My Version of Tomorrows (07/16/10)Eps

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Helloooo all u wonderful ppl 😃

I know many of u all, like me r depressed after todays eps, especially the precap...So I just thought I'd write my own eps of how the story shld progress now...like i ll use what they showed in the precap n all that happened till today but move fwd with my own story for tomorrow...I havent written anything like this since five yrs, so pls excuse n e errors...I dont know what there called now one shots, fan fictions, call it watever u like...n do comment plssshh 😳 even if its horrible šŸ˜† i can only improve with comments 😳 it wont b too long...just something that fits into a 20 min eps šŸ˜‰

The eps begins with Maan ending the mtg. Sasha gives one taunting smile to Geet n proudly walks out while Pinky n Adi sadly look at Geet n leave. As Maan gets upto leave Geet speaks out "Per sir..." Maan doesnt let her speak n says "Sasha is office ka kaam sambhalegi isliya tumhare cabin main Sasha ko deraha hu...tum apna samhaan waha se baahr lejaao" saying this Maan walks out while a teary eyed Geet looks at him with sad music playing in the background.

Tasha congratulates Sasha while Pinky n Adi silently look on. Geet walks out of the mtg room only to meet a taunting Sasha n Tasha. Sasha "toh Ms. Hoshiyarpur ab tumhe pata chala MK ke liya kaun ziada important hai" Geet looks away sad but remains quiet while Sasha conts "tumhe kya luga wo ak khel khel kur tum jheet gayi...aisa khelo se kucch pata nahi chalta...tumhe waise bahut kucch kho ko yeh jaana pada ke MK ke liya tum kucch nahi ho...ab jaao..yeh roti hui shakal kahi aur dihkana, jaake office khali karo...Tasha..come here...mere samaan move karo mere naye room main..." Tasha nods her head happily while a sad Geet slowly walks twds her room...Adi tells Pinky in a low tone "sir ne acha nahi kya...pata nahi unko achanak kya hua...Geet toh bahut mehnat se kaam kur rahi thi..." Pinky sadly nods n tells Adi they shld b there for Geet. Adi nods.

Geet walks into her office n starts to gather her stuff. She looks through the window n sees Maan in his chair looking elsewhere. She sadly remembers the happy moments from the prev night, how he defended her, their bhangra, n her dialogues in the barish. Tears roll down her eyes as she wonders what she did to receive such treatment from Maan. She remembers him from Hoshiyarpur mtgs n think he is indeed the Maan he was in Hoshiyarpur n how did she even mistake he cld be a kind hearted man. She wipes her tears n quickly starts to gather her stuff.

In MK's cabin, he looks around disturbed n wonders y hes so bothered. Hes now made sure Geet does not remain close to him then why is he still not feeling better? He turns his chair twds Geets office window n watches her pack her stuff. He remembers the moments he spends with her, their kurbaan hua dance, their hug in rain n sadly opens his eyes n looks at Geet still packing.He walks twds the window n places his hand on the window. He remembers Geet asking him last night whether he is still naraz? He starts to shake his head sad...Geet gets the last of her things n is walking out but stops seeing the flowers. Both remember the moment when Geet bought the flowers. Geet puts her stuff down, grabs the flower n remember Maans words he had said when he came over for the file. Maan remembers Geet saying she bought it for the person who helped her n remembers the how the thorn pricked her...Geet takes the flower n sadly with a slight hint of anger throws them in the dust bin..n says u always wanted them there Maan sir...main hi nahi samaj payi...and walks out of the office without noticing Maan standing at the window. Sasha walks into MKs cabin n calls out to him. He turns around n Sasha asks him whether he is ok. He nods, she wonders outloud why there r tears in his eyes. He asks her to come back later n she silently leaves. He closes the blinds of the window n sits back touching his eyes n wonders y it feels like hes loosing something precious? Why is his heart aching? He puts his head back n closes his eyes only to c Geets smiling face. Maan opens his eyes n says "Geet" sadly..

Outside Tasha taunts Geet while taking Sasha's stuff into the cabin. Adi comes and places his hand on Geets shoulder n says its only a small phase everything will b ok. Geet gives a fake smile n wonders where to keep her things. As shes looking around Sasha comes n asks whether shes thinking of where to sit. As an advice she offers to Geet to sit far away from Maans eyes as possible cus it seems he even hates her shadow. Geet sadly looks down. Pinky holds her stuff while Adi offers to find a good desk. As Adi n Pinky walk away Geet remembers Sasha's words n Maans recent behavior. She wipes her tears which started to flow again n with a determined look says 'maine kucch galat nahi kya...Maan sir jo kur rahe hai wo galat hai...meri mehnat ka yeh sila diya...bas...kyun hu main yaha? kyun? jab mujhse yaha naukri mili toh kahi bhi miljayegi..kamus kum roz is tarha beizat toh nahi hona padega..." She looks around for Pinky n Adi n walks over to them. As Pinky is about to place to box down, Geet stops her n tells her that theres no need. Adi n Pinky look twd her shocked. Geet explains when she wont b staying here she wont b needing a desk either. Pinky looks confused while Adi looks on. Geet walks upto them n thanks them for their unconditional support but she has realized theres nothing left for her here. She doesnt understand what has she done to get such treatment from ppl. Adi tries to explain that Sasha n Tasha r like that but Geet interrupts n says its not them who hurted me...Its Maan sir. and after what has happened I dont think I can work for him whole heartedly...why force myself...I will do some mistake or the other n Maan sir will get more upset..I shld find some other job. She looks at Adi hopefully who nods in assurance. Pinky offers to go home with her but Geet declines saying she has decided to leave the co but Pinky still has to fulfill her responsibility and that they shldnt b sad. Something new is waiting for her n shes sure wherever God takes her will b in the best interest for her n that they ll always stay friends.

Pinky n Adi smile. Geet tells them now theres only one thing left to do. She takes a paper n pen n pens down her resignation while all Maaneet moment run through her head. As she signs she questions herself as to why it seems so hard to break away from this place? She sadly finishes her signature n asks Pinky to keep her stuff she will b back in two mins. Adi n Pinky look on sadly as Geet walks away.

Geet knocks on Maans cabin. "Yes". Geet silently and sadly walks in. Maan feels more sad but tries to act all rough n says y is she here? if she had anything to say she cld have told Sasha n Sasha wld have gotten it to him? Geet sadly nods n apologizes saying "Sasha Ma'm cabin set kur rahi thi...mujhe luga jitni jaldi main aapko yeh dedhu sahe hoga." Maan looks at her confused not able to face her he turns his chair away n closes his fist n eyes tightly while saying "jo bholna hai saaf saaf bholo...mere paas time nahi hi" Geet gives a sad smile n says "sorry mr. khuranna...aap bahut busy insaan hai...bas aapko yeh dena tha..." she places the letter on his desk...waits a second in hope he'd turn around but he doesnt so she walks to the door...pauses for a min n with teary eyes looks back again...She walks out the door with tears falling down...

Maan gets up n runs to the door...he opens his door n extends his hand out to Geet who is walking away not knowing Maan there...She disappears n he goes back in..He notices the letter on the desk n confusingly picks it up...He opens the letter n is shocked to see Geet's resignation.

THE END šŸ˜† šŸ˜†

plssh comment..i hope it wasnt that bad...i tried to keep it as realistic as possible šŸ˜†

love...
Teesha 😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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aweesoomme
lekinn ekkk chhaapppiii (hug) too
bannntaa haii yaar
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Originally posted by: sweet_simi

aweesoomme

lekinn ekkk chhaapppiii (hug) too

bannntaa haii yaar



awww thanks Simi...glad u liked it 😳

hope i got ur name right 😳

im doing this after a long time so i was nervous.. 😳
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Posted: 15 years ago
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This is really good. I'm glad she resigned. He deserves to see that he can't keep doing that to Geet. You should really continue this!
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Posted: 15 years ago
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It was awesomešŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘..WOW..I had tears in my eyes when I finished reading...I hope the CVs decide to show us some scenes as sensible as this!!! Great work...do keep writing😊😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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continue!!!!!!! i wanna know what happens next please please please!!!! Btw it was amazing.....i loved it....u should know that i liked it cause i am beggin u to continue!!šŸ˜†
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Posted: 15 years ago
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really good.. keep it up.. I wasn't able to sop tears running down from my eyes.. I loved it a lot...
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow nice prediction..I relaly loved it..Continue..I want to see Maans reaction after seeing the resignation note..
but
I really dont want Geet to resign her job..I feel she may work in Clients place..as an employee of Khuraana construction..Like in software industry term..outsourcing..I wish that would happen..
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Gr8 jod.... Really good love the whole thing....I'm happy that geet resigned and maan will stop her....
Teesha thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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@XAiSHBaBy08X, tanya_vi, mysterygurl1427, febinyusuff, muskaansara, ridziqbal, pisces16:

Thank you guys sho muchšŸ¤— šŸ¤— šŸ¤— ! It means so much....n yes I will cont...one eps per day :D This is just my way of reducing my anxiety...thanks once again for the comments...

@mysterygurl1427: awww šŸ¤— ...honey u dont need to beg, i will cont..promise :D

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