MayUr FF: Rishtey Part 13 @ Page 143 - Page 52

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Posted: 15 years ago

awesome promo daksha

can't wait ur update thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 15 years ago
can't wait! 😊 awesome job girly! 👏 I understand, as soon as you can update!😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
OmG ITS ABSOLUTLY GREAT :D
Interesting Promo Dear..
Pllzz Cont Soon...
LOVE U :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
superb promo daksha.....
plzz do continue soooooon.......
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Posted: 15 years ago
heyyy dear,
nice promo
thansk for PM.
continue soon



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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Daksha

Hope you are fine

Nice promo

But try to update asap

Happy friendship day dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
hey nice promo continue soon
n sorry for late update
n thx for d pm
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wow
amazing job
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Posted: 15 years ago





Nupur was burning red with anger....taking out all her clothes from the almirah and throwing them in a suitcase....she was doing this when she heard some noise on the door....she moved to the loby and found out that Mayank has arrived.... Nupur didn't welcomed him and turned to the room to pack her bag.....She was in full anger.....

Mayank followed Nupur, he was completely drunk and he pulled Nupur towards herself and moved his face closer to her to kiss her but Nupur pushed Mayank back....Mayank didn't understood why Nupur is behaving like this...He again pulled her and this time Nupur bursted out "Wahaan roz jaate ho?"

Mayank wasn't able to understand what Nupur is referring to "Kya?"

"Wahaan uss chudail ke paas.... mujhse kya problem hai ya phir shaadi se pehle bhi....aadmi ki niyat kabhi nahin badalti" Nupur was yelling...

Mayank wasn't able to stand properly, his head was spinning.... He lost his balance and fell over Nupur....but Nupur stopped him from felling by holding his shoulders....Mayank gained his consciousness and replied "Kis baare mein baat kar rahi ho?"

But Nupur felt a foul smell "Peekar aaye ho?"

Nupur was in full questioning mood.... now all the flashes of wierd things came in front of her eyes....whether it is empty bottles of alcohol, weird language used by Mayank, his unpresence in house in morning, gun found in the drawer and lots more...

"Mujhe sab sach sach bataao....aap karte kya ho?" Nupur tried to provoke Mayank

He wasn't able to meet his eyes with Nupur....he tried to refuse her and turned towards the bed...

Nupur came in front of him to stop him "Ek minute....mujhe mere sawaal ka sahi sahi jawaab chahiye....abhi"

"Main kaam karta hoon" Mayank said
"Kya kaam...kaunsa kaam" Nupur trying hard to provoke Mayank....

"Bataya toh tha tere bhai ko...ab zyaada pareshaan mat kar aur jaa yahaan se" Mayank pushed Nupur to clear his path....

Tears rolled down from Nupur's eyes...
"Ja hi rahi thi par ab poora sach sunkar jaaungi" Nupur said "Wahaan uss call girl ke saath kya kar rahe the aur mujhe sach kyun nahin bata rahe"

"Main kyun bataaun" Mayank yelled at her....

"Mat bataao mujhe, main lagti kaun hoon tumhaari, ek ladki jo tumhein khilaati rahe aur tunm usse istemaal karte raho, kabhi zindagi ki sacchai ko samjha hai, kissi ladki ko samjha hai....kisi ladki ko samjha hai" Tears were rolling down from her eyes and she turned to go back but stopped on hearing a voice...

"Tujhe....tujhe samjha hai maine....ek ladki jiske aane se iss ghar ka naksha badal gaya...par thodi der ho gayi iss baat ko samajhne mein....mujhe tu acchi lagne lagi hai.... pata nahin par jab bhi mere saath hoti hai toh mann karta hai sab kuch chod kar bas tere saath rahun, teri baatein hi sunta rahoon aur tu kehti hai main tujhe samajh nahin paya"

Nupur beacme still on hearing those words from his mouth but she waded her thoghts and was about to speak when Mayank continued....

"Sach....sach jaanna chahti hai na.... main Underwold ke liye kaam karta hoon, mera khud koi thikaana nahin tha jab boss ne mujhe apnaya.... aur jiss ladki ke saath toone mujhe dekha, usse main kai dinon se nahin mila aur shaadi ke baad toh tu hi thi meri zindagi mein...main tujhse pyar karne laga hoon Nupur.... "

Before he could say anything else Nupur wiped of her tears and took a deep breath to continue "Jhooth.....main ek gangster ki patni hoon...chhii...sharm aa rahi hai mujhe apne aap par... un lamhon pe jo maine tumhaare saath guzaare, jab maine samjha tum mujhe pyar karte ho....par ye sab jhooth hai......ek bohot bada dhokha....mujhe kya pata tum roz milte ho un ladkiyon se.... kyun kiya tumne aisa mere saath....shaadi kyun ki...aur wo bhi jhooth ke sahaare..... bhaiya samajhte hain main bohot khush hoon....unpar kya beetegi jab unhein pata chalega ki unhone apni behen ko ek gunde ke saath vida kar diya" Tears were rolling down from her eyes but still she spaeaking with great difficulty, she took a deep breath and continued "Accha hua mujhe bata diya... ab mujhe iss jagah ko chodne mein koi problem nahin hogi kyunki main uss jagah ko chod kar jaaungi jahaan mujhe kabhi nahin lautna hai...kabhi nahin...kabhii nahin" saying this Nupur zipped up her half packed bag and looked up at the whole house and turned to move out.....

Mayank stepped forward but then he stopped thinking "Tu jahaan bhi rahegi zyada khush aur abaad rahegi.... upar waale se kabhi kuch nahin maanga maine par ye maangoonga ki tu khush rahe.... ye duniya tere liye bani hi nahin hai....itne acche log nahin rehte yahaan.... tere saath jo thode se pal guzaare unhein hi yaad kar loonga.....aur tujhse pyaar karta rahunga..... ab samajh mein aa raha hai dil aur dimaag alag kyun sochte hain....mera dil keh raha hai ki tujhe rok loon aur dimaag keh raha hai tujhe jaane doon.... tujhe koi accha ladka mile jo tujhe duniya ki har khushi de har khushi.... jo mere saath tujhe kabhi nahin mil sakti"

Nupur moved out of the door.....but Mayank stood still giving no expressions on his face....

Nupur was going and he kept looking at her till she vanished from his sight.....

Mayank shatttered on the floor, he was on his knees on the floor, his eyes were brimming up but he cannot stop her no he can't....

Jaane safar mein aisa kya huwa hai
Mere hai kadam aur tera raasta hai
Dard judaayi ka isi dil mein bhar ke
Dhundenge tujhako raahon mein phir se
Tere bin suna suna laage, jag mujhe suna suna laage
Tujhako dhudengi yeh aankhein, na ja jindagi mein aake




Chalo ji iss baar toh jaldi update ho gaya....chota hai par I have no explanation chota hi milega.....kaisa laga likh kar bataaein aur ye bhi ki aage kya expect kar rahe hain aap....



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Posted: 15 years ago

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Edited!!
Daksha..🤗...updated after sooo long!!...never mind , take ur time...i know ur quite busy!!😊
Update was quite good... i'm glad mayank's truth is out before her...poor nupur....she has to suffer loads..!!...Good that Mayank let out his feelings before she left!
I think u should try for a leap for a yr or two...that will take the story a step ahead😃...just my POV...
Love,
Shweta
Edited by cool_shwets - 15 years ago

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