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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: Khushboo_AN

@Naina and Aisha...that's such a cute start! 😳 Loved it to bits! Would you believe me if I say that I'm looking forward to the menu for dinner as much as I'm looking forward to what happens next? 😆 Main bhi na...continue soon!



haha thanks, but thats all the menu youre gonna get, as the emphasis of the night was purely dessert aka the best part of the whole thing 😆
thanks for commenting!
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Posted: 15 years ago
WOHOOO...so many updates to read...😲
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Posted: 15 years ago
Aishuuuuuuu, Nainz.....

WOW. You have got me so hooked on, I read this one part like 20 times everyday, hoping for another one.....

After the prologue, I was like, uh-oh....She's in love with Armaan, what's gonna happen? But I forgot you guys are also AN fans, you would bring AN together no matter what.....

Okay, coming back, I love the way you have portrayed the Modi family (or should I say families😆?)....

And I love Neil Modi, he sound toooooooooo cute!

Update soon!

Sheena ⭐️
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Posted: 15 years ago

PART 4


Dear Diary,

I miss home….home is India…..home is Mumbai….home is Sanjeevani..…home is HIS arms.

This is a beautiful country and Chicago is beautiful but my heart still pains….you know when I met Sid….for an instant I thought it was HIM…..I see him everywhere….am I going mad?

Sid's eyes reminded me of HIM…..then the barista's rolling of his eyes at my confusion with the million coffees reminded me of how he used to roll his eyes…..even Sid's hair reminds me of…….I think I am completely crazy.

I called him….he recognized my voice and then he kept the phone down without talking to me…..I hate him…I will move away for him….forget him….now I won't ever forgive him…that Sadu….I think I will date Sid….who cares ……this is already making me feel strong….the only problem is I don't have his whereabouts….oh my life is getting from bad to worse……forget it!!

Confused as ever…..oooooooooopssss its time for my first day at the internship here….all the best to me!!

Nikki.

Nikita closed her diary on her confused thoughts and grabbed her coat and rushed to the subway to be in time for her orientation. She entered the imposing building with her heart beating furiously and missing the warmth of her favorite Sanjeevani. She wrapped her arms around herself, hugging herself, her beautiful eyes appearing huge in her lovely face.

She went to the reception where she had been instructed to repot and asked the duty nurse where she was supposed to go for her orientation.

"Dr. Malhotra……you have to wait for Dr. Modi with the other interns" was her crisp reply and Nikita's mouth fell open in amazement.

Dr. Modi? Had she heard right or were her ears ringing?

"Excuse me…..Dr. Who?" Nikki couldn't help asking.

"Dr. Aarti Modi……she is your adviser and new boss" the lady explained and Nikki nodded.

Another Modi to deal with….she shook her head and looked up to gaze into the same eyes which had smiled at her yesterday.

"You?" both Nikki and Sid said simultaneously and Nikki heaved a sigh of relief. A familiar face was a welcome sight in this place even if the guy was a serial dater and she was his next victim.

"Welcome Dr. Modi" the nurse smiled at Sid who went and planted a kiss on her cheek and complimented on how gorgeous she looked even at fifty while Nikki looked in shock at the scene in front of her, opening and closing her mouth like a fish.

"Dr. Modi?" she asked in a strangled voice. She was going to go berserk….she was sure about that….why was she hearing the very name she was desperately trying to avoid?

"Yup….Dr. Sidhhant Modi…….the younger and more handsome Modi" he introduced himself giving Nikki a wicked smile.

"Younger?" Nikki asked curiously.

"Yup…..than Dr. Aarti Modi" he replied flippantly, fully understanding Nikki's question but choosing to give a smart answer instead of the truth. The truth could wait, he decided. The bhabhi of his needed to miss his bhai like crazy and his bhai needed to come to his senses before he let on the truth.

"What…what about Dr. Aarti Modi?" Nikki asked Sid.

"Dr. Aarti Modi….aka…Mom….is going to be the one leading the orientation toady….then I get rid of her…..as I smartly took orthopedics" he smiled giving her the advantage of the Modi smile which she had gotten a rare glimpse of with the other Modi……the other Modi had always scowled.

"Stop it Nikita" she shushed herself to stop thinking about Abhi every second of the day. She turned away to regain her composure and take a few deep breaths. When she turned around, she saw a few more interns join them. All of them introduced themselves to each other. They were Thomas Ortega, a very good looking blue eyed and black haired guy, James Kinsella, a blond, green-eyed guy and Jessica Lucero, a beautiful blond and blue eyed girl.

"Hello Interns" Dr. Aarti Modi's voice cut their animated talking in between and the group of interns turned to look at a tall, salt and pepper haired distinguished lady who was smiling at them.

Nikki's eyes took in her professional attire and easy smile and the twinkling eyes she shared with her son and felt a warm smile come on her face. She already liked her new boss and adviser who returned her smile and shook hands with all the interns.

The orientation went on smoothly and after getting done, Aarti called Nikki in her cabin and asked her to sit so they could chat.

"So Nikita…..why did you leave Sanjeevani…..it is one of the best hospitals and the new administration is trying to make it even better" she asked and Nikki's eyes clouded over and filled with tears which she immediately blinked away.

"Mam….I" Nikki started but Aarti interrupted her.

"Nikita….you can call me Aarti" she offered but Nikita shook her head.

"No Mam…..I…I can't she looked at her helplessly.

"Ok….whatever you are comfortable with then…..and just don't feel lonely….we would like you to feel at home so you can enjoy and learn from your internship" she told him sweetly and Nikki nodded.

"Thank you Mam….and I wanted to come here as my father asked me to and also as it has better prospects" Nikki lied through her teeth.

Aarti smiled to herself. This girl was lying to her. A mother's instinct wanted to question her about Abhi but she knew she had to handle it tactfully.

"Well we are glad to have you….your boss… Dr. Abhimanyu Modi did send glowing recommendations" she shared and saw Nikki take in a sharp breath and look at her with eyes huge with surprise.

So she was right in guessing…..there was something between this beautiful young girl and her firebrand elder child. Now what exactly it was and how deep it ran, she was definitely going to find out. First from Sid and then she would think of tackling Abhi….this time….she would make sure that he took her bait, hook, line and sinker.

At Sanjeevani, Abhimanyu Modi was in an explosive mood since the day Nikita Malhotra had left….no ran away from his life. He only talked rudely and replied to as much be necessary. He had retracted into his shell and it was difficult to have a conversation with him.

"Dr. Modi" an angry Riddhimma strode into his office. Everyone had given Ridzi the task to talk to him as they knew that he had a soft spot for her still.

"What?" he asked without looking up from the file he was reading. He had immersed himself with so much work that he barely had time to eat or sleep.

"We are tired of you" Ridzi went straight to the point and glacial eyes looked up at her.

"I particularly don't seek out your company or enjoy it too much either" he snapped back and Ridzi's beautiful grey eyes took an irritated look.

"The way you behave…..its intolerable to be in your company….and yeah I know you are our boss….but I dare say that I am here as a friend….a friend you chose to ignore" Ridzi said sharply. Abhimanyu Modi looked at her in shock. Never in his life had he thought that the soft spoken and simple girl would ever talk to him like that.

Having captured his attention, Ridzi's eyes softened and so did the tone.

"Please Dr. Modi…..stop being a tyrant….and accept the truth….you love Nikki and can't live without her" Ridzi said and he jumped from his seat.

"I can live without her" he answered, running his hands through his hair.

"S ure….that is why you can't sleep, are irritated all the time and ready to explode…..sure you can" Ridzi replied and Abhi closed his eyes. He hated the truth and more than that he hated to accept that Ridhimma was right.

"Papa said you recommended her highly to your Mom….…her present boss…….I think you should visit your Mom" Ridzi said with a smile in her tone.

Abhi smiled back and his eyes cleared. "What if she?" he asked for the first time uncertain and finally accepting the hand of friendship Ridzi was extending.

"Well Dr. Modi…..she…..won't be able to do anything….and forget about her rejecting you…. I just think it is high time for you to woo her……every girl likes it" Ridzi laughed and Abhi smiled back and Ridzi gave him a hug.

"You are welcome" she said softly to his muttered thanks and left.

Abhi sat on his desk and pondered over all the times they had fought, argued and come close to each other. They ran like a vivid picture in his mind. He knew he needed to trust again….but dare he?

"Nikita Malhotra……let's see if you can escape from me now……you are mine and I intend to keep it this way" his eyes took on a determined look and for the first time in 25 days he smiled….a smile of victory.

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Posted: 15 years ago
Honuuuuuuu!

WOW. I had been missing your writing for so long!

I loved the part! OOOh, Now Abhi's gonna go get his girl!

Update sooooooon!

Sheena! 🤗
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Posted: 15 years ago
Hey Honey,
Loved your scene🤗. Can't wait for the next part, i'm totally hooked right now!!
Poor Nikki, can't seem to get rid of the Modi's😆
Lots of Love
Indira
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Posted: 15 years ago
YOU'RE STILL THE ONE
Part 6

Instead of going home, Nikki decided to go and meet senior oncologist who was Ayesha's physician. She had been worried about Ayesha's fever and other test results. She had a nagging feeling that there was some bad news in store for her. But she had to go and get done with it.

She knocked on the door and asked with a smile on the face "Dr. Mathur, can I come in?' as she walked in.

'Hello, Dr. Nikita. How are you? Please tell me, what can I do for you?' the senior doctor asked her fondly, indicating her to take a seat. He had come to know Dr. Nikita pretty well since he had taken up Ayesha's case, which was close to one year now. Dr. Nikita had been keenly following her progress and taken a lot of interest in Ayesha's treatment. And today also he knew why she was here. As soon as any of Ayesha's tests showed anything slightly disturbing, Dr. Nikita would come knocking to his door. He knew that it was not that she had any doubts on his capabilities, it was just that she was too concerned for the little girl.

'Ayesha .... doctor, I am sure u saw her test results yesterday. And she has had fever today and her haemoglobin has dropped too. I was worried .... I was on night duty yesterday and she was very fretful the whole night, and just wouldn't let me go. I am not sure what has triggered all this. She just had the blood transfusion. It is too soon ....' her voice trailed off.

Dr. Mathur walked around the table and came close to where she was sitting, leaned on the table and said softly,

"Doctor, you know very well what all this means, don't you? We have been working on this case for nearly a year. She has shown very little recovery, but had been maintaining a status quo. But this time things have worsened and she is not responding well to the chemotherapy also. You are a doctor, and you know how fast cancer spreads in younger children. When she came to us, she was already at stage 3 of leukaemia. We have been trying our best to arrest it so that it does not go to stage 4. But I am sorry to say this, looks like we have not been very successful.'

This is exactly what Nikki had feared. Her eyes were full of tears. She knew that there were chances of this happening but she was not prepared for it at all. She had been avoiding to face this situation, to face that they would loose Ayesha so soon ....

'Now .... now what are we going to do?', she asked with a weak voice.

'Dr. Nikita ... first thing a doctor has to learn .... is we never give up hope. We keep on trying ... till a person is alive there is hope to save him ... so be strong ... keep a stable mind ... and keep treating your patient to the best of your ability, do you understand?' Dr. Mathur looked at her sternly and told her in a firm voice.

'We have started her on a stronger dose of chemo, thats why she was feeling quezy in the morning. But she told me how you had fed her breakfast. That was really nice of you. She needs all the energy she can get naturally thru her intake to fight all this. You will see her improve in a few days. We will see from there how to take it, okay?' he said now, in a softer tone once again. He understood how close the two of them were.

Nikki nodded her head and wiped her tears. She suddenly remembered she wanted to ask Dr. Mathur something else too,

'Doctor, is it okay to have a small party for Ayesha on Friday. It is her b'day and we all thought we will give her a surprise party'.

'Well, Dr. Nikita, that is 3 days away from today. I think she will be much better by then and also would be feeling much stronger, so I guess no harm in her celebrating her b'day. But please make sure that you do not exhaust her. That might not be too good for her as her immunity levels would fall. We do not want to deal with anymore complications than what we already have at hand, ok? Anything more?'

'Yes, Doctor..... one more thing ... how much more time do we have?' Nikki asked with her huge eyes full of sadness.

'Dr. Nikita .... as I already told u ... let us not loose hope ... I am talking to some of my colleagues across the world ... there are discoveries happening everyday in our field ... we might be able to do something for Ayesha soon. If there is anything that we can do, we will do it, so do not worry .... and do not give up hope.'

Nikki nodded and walked out of his cabin in deep thoughts.

Today had been the worst day of her life. First, the fight with Abhi, and now, this news about Ayesha. Things could not get any worse than this. She was at a breaking point. Did not know how she will continue without 2 most important people in her lives, Abhi and Ayesha. But she knew, she had to find the strength somewhere, somewhere from within. The most important thing she had heard today was 'Do Not Give Up Hope'. First, Riddhzi had pointed out that to her and now Dr. Mathur. If you have hope, you have chances of winning, but if you give up, you have nothing...... with this in her mind she walked toward the cafeteria ... to meet her friends and tell them about her plans for the party....

At the lunch table, she reminded Atul about Ayesha's b'day party and how they had planned to give her a surprise. All of them exclaimed, how great an idea it was. They were all excited to help out. So she started to plan. Atul said he will take Ayesha out for an hour in the afternoon to the library and keep her occupied telling her stories while all of them decorated the Ward. Muski was going to bake the cake, Anji would get the snacks and Armaan and Riddhzi said they will arrange for the games and entertainment. Just as they were winding up, Sid walked up with an angry face.

All of them were surprised, but Nikki was worried. She knew something had certainly gone wrong between him and Abhi, so worriedly she asked him,

"How did your first meeting with the board members go, Sid? I am sure you impressed them!"

Sid frowned and giving her a stare said, 'Nikki, I can handle board members. They are not a problem at all. I have grow up handling my dad. If I can handle him, I can handle anyone .... well almost anyone', he added as an after thought.

'Kyun Sid, kya hua?' Armaan asked.

'Mat pucho, yaar! I do not understand this Dr. Modi. One minute he is very professional, nice, approachable, ready to help me, and the next moment he is the most unreasonable guy I have ever met', Sid says irritatedly.

This got everyone interested. Hearing Dr. Modi's name they were curious. But Nikki was shit scared. Things could not get any worse ......

'Arre today, morning Nikki told me that she was no longer in the New Sanjeevani project,' he started ......

'Nikki ...... what? You never told us about this' all of them jumped on Nikki, looking at her accusingly.

'Guys .... no big deal .... I was going to tell you, but was busy planning for Ayesha's b'day party, so forgot', she tried to cover up, looking at Riddhzi for help.

'Hain Sid ... phir kya hua?' Riddhzi prompted Sid, so that their attention was diverted from Nikki to Sid.

'I asked Dr. Modi, why there was a change. And he simply replied saying, there were too many senior doctors on leave or out on a conference and they were short staffed so they wanted all the interns helping with the patients. So he had to move out Nikki from the project. When I asked him for how long ... he said it would be indefinitely ... he did not know when things would change. I requested him to find another solution to his problem about understaffing, since we needed Nikki's help on this project. But he just refused to listen to me and refused to budge saying that the decision was taken and he cannot change it now. This got me so angry ... he was not ready to listen to any reason. I wanted to explain to him that Nikki and I both had established good repo and were getting work done pretty fast. And this way we could get the report my dad wanted out fast. Making financing faster ... but he just would not listen. He was being so unreasonable! This got me so wild ! I told him in that case he will have to wait for the report that I needed to send out for him to get the financing, for the rest of his life and simply walked away from him', Sid exclaimed with disgust.

All the interns looked at him with their eyes and mouth open wide, in awe. They could not believe that anyone could say this to Dr. Modi and walk away alive. Armaan was the first one to recover, and walking upto Sid said,

'Hey dude! You were awesome!! Where are your feet?'

'Why? Here they are?' Sid said lifting one of them up.

'Arre mujhe tere paun chune hai! Tum dhanya ho! What we all could not do for last one year, you did it in 3 days! Tusi great ho, Mr. Sid!' he laughed and thumped Sid on his back.

Sid gave a blank look at Armaan, not understanding what he was saying. But did not care much. He was looking at Nikki. Trying to see how she was. She was so upset in the morning when he had left for the meeting. Even now her eyes were sad, but held an expression of disbelief. She could not believe what both, Abhi or Sid had done. They both were acting so unprofessional and immature.

'Sid, u shouldn't have done that! That was very unprofessional!' she scolded him.

'Nikki, what he did, removing you just like that from the project, was that professional? I was trying to explain to him how important you are to this project, which he very well knows, he was not even ready to listen. Well, now he very well be ready for not getting his project financed', Sid replied sarcastically.

Nikki was shocked. She cannot ever let that happen. She knew how important this project was for Abhi. She also knew how many merits this project had and how many people were going to be benefitted from it. They were not going to loose the financing of this project because of Abhi's stupid stubbornness and his mission to hurt her. She will have to talk to him she thought. Even though that was the last thing she wanted to do, she will have to knock some sense into him. She had no energy to face him today, maybe she will meet up with him tomorrow and try to make him see some sense.

Once again Riddhzi came to her rescue. She reminded the others that it was time for them to report back to their duties. So the gang got up chatting away, making fun of Dr. Modi and walked out of the cafeteria, leaving Nikki and Sid alone.

Nikki trying to divert Sid's anger asked him if he had eaten. Sid said no, so she asked if she can get him something to eat. As they both proceeded to the counter to get a sandwich for him and cup of coffee for Nikki, she said,

'Chalo, chodo, don't get angry, everything will be fine. We will work out something. I am there to help you out, u already know that. This whole week, I have my days free and will help you with the project, since I am on night duty for the whole of the week. So don't worry, we will be able to send out the first part of the report to your dad this weekend.'

'Nikki, that is not the point. It is not that I cannot do it without u. It is about working on this together. You both have been a team on this. And when I joined, it made 3 of us together. Now suddenly he cannot just throw you out. Bringing another person in at this late a stage is not going to help, because that person will not know anything about the project and we both will struggle on it together. Something is telling me that he is not taking this call professionally, it is something personal. Because he is an intelligent man and can see very clearly what I am trying to tell him. So do u want to tell me what is going on here, Nikki?' Sid deduced very intelligently.

And Nikki knew that she cannot deny the truth to him. 'Sid, you are right. It is something personal. I did something to make him very angry. But I don't want to discuss it. So please let it be. I will try to talk to Dr. Modi, apologize to him and see if we can work this out.' She said sadly. Sid was heartened by the hurt look in her eyes and agreed to back off.

'Ok, if you say so! I will not get into it any more, as long as you can convince him to let you be back on the project.'

'Thek hai, I have to leave now. I need to take some rest before coming back tonite. I will catch up with you tomorrow morning after my duty. And will talk to Dr. Modi also, tomorrow. Bye and catch you later, ok?' Nikki left a little relieved since Sid agreed to her plan. She will have to think about how to approach Abhi tomorrow, for now she had no energy to think about it !!!

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Part 7 updated -
Edited by ANfan_1810 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hapinezz13

PART 4


Dear Diary,

This is a beautiful country and Chicago is beautiful but my heart still pains'.you know when I met Sid'.for an instant I thought it was HIM'..I see him everywhere'.am I going mad?

Sid's eyes reminded me of HIM'..then the barista's rolling of his eyes at my confusion with the million coffees reminded me of how he used to roll his eyes'..even Sid's hair reminds me of''.I think I am completely crazy.

Nikki.

hehehe poor girls going crazy

"Dr. Malhotra''you have to wait for Dr. Modi with the other interns" was her crisp reply and Nikita's mouth fell open in amazement.

Dr. Modi? Had she heard right or were her ears ringing?

"Excuse me'..Dr. Who?" Nikki couldn't help asking.

"Dr. Aarti Modi''she is your adviser and new boss" the lady explained and Nikki nodded.

"Welcome Dr. Modi" the nurse smiled at Sid who went and planted a kiss on her cheek and complimented on how gorgeous she looked even at fifty while Nikki looked in shock at the scene in front of her, opening and closing her mouth like a fish.

poor kid ran away from one Modi and landed in a whole family ...he he he eh
what u resisit persists !
.

A familiar face was a welcome sight in this place even if the guy was a serial dater and she was his next victim.

ROFL !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😆😆

"'.but I dare say that I am here as a friend'.a friend you chose to ignore" Ridzi said sharply. Abhimanyu Modi looked at her in shock. Never in his life had he thought that the soft spoken and simple girl would ever talk to him like that.

always wanted this ridzy n abhi as friends .......but honey how come Abhi meltedin a minute .its hard to digest ? its like a volte face ........ its too quick ???
"Papa said you recommended her highly to your Mom'.'her present boss''.I think you should visit your Mom" Ridzi said with a smile in her tone.
dOES POOR Nikki know she is surrounded by her ex boss;s family .poor unlucky kid .her hearts gonna get a big shock😳

Brilliant ....but i was hopin Sid would make his bro mad in jealousy and rush to US ..... YAHAn TO ABHI khud he bahut jaldi raazi ho gaya ...im cofused ??
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Posted: 15 years ago

Hey Annie,

Loved your scene🤗

I was laughing soo hard when Armaan said Arre mujhe tere paun chune hai! Tum dhanya ho! What we all could not do for last one year, you did it in 3 days! Tusi great ho, Mr. Sid!
Poor Nikki, she is not having a good day! First with Abhi's fight then with Ayesha's report.😔
Please update soon as I am eager to find out the next part.
Lots of Love
Indira
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Posted: 15 years ago
Annie! 🤗

Awesome scene!

I loved the bond between Nikki and Ayesha... That's how docs should be...

And I loved Armaan's "Dhanya ho" to Sid. AND finally, FINALLY someone gave Abhi a piece of their mind. Thank you Lord!

Great part, looking forward to Ayesha's bday party!

Oh, and even though Abhi wasnt in the part, he was still very much in it.

Love,
Sheena


🤗

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