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Hi guys!!My name is madiha..This is my1st post here..This is the 1st time I'm ever writing a story...It is def not as good as everyone else...plzz comment(negative or positive)are welcomed...
14th February'2010
''LOVE''- This 4 letter word is really strange..It can make you or break you,It can give you all the happiness in the world or take away all the happiness within a second-
This is what my friend,Stella,once said me.First when I heard it,my reaction to it was like any teenager-Laughing and asking her not to lecture me with 'philosophy'.But now when I think about those words,there just 1 thing that comes to my mind-''She was absolutely right'',Only if I would have understood those words back then,I wouldn't have been standing here today,I wouldn't have felt so lonely,I wouldn't have felt so helpless....
My name is Christine Lyndon,top model of America,have been featured on all 'high-class'fashion magazines,have walked the ramp on every fashion shows of America,even have contacts with all the 'big daddy' of fashion world.But still today I feel lonely....
14th February-A Special day for everyone around the world as they celebrate 'the most romantic day of the year-Valentines Day'today.Everyone loves this day,Once upon a time even I used to,but now whenever I think about this day all I could remember is that how it destroyed my life.There I was standing on a cliff thinking-''Why did it had to happen?Why me?If I wouldn't have taken that decision,nothing of this would have happened.I would still had all my friends with me,my family with me..Only If 2 years back I wouldn't have met him....

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey... this is very nice for a first attempt :) I'm sure with more practice, you could be a great writer :) Keep it up!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: chhilt

<font color="#00cc00">Hey... this is very nice for a first attempt :) I'm sure with more practice, you could be a great writer :) Keep it up!</font>

thnxx for commenting 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hello sugar...
i like your writing
i have a small advise....
try to feel what you write, it brings the life to your writing. oh and make sure you proof read and that it makes sense to you. hope i helped!
i do like your use of words.

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Charmy




do check out my new picture book page :) and comment!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hy
i liked ur story
plz right on in the this form as it a kind of a dairy entry
it was gud i really liked it
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: charmyshah001

hello sugar...
i like your writing
i have a small advise....
try to feel what you write, it brings the life to your writing. oh and make sure you proof read and that it makes sense to you. hope i helped!
i do like your use of words.

❤️
Charmy




do check out my new picture book page :) and comment!

Thnx for ur advice..would def.keep in mind and thnx for commenting😊

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