Story-KISSA ULJHE SWALO KA(UPDATED-6th Aug Pg-27)

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Bhavanab

@Bhavanab

Stunner

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Posted: 15 years ago

#181

Bhinder WOW yaar !!! kitna mast poem hai,ekdum sach hai,Fireworks should read this poem of yours !!!

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Priya_aks

@priya_sparsha

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Posted: 15 years ago

#182

dono poems aache hain bhinder

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zerry123

@zerry123

Voyager

Posted: 15 years ago

#183

Wow Bhinder! Awesome poem!... kya postmortem kiya episode ka. You should be a forensic doctor rather than a psychologist 😉 😆

Really good work! 👍🏼

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#184

Thanks Zerry and Drilabh A lot Guys ...

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#185

Bhinder, did u write the poem u were supposed to???😉

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#186

THIS IS A "MEMBERS ONLY" POST
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JP22

@JP22

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#187

thank god abhi dikhi..

Edited by jiya1 - 15 years ago

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Bhinder

@bhinder.thind

Dazzler

Posted: 15 years ago

#188

Koi ton story padhkar comment de do yar 😕 😔

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SAGNIKA

@Shagnika

Rocker

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Posted: 15 years ago

#189

Too good Bhinder... 👏 👏
After many days i read a non-officer centric story...and it was one of the best stories of its kind!!!.⭐️ 👏 Proper utilisation of the newcomers as well...Thankfully, you managed to keep TRIo together throughout. Your narration is always very clear. 👏 👏 The way Viivek handled that old man was very touching😳 . You used Forensics properly. It was good to see..Salunke very properly handled.Best part was that forensic experts are in white coat 😃 Abhi-Daya small moments were present..TRIO moments were also visible... The suspense was kept alive. Disguise scenes were also present which was good to see.

Overall, a superb story!!!Awesome plot...👏 . Mind refreshing..... 👏 👏

Edited by Shagnika - 15 years ago