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falcon.star

@falcon.star

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#11

loved it ... its amazing ..... hope to read more soon .. love ya
thanku for the PM

taliah

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Gaurav Shanbhag

@AR_LOVER

Dazzler

+ 5

Posted: 15 years ago

#12

saddy saddy part

plz rhea ko jaldi thik kardo

thnks for pm

continue soon

TC
GAURAV

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deepa

@crazy_4_karan

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#13

Hey very nicely written part.....i cn't really guess wat want wrng with Rhea mayb accident or some attack or something nt sure.....update the next part soon the happy Mallik family in the flashback wer soo good.....thnx for the Pm....

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Ayesha87

@Ayesha87

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#14

Great 👏...please do continue...thanks😃

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naureen

@Norz

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#15

nice part but toooooooo short

i love long parts :)

park main aisa liya howa hoga hmmmmmmmm

plzzzzzzzzz update soon

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TheMelody.

@TheMelody.

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#16

Thanks guys. 🤗

The next part will be longer, promise! ;)

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Nikki

@Chocolate...

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 15 years ago

#17

gr8 job

i really liked both the parts

and can't wait for the next one to finally kno wat happened to rhea

poor baby in such a critical state

m like feeling so sad for the poor baby

anyways do continue soon

luv ya

Nikki :D

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sai

@KaSh-Maneet-Fan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#18

awesome update

such a cute family moment

loved it

cant wait 2 fing what happened 2 rhea

con soon

thanks 4 da pm

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KaSh_KaJen

@KaSh_KaJen

Explorer

Posted: 15 years ago

#19

Woow!! Interesting.. Continue soon! And PM me too!

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sabihaa.

@sabihaa.

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 15 years ago

#20

I really like your style of writing.
It's a very interesting concept... don't think I've read something like this.

Definitely looking forward to your next part. :)

PS. I'll definitely add you... if you could PM me with updates :)