'You and Me..never!'(Maaneet FF)pt 24 Pg 144 - Page 104

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Posted: 14 years ago
Hey Pallo!

Rocking update! I loved, loved, loved it.....as usual! 😛😆😆......Geet thought of throwing a party.....this girl is damn unpredictable.....lolz......and Maan actually succumbed to her wishes and modelled for her........now that's like a good hubby in the making......lolz. Aww......he was focusing on Geet instead of the movie......something's cooking......or should I say burning with Ronnie's entry. Ahaha.....Geet landed into Ronnie's arms after that fall.......poor Maan......that's gonna hurt him.😆😆.........That was seriously superb......do continue soon and I wish your PC a speedy recovery.😉😆
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Posted: 14 years ago
palooooooooooooooooooooooooooo pehle gale pado!!!! brij ki cheli 😉meri horlicks partner😆😆 me missing u😳😳😳😳
caught wid both the update me love u 4r bringing the khotaaa ronnie😉😆😆
he's b'cuming a pia for maan😆😆 poor maan feet s bleeding upar se kudi falling in sum1 else arm's...........hope this ambala trip bonds them forever😳
hope r lappy gets well soon😳 n miss u come bak soon to chit chat🤗
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Posted: 14 years ago
aww ur computer still not well 😭😭 bad pc grrr😡😡 ..lolz well here is my lamba chauda (sounds like i'm talkn bout maan ahahaha 😆😆😆) comment to help you get through these painfull pc-less time!! in time all wounds will heal... lolz maybe a little too melodramatic ..haha sorry 😆😆

oh my god soo even though u have no pc... guess wat you do have an awesomly freakishly genius mind that is able to come up with horlickisly good updates!!! haha i jst loved this update... aww man ... geeet is soo lucky..she got maans plastic card to help her get rid of her boredom... lol y cant someone pass me over thier plastic card... i need to get rid of my boredom too... lolz nothing fixes up boredom better than retail therapy and well readin an update of urs is pretty helpful too.. 😉 ...haha soo lmao so i was litterally loling at this line by geet

"See there you go again! Glaring at me as if I declared that I salivate over Osama. All I said was that you are no fun..." hahaha where do you come up with lines like these its jst hilarious.!!! ohhh soo maan is gettin more jealous about geet and ronniee ahah lolz good.. jealousy is always a good sign in situations like this.. and oh god i'm gonna say this again but wow geet is soo lucky she got her very own private Maan Fashion Show... ohh maan modeling all those clothes..ahaha tres hot!! lmao i'm wondering if maan came up wit this morning hangout with geet only so he could her to cancel her hangout with ronnie...aahaahaha too bad it didn work lmao... and lolz i love the morning scene aww maan was hopin he was hallucinatin the whole hearing geet and ronnie part .. to bad it wasnt eh.. and ronnie is one smart cookie silently watchin the great battle of wits between maan and geet..thtz safest way to handle those two..and ohh a very cliffy endin 😲😲 maan hurt and geet in ronnies arm 😲😲 ...lolz maybe seeing geet in ronnies arm will finally knock some sense to maan .. lol.. can't wait to read the next update hun!!!!
keep rocking

p.s. oh realized something prolly a lttle late but oh well..but late than never.. haha but vampire is sucha fittin thing to call maan ...well for geet anyway b/c she thinks he takes away all the fun so..hes is geets very own "fun-suckin vampire" ahahaha lolz 😆



Edited by sweet_charmed - 14 years ago
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Posted: 14 years ago
hi palloo..i would js like to say an amazing job..i just read ur fanfic..for the first time beginnin to end😊 not much of a fanfic reader..but i loveee urs..amazing 👏 hehe..really cn picture it all in my hed..this last part made me sad tho maan shudve caught her..not this ronnie guy😆 lets hope maan realises his feelings ..snds horrible but i wanna c this ronnie hurt geets feelings😲 n maaaan to the rescuee *dhan tanaaaaaa* still early days😳 js wanna say keep up the good work😛 and sorry to hear about ur PC

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Posted: 14 years ago
Geet in Ronnie's arm..I could Maan let him..One day Geet make him crazy..Maan ke pass kuch Jalne ki boo aa rahi thi,,
waiting for next part..
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: -KBfan-

lovely update 😛

🤣🤣 the last fall was hilarious 🤣🤣 here i am cursing geet's luck that she didn't fall in the right man's arms because the right guy was in distress and the wrong guy was handy at the correct time 🤣 lol too good!



Lag gaya na wrong number!!!!
Thanks for commenting
luv ya
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Posted: 14 years ago

Originally posted by: aakritisri1111

o o i wish tat Geet could fall in maan's Arms but anyways dis part is really awesome cant wait for d next part



thanks a lot for commenting
luv ya
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Posted: 14 years ago
Hi gals....

Sorry am not able to reply to your comments....I have read them all and am really glad that you ppl are enjoying my FF. MWAH! To all of you....

The next part is here...this is probably my shortest part. But I had to cut off here due to two reasons- lack of time and want to have the greater fun in a longer update.

So do read this part and wait for the next one.

Love ya all....

PART 23
Maan watched in slow motion as the Indian Version of Jonty Rhodes angled his arms perfectly and the ball called Geet plopped perfectly into his positioned arms.

*CATCH OUT!*

Maan narrowed his eyes...what was this Ronnie-Phonie doing in Indian Army? He was Indian Cricket Team material....he would make an internationally renowned fielder!

Ronnie buckled under Geet's sudden weight and fell down with Geet on top of him. Her hair curtained their faces perfectly barring Maan's penetrating gaze from analyzing their expressions. He saw a faint shade of pink when Geet pushed her hair back...was he going colour blind? Why was everything appearing pink?

"He has no keys there..." Maan wanted to icily tell Geet but he controlled his mouth and focused on his bleeding leg.

Geet stood up and dusted her hands and clothes making an effort to laughingly tell Ronnie "Thanks.....And Sorry. It was gravity's fault that I fell fast and that hard on you"

Maan looked up in confusion...Had she said "I fell fast and hard for you" or "I fell fast and hard on you". His ears were still buzzing.

Geet saw the red grass underneath Maan's foot and hurried to his side.

"Next time use a steel bucket to drink horlicks. Atleast if you throw it down it won't break..." Maan sardonically instructed her.

Geet turned to look at Ronnie instead of replying back to Maan's taunt.

"Ronnie, Get me the first aid kit. It is in the kitchen. Right from main hall."

Ronnie nodded and sprinted off into the house leaving Geet and Maan in the garden.

"Does Horlicks have a better taste at higher altitudes?" Maan jabbed.

Geet looked up into Maan's eyes.....the honeyed gaze blending into the ebony one. Geet saw the load of anger established there.

"Ronnie was scared that Mr. Anda might drop in to check on you and if he caught Ronnie here things would get messed up in the hostel. So I suggested we have horlicks up on the tree..." Geet hesitatingly answered.

"You could have been seriously hurt..." Maan's voice were suffused with concern.

Geet smiled....she liked this side of Maan. He was caring and protective.

"But I didn't get hurt...Ronnie caught me."

Maan stilled at her words. Ronnie-the hero of the day!!!

"Why was Ronnie having horlicks? I thought you told me that Horlicks was exclusively for the two of us..." Maan added his complaint.

Geet doubled up with laughter "Mogambo...you are getting possessive about Horlicks. Freak!!! Of all the things....Anyways rest assured I gave Ronnie from my share. Your share is still untouched...."

Ronnie appeared with the kit, his long legs carrying him fast like Road Runner.

"Here Honey bunch..." Ronnie's voice floated across the lawn.

Maan shook his head had he heard it right? ' Honey Bunch' indeed!

His temper was on the rise. It was anger-invoking enough to see his ONLY friend sitting dangerously on the tree, enjoying with someone else. And now hearing her being called 'Honey Bunch' from a guy who had earlier called him 'Pink Pig'......it inflamed his senses.

Before he could soothe down his thoughts he felt Geet's hands softly cleanse his wound with spirit and tie up his leg in a firm gauze bandage.

"Nice nickname..." Maan directed the comment at Ronnie.

Raunaq smiled back at Maan, his face lighting up with a boyish charm and replied "Thanks. Waise my friends are better are giving nicknames"

"Is it? What have they nicknamed you?" Maan asked stretching his conversation with Ronnie.

"Horny Ronnie!" he winked at Maan as if sharing a personal joke with him but received a angry and disgust filled glare instead.

Geet patted Maan's leg and spared a few giggles at Ronnie's blessed nickname.

"Geet it is getting to 7. We have to get going..."Maan reminded Geet about their plan in a flat tone.

Ronnie took the cue.

"Okay then you guys carry on. Take Care Geet. Will catch ya around sometime" he waved good-naturedly at her and left.

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love
pallo




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Posted: 14 years ago
Its amazing👏👏👏
Thanx for the update
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Posted: 14 years ago
Another cuteee but short update.
I loveee how maan gets jeolous from ronnie.
Waiting for the next part.
Thanxxx for the pm.




Fatima

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