ManeetFF..Mujhe Haq Hai:: Chp 28::PG. 144 - Page 6

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bluedreamz953 thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#51
loved it how geet annoys him and he gets so annoyed so easily

thanks

please update soon
Preternatural thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#52

answer to maan's quest : tu geet ke pyar mein phaas gaya ๐Ÿคฃ and then in ur FF geet is mostly like dr.muskaan..anyways both are same allthou ๐Ÿ˜† nice chap niiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii daaaaaaaaa

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Posted: 15 years ago
#53
thank u soo much guyss..for leaving these wonderful comments..it was a pleasure reading them..plzz continue..love ya all
@swetha10: thanxx so much hun..
@sonu4ever: thanxx soo much yaar..tried to make it long enough..and im soo glad u liked their meeting..tried best to make it interesting..thanxx once again..its a pleasure reading ur comment
@sweet cherry: thanxx alot dear..
@kurtee: thanxx soo much hunie..so u liked the double dose
@ShelDev: thanx alot dear..will continue very soon
@Goral: thanx Goral..awww well i hope my FFs arent boring ya..lol...thanx alot dear..
@smartnsmexxi: thanxx alot..will defo pm ya
@Maan_Mahi4Ever: thanxx alot..yeah..hez a pakka sado..and thinks geet is annoying..lol..
@shagz: thanxx yaar..glad u liked it..and check ur inbox..
@MaanEetluvr: thanxx soo much,..will update soon
@anufa: thanxx alot dear
@shalini_s: haha..hopefully u will like his tour guiding..
@anu_luv_maan: thanxxx alot..bechara maan phasa..lol
@-afsha-: thanx alot afsha..Geet has to annoy maan yaar..and u will see..in future..he will be inspired frm her..lol
@Giginaik: hey radha..thanx alot dear..this is how Geet is..and they are childhood frendz..so usay haq hai yaar..LOL..Maan ko tung karne ka
@_Monu_: thanxx alot dear..will update very soon
@desigurl953: thanxx alot dear..
@Aabs: thanxx yaar..hmm..well Dr. Muskaan and Geet are similar..lol..and i loved the answer..lol..u totally broke my name up
and thanx to all who didn't comment and pressed the like button..
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Posted: 15 years ago
#54
hey guyss here is the next chap..hope u all will like it..will update the next part soon..plzz do comment

~Chap 4~

As soon as every1 was done wid the breakfast..Mr. Khurana and other ppl sat in the living room remembering the old golden days..

Geet and Maan were still on the table..Maan not really liking anything..and Geet who was now done wid breakfast was waiting for Maan to cumout of his grief and show her the place..

Geet: u ready!?..she sed looking at him

Maan nodded giving her a sad look.."then lets go!"..she sed excitedly ignoring his gloomy expression

*~*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*~*

Yeh hai terrace!..Maan sed climbing the stairs..behind Geet and looking around..he had showed her the whole house..kitchen..rooms..lounge..even the store room..study room..everything!..now terrace was left so he brought her there

Geet: wow!..yahan par kitni ache hawa chaltee hai..nahi?

Maan didn't reply..wid an annoyed look he was still looking around..

Geet: kya yaar..tum hamesha aisay he rehtay ho kya?

Now he looked at her..wid questioning eyes.."Kya matlab?" he asked in a weary tone

Geet: matlab yeh..k tum kuch bolte he nahi..sawal poochtee hoon tou..koi jawab nahi..tumhe kya main gun point par le kar aayee thee k mujhe apna ghar dikhaao.. isse acha hota k main wahan lounge main beth kar bore hojaatee..she sed getting upset

Maan: dekho mujhe koi shoq nahi hai..tumhe pura ghar dikhane ka..woh to dad ne kaha iss liye..

Geet: lekin apna kaam to ache se karo na..uncle ne yeh bhi kaha tha kya..k Geet ko bore karna hai..

Maan: to kya karoon main ma'am aap k liye..nachoon..gaaoon..kya karon..aap bataiye..? he sed cuming close to her..his voice filled wid exasperation

Geet: hmmm..dance..dance karo..she sed making fun of him..which made maan more mad

Maan: Dekho..tum!..he sed cuming more close to her..pointing his finger toward her..his action kinda scared her..and caused her to lose balance..she was about to fall..but Maan hurriedy grabbed her by waist..she also took hold of him on his shoulder..she closed her eyes tightly..scared of falling down..Maan kept looking at her..he realized he just overreacted..he should calm down..Geet was rite..he should atleast reply to her questions..

Geet now slowly opened her eyes and was looking at Maan.." are u okay?"..he asked softly..and helped her standing up..

Geet nodded.. im ok"..Geet sed looking at Maan..who was now looking at the ground..

"sorry"..Maan apologized.."mujhe aise nahi karna chahiye tha.."

Geet didn't reply..she was always talking..but her silence made Maan feel more guilty..

Maan: hmm..acha tum Ice cream khatee ho kya?..he tried to change the topic..and be friendly

Geet didn't reply..Maan again tried "acha..tumhara favorite flavor kya hai ?..she now looked at Maan surprisingly..how was he being so pleasant to her..

Geet walked to him..and then moved forward her hand toward him..

Maan was confused by her actions.."Pinch me" she sed..

Maan: Kyon?..he asked again all puzzled

Geet: kahin main sapna to nahi dekh rahee na..u r being soo nice to me..?

This time Maan again gave her "the angry young man" look..

Geet chuckled.."acha acha..ghussa nahi karte yaar..mera favorite flavor..hmm"

"Strawberry hai na"..he sed quickly..Geet was all amazed again..

Geet: tumko kaise pata?

Maan: bas yaad hai..he sed moving his hand through his hair

Geet: acha..hmm..mujhe bhi kuch kuch yaad hai..tumhain..palak paneer bohot pasand hai na..i remember..jab bhi maa palak paneer banatee thee..aur tum ghar par aate thay..to apnee aur meree plate main se saara paneer kha jaate thay..im amazed..itna paneer khanay k baad bhi tum itnay fit ho!

Maan beamed on the compliment.."u r welcome" she sed nudging him

Maan this time laughed: thanks

Geet also chuckled.. "chalain?"..she asked

Maan nodded..

*~*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*~*

Mom..main aur Geet bahar jaa rahe hain..paas waale icecream parlor..kisi ko icecream chahiye kya..Aunty appko?

Mrs. Handa: no beta thanks..tum dono jaao

Maan: dadi..Mom?...koi bhi nahi

Dadi: nahi beta..tumlog jaao..enjoy karo!

Geet and Maan smiled and made their way outside

Dadi: chalo acha hai bachon main dosti hogayee..warna yeh maan bhi na..dadi was very happy to see them together

Mrs. Handa: nahi to maajee..itna acha hai..itna polite and nice..kahin bhi akrhoo nahi hai!

Mrs. Khurana and Dadi looked at each other and laughed.."pata chal jaaye ga..waise yeh bachpan ki dosti hai..shayad Maan ko badal de"..dadi sed..Mrs. khurana and Handa..smiled..

*~*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*~*

Maan drove to the icecream parlor..he got out of the car..and started walking in..Geet who was waiting for him to open the door for her..kept looking at him..he turned around looking for Geet..and saw her cuming toward him..

Maan: kitna slow chaltee ho tum..

Geet who was annoyed: oh hello..i was waiting for u to open the door for me..

Maan: Kyaa? Why?..main nokar hoon kya tumhara..

Geet: haye rabba!..tum pehle kisi larkee k saath kabhi bahar nahi gaye kya?

Maan: 2 strawberry large cups plz..he ordered and then walked to a table and sat there..Geet followed him..

Geet: haan to batao..pehle kabhie larhkee k saath bahar nahi gaye kya?..she sed while setting down in her chair

Maan:"haan gaya hoon na Dadi and mom!..he sed while checking out the pamphlet lying on the table..

Geet: Maaaann!!!..main unn k baare main nahi pooch rahi!..mera matlab hai..koi female frend ya phir Girlfrend? the word GirlFriend was under pressure

Maan looked at Geet..and raised his 1 eyebrow: inn sab faltu cheezon k liye time nahi hai..!

Geet: excuse me..tumhara matlab kya hai..haan!..abhi tum mere saath aaye ho..to yeh sab faltu hai..main faltu hoon?!..

Maan: tum kya sunna pasand karo gee..sach ya jhoot?!

Geet's jaw dropped to the ground: haw..kya bola tumne..tumhara matlab main faltu hoon..main jaa rahee hoon!..she got up and began to leave

Maan quickly stopped her by holding her hand: aray yaar..icecream to khalo..warna paise waste honge..aur icecream bhi..he sed wid a smirk on his face..

Geet was really angry now.."Maan..shut up..leave my hand..main jaa rahee hoon!

Maan: aray yaar..i was kidding..tum bhi to mujhe tung kartee ho..so maine badla le liya!..chalo betho..

Geet realized every1 was looking at them..she quietly sat back..widout creating any scene anymore

Maan: haan to batao kya bol raheen thee tum!

Geet: kuch nahi!..she replied

A boy brought 2 large ice cream cups overflowing wid pink strawberry ice cream..wid a little piece of cherry on the top and put it infront of maan and geet..Maan started enjoying the icecream..

Geet was sitting silent..looking at Maan having his icecream..

Maan looked at Geet: dekho apni ice cream khalo..warna meri khatam hone k baad tumhari ki baari hai..Geet hurriedly took her cup and started eating it..

Maan smiled.."tum na sach main akrhoo ho" she sed..

Maan: excuse me..main tum ko yahan ice cream khila raha hoon..aur tum..

Geet chuckled: ..aur main kya..haan..akrhoo he to ho tum..main tumhara wait kar rahee thee..k tum meray liye door kholo gai..just like a gentle man..but main bhool gayee thee..that this man is not gentle..hez an akrhoo man..nahi nahi..akhrhoo Maan..she again chuckled..making fun of him.

Maan: dekho mujhe yeh sab kuch nahi aata ok!..don't expect all this frm me..aur waise bhi..tumko bhi upar waale ne 2 haath diye hain..tumne door khola aura aagayeen..main kholon ya tum..wats the difference..

Geet: ughhh..tum nahi samjho gai..ice cream khao..

*~*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*โค๏ธ*~*

Edited by NZ_rockx - 15 years ago
sonu4ever thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
#55
reserved ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Edited:
Hehe im first to reply
Lovely update jani,
That was shooooo cute and funny ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘
Haye Geet lost her balance and Maan held her ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved their cute nok jhok ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘ u carried the conversation very well๐Ÿ‘
Geet is really changing Maan already ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Aww both remebered their childhood's tastes๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Do update soon hun ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love,
Humera ๐Ÿค—
Edited by sonu4ever - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#56
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wow nids, its awesome, luv my jaanu akhroo maan๐Ÿ˜‰๐Ÿ˜†
and plz do mak evry chap lyk this, not too longer, coz i receive every FF update PM each day๐Ÿ˜ญ
and i cant leave any of them, and also cant read all of them at once, soo hope u'll understand nids.......anyways, late happy pherenship day, lub uuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
update soooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn cant wai8
Edited by Aabrayy - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
#57
this is not fair.. inna chota update๐Ÿ˜”.. bt koi nahi it ws so sweet... yaar.. loved ur update.๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 15 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: MaanEET_FAN

this is not fair.. inna chota update๐Ÿ˜”.. bt koi nahi it ws so sweet... yaar.. loved ur update.๐Ÿ˜Š


yeh chota tha ๐Ÿ˜ฒ๐Ÿ˜†..soz yaar..next time..it will be much longer than this




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Posted: 15 years ago
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๐Ÿ˜† ๐Ÿ˜† wow ......i loved brought smile on ma face ......great fiction ........maan nvr gonna improve ........ ๐Ÿ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
#60

Originally posted by: sonu4ever

reserved ๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Edited:
Hehe im first to reply
Lovely update jani,
That was shooooo cute and funny ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ‘
Haye Geet lost her balance and Maan held her ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Loved their cute nok jhok ๐Ÿ˜ƒ๐Ÿ‘ u carried the conversation very well๐Ÿ‘
Geet is really changing Maan already ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Aww both remebered their childhood's tastes๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Do update soon hun ๐Ÿ˜ƒ
Love,
Humera ๐Ÿค—


o yeah..u did it..u r the 1st 1 to comment..hehehe ๐Ÿ˜‰
thanxx soo much yaar...i was afraid that their nok jhok mite bore u guyss ๐Ÿ˜•..but glad u liked it..it took me time..lol ๐Ÿ˜†..
Geet will change maan..and therez alot to happen in the story..and im sure u will like it..thanxx alot for the lovely comment..will update soon..๐Ÿค—


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