MY PREDICTION(updatd pg4)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey guys,
Aftr seeing d new promo,a silly dream came 2 my mind abt d future track.jz thot i shud share it wit u.bt pllz 4giv me if its boring as im nt a gud writr.(im nt dat fluent in hindi so i'll write in english.pllz 4gv me)
AFTER THE TRIAL.................
Krishna came back 2 hom soon aftr d trial fuming...........he evn ddnt manage to tlk to Pratigya.d only thng in his mind ws anger😡!!!!!!!!
How cn she do dis 2 me????am i dat less trustworthy?ANGAD KIDNAPPED PRATIGYA n she ddnt utter a single wrd abt d incident.wat hd i done to her to hide such a truth 4m me?infact wat HADN't i done to her to win her LUB???
i hv alwys supported her in evry thn,he hav always been a pillar 4 her 2 protect her from my family..alwys objected his family for her sake n earned their anger n disgust..........
He nevr lubd any1 mor dan DIS GIRL!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
BUT
wat dd she giv hm in return????????ITHNA BADA DHOKA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
anger rised n boild inside hm as he thot abt d incident.............
Enoughz enough.Today i hv to put a fullstop to evrythng..........
Krishna tuk his gun....
At d sam tym Prats cam running.She ws rlllly shokd to see Krishna in such a situation n her fear increasd as she saw d gun in hs hands..........
P:KRISHNAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Krishna turnd n sw Prats standn der......a smirk appeard across hs face
Due to panic,Pratigya fumbld 4 words.She ws sur dat he'll shoot her 4 wat he hd heard abt hr.......
P:Krishna.......wat r u dng?!!!!!!😲
K:haaaaaaa,im rlly gng to tell u.y dd u cam bk.u hv got bk ur Papa na?go.........go bk 2 ur maika.aftrall....dats wat u rly want.nw lev me alone!!!!!!!!!
P:Krishna..........,let me tell u d truth......
K:NOOOOOOOOOOOOO.its toooo late Pratigyaji,u deceivd me.u hv lost my trust in u........nw let me do wat im gonna do.
P:I alwys wantd 2 tell u d truth.........
K:Bus.....stop ur nonsense.i hv enf heard u.i ddnt evn thot abt my family
P;Bt nothn hapnd dat night!!!!!!!😭😭
K:dat doesnt matr to me nw!!!dd u evr tot abt me???????dd u evr trust me????if u hd den u shud hv tld me.u ddnt evn tried to undrsnd my feelings......no u wont undrstnd nethn
P:dnt say lyk dat Krishna......i trust u cmpltly..😭.nw gv me d gun.v shud tlk first.dnt do nethn........
K:hu r u to stop me?????😡u nevr evr lubd me.its 1ly me,FOOL,hu lubd u lyk mad.!!!!!!!!u nvr cnsiderd me as a husband......i ws 1ly ur naam ke waste pati!!!!nw its tym 4 me 2 accept d punishment 4 all my foolishness in my lyf
He focusses hs gun on hs temple
P:NOOOOOOOOOOOO
She jumps n manages to grab d gun frm hs hands.bt he ws too strong.........
P:No Krishna,dnt do dis!!! i wont let u die!!!!!!
K:Atleast let me do dat!!
During their revolt.......Pratigya tried wit all hr might to gt hold of d gun bt she cudn't.....
Suddenly.d sound of gunshot echoed thru d room!!!!!!!!!
A creepy silence spread der....as tho d tym stood still 4evr................!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
THUD
Pratigya fell down
It tuk a few seconds 4 Krishna 2 realize wat hd hapnd
K:PRATIGYAAAAAAAAAAAAA😲
P:K..R..I..S...H....N...A
dnt die.......
K:😭😭Hooooooo, i ws sooooo foolish......im d cause all des.pratigyaaaaaa,dnt lev me...i wont hurt uuuuuuuu........plz dnt lev meeeeeeee!!!!!!!
P:dnt b sry,i hd hurt u enf........im d reasn 4 my own lyf.......i wnt 2 say u smfn.....if smfn hapns to me.........
K:NOOOOOOO i wont let nethn hapn to UUUU!!!!!!!!
P:let me cmplt krishna........if smfn hapns to me i wont gt anthr chnc 2 tel u dat I LUV U.......


(guys im nt gud at writing.dis my 1st evr attempt.i knw its rubbish wen compared to othr writngs.der r so many talented writers here.i dnt evn knw dat if its ryt 2 post diz or nt.watevr it is plzzzzzzzzzzz comment.......den 1ly i'll gt confidence to write d nxt part)


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Posted: 15 years ago
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you're writing is very good, but I really don't want either of them to be hurt .....😭😭😭
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow....very good👏
Eagerly awaiting your next chapter..... keep it up hun👍🏼
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shabash...shabash...shabash......!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 i was actually biting myn nails...while reading ur chapter..plzz plzzz plzzzzzzzzzzzz cntinue....... akhir pata chal hi gaya ki CVs kaha se unique thots lasa rahe hain......😆 sab forum se chori ho rahi hain.....😆 (just joking) 😉

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Posted: 15 years ago
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that was awesome 👏 very well written 👍🏼
plss continue would love to read it!!
but dont kill anyone 😭😭😭

Edited by JoeyZaza - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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That was very touching yaar😃Your imagination was good😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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gr8 start.u did a very good job. i like it.plz continue soon.waiting for ur next part.

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Posted: 15 years ago
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I think it will happen in the way that you said but I don't think any of them will die. However I have to say the way that you have written it is very impressive! You have a true talent in the way you have showcased your thoughts while maintaining that dramatic effect!
Hats off to you! 👏
Edited by Hazera_14 - 15 years ago
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Posted: 15 years ago
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wow...well written👏, i was actually very nervous about it all loool
please do continuee😃
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey guys,thnk uuuuuuuuu vmuch 4 encouragn me sooooooooo much
Muuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuahhhhhhhhhhhhh 4 all
n herez d nxt part...........do cmnt!

I LUV U..................!!!!!!!!!!!!
d wrd echoed in his ears!!!!!d wrds wich he hd wishd 2 hear 4m Pratigya 4 ages......d moment wich he hd been w8n 4 so long..........he ddnt knw wat 2 feel nw-happy dat Pratigya jz cnfessd her lub 4 hm or sad 4 wat he hd don to hr!!!!
He ws holdn hr tightly lyk a child as tho he feard dat som1'll take hr away 4m hm.....
As he cam 2 reality............NO he cnt let hs Pratigya die.......der'll d no Krishna witout Pratigya........Krishnaz incomplet witout pratigya.............it ws lyk falling into a deep hole wit no light.......................
He ddnt spare a sec.he quickly took Pratigya hu ws already unconcious,safely in hs arms n rushed towards hs jeep........
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AT HOSPITAL
He ddnt knw hw he gt der.it ws astho som1 ws tellng frm inside........"Krishna,dnt let Pratigya to leav u!!!!!!!!!"
Evry1 got shockd as he rushed inside d hospital holding Pratigya in hs hands.
K:DOCTOR!!!!!!!!!!!!!
d whole hospital startled as a response to hs shout!!!!!!
suddenly a nurse cam running
N:y r u shuting lyk dis?dis a hospital,nt ur home
K:ha,so wat'll u do wen u hv ur dear 1 gt hurt?ROFL.stop ur nonsense n sav my wife.
He cnt c hs Pratiya in dat cnditn.
N:wait wait....d injury seems to b agunshot.u hv 2 infrm Police first.den 1ly v cn strt treatment
Krishna gt so furious😡.....here,hs wifez bw lyf n death n dis awful womanz sayn stupid
K:If u cnt gv hr treatment nw,i'll defo shoot u n beware........
At dat tym a doctor cam der hearn all dese commotion(rembr d 1 hu cam wen Krishna gt stabbed.truly i dnt wnt dat Doctrwa of arushi)
Dr:Krishna saab.aap...yahaan?
K:Dr saab my wife gt hurt n dis behoodi nursez telln abt Police instead of givn treatment 2 hr.if smfn hapns 2 my wife na,no1'll leave here alive!!!!!!!!
Dr:Krishna saab.aap fikr mat kijiyega.......mein sabka khyal rakhoonga........
They took Pratigya 2 d ICU.she ws severly hurt due to d gunshot as it went straight thru hr stomach......moreovr she had a lot of blood loss.It ws a grt pblm 4 d doctors to stop d bleeding
Krishna ddnt dare to mov infrnt of d ICU.frm wat d drs said dey r havn troubles to stop bleeding.He bcm mor n mor frantic n felt mor guilty for his deeds...........
Pratigya dnt lev me................

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