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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oh god boring parties and boring life.. Nothing is gud..! Someone save me everytime i come here i get teased by my friends.. Arghh and i hate that.. I wish i could do something.. But ya nothing i can do nothing..!! But ya i can try to escape this party by going to the park.. And i started to walk well park was 2kms away from this place but what else could i do i have to walk as i cant enter the party..

Finally i reached the park and found a seat but someone was sitting on it already. Oh god now what to do.. Only one seat i found and that too someone else is sitting there..!! But must tell he looks so handsome.. And i said to myself *Shut Up* and ask him whether i can sit there or no.. So i walked up to Mr.Handsome and then i saw him sitting all alone with his phone and listening to songs.. I called him Hello.. Hello.. Hello..
Then i thought that i guess he must be deaf even after calling him 3 times he didnt see me and i turned back and i was about to move.. But suddenly he stopped me and he asked Hi did u call me?
And then i replied ya actually i wanted to ask that can i sit here..?
He polietely replied- Ya sure why not..
then i saw him and then i told Hi BTW i m Gunjan Bhushan..
And he replied Hi I m Samrat.. Samrat Shergill.. And well cute name..
I just said thanks and then replied love ur name too.. and i asked him what he was doing so late at night in the park..
He just smiled back at me and replied- the same thing what you are doing..
I just laughed back and told very funny..
Suddenly he got a call from his frnd he picked it up and started to talk.. Well from his talk i guess he was also having similar problem like mine.. Well my problem *too serious*.. Well i dont have a BF and all my frnds do.. SO they just make fun of me every second .. So i never go to the parties..! I guess he is also a victim of the same case..
Then i asked him your friends?
He replied Ya annoying me..
i just laughed and told lol i know my friends too sometimes coz u knw i m alone.
He said- oh really? me too guess we are lot alike..!
I repplied him back and then i told i wish i get a BF soon or else my friends would just be telling these stupid stories of their BF and then OMG i just want to escape from this..!
He told me that he too felt like that.. And then he told that he has an idea
I asked him surprisingly what was that?
He was hesitant but then too he asked me will you be my GF in front of my frnds plz
then that time i was shocked and then i just replied yes but i have a condition
He was like he was ready to accept all my conditions.. and he replied ya wats the condition?
I replied him back ok my condition is that we will carry on till 5 months after 5th month our ways are different and we must not try to interfere with our buisness ok?
He replied me Ya sure cool..
Then we went to the party and then i introduced him as my BF.. Well this time i was so happy that my frnds couldnt insult me and i went and hugged him out of joy.. And then he too hugged me back..
Time kept passing and we became closer and closer days were passing by and there were only 3 more months and i became depressed that i am going to loose him. But he looked like he was least bothered. As it was my terms and conditions i too couldnt change it. I wish i wouldnt have done that.. He is such a sweet guy..
Suddenly i felt that someone is closing my eyes and then i told Samrat i know its you..
And he asked Gunjan how do you find that its me always..
I replied immedietely Samrat thats because I L..
He then Replied- You what?
I just so that he forgets i replied nothing lets go..
We knew almost everything about each other now and we couldnt stay without each other even for a second.
time passed by and even my love for him grew stronger day by day but then too.. But now i guess its too late and we have to go in our seperate ways.. As our time was over. I didnt want to leave him and go but......
He called me.. Gunjan today is our last day lets go out
I wanted to go but just replied him Samrat see the time its 10 at night where do you want to go?
he replied the same park where we had met for the first time..!!
I without any second thoughts i told him yes..!!
And then we reached to the park and we started to talk.. And then we saw an ice cream parlour and then he asked ice-cream?
I replied you know my answer right?
He replied with a smile- Ya i know you will never say no for ice-cream ok let me go and get it
I stopped him and told i want.. before i could complete my sentence he went to the shop and then he got my favorite black current ice-cream.. I was shocked and i asked him How do u know
And then he replied Gunjan i know you very well we have been together for soo many days i know you atleast this much you must be happy no..
I told him ya i m good Samrat you know a lot about me..
Then we started to talk and we were so happy and suddenly we heard the clock strike 12 and then he gave a envelope and he told this is your ticket and do open it and check and he moved on.. And i was left alone in the park.. I was crying badly that he is not mine anylonger and i was sad that we would never meet again but then i controlled myself and then i just went home a changed my plan to go to Delhi and i decided to stay there..
Again time went on going and well this time it went too fastly 2 yrs got over still he didnt call me or meet me... Well how am i supposed to expect this much frm him wen i myself am less concerned no i still love him but i dont know why i still dont accept that i forgot him.. He is everything to me still.. He is my life.. he is my world.. And everything in my life.. But today i am missing him even more as i got the envelope he had given me 2 yrs before and i opened it now and i had tears in my eyes as he had given a letter in the envelope which stated that he loves me and he didnt want that we seperate..
After reading the letter i started to curse myself why didnt i read this b4..!! Oh god I wish i had read this letter before.. Atleast then i would have stopped him.. How will i ever find him now... No i have to start finding him..
And i started running here and there searching for him but now it started to rain now.. I have to go and get shelter.. But where.. I knw where the same park where we had met first and i went into the park.. For a second it seemed that all my past memory flashed into my mind. I just remembered all our moments and i went and sat in the same bench where we had sat.. And it was like i forgot that it was raining.. And i just wanted MY Samrat Back at any cost..
Then suddenly someone kept hand on my eyes and i started smiling and then i told I love you samrat.. and i turned back and then i found him and he was still in shock that how i found him and i told see i know you..
And then i told i m sorry it was all because of me that... But he stopped me and told.. Its not too late and then he told I love you too and it seemed that no other word was as sweet as this.. And then We immedietely promised that we will never ever seperate..
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Niyu- thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hii Guys this is my Second OS..!!

Well actually i wanted to write a sad AR one and Happy SG one and i was confused which to write first.. My LW told me to write SG one first so here it is..!! Hope u all like it Love Ya Pari
Edited by ..NiyaPari.. - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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resssss

edited=)

yay..me again first this time !
wohoo..

thanks..i mean no thanks so much for giving me the link..
b/w this weekend i'm gonna upd both of my ffs..n plus an OS on ArSh, MaYur,Sajan !
n i want u to be the first !
okay !

so be there at the right time !

b/w omg..i so in luv with your writing !
loved it !
the two os you posted..wowie..

and i think mujhe SaJan waala zyada achcha laga..'
beczo it was a happy one..n not a sad one..
as aajkal main kuch zyada hi happy happy rehti hoon lol..

you noe wat i luved this story..
common story thi..but the way u wrote made it mind blowing !

aur haan..ab se mere comments mein you'll not find any emocts..
examzz ke fever ke neeche dab chuki hoon..
so ab mera simple simple comment jhel !

post the AR one soon !

luv ya
-radz/cb
Edited by xxiheartmexx - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#4
awesome os ....do write more ...you write wonderfully 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
#5

Originally posted by: xxiheartmexx

resssss

edited=)

yay..me again first this time !
wohoo..

thanks..i mean no thanks so much for giving me the link..
b/w this weekend i'm gonna upd both of my ffs..n plus an OS on ArSh, MaYur,Sajan !
n i want u to be the first !
okay !

so be there at the right time !

b/w omg..i so in luv with your writing !
loved it !
the two os you posted..wowie..

and i think mujhe SaJan waala zyada achcha laga..'
beczo it was a happy one..n not a sad one..
as aajkal main kuch zyada hi happy happy rehti hoon lol..

you noe wat i luved this story..
common story thi..but the way u wrote made it mind blowing !

aur haan..ab se mere comments mein you'll not find any emocts..
examzz ke fever ke neeche dab chuki hoon..
so ab mera simple simple comment jhel !

post the AR one soon !

luv ya
-radz/cb

Hii CB
kaisi hai??
Lolz formality u knw..!! :P
Tu kab se mujhe thnx bolne lagi?? 🤣
Okiez ek mein LW ne mujhse pehle res kar liya..!!
Mein 2 hoon usme :( koi baat nahi woh first ya mein koi farak nahi padta :)
And baaki do mein i want to be first :)
Lolz lolz thnxxx..!!!
BTW mein shayad kal ek aur post karoon OS..!!
coz i m in love with writing OS u knw 🤣
okiez then will write happy happy ones
Frm now and i love tragedy ones so i wrote tragic one in the begining..!!
Ab i m now behing happy ones :)
Lolz koi baat nahi i knw exm fever..!
Hope u do well//!!
Nxt time mere liye emoc ok?
Gud girl..!!
Ar waala kal karoongi shayad ..!!
Nahi to ek kaam karti hoon i will Res kal edit kar doongi ok?
Tu bhi kar le ok??
Chal mein chalti hoon
Byee..!!
Love Ya
Pari/CB
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Posted: 15 years ago
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very nice dear! loved it... its sooo sweet.... 😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyy.......Pari..!🤗 nice..1.....!!😛
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Lovely update
Loved it
Pls do more
Thanks 4 da pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Awesome OS
loved it
do write more
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Posted: 15 years ago
#10
omg omg omg wat an OS man loveeeeeeeeeee it da concept was kinda differnt bt awesome u wrote it really beautifuuly loveeeeeeee da ending so sweet loveee how gunji recognized him after 2 yrs also i mean wen he covered her eyes n lovee how sammy knew gunji fav. icecream favor n all awesome do write more os on sajan plz n thnx for pm

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