad you did not pay heed to it... ;-)

@happinezz... i was just going thro the M&B thread a couple of days back and smiled at the scene i wrote for you and nargis..i think it was the tent one... and was reminiscing..how this journey of writing small scenes to saga..happened... it is you all you made me...realise my potential..thank you..

@Jes..hey girl..good to know weekend mein.meine help kiya... ;-) who am i kidding..sab kuch to Maan karta hai... we just walked this earth...thanking god for a man in our life called Maan...




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Posted: 14 years ago

@SHIV - I too have become too absent minded- other day I wore home slippers to office and ended up wearing the pyjamas inside out EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed....I am sooo lost thinking about Maaneet , IF and Vroom's writing or what is gonna happen next ki pata hi nahi kya kar rahi hoon 😕😕..
Yea, becoz of Vroom, me too running towards dictionary!!!We will search together 😆😆..
No words to describe her writings AngryAngry and now she has made me a writer.. Imagine writing lengthy replies cos she inspires us and her posts just invites atleast a tweeny weeny comment which blows in full scale rambling post - reminds me of this line in teri deewa ni -Mohe sudh budh naa rahi tan mann ki ...Yeh toh jaane duniya saari
..First Maaneet and now Vroom!! Kya kar rahe ho yaar
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Posted: 14 years ago

Statutory Warning in effect..not for the weak hearted.. ;-)

Undress me

Maan had come to a pause when he had come to complain about Geet to Daadima, but the object of his thought standing there resplendent in red, looking like a bride that had walked out of his dreams and in front of him. He had halted, but his heartbeat had skyrocketed. He had felt like he had a tunnel-vision, only seeing her, the rest had faded to background. He knew what he thought the minute he had seen her in Daadi's room. He was mesmerized by her beauty, captivated by her look and enthralled by the vision she created of a bride, his bride.

He wanted to take her in his arms but he felt his feet were cemented. He wanted to touch her to confirm that she was not a mirage, a trick his eyes played on him but there living breathing Geet, whom he had fallen desperately in love with.

Just when he had convinced himself that she was real and wanted to go to her, she had fled like the very demons were behind her. Left him, standing there to muse on what he wanted to do.

He went to the outhouse, searching for Geet, who looked a vision and still wanted to take in his fill. He went up the stairs, in anticipation of what he would see, her dressed in red, with jewelry has got its radiance from her beauty. Daadima's jewelry never looked so intriguing. The seemed to sparkle like her eyes. They seemed to wink at him with every breath she took, calling him to them. He reached the bedroom doors, he stood there at the threshold almost turning back for propriety demanded that he not enter her bedroom, but the vision beckoned, pulling him in. he moved in trance, enraptured and lost in her dream, with a dream to see his bride.

She was sitting in front of the mirror, trying to remove her earring. She seemed to be struggling with it as the bolt refused to budge. He went up to her in slow motion, enjoying her struggle, for she was trying to do his job, what he had envisioned. He had seen their wedding night, him undressing her, with his eyes and hands that were unsteady but sure.

He stood behind her and she upturned her face, the frown got deeper in question on finding him there. He lifted his head in silent question and then went on his knees with his intention to help clear.

He gently took her hand away, relieving her of her job. He took over what he had wanted to do ever since he has seen her in this garb. He traced a finger on the earring first one then the other. From where it started in her hair to her ear to the very end near her shoulder. He saw her squirm but not in abhorrence but in invitation; to touch her body and soul with a tilt of her head, with intake of her breath and slight parting of her lips as she closed her eyes.

He whispered to her "open your eyes, I want to see you see me." She slowly opened her eyes and murmured, "Why are you torturing me like this. First the earring, now you. Why do I have to struggle when you seem so calm."

He retorted with a laugh, "Calm? My hands are trembling Geet, at the thought of your soft skin, Can I ever forget the feel of your skin as I had put the earring that night?" he pulled her down from the stool sit on the floor in front of him her back against the dresser, explaining, "You don't need the mirror, you can look in my eyes, see what you do to me as I remove these."

He slowly unscrewed the earring, holding her lobe, as if she were made of porcelain and if he was too swift, she would break. Once, he had the earring free, he removed the link from her hair and without breaking the eye lock he put the piece on the dresser. He felt her ragged breath leave her as he leaned close, he tucked her hair behind her ear like he had done a few times before.

"Geet, did I hurt you?" he softly asked her.

She simply shook her head but lifted her hand to try and work on her other earring.

"Unh Unh! No," taking her hand away and putting it in her lap. He bent to continue his ministrations on the other ear. This time he could not resist tracing a finger on her cheek as he slowly removed the earring and putting it away. She again closed her eyes and he pulled on her ear to see her open her eyes with a jolt.

"I told you not to close your eyes." He teased giving a lopsided smile. She looked down to hide the feelings his smile evoked. He put a finger under her chin, to lift it up till she looked into his eyes and traced her lips in retaliation of not following his orders. Geet sucked in her breath and said, "Enough, I will do the rest. It was the earring giving me trouble, now I can handle it."

He laughed at himself, "Ha! what about me Geet, how do I handle it? Do you think seeing you like that, like a bride was not a torture in itself? Do you think you could give me a glimpse and not follow through?"

Geet flustered gets up to run away, but he leaps up to his feet and pulls her holding her wrist. She is pulled back into him with her back to him. Her arm is twisted behind her, between them. She looks over the right shoulder to ease the hold and into his eyes, pleading him to leave her and let her go. His left hand on her waist halts her writhing. He bends with his mouth near her ear and breathes, "This is for trying to run away from me."

She winces as his right hand twists her wrist a bit to get her to comply and with his left hand, he removes the tikka from her hair and dangles in front of her. "This is not needed right now, all you need on your forehead is this," saying he drops a light kiss on her forehead. Geet was shocked and puts her head back against his shoulders in reflex. She felt herself go tender inside, like a jelly pliant at his touch, unable to stop the shiver and wriggle in need even when he was not gentle.

Maan traced the fingers of his left hand along her jaw and let them follow the line of her throat to the base of neck. Geet succumbed to the torture letting out a moan, "Maan," she breathed as her mind whirled out of control. He let them travel between the valley of her breast to reach the pendant of the necklace and lifted it up and over her head slowly not disturbing her hair. He let go of her wrist and turned her around. Putting the necklace away, he ran his hands up her arms, over her shoulders, to cup her face.

He sighed, "Now you look real to me Geet, you look like my Geet. The jewelry look good on you, but I find you more beautiful just as you are."

He then smiled at her, turned and left the room.

Undress me - Anggun

When I can't see right in your eyes
When I'm surrounded in the craziness of time
When you're understanding, is trying hard to stand still
When I wear layers of my pride, you should

Undress me, undress me
Unlock this chain and set me free
Remind me to be myself
Undress me, undress me
Unleash my heart and make me see
When I become someone else

Whenever I'm trapped in this tide
When I forgotten that there is you and I
When your persuasion is fighting in a blindfold
when I wear my bad moods to my mouth, you should

Undress me, undress me
Unlock this chain and set me free
Remind me to be myself, myself
Undress me, undress me
Unleash my heart and make me see
When I become someone else

Like a rose without its thorn
Like a bird without a song
Like the fire without the flame
If there's a painless love, we wouldn't be the same

Undress me, undress me
Unlock this chain and set me free
Remind me to be myself, my self
Undress me, undress me
Unleash my heart and make me see
When I become someone else

Undress me, undress me
Unlock this chain and set me free
Remind me to be myself
Undress me, undress me
Unleash my heart and make me see

Edited by rushtrip - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
Wow...Vrush..tremendous.......what a scene...my breathing is still uneven.....too good. Loved his ministrations...they were so painstakingly slow.... so much lure in the run of his fingers....poor Geet...what simple pleasure and torture all rolled into one. Most of your scenes start from Maan's perspective and end on Geets perspective.

I would love to read a full scene....fully in Maan's perspective....as if i am in his head and his heart during a scene...what say ho jaye???
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh Vru.........why o why...the CVs....dont follow thru wit a scene like u do.............. 😍😍😍😍😍😍😍 Aww man..m in dreamland...😳
N gosh...u torture us wit that ending of urs.....😭 me want more.. yeh dil mange more.........😈
Superb epi...just too good...n ur a magician wit words....👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 lub u...
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi Vrushali ....u gave me goosebumps yaar .....oooo i love this Maan who cant seem to control himself when it comes to Geet

.....He sighed, "Now you look real to me Geet, you look like my Geet. The jewelry look good on you, but I find you more beautiful just as you are."

just plain lovely Vrushali ....cant praise u enough ....gone to Maaneet land ...will see u there 😃
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Posted: 14 years ago
@ Armu
hey girl...thank you...and i am speechless..actually...i dont know what to say...except the same ghise pitte words...love it that you love it..

@Jes...yeah join me...i am already there... i have a club going..which is all Maan ki diwwani.....who cant stop from going ooh and aah...at his every move
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: AKANargis

Wow...Vrush..tremendous.......what a scene...my breathing is still uneven.....too good. Loved his ministrations...they were so painstakingly slow.... so much lure in the run of his fingers....poor Geet...what simple pleasure and torture all rolled into one. Most of your scenes start from Maan's perspective and end on Geets perspective.

I would love to read a full scene....fully in Maan's perspective....as if i am in his head and his heart during a scene...what say ho jaye???



Ah i try to give both...but..as you wish my aka..

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