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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: rockin_gal

OMG soumya this was a brilliant update!!! i luvd evry bit of it... & this part -->
("chod dijiye. Aap hi bahut bada cartoon hai, aap dusre cartoons ko kya dekhenge!" she said laughing away when she saw Jerry hitting Tom with a hammer.
"Geet!" he yelled.
"Haan, yahi hoon aur ab tak mera naam geet hi hai. Chillaeye mat. Kaam kijiye, kaam!" she said and continued watching.
Maan wanted to hit her with something for not allowing him to work in peace and then his phone rang. He saw daadima calling him, "bas inhi ki kami thi" he thought and answered)
seriously this part was just extremely hilarious 🤣 🤣 i also liked geets confession but i wanna see maan confess 2 lyk him actually sayin tht he luvs her.. 😳 😍
Ur simply fantastic hun .. so i think there r enough comments now so itz tym 4 u 2 give another brilliant update 😛 .. im waitin... 😊



hi sweety,

thanks honey...for picking ur fav dialogues and scenes..!! makes me feel so good.... 😛

and thanks for the compliments..... and yes, the next update is up.....!!!!

soumya

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: love_lavnya

Hey soumya,

U r ff is always rocks !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
but when u update the next part we are waiting form long time
pls update soon yaar can't wait at this stage of u r ff



hi,

thanks a ton dear...!!! sorry was a bit slow today, cos i was not well...!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
OMG awesome update!!! Loved it and really looking forward to the next update!! ❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: desigurl953

Part 2

Geet shot him an angry look and switched on the TV. She changed the channel to cartoon network and started watching "Tom and Jerry". She was laughing her life out and maan looked at her surprised and then at the TV, when he realized she was watching cartoons. He smiled at her childish nature and got to work again.
"Maan, aap ko cartoons pasand hai" she asked not taking her eyes off the TV.
"Kya?" he asked not looking at her.
"chod dijiye. Aap hi bahut bada cartoon hai, aap dusre cartoons ko kya dekhenge!" she said laughing away when she saw Jerry hitting Tom with a hammer.
"Geet!" he yelled.
"Haan, yahi hoon aur ab tak mera naam geet hi hai. Chillaeye mat. Kaam kijiye, kaam!" she said and continued watching.
Lol!!!!!!Cartoons??Tom and Jerry??Geet is too cute...aap hi bahut bada cartoon hai, dusre catoon ko kya dekhenge!!!!!! LOL Can't stop laughing!!!!!

Daadima heard geet's voice and said, "Maan, humne subeh mazaak kiye the, aapke shaadi aur honey moon ke bare mein. Kahi aap ne hamare baton ko seriously tuo nahi le li? Humare bina hi shaadi kar liya kya?"
Lol...dadima is the best at pulling Maan's leg....

"Tom and Jerry dekh rahi hai, aapko bhi dekhni hai, tuo aapke room mein TV switch on karke, tune to channel no 15", he said angrily.
"Oh! Mrs. Maan Khurana TV dekh rahi hai, isiliye Mr. Maan Khurana naraz hai?" she asked suppressing her laugh. 🤣

"aapko dusra chahiye tuo order kar sakti hoon", she said looking towards the phone.
"uski zaroorat nahi hai" he said turning her face and holding it with his other hand. He licked away the layer of the milkshake of her upper lips and her lips and said, "kar diya" and walked away.
Geet watched his back with her mouth wide open. He turned to look at her, asked, "Geet, are you offering me some more to taste?", and grinned at her when she shut her mouth.
She quietly sipped the rest of her milkshake without speaking a word. "sirf yeh, mujhe chup kara sakte hai" she said grumbling. I am just too dumb struck to say anything..... ⭐️

"Maan, if I'm going to the doctor I'm going at that same time, else I'm not!" she said stubbornly.
"Geet, are you still insecure? I told you I'm not going to fall for her, I'm already C-O-M-M-I-T-T-E-D", emphasizing on the last word.
"Are you coming at that time or not?" she asked almost getting teary because of her anger.
Maan sat on the bed and pulled her close and said, "Geet" he said softly, "kya hua? Ek meeting hi tuo hai. Why are you so scared? What can anybody do in broad day light?" and started laughing.
Omg Geet is cute but Maan is cuter..Love him...I really love it when he annoys her and she gets so annoyed....

She did not respond, she was too angry to. "Alright, future Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana, here we go!" he said sealing his lips on hers.
Geet tried to push him away when he said, "geet, the more you resist the more I'm going to kiss you! Trust me; you're not going to be able to get away".
Geet looked into his eyes and found them very playful. He held her even close and kissed her everywhere on her face, starting from her forehead to eyes, tips of her nose, cheeks and her lips. He turned her around, untied the dori of her kurti, and kissed her neck and her back. Geet closed her eyes and held onto his hand tightly. His lip touch had created a tingling sensation on her back and she was slowly losing control of herself like always. He hugged her tightly from behind and said very softly, "Geet, I'm never going to leave you for another woman. You can trust me on that one thing, blindly, Please!"
Getting hot in here.....someone bachao...switch on the A.C.... Someone switches it one....after 1 min...No....take me to the north pole!!!!!!! LOL

"Maan, I'm sorry for doubting you in the first place".
"No, I'm not hurt. I'm actually happy that you are so possessive".
"Kya karu, you are Maan Singh Khurana, saari ladkiya tumpe marte hai aur hamesha unki nazrein tumpe rehte hai".
"Lekin Maan Singh Khurana ke nazre hamesha geet ko dhoondte hai, aur geet ke liye hi hai", he said kissing her lips gently.I think I see two lovebirds who were meant to be....So understanding and funny

"accha ek baat batao, if at some point in life, you come across the man who cheated you, what will you do?"
"jhoote se marungi" she said.
Maan smiled, "geet, you're back to your usual self now. That's good!"
"aapka matlab, ghali dena mera usual self hai?" she retorted.
Maan gave her a "is it not obvious?" looks and she got angry again.
"Achha okay darling, I'm sorry! On a serious note, tell me what will you do?"
"I'll tell him a "thank you" ".
"Kya?"
"Haan, if not for him and his deception, how would I be standing in Maan Singh Khurana's arms today? If he had not left me, how would I meet you, how would I know you are my true soul mate and not that rogue".
"geet, no swearing. Mrs. Maan Singh Khurana ko aisi basha shobha nahi deti".
So happy to see that Geet has gotten over her past..the swearing part was hilarious


Di,if you want I can on and on telling you how much i love your update...Your entire update was just fab...loved it to the core...really love how they treat each other like they are married and dadi's constant pulling of Maan's lega nd him getting annoyed...don't ever stop doing that...

That is all for now,please update soon!!!
Love you...Bye



thanks honey... loved ur long comment... but u have to excuse me for today for not replying to ur comments in detail... i';m not well so i will not be able to cover each point...!!!!

but i absolutely loved every bit of it... 😛

glad u liked the update so much sweetehart., makes me feel so happy and proud that i make all of u smile with my updates...!!!!!

daadi is all set to pull geet's legs too......read on u'll know...!!! 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: cute-aly

Soumya

how r u. great update. really love maneet and thier all dialogues

dadi maa way of teasing is also tooo cute. daadi g tusi great ho


plzzz conti soon





hi,

i'm good /...!!!! how are u????? after a long long time....i get to read ur comments.....!!


thanks darling.. glad u liked it..!!!!
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Posted: 15 years ago
""Arre uth na pinky! Bahut zaroori baath hai". -

arrey utna pinky hum sab ka neend mannet ne kharab kar diya hai.. tum akele sote huye dekhkar acha nahi lagta 😃😃😃😃 and geet tum bhi na.. sab kuch bata diya pinky ko...

Dadi maa was awesome.. i liked their convo part a lot...kaash humein bhi aise dadi hote..

what happened to Maan today.. in a very cold mood.. raat ko teek hojayegi na ???... kya woh raat geet ke paas nahi jaaoge?..😭😭😭

I was waiting all day for your update :).. it came out well and it's a long one too.. thanks a bunch dear for the wonderful update :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
I enjoyed ur part Soumya🤗, it was superb, just love it a lot, Maaneet are soo cute😍 specially when Geet didnt mention Maan name but it was in her mind that she'll come to see him in office whenever bcoz they fall in love, lovely dear👏

**You know what Soumya, yday I read ur ff's from beginning😳, it took me half day but i enjoyed while reading it was like a novel for me🤗, my mother was shouting behind me but meine maana liya, i took some break and did housecores then start to read when i was free😉
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey di
Great update
Plz continue soon
Eagerly waiting for the next update
Nidhi
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey Sowmya wonderful update.. luved the naughty geet n dadi's teasing skills are gr8.... do continue soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hi nice update...it s wonderful n eagerly waiting to read ur ff..
frequently checking ur ff n getting upset wen their n no updation..
plzz update soon yaar...

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