Fairytale in the middle of my life *Complete-Pg36*

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Pickachu

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Posted: 15 years ago

#81

Both of the parts r awesomeeee.
Plzzz continue soon.
Thanxxx for the pm.

Fatima

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Nirjhor105

@Nirjhor105

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Posted: 15 years ago

#82

sorry for replying late. was caught up. thanks for pm
all parts are so beautiful and sad, almost melancholic. please continue soon.

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sweet cherry

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Posted: 15 years ago

#83

great update

plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon

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tanu

@Armu4eva

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+ 14

Posted: 15 years ago

#84

Wow...........i luv it that u hv both POVs...in ur FF... 👏👏👏👏very interesting dear............!! N that was so nice of Geet to find the truth out of Maans past to let him be at peace....................n gosh....now that she has done it..m sure Maan wont let her go......anywhere...😛

thanks a ton for the PM dear..........n luvd the update...

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afsha

@-afsha-

Stunner

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#85

Nice updates

Geet left Maan's office that was a shocker yaar

Maan had no control on himself

Maan's past was horrible but liked the way Dadi got Geet let her knew evrythg n she helped Maan get out of his dad worst words

Liked Dadi n Geet's understanding

Hop both confess soon abt their feelings to each other

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sweet_charmed

@sweet_charmed

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#86

wow... all your chapters wer just soo great and incedibly well written..i felt maan's pain.. i felt geets pain.. maan's past is just soo sad.. .😭 but i'm glad geet was able to clear his misconception and get him out of his depression!! i can't wait to see what happens ... what is maan goin to tell geet?? update soon and really you are doin an excellent excellent job on this 👏👏👏👏

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-Blossy-

@-Blossy-

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Posted: 15 years ago

#87

Love is always bestowed as a gift

freely,willingly and unconditionally

We don't love to be loved

we love to love.....

(Random quote,found on the net credit writer)

Do open this link for the next two parts

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uSCg81R4i2E

CHAPTER 48

I pull her towards me,towards where she belonged.She was not surprised,I don't know how she does it but she always knows its me.

I lean toward her.She moves towards me too,our foreheads touch, and we both stand like this for a while.

Suddenly she breaks off and stares at me wide-eyed.

"I have to go now"She says.

'Where?'I ask out of curiousity.Let her think she has a chance of leaving me again.

"To where I belong"

"And where is that?"

"I don't know"She tells me.

When I don't say anything she continues."But right now I have to get back to work"

I don't tell her what I feel.I can't.I can't tell her that I love her,not now atleast.

She is not ready and so instead I ask

"Geet,can we be friends?" even when I wanted something so much more than friends.

She is shocked at this.She stares at me,her mouth hanging open and I laugh uneasily.

"Am I such a big Dusht Danav then ,huh,that you are so repelled by the very idea of being friends with me?"She looks at my chest embaressed.

"No,Maan, I would love to be your friend"She tells me firmly.

"And" she continues"Pinky is busy with Adi anyways, I really need someone to gossip with"

"Yeah sure,we will gossip.We can also braid each others hair meanwhile and give ourselves a pedicure.I really need it"I joke and wriggle my toes in the air.

Geet laughs at this and punchs me on the shoulder,a friendly punch.

Edited by crazilycrazy - 14 years ago