FF: Tere Sang (Authors note Pg 16)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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Tere Sang

This is the story of two ppl Krishna (21 yrs old) and pratigya (17 yrs old), who think different from others. They decide to challenge the norms and regulations set by society which hv been followed for centuries and live life on their own terms. They leave the comforts of home and move from village to village, city to city in search of excitement and enjoyment. But, r they right in their thinking'will they succeed to pave their own path '.or will they hv to bend to d age old customs and mend their thinking and ideologies. Both of them have a modern approach to life and don't believe in the age old cultures and traditions. They r fun-loving and adventurous people and don't consider their parents as guides and best friends, but think of them as old nagging ppl who r just there as thorns in their life. Will they prove to be legend or will they realize what their parent's importance in life. To know, log on to pratigya forum on www.india-forums.com at xyz time (bcse updates kii koi guarantee nahi)

Pratigya Saxena: A 17 yr old school going girl, she is in 12th standard and in a few months will pass out and join Govardhan College, Allahabad where her father is a professor. She is in love with one of her father's pupil Krishna Singh.

Krishna Singh: A 21 yr old college boy who studies in Govardhan College, Allahabad. His father is one of the trustees of the college which makes him very carefree in his attitude towards studies due to which his professor Sham Saxena and him don't share a good relationship. He is in his last semester and has one more month left to graduate. He is in love with his sir Mr Sham Saxena's daughter pratigya.

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shruthiR thumbnail
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Nice! You managed to come up with another ff so soon.It sounds very interesting.Looking forward to the first chp😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey u started a new ff gr88 😊😊😊 nice concept plzz post the first part soon 😛😛 and thank God KriYa is in lub frm the beginning 😛😆
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey,
wndrful beginning!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏👏hmmm............looks lyk Shamjiz d villain here 4 Kriya.luuubbbbbbbd d fact dat kriya r in lub frm d beginning itself........w8n without patience 4 ur nxt update.hey,4gt 2 say dat i ws a regular silent reader f ur Kidnap.i ws so sad wen u ended😭😭😭😭.bt nw im sooooooooooooooooooooooooo happy dat u r writn yet anothr 1.hop dis'll wash away my tears.............Keep gng n make my heart say TERE SANG instead f KIDNAP❤️
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Chp 1

Krishna stroked d soft white cheeks moving his fingers down over the soft arm and then the hand. He fidgeted around with the tender finger while she continued looking at him smilingly. His hand moved down to her feet, he caught hold of her foot and tickled its base. She kicked hard trying to free her leg. He moved his face forward and touched his lips over the soft pink cheeks, softly pressing them. She made weird noises, mainly due to d nipple in her mouth. Pratigya turned to Krishna and said "stop playing with that baby, and listen to me"

K: its so cute….haina chuuchi poochi poo

P: krishu…..

K: fine… (leaving the baby )….what???

P: dad is so angry….he gave me hell last nite, I think he saw us on d road (they hd gone out on his bike)…he was screaming that I shud stay away from u and vagera vagera

K: so wat did u say??

P: that I luv u and will never leave u….i will die if I stay away from u

K(laughing): so sir must hv given u a hiding

P(angry): sure…he sent me off to my room without dinner and today mornings breakfast

K: great….so u must b hungry now wat wud my lady want

P(flirtingly): u

K: main toh tumhara hi hu…..right now I'm talking about food

P: dosa!!!

K: right

He hailed d waiter and odered her dosa and coffee for him. Pratigya's skool had just finished and Krishna bunking his lecture (as usual) had picked her up and driven her off for lunch. They were sitting in their favorite caf where Krishna had chanced upon a cute baby on d neighboring table and was playing with it instead of paying attention to pratigya's complains.

P: u know….dad is hitler's re-incarnationn…sab cheez me discipline….plus mummy..sati savitri ..har baar yahi kehti hai…ki yr dad is right listen to him he tells u for yr good….

K: hmmm…..

P(anger): stop playing with that kid…..

K: ok ok…sorry…I heard everything…I know yr dad is one Hitler….even Hitler wud take training from him.(laugh)

P: so wats yr side of the story…wat r u doing after graduation??

K: papa like join d family business or get a job its yr choice…like I want to work…boring

P: so???

K: I was thinking….this routine life is getting to my nerves…imagine everyday get up go to office work cum back eat food and sleep everyday….yuck…plus maa is bride searching

P: for u???....didnt u tell her abt me

K: papa jumped to catch my neck….he didn't approve of u…he was like ki vo toh skool jati bachii hai…bahu kya banegi!!

P:*laugh*

K: cracked ppl….seriously….so though y not do something hatke

P: What?? *excited*

K: run from home…live life on our terms…no parents or college and office jhanjhat….just u and me….alone in the wide world

P: wow!!!....but hw can v???...wont d police or ppl find us??

K: that's d excitement darling….running from them…hiding escaping….living life on d edge…wat say?? …r u in.

P: I still think…r v right??.....i mean…hw can v??

K: mujh par vishwas hai??

P; khud se bhi zaada

K: toh baas….mujh par chor do….it will b fun…just u and me

They both agreed to meet late at nite with their respective baggages. Krishna was going to cum to pick pratigya up, she hd to sum hw manage to exit her house.

Shamji was fuming with anger, while nainaji was coaxing him to gulp up his tea. Prats had left skool 3 hrs ago but was still not home, while krish had also been missing from his lecture. He had joined d dots and knew quite well where prats had gone.

S: let her cum….hw many times hd a warned her angst that gud for nothing Krishna singh but she refuses to listen…aaj toh iskii shaamat hai

Pratigya walked in waving her bag in d air. She was excited for tonites escapade. Angrily shamji walked upto her blocking her way in, "kaha gayi thi??"

P: meri ek saheli ke saat thi (trying to walk in)

S: saheli ya tera yaar??....uss Krishna ke saat thi naa??

P: pata hai toh pooch kyu rahe hai??

S: kitni baar bola hai….door raho usse…samajhme nahi aata kya??

Nainaji(N): bachi hai …hum samajhayenge usse

S: aab se nahi hoga….isse toh me thik karungi…chal

Pulling her into her room and locking the door behind him. Pratigya kicked the door hard, then turned and smiled "kuch bhi karlo…..aaj raat ke baad sab kuch badal jayega daddy…..u will regret shouting at me …u will.😡

Precap:

Pratigya threw her bag out of the window, Krishna stood below ready to catch it. He looked up at pratigya and blew a flying kiss to her. Pratigya blushed and turned, but turned back and blew a kiss back to him.😳😳😳

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Posted: 15 years ago
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me first 😃 will rush to read then comment 😛😆

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wow such a gr8888 part 👏👏👏👏👏👏👏 LUB it ye ff to shuru se hi itni interesting hai agay agay kia hoga 😆😃😃😳😳 so they are running from their home to live a life of their own 😳 looking forward for the next paart 😳😳😳 and once again 👏👏👏👏👏
continue sooon 😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Good story...the only concern i have is pratigys being a minor...........she should have be like 18 or 19:)
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Oooh!! Full on break the rules type huh! It was a very nice chp⭐️Looking forward to the next one😊
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Aaaayyeee Haayyeeeeeeeeee Sooooooooooooo Sweeeeettttt!!!
I Have No Idea Why Im Blushing After Reading The Precap Roffffllllll!!!
Update Soon After That You Can Ask For DOUBLE Commentbo's Hehe
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Wow....very interesting and lubbly 1st chapter😃.....
Cant wait for the next update....Keep it up sweety👍🏼👍🏼👍🏼

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