SS- The Not So Happily After[Mayank&Nupur)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Guys. I'm not new here nor have i never written a story. Actually i did start one but it got left in mid way. Now i'm posting another story that i wrote very recently on no particular couple for a Assignment of mines. It may not be good but i got 82/100 on it so i was pretty happy about it.!😆

Its not long only 10 parts but i do have to change some dialouges & other things to fit MN into to it!

After my friends pressurization, I'm posting the Prolouge of the story.

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Sometimes people just don't understand...

The Not So Happily Ever After..

"yeh zaruri nahi hum jise pyar karein usse hi hamari shaadi ho" my mothers words kept on replaying in my mind as i sat queitly in the room waiting for the much awaited groom to arrive. Yes today was the day i had officially set foot into my new blissful life according to my mother, but she was unknown to the pain and remorse i was going through.

The handled clutched and door opened up making way for him to enter. I kept my head down, i had no eagerness or anticipation of meeting my new life partner because the truth was; i really did not consider him much in my life.

My life use to be filled with happiness and love; Jay my true love but my parents made sure he didn't enter my life. As per there knowlegde he was not worth me but in reality i was not worth such a great person like him. He filled my life with Joy & fullfillment that none could ever do. We met during my final year in college through mutual friends. At first we both were shy & reserved but it didn't take long when he became such a vital part of my life, "I love you Nupur, you mean the world to me and without you I'm nothing" his precious love filled words rang in my ears making my eyes brim with tears of sadness and guilt for betraying his love.

I froze in my state as i saw him push aside the veil and look at me, keeping my eyes down i tried very hard to not meet his gaze. But there was something about him, something different like a magnetic force pulling me towards him. It was a futile attempt but i got up, walking towards the window. It was not long when he stood infront of me, glaring right through me trying to find an answer to a question.

"Nupur tum is shaadi se khush ho kya?" this was expected never had she imagined this would be his question to me. I had never lied in my life, and i was surely going to start now.,"Mayank Log kehte hain shaadi woh ladoo hai joh khake bhi pastao aur na khake bhi pastao"i said vaguely not meeting his questioning gaze but my reply sure did bring a smile on his face, " yeh line toh hamesha larka kehta hai" the side remark didn't hurt me but it did make me a curious, "so your saying only guys are allowed to say that line?" Mayank hasitly turned to look at me curiously, "are we seriously going to have a fight on who can say that line or not on our WEDDING NIGHT?"his words, "wedding night"brought back the realization that i was married to someone other than Jay.

I looked out to the moon, " its beautiful isn't it?" i smiled , Moon was an ominous feeling in the air. I wished i could go and touch it. When i was younger i had always wanted to be an astranaut but Papa's wish was to see his elder become a sucessful doctor, unfourtunately he died but i competed his wish by becoming a doctor.

"Not more than You" without even thinking my face automatically found his grin filled face sending my cheeks into a blushing mode. But i recovered just before things go out of hand, that was to say he had moved one step closer to me, " Mayank looks can be deciving" why i had said that? i don't know? did he seem to like what i said? well err...he seemed to be thinking about what? i had no clue.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Also i don't like bugging people for no reason, So if you wish to be pmed Please do Tell me!😛

Also with a good response i would continue posting the story otherwsie i won't!

Thank U

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Edited by EhSaasS - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Ehsaas,
The prolouge is just fantastic.
Do continue soon.
Count me in.
Love
-Prachi
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Sajjal.
The Prologue is quite awesome! Please do continue this story.
And yes of course, please do PM me =))
Thanks.
Love,
Daania
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Posted: 15 years ago
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AWESOMEEEE BLOSSOM!!!!
ADD ME TO PM + UPDATE SOON 😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hi
i loved ur prologue
it was wonderful
plz update it and add me 2 ur pm list

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Posted: 15 years ago
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hay nic ss yar 👏
hay plz pm me the nxt prt
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wonderful prologue. I would live to read this SS.

Please continue soon and please add me to ur PM list.

Alisha

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hi sajjal :)
awesome prologue....plz do continue the story soon.........and do PM :)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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I just loved the prologue
Please add me to the pm list
and please continue soon...

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