payaar.mohabbat.ishq**new FF** upd pg 9

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Ok guys this is my first time ever writing a moment'I hope u guys like it'
Before I write it I wanna say that like millions of other Armaan's fan me too can't go to sleep unless I think about him..how would I feel if was in my life'so this FF is one of those feelings or should I say life that I want to spend with ARMAAN'

Background info:

Mr. Mallik and Mr. Gupta are very old friends'Mr. Mallik's family was in India when he first came to Canada'him and Mr. Gupta both worked together and were very successful in life'Ridhima was only 7 at that time since Mr. Mallik's own family was in India Ridhima was very close to him..he adore her like is own daughter' after couple of years when Mr. Mallik and Mr. Gupta opened many branches of their business (one of them was in India) Mr. Mallik decided to look after the branches that are in mostly Asia so he could be with his family, while Mr. Gupta looked after South, North America and Mexico..at this time both friends spread, but always stayed in touch'

When Mr. Mallik was going to India it was the last time Ridhima saw her baba (she called her dad and Mr. Mallik baba- Pakistani name for dad)

Ridhima lives with her entire family..her mom, dad, 2 brothers, and their wives and kids, and beside these there are also 3 princess in her life.. her sisters'which are her life'Ridhima herself is the 2nd oldest sister'her older sister is married and has a cute little daughter.. her third sister is engaged (Ridhima isn't married or engaged since she wants to complete her education first and become a doctor) and her youngest sister is like a doll to the older three sisters'.Ridhima loves her family and is star of every ones eyes'especially her dad (in my story Shashank is not the dad.. imaging ur own dads'the one how love u the most and can't see a tear in ur eyes)'

Armann..as we all know is the most happening guy..the cool dud'whom every girl wants'he also lives with his family..mom, dad'whom he loves like crazy and his younger sister Kiran'

After 10 years Mr. Mallik along with his entire family moved to BC- Canada'even though both of the friends are in Canada now they still hadn't meet'

Now two years have been pasted since Mr. Mallik came to Canada..Armaan is 24 while Ridhima is 23...and for first time after such long period of time the Mallik's will be seeing the Guptas since it's Mr. Gupta's third daughter's wedding.

First daughter- Anjali
Second daughter- Ridhima
Third daughter- Nikki- its her wedding
Fourth daughter- Muskaan

character sketch:
Armaan 24- he is a business man...he has won many award for his great work and is known as one of the most successful youngest business man of the world...every girl dies over his looks...but he at all is not a play boy...infact he respects girls...he live in BC Canada

Ridhima: a simple and fun loving girl...she is 23 and is in second year of medical education...she is the star of her entire family...she lives in ON Canada


PS: plz reply guys and tell me if u like this concept and if u would like me to continue plzz

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Update page #
intor: pg 1
part 1: pg 2

part 2: pg 4

part 3: pg 7

part 4: pg 9
Edited by cutie cutes - 14 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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yeh its nice
but you don't told us
other old gang ... where are these? what are they doing?
if you don't mind...........
please complte the old gang with new one Shilpa
countinue soon and add me in your PM list
thank you with love
take care
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey dear.. this ff sounds really interesting please do add me to your pm list thanx- misha =]
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Hey Princess!
Jaan I am soooooooooooo excited to read this as I M from Ontario myself!
Oooooh I am soooooo ecstatic!
Update soon n move on wid the story eagerly waiting!
Heehee I am such a despo'

Love, Jinszzyy!
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heyy dear
nice intro n cs
loved it
plzz cont soon
n add me to ur pm list
luv dhruvika
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Pls update soon and add me!

Niki is getting married to Abhi, right?

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thank you soooooooooooooo much guys..i sure will update soo...
@Sheen: u will find out soon who Nikki is getting married to..it might be who u think😉


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this seems interesting please PM me!
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part 1

The house is being decorated'red to yellow to purple to every colour of followers are hanged from the wall' a lot of people are moving from here to there'if one is caring a the sweets the other is tasting if there good enough to for the hundreds of people who are gonna eat them' the whole mansion is filled with happiness'everyone is busy...the elder are busy decorating while the kids are busy messing things up'every one is joyful as one more of their pari is getting married'expect for that one person'why is sitting all alone in that dark room'he should be happy'happy amongst all of them'no but he is sad'why?

the whole house was glowing...glowing with lights with happiness...but than...y was he sad????



Girl:baba'baba..baba Ramo kaka app nay baba ko khani deka
Ramo kaka: ji betia wo apnay romm mein hain
Girl: thank kaka

She walks up the stairs..which are being decorated by lights and drapes and flowers'she walks down the hall way and opens the door of the biggest room in the mansion'after opeing the door she breaths with relief

Girl: baba app yehani (here) hain'I was looking all over for u' y are all the light off baba (she turns on the lights) baba lets go down stairs every one is waiting for u at the dinning table'( by saying this she walks closer to her baba and is left shocked when she sees tears in his eyes'and panic for once)

Girl: baba wht happened'app'ap..app taki tu hain'(tear stars rolling down from her eyes as well'she can never see her baba like that'he had never cried like that before'only expect when she got married) [this is Anjali guys] baba app'why r u crying..is everything ok'

Baba: (clearing his tears away) nahi ..kuch nahi beta..I am kk'who bas ankh mein kuch chala gaya tha'(trying to hide his emotions..he gets up and walks toward the door, but is stopped by her daughter)

Anjali: nahi baba..app cohot (lying) bol rahain..why were u crying'won't u tell me..(tears rolling down her checks)

Baba: If I won't tell u who would I tell'beta'beta today Nikki is getting married aur mein soch rah tha ka kash ajj us ka mom dad be hota t'
She stops him at once..

Anjali: BABA,,,app yeih sab'Nikki app ki beti hai'aur humri behin (sister)..mom us ki mom hain.. Aur yeih family us ki hai'tu yeih sab kyun'Nikki doesn't even know ka app us ki dad nahi hain who tu ap ki'(she stops in the middle when she hears the door opening)

Muskaan: di app behi'ouff.. U came to call baba..aur app batno mein lagi'aur sab boltay hain k I talk too much(says with angry cute face)'baba lets go down stairs and di u too everyone is waiting'

Anjali: yehi ladki be na..coming jaan..lets go baba
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At the dinner table:
everyone is sited and are chatting along'all the ladies are busy feeding Muskaan as she isn't eating

Padma (mom):beta kuch tu kaho

Muskaan: nahi mom..have u seen how much wait I have put on 'no way I am gonna eat and especially this(she picks up a parta and make and ewhhhhh face) look how much gee (oil) it has ewhhhhhh..no way'

Rohnit (second older brother): kalo..nahi tu u would be fainting in today's sangeet ceremony'

Rohnit

As Muskaan get irritated everyone laugh

Muskaan: bahi ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

While everyone is eating..all of sudden they here a loud noise and everyone turn around'

Little girl'hahah ahahha paap'hahaha'app phir gir (fall) gay'hahah
Anjali: shhhh Sapna..don't make fun of ur dad

Sapna is Anjali and Atul's 3 year old daughter
Sapna

Sapna: but mom I told paap not to wear this but..heheheh'paap never listens

Atul: ach bahco..I don't lisent or u don't listen'Anjali is mein meri ko galti nahi hai..yeih paap ki bachi (daughter) ko hai mujh is mein dekna ta




Anjali: and u r ur daughter's SUPER dad.. (exaggerating on super) so how could u say no to her hain (while she says this she pulls his checkes)

And behind them the family was trying to control their laugh'

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in this part i just wanted to introduce the family

hope u guys like it plz do comment



Edited by cutie cutes - 15 years ago

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