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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys
Heres another OS on Armaan and Shlipa that i wanted to share with u guys. I hope u like it. Plz comment n press like . 😊

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10th grade
As I sat there in English class, I stared at the girl next to me. She was my so called "best friend". I stared at her long, silky hair, and wished she was mine. But she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it. After class, she walked up to me and asked me for the notes she had missed the day before and handed them to her. She said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I wanted to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

11th grade
The phone rang. On the other end, it was her. She was in tears, mumbling on and on about how her love had broke her heart. She asked me to come over because she didn't want to be alone, so I did. As I sat next to her on the sofa, I stared at her soft eyes, wishing she was mine. After 2 hours, one Drew Barrymore movie, and three bags of chips, she decided to go to sleep. She looked at me, said "thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Senior year
The day before prom she walked to my locker. My date is sick" she said; he's not going to go well, I didn't have a date, and in 7th grade, we made a promise that if neither of us had dates, we would go together just as "best friends". So we did. Prom night, after everything was over, I was standing at her front door step. I stared at her as she smiled at me and stared at me with her crystal eyes. I want her to be mine, but she isn't think of me like that, and I know it. Then she said "I had the best time, thanks!" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Graduation Day
A day passed, then a week, then a month. Before I could blink, it was graduation day. I watched as her perfect body floated like an angel up on stage to get her diploma. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't notice me like that, and I knew it. Before everyone went home, she came to me in her smock and hat, and cried as I hugged her. Then she lifted her head from my shoulder and said, "you're my best friend, thanks" and gave me a kiss on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

A Few Years Later
Now I sit in the pews of the church. That girl is getting married now. I watched her say "I do" and drive off to her new life, married to another man. I wanted her to be mine, but she didn't see me like that, and I knew it. But before she drove away, she came to me and said "you came!". She said "thanks" and kissed me on the cheek. I want to tell her, I want her to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love her but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why.

Funeral
Years passed, I looked down at the coffin of a girl who used to be my "best friend". At the service, they read a diary entry she had wrote in her high school years. This is what it read: I stare at him wishing he was mine, but he doesn't notice me like that, and I know it. I want to tell him, I want him to know that I don't want to be just friends, I love him but I'm just too shy, and I don't know why. I wish he would tell me he loved me! 'I wish I did too...' I thought to my self, and I cried.

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Contradiction01 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#2
Wow !
it was such an awesome OS !
and especially the end !
Tragic n sad but luved it !

Grt work !

Thanks for posting it !


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Posted: 15 years ago
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awwwwww😭
that was soo touching
nice one!
P.S:can you gimme the link to your first OS?
Edited by cupid-struck - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4
Really touching!
Awesome OS..awww man!

Loved it! <3
ritz.j thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#5
heyy! this is really nice!
i have read this love story somewhere before..bt i really like it :))
501675 thumbnail
Posted: 15 years ago
#6

yeah it was too touching

i was all sad when i red the end.

superb writing keep writing the good stories.


Edited by armaan_mallik - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: cupid-struck

awwwwww😭

that was soo touching

nice one!

P.S:can you gimme the link to your first OS?



yeh ..

http://india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=1456348
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Posted: 15 years ago
#8
omg!!! wonderful
i loved it...soo sad i wish he would have told her about his and they would have been together forever
plus she married thinking that he never liked her in that way!
i loved it soo much
thanks for the pm
love maleeha
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Posted: 15 years ago
#9
completely love ur oneshots...

Write more often...i just cant stop reading them repeatedly....so out of the world...

This was so touching....it so happens in real life....one is not able to speak up in order to not lose something between them unknown to the fact tht it is everything they ever wished for....


Love you for this os

Thanx for the pm
Write more soon

lotsa love
Kavya

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Posted: 15 years ago
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xxiheartmexx
cupid-struck
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ritz.j
armaan_mallik
funkybratz
dmg_fanatic


Thanku all ov u ... Love ya loadsss

Edited by Tia_0810 - 15 years ago

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