Maaneet Scene-Wishful Thinking & Mo Upd 9/09 p147 - Page 25

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Posted: 14 years ago
Aww... I really liked that one...
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Posted: 14 years ago
It did not happen but at least she knows he got it for her...nags saw the epi...but was too hazy and volume was too low..
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Posted: 14 years ago
😍
i am gone....don't know where maybe somewhere out in the universe...where is it just quiet ad nothing but memories and flashbacks of all of the Maaneet scenes that i have captured in my mind!!

Lovely, beautiful!!!! 😭 tears of happiness 😆!! Either ur scenes make me blush and crazy nervous......or like the XXX rated scene u had written just made me close my eyes for a second because of shyness.....and this time i had butterflies in my stomach.....especially when Maan just out of no where not caring hugged Geet from the back!! 😛
Oh yea i forgot to mention shivers.....goosebumps.......and i always am left dreaming!!😆😆😆
It was short and yet sooooooooo sweet and "magical" ⭐️

ur scenes make me believe in the fairy tale stories and movies i have grown up watching and probably many of us have cinderella....sleeping beauty....little mermaid ect...!! Even though geet's story is not really a fairy tale oh gosh no....pooor girl....but the prince charming that is written in her destiny brings it to be some wat of a fairy tale!!! perhaps when they get married i can use that term 😆😆 too soon right now😳...geet herself is a pretty princess!! 😛 Soon the prince and princess will be together!

Ur mascot?? Awesome would love to be!! i will grace ur posts from now on!!! 😳😳😳 It would be an honor to grace such a wonderful writer's post!!!👏

Ahhhhh ur scenes always leave us asking for more......😆 none of us can get enough of them!! 😉
But for now enjoy ur RI trip!!! Hope to see more....and will continue to give u my long long chappar chappar comments!! 😆 Ur awesome Vrush Di!! We all love u!❤️

-Shivani


Edited by mysterygurl1427 - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
i am back from my day..trip girl..so you can do all the chapar chapar..
and i officially hate iPad..well because i want to type away and that thing restricts me..well atleast i can read all the posts on the road..

so okay i dont hate it..but i dont like it either
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Posted: 14 years ago
Take On Me!

I have already done a scene on their marriage in my maaneet scenes M&B style..now I have been given an idea of contract marriage..or a marriage that is undergone not for each other's sake but for someone else's… this prompted by Nargis's post on will they marry before the past is out...a reply of sorts Nags..will post this in your post as well...
Daadi has been in hospital for last two days. She had been relieved to know that Maan's younger brother and his wife were looking after Daadima, so she had come home and went to check on Daadima twice a day. There was no sign of Maan. He seemed to have vanished. His cell was out of coverage. Daadima had gain consciousness intermittently she had been informed but her health was a bit more stable than before. She had held Dadima's hand as she had sat there, whispering to her to will herself back to health. She had cried seeing the pallid face, unmoving body except for the slight heaving as breath went in and came out.
She had been mooning around the outhouse the first evening, wandered and found the rose, had imagined maan right behind her near the window, holding her, kissing her. Today after two days the rose stayed on the dresser dried up like her tears but the pain in her heart refused to be lessened. Why had Maan gone away? Why when his Daadi needed him?
Thoughts whirred in her head as she paced the empty office after everyone had gone home. Her thoughts of her meetings with Maan, the way he always saved her from harm. Of their nearness, their banter, every word they spoke to each other came before her eyes like a favorite movie that played on a loop. She wanted to run away but something pulled her back. May be it was the promise she had made to the ailing lady on her sickness bed. But she knew it was the lure of those eyes, that haunted her night and day imploring her to walk to him without delay. She needed him so much but she refused herself the pleasure, of having him and holding him forever and ever.
Just as the litany was playing in her mind, she got the news from Nakul that daadi had come to and wanted to see her. She ran to the gates, caught a taxi and reached the hospital to learn that Daadi had just fallen asleep and the brother and his wife had gone home. She sat there, looking at daadi willing her to open her eyes. She had begged the nursing staff to stay with her as she had asked after her. Understanding the importance of the patient, the nurse had allowed.
Just when her eyes were drooping with sleep, she heard a whisper, a faint voice.
"Geet, usse chorke mat jaana, tumhi to uski umeed ki kiran ho, uski khushi ho. Tum usse chor ke mat jaana", she said opening her eyes slightly, looking at her. Geet went down on her knees her hear so that she could be at the level of her eyes. "mein yahin hoon Daadima. Aap aaram kare. Sab theek hoga."
"Tumne wada kiya hai mujhse, usse torna mat." She says with lot of strain. Geet nods in affirmation, her throat choked with emotion and tears streaming down her eyes. Just then maan enters. He comes to the other side of Dadima, takes her hand in one and puts a loving hand on her forehead and says, "Daadima, aap theek ho jaaye jaldi se bas, mein aur kuch nahi sunana chahta. Mein do din camping kya chala gaya, aap ne apni haalat aur bigad di." He looks at Geet accusingly, to let her know she was the reason for her being in the hospital. She was the one who wanted to go away and now daadi was ill because she could not stay to keep an old lady happy for few more days. She was the one, who proved she was selfish and willful without a care for anyone. Daadi had given her a job and home to stay and the ungrateful chit was paying her back for her kindness.
He almost ordered her to leave, but thought of daadima and kept silence. He threw daggers at Geet who seemed to shrivel under his gaze, pleading him silently to understand, to forgive her for wanting to go. Oh how was she to explain without baring her heart that it was for his good that she had to leave.
Daadima took Geet's hand and placed it in maan's before they could react. "Ab aap dono shaadi kar lo. Is budhi daadi ki aakhri iccha poori kar do. Maan, mein Geet ke baare mein tumhein keh rahi thi…." And she coughs… and her eyes tilt upwards as if she was going to lose consciousness.
Maan and Geet look at her and then each other and at their laced hands. They tried to extricate their hands but daadi had placed her hand on top. Maan said, "Daadi aap pehle theek ho jaayiye phir baat kareinge."
"Nahi, she stutters, mujhe wada karo, kal tum dono yahin hospital mein mere saamne shaadi karoge."
Maan and Geet stare at each other, stunned unable to respond. Daadi implores, "maan" and maan replies…."Haan Daadima , Haan, jaisa aap chahein.."

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Posted: 14 years ago
oh wowow love this dadi 😆😆
but poor her, she's sick and it's her last wish... but wow amazingly well written, and it would be a sorry plight if the couple has to marry for the sake of another...thanks for the pm though! it was awesome :)

~Naina
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Posted: 14 years ago


Thanks Vrush...what a scene!! Kiasa idea laga contract marriage ka...does it have merit? Can you please continue......will Geet agree, and how...how many pappads will Maan have to bael...and will Geet tell him of her past....at least how she was duped by a guy and left pregnant.....DEV shall remain a mystery for now....no??
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Posted: 14 years ago
Oh yes..i am not for contract marriage..for it would mean some monetary gain on part of one party for the purpose of looking or being married for a said period of time.

i want this marriage to be for love...underneath deep care for the health of an ailing old laday...

here Maan has agreed wholeheartedly...Geet obviously will refuse..that is how the past will come forward..tho no mentioning of names. Dev and Nt wil find out who has married Maan after they come home after the marriage..in the hospital..

that's when the fire works start..i feel then the new character called sameera..enters..

am i sounding like Ekta? i hope not!
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Posted: 14 years ago
Vrush..."Contract" is simply a label...a name for the Marriage.....we all know that issme koot koot ke pyaar bharaa hain dono taraf se....so as Shakespeare said...."What's in a name? That which we call a rose...By any other name would smell as sweet."
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Posted: 14 years ago
so true...

also i feel.. the them getting married will bring more romance..and more opportunity for them to be close and create a bond..they are going to have difficulties...namely dev, nt, sameera, and whoever else.. lets not forget vicky...but...it will bring them closer, it will also help CVs delve in to another dimension..of their romance...

hmm i hope..she takes him on...

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