mayur os nupurs comeback edited

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Posted: 15 years ago
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os for nupurs comeback scene in mjht style it is big so ill write in parts if u like 1st part ill continue
here i go
mayank- ria have u gone mad wat r u talking remember im ur proffesor and u r my student hoe can u expect dat ye phir se koi nayi drama hain kya pehle din ki tarah.
ria- no sir ye koi drama nahin hain i really love you agar main aapki student hoon to kya main aapse pyaar nahin kar sakti pyaar soch samaj ke nahin karte hain si bas ho jaata hain.
m-wohi to main tumhe keh raha hun maine apni life mein sirf ek hi ladki se pyaar kiya hain meri wife nupur se ab mein aur kisi ke baarein mein sooch nahin sakta.meri nupur kijagah koi nahin le sakta. saying dis he went from der all r watching dem even sajan and rohash were present all were shocked
s- ria tum ne mayank ko propose karne ke baare mein socha kaise kya jaanti ho tum uske baarein mein
rg- tumne galat kiya riya tumhe aisa nahin karna chahiye tha
saying dis dey also leave
mayank in his house catching locket remembering nupur kyun tum mujhe chod ke chali gayi, kyun kiya tumne mere saath aisa agar tumhe jaana hi tha tokyun aayi tum mere life mein kyun nupur kyun .he breaks down
next day in college
ria comes infront of mayank and mayank ignores her and was about to leave
ria- sorry sir
mayank turns back in shock
ria- mujhe aapse woh sub kuch nahin kehna chahiye tha par jab bhi aap meri care karte te mujhe laga aap mujhe pasand karte hain isi liye saare students ko chod kar aapne mujhe aapka assistant banaya par.......
m-(breaks her) maine aisa isliye kiya kyunki tumhari baatein mujhe meri nupur ki yaad dilathi hain(by now all gather der) meri nupur bhi aisi hi thi bina soche samje bolna har baat par gussa krna uski favourite hobby hain(he smiles)
ria -toh woh meri taraah thi
m-nahin tum uski tarah baatein karti hon par uski tarah nahi hon woh aisi nahin thi woh bilkul alag thi uska sirf 1 hi sample hain tha (he gets teary)
ria- kaisi thi woh
m-lambe baal hamesha pony dalthi thi (a girl is shown drying her hair all her hair on her face), uska favourite colour red tha kyunki woh love kisymbol hain ( girl wears white chudidaar is shown not her face), woh filmi thi sab bagwan ki puja karte hain woh sharukh ki (she is shown giving aarti to god only back), makeup ke bina ek pal nahin rahti thi,film gaane gana, danc karna, jab dekho bak bak karna sajna savarna use baht pasand the aisi thi meri nupur bilkul filmi (girl is shwn singing aarthi and her face is not clear becoz of thali she completes it and places down and folds her hand now her face is shown )
oshe takes the thali and moves round house similar to ash in mohobattein her hair is open she reaches someones bedroom der one old man is getting ready for hospital. she gives aarthi to him.she touches his feet. he blesses her
g-kya baat hain aaj itni jaldi ready ho gaye hain
old man- haan nupur beta woh actually call aaya tha kuch emergency hain kya tum ready ho toh dono saath mein jaayenge
n- papa aap bhi bhi naa apna bilkul kyal nahin rakte 5 baje aaye aur 8 baje nikal rahe hain itna kam karennge toh aapko doctor ki zaroorat padegi
he smiles puts his hand on her head and says tu hain na mere kyal rakne ke liye
n- aap bhi na gol gol baatein karke mujhe mana lete hain ab bahut hogaya emotional drama neeche chaliye breakfast tayyar hain aur singh uncle bhi
p- woh aa gaya kya itni subah ab mera dimag kayega woh kal hamari behas hui thi baghwan pls mujhe us discipline school se bachana ek aakri baar pls
nupur smiles-aakhri baar aap daily aise hi kehte hain
p-kya karun daily subah inka darshan jo karna padta hain tu chal main aata hun
(she smiles and leaves)
on the dining table
mr.khanna comes and takes his sea between nupur and mr.singh)(mr.singh singh and mr.khanna are child hood friends mr.khanna is doctor and singh is retired military major both are neighbours mr.khanna stays with nupur as mrs khanna is expired and singh with his wife ) both of dem r silent nupur seeing at both of dem starts talking
nupur-uncle aap ke liye maine kuch banaya hain aapka favourite gajar ka halwa
s(he was about to take but stops looking at mr.khanna)nahin mujhe nahin khana khaung to phir sab mujh par chillayenge
n-koi kuch nahin kahega main bhi dekthe hoon ki koi aapko kaise kuch kehta hain
s-nupur tu hi meri beti hain meri biwi aur dost to mere dushman hain
k- aaj kal to balai ka zamana hi nahi raha hum tere lambi umar ke liye hi toh tujhe tok the hain
s-aur kitne din jiyunga har pal armaan marke jine se acha hain ki main mar jao (dono behas karna shuru karte hain and s takes a knife and points to khannas neck then suddenly nupur breaks dem )
n- uncle mein bul gayi aunty ne aapko bulaya tha
s- aunty ne bulaya tune unse yeh kyun kahan mein yahan hun ab mar gaya.
k-use batane ki zarorat nahin hain babhi ko acchi tarah se patah hain aap wahan nahi toh yehi honge
s-dekh saale tuh phir se mat shuru ho ja (pointing knife towards him)
n- uncle aunty
(he frigthens and leaves saying baad mein dekhlunga)
both of dem smile
k- chala gaya acha hua tune mujhe bacha liya warna wo mere murder karne ke mood mein tha
n- aap bhi na papa jab dekho uncle ko chidate rehte hain dats not fare
k-meri chod tu kya kar rahi thi tu janti hain na woh diabetic hain phir use gajar ka halwa kyun kila rahi thi
n-maine woh halwa diabetic sugar fre tablets se banaya tha
k-(he smiles pats her head)tu bhi na meri samajdar beti hain
n- ab chale warna late ho jayenge
scene shifts to excel
samrat guitar baja raha hain aur mayank is singing
a girl runs shouting didi runs to nupur and she pulls her dress she turns with lot of ballons gives one o dat girl kisses her and leaves.
mayank starts singing ek ladki ki tumhe kyan sunao daastan
songis continued and for each line nupur reaction is shown playing with kids. song is shown with both full of life. all students sajan, rohash are dancing along wid him and ria is listening to him with full interest.
next day morning mayanks house he is in deep sleep he hears someone knocking door with lot of difficulty he opens door


part2
mayank is shocked seeing the person
m-ria tum itni subah yaha tum yaha kyakar rahi ho
ria-hold it aap kitne sawaal puchte hain aur main aapki guest hoon mujhse darwaja parhi baat karenge andar invite nahi karenge
m-nahin tum jaa sakti hon
ria-aap kitne sadu hain ladki ki respect karna aap ko aata nahin pata nahin nupur ne aap ko kaise bare kiya
m-(hearing dis he melts )acha andar aao bolo kya baat hain
ria- bolo nahin chalo
m-par kaha aaj sunday hain college bhi nahin hain mujhe sona hain
ria-jaanti hun aaj sunday hain isiliye aapko bahar le jaane aayi hun
m- dekho ria main pehle bhi keh chuka hun mujhe insab mein koi interest nahin hain behtar hoga tum apna raasta badal lo main nahin aaonga
ria- aap to aise keh rahe jaise main aapko date pe le jaane aya hun
m-matlab
ria- main aapko apni boyfriend se milane le jaarahi hoon
m-kya main tumhare boyfriend se milne kyun jao
ria- kyunki ab jab aapne mujhe reject kiya hain mujhe life main aage badna hain na isiliye maine apne liye naya boyfriend ke baare main socha hain main aapko isliye lejarahi hoon ki aap decide kare woh mereliye correct hain ya nahi aap jante hain main kitni inteligent hoon main koigalti na karun isiliye aapki help maang rahi hoon
m-main tumhara proffesor hoon dost nahin tum mujhse aisi kam karwa nahin sakti
ria- professor dost nahin ho sakte aise kisne kaha hain aap college main mere ikloute aur best friend ho aapko mere saath chalna padega ab bahut hogaya sawaal jaa kar ready ho jaiye warna hum late hojayenge(saying dis she forces him)
m-acha tik hain main dus minute main aaya
(both are at dining table)
m- waise jaana kahan hain tumse milne woh aa kaha raha hain
ria- cofeeshop nahin beech nahin restaurant
m- tumhe nahin pata woh kaha aayega ek kaam karo use phone karke pucho woh kaha aa raha hain
ria -main nahi karsakti
m-kyun
ria- kyunki mujhe uska number nahin pata hain
m- kya atleast tumhe uske ghar ka address to pata hoga
(ria nods saying no)
m-tum usse pehli baar kab mili
ria - main usse ab tak nahin mili
m-dont say ki tumhe uska naam bhi nahin malum
ria - nahin
mayank puts hand on his head
m- tum pagal ho gayi hon bina ladke ko dekhe, jaane tum ne usse pyar kiya kahan sapno main tum kya bol rahi hon mujhe kuch samaj main nahin aaraha
ria - woh actually mujhe mere m.right ko dundna hain aur isme aapko meri help karni hain
m-tumhe main kaise dikh raha hoon
ria- bilkul sharukh ki tarah
(mayank blushes remembering nupur )
ria(in her mind)- atlast sir jaal main fas gaye
m-(comes back to his senses) main koi sharukh nahi hun aur main tumhara help kyun karun
ria -kyunki main hoon na main sharukh ne bhi amrita ki help kiya hain main to aapki favourite sudent hoon aap meri help nahi karenge toh kaun karega pls sir maan jayiyena aapko............ sharukh ki kasam aap ne mana kiya to nupur madam ka dil tut jayega pls
m- ria emotional drama karna band karo
ria becomes dull all her efforts in vain
m- ab baiti kyun ho chalna nahin hain kya
ria gets excited -really
both roam throughout day to different places ria rejects all boys saying different reasons its night dey are at cofee shop
m-ria raat ke 11baj rahe hain subah se tumne 1000 ladko ko deject kiya sab ghar ja chuka hain ye cofee baar bhi band hoga i think hame ab ghar chalna chahiye
ria - aur thodi der
m- pls ria bohut ho gaya ab ghar chalo mujhe bahu neend aarahi hain mujhe kal college bhi jaana hain
ria- tik hain chaliye
both leave home
next day morning in shimla i forgot to say nupur is in shimla now she is perform daily aarthi she takes the aarthi and moves round house she enters khannas room khanna gets up with lot of dificulty becoz of hangover at night
n-uth gaya aap lagta hain ab tak uthra nahin hain aapko nahin singh uncle ko kehna chahiye wohi aapko jabardasti pilate hain
k-tum sahi keh rahi hon saari galti uski hain
n- aap chup rahiye bilkull chup aao kar kya rahe te aap unhe rok nahin sakte te kehne ko to doctor hain par khud ka bilkul kyal nahin hain ab aise kya dekh rahe hain main hospital jaa rahi hun kuch zaroori kaam hain aap baad mein aa jana puchenge nahi kya kaam hain aaj akshay ka bir'day hain maine uske parents kowarn kiya hain aaj nahi aaj nahi aaye toh unki kair nahi
k- par beti
n-kahana chup bilkul chup main aur kuch sunna nahi chahti
saying dis she leaves she sees mr.singh at door she angrily stares and leaves
s-lagta hain pani bahut garam hain
k-sab kuch teri wajah se saying dis he gets into washroom
at excel
sam- goodmorning mayank kalpura din kaha the
m-puchna mat it was horible
sam- kya hua nupur to nahin hain tumhe tang karne ke liye
just den dey hear ria asking someone about mayank
m-o god phir aagayi sam agar woh yaha aayi toh kehna main clg nahi aaya
s(in full nautanki)-mayank tum mujse jooth bolne ke liye keh rahe ho jooth bolna galat baath hain chashmish ko bilkul pasand nahin hain
m-samrat pls mujhe tang mat karo ria kaafi hain tang karne ke liye use mila to mujhe kacha chaba jayegi pls (seeing ria coming in der direction he hides behind pillar similar to rose day)
ria- samrat sir aapne mayank sir ko kahi dekha hain
s-( looking at the pillar and mayank beginng him not to say) woh maine mayank ko......... dekha
(mayank gets angry)
ria- kahan
s-use maine college mein dekha tha parso
ria -main parso ki nahin aaj ki baat kar rahi hoon
s-aaj maine use nahin dekha kuch kaam hain kya mujhe bolo agar mila toh bol dunga
ria- kuch nahin main kudh unhe doondh loongi(she leaves)
mayank gets up and says thank god
thank god nahin thank samrat samrat from behind
m-no thanks tum kar kya rahe the tumne to mujhe dara diya
s- meri chodo tum kya kar rahe ho
m- tum kehna kya chate ho
s- mayank sharma aur ladki se chipna aaj mujhe nupur ki yaad aa gayi
m-tum jaisa soch rahe ho waisa kuch nahin hain main sirf nupur se pyar karta hoon aur ye baat tum bhi acche se jaante ho
s-sorry itna gussa kyun ho rahe ho waise tum usse chip kyun rahe the
m-lambhi kahani hainyeha kada raha toh phir aa jayegi tumhari cabin main chal kar baat karte hain
dey leave towards sams cabin
in hospital
nupur brings cake and makes all arrangements its a suprise party akshay was taken out dey r waiting for akshays parents she hasnt seen his parents yet just den guy enters
excuse me kya mai akshay se mil sakta hun
n-akshay nahin hain waise aap kaun hain (she remembers) aap hain ko sharam nahin aati aapko itne dino se akshay se milne nahin aaye uski bilkul parwa nahin hain
guy- aap kya keh rahi hain kuch samaj main nahi aaraha
n-samaj main nahi aaraha khud galti karte hain aur mujhe galat kehte hain and she starts blabbering
nupur is continuously blabbering just den khanna interrupts
k-nupur tum inpe gussa kyun kar rahi ho
n-papa dekhiyee na yeh akshay ke papa hain aur usse milne itne dino se nahi aaye
both are shocked - kya
k- beta yeh akshay ke parpa nahin hain yeh akshay ke parents hain (pointing towards a couple) yeh to akshay ke doctor hain mumbai se aaye hain dr.rahul mehta
n- sorry waise main kyunsorry bolu aap bol nahi sakte te kya muh me laddu te kya
r-aap bolne ka mauka dengi to bolungana kab se bak bak kiye jaa rahi hain
n-main bak bak karrahi hun and dey start to fight
k-hold down hold down tum dono world war karne ke mood main hokya
(listening dis nupur becomes dumb she remembers cj and mayank)
k-waise bets maintumhe subah batane wala tha par tumne mujhe
r-bolne ka mauka nahi diya hoga itna jo bolti hain kabhi kisi ki sunegi to acha hoga
n-dekhiye mujhe aapse ladne ka mood nahin hai saying dis she laves
rahul stands confused
in excel samrats cabin
samrat bursts out laughing like hell
s- tum to gaye dud mujhe laga nupur hi dangerous hain yeh toh uski maa nikli
m- very funny mere nupur ko kuch math kehna vo bahut sweet thi
s- acha baba sorry tumhari nupur best hain ab tik hain
m-tik hain (both smile) main jaa raha hun mujhe class ke liye late ho raha hai bye
s- bye aur all the best ria se bachne ke liye(both wink at each other )

in hospital
akshays operation is going on actualy he has brain tumour all are tensed nupur and akshays parents nupur prays to god after sometime doctor comes out
nupur runs to rahul
n- akshay kaisa hain woh tik to hain na
r-maine apni taraf sepuri koshish kiya hain par
n-(tensed)par kya
r-agar 24 hours main use hossh nahin aaya toh uska bachna mushkil hain
all are shocked
23 hours gone akshay stilldoesnt get consciousness all are trying der level best just den nupur remebers something she brings mp3 sound and plays it to maximum
seeing dis khanna starts shouting at nupur -have you gone mad wat are u doing
just den nurse calls him pointing towards akshay all were shocked
akshay loves to dance whenever he hears music he automatically shakes his body even in sleep dance was his passion only nupur knows dat
all were happy and thank nupur for wat she has done
later rahul comes and meets nupur
in khannas cabin
r- subah maine jo kuch bhi kaha tha uske liye sorry
n-aap ne jaanbuz kar nahin nahi kaha aap aap ki jagah sahi te main meri jagah sahi hoon
r-mujhe aapse kuch baaat karni thi(hesitatingly)
n-kahiye
r-woh main mumbai main children ke liye ek special hospital bana raha hoon aur use sambhalne ke liye aap jaise person ko doond raha hoon kya aap mere saath mumbai aayenge
n- ji nahi main mumbai aa nahi sakti
r-aapko main itna acha offer de raha hoon sab log mumbai jaane ke liye taraste hain aur aap mana kar rahi hain agar salary problem hain toh aap jitna chahegi utna dunga
(she remembers d day she was entering mumbai how excited she was ,how worried gunjan was, how she met mayank den she gets back to her senses )
n-maine kahana mujhe nahin aana aap mujhe force kyun kar rahe hain saying dis she leaves
r to himself ajeeb ladki hain palmain ladti hain pal main rut jaati hain aur to aur gamandi hain main use bav de raha hoon aur woh tevar dikha rahi hain
k- woh natak nahin karrahi she is serious
r-main kuch samja nahin
k-3 mahine pehle ki baat hain
(flash back on d day of barsi )
nurse comes shouting to khanna doctor vo patient jo teen saal pehle koma main gayi thi use hosh aagaya
both of dem run to her room
nupur slowly is moving her hands and legs allaccident scenes are going through her mind she gets up shouting mayank gunjan samrat
she finds nurse in front of her she catches and asks her
mayank gunjan aur samrat kaha hain
nurse is silent
n-aap kuch bol kyun nahi rahi hain woh tik toh hain na
just den khanna enters
k- dekhiye aapko teen saal baad abhi hosh aaya hain itna depression aapke mind ke liye tik nahin
n-(is shocked) teen saal gujar gaye hain par mayank gunjan samrat hain kaha doctor pls mujhe bataiye main unse milna chahti hun
k-yeh kaun hain hum is naamm ke kisi bhi shaks ko nahin jaante hain
n-woh mere pati , behen aur dost hain joh mere saathaccident ke waqt car me te
k-hamne aise kisi patients ko treat nahin kiya aap jis stage mainyaha aayi hain aapka situation bahut critical tha badi mushkil se aapbachi hain lagta hain accident bahut horrible tha car khai main gira tha i dont think dey have survived agar wo zinda hote toh aapse milne zaroor aathe
hearing dis nupur breaks down kyun hua yeh sab kyun chalegaye tum sab mujhe akele chod kar kun hua yeh sab
nurse brings food for her but she doesnt eat khanna looks at dis and goes to her
k-beti main tumhara dard samaj sakta hoon par aise karke tum kise takleef de rahi ho tumhare nahin kaane se woh log wapas nahin aayenge khud ko sambhalo tum aise khud ko takleef dogi to dard unhe hoga khud ke liye nahin to unke liye jiyo
n-mainab kya karun kaha jao mere saare apne us accident main mujhse dur ho gaye hain bauji ke paas kis chehre se jao unhone mujhse mayank se shaadi ke waqt h rishta tod diya tha gunjan thi jo hame baand ke rakti thi ab woh bhi nahin hain mayank ke bina bauji ke paas nahin jaa sakti jao bhi toh kahajao kya karoon kuch samaj main nahin aaraha she catches her head
k-beti main tumhare past ke baare main kuch nahin jaanta aur use batane ke liye force nahin karunga par tum mere ghar mainreh sakti ho mere dono bete us main settle hua hain meri wife 5 saal pehle expire hui hain meri aurmeri wife khi khwaish thi ki hamari ek beti ho tumhe dekh ke aisa lagta hain kijaise meri beti hoti toh bilkul tumhari tarah hogi kya tum ek akele baap ki beti banogi
nupur catches him and breaks down he takes her to his house it is a big house he introduces allthe servants
k-main ab hospital jaa raha hoon koi jaroorat pade toh mujhe call karna main sham ko aaonga
n-kya main aapko papa bula sakti hun
he feels very happy listening to dat k- haan jaroor main bahut khush hun aaj
n-mujhe ek aur baat kehni thi
k-kya
n-kya main aapke hospitalmain bacho ka caretaker ban sakti hun jo kuch bhi hua use dil se nikal nahi sakti atleast unke saat rahungi toh gam bulna aasan hoga
present
dr.rahul after listening dis tears come out of his eyes he goes out to find nupur
nupur in garden on bench to herself
kyun maine samrat ko fast drive karne ko kaha, kyun maine ring ke liye itna bada jhoot bola saari galti meri hain aur saza unhe milisaying dis she breaks down in her heart but no tears in her eyes all those tears have dried in the 3 months
rahul sees her he goes and sits beside her
r- lagta hainkuch gadbad hain
n-kya
r-lagatar bolne wali ladki achank chup kuch to gadbad hain tumhari tabiyet thik hain na
n-overaction band karo
r-acha tik hai tumhare papa ne mujhe sabkuch bataya main nahin jaanta tum mumbai kyun nahi aana chahthi par mumbai main akshay jaise bahut saare bache hain jo apni zindagi ke liye lad rahe hain unhe pyar aur hosle ki zaroorat hain main apne liye nahin unke liye tumhe waha lejana chahta hun baaki tumhari marzi
n-tik hain agar mere waha aane se bahut logo ki woh takleef dur hogi jis se main guzar rahi hun toh main chalungi
r-really thanks main aaj jaa raha hoon do din main tumhe waha aana hoga main tickets bej dunga
in excel samrats cabin
m-kya baat hain samrat tumne mujhe bulaya
s-haan mayank mere mom kefriend ka beta delhi se aaraha hain excel join karne uska naam samar malhotra hain he is a brilliant student but shaitani usse jyada karta uske harkato se tang aakar har college se nikala gaya hain use sudarne ke liye excel bej rahe hain uski responsibility main tumhe dena chahta hoon i hope ria ki tarah tum use bhi tik karoge
m-dont worry ill take care of him waise mahashay kab padar rahe hain
s-parso
mumbai airport
nupur enters and is waiting for rahul. a guy suddenly hits her
he says sorry and leaves both dont see each other. just den receptionist call him
excuse mr.samar malhotra
he turns back a handsome guy six pack body wearing tshirt
samar goes to her and she asks her pen. samar starts flirting
later his best friend varun calls him. he leaves
v- aate hi shuru ho gaya mom ko pata chala to teri kair nahin
s-mom ko pata nahin chalega agar tune unhe kuch bhi batayan to tu kal hospital main rahega
v-tu jhe jo karna hain kar waise me to kuch hi din ke liye aaya hun tujhe rokne aur tokne wala hain kaun main 10 minute main aaya tu yahi ruk
s- tik hain
(samar is a guy who is intelligent but mischievous. he respects our culture loves to tease gals by flirting, loves his mom the most and can do anything for her varun is his close friend who luks dull and boring and wears spectacles he want sent to take care of samar until he gets settled in mumbai. samar has lot of anger he believes in do or die, he loves to take part in gang fights if he likes anyone he can do anything for dem, he loves breaking rules making fun of people he hurts others in anger and later he only takes dem to hospital)
samar is busily flirting with a gal just den he sees nupur and becomes statue he follows her but misses as nupur leaves with rahul
v-kise doond raha hain
s-ek ladki ko yaar
v-phir se
s- vo sabki tarah nahi hain yaar wahin pyar karne wali
v-tab to party karni padegi waise vo hain kaun
s- pata nahin par vo jaha kahin bhi hogi main use doond loonga
v- tik hain ab chal warna pehle din hi late pahunchega
s-kya karun aadat se majboor hoon
excel college
a song on ria chale jaise hawaein male part on samars entry
samar goes to class late so mayank asks him to meet after the class
in mayanks cabin
samar-excuse me sir
m- yes come in aap aa gaye aapki maine kaafi taareef suni hain aur dekh bhi liya hain pehle hi din late
s-toh yaha bhi main popular ho gaya wah samar tu to great hain
m- ise popularity kehte ho sharam nahi aati pehle hi din lecturers se dant kaate hue
s- isi ko toh popularity kehte hain sir agar main time pe college aake class sunta to us beed main ko jaata aisa karne se aapka aur sabka attention meri taraf divert hua
m-to tum ye sab hamare attention ke liye kar rahe ho ye tumhara delhi nahin excel college hain pehle din hi tumhe lecture dena mujhe pasand nahin hain isiliye tumhe chod raha hun par agar ye repeat hua ill take action now u can leave
just den ria enters without knocking
r-sir mujhe aapse zaroori baat karni hain m-mere permission liye bina tum andar kaise aayi aur dekh nahi rahi ho main busy hun main baad main baat karunga
s-agar aap dono ki koi personal baat hain to main chalajaunga
m-koi personal versonal nahin hain aur aise kya dekh rahe ho tum jao mujhe kaam hain
r-par sir
m-maine kaha na leave
both leave
in samars room
v-us din tune jis ladki ko airport main dekha hain vo
s-vo kya(excited)
v-uska address mil gaya use maine newcity hospital main dekha shayad woh waha doctor hain
(as new hospital is under construction nupur works in old hospital)
samar reaches newcity hospital there he sees nupur with baloons giving to children he doesnt know how to talk to her so he makes his hand injured. seeing samars hand nupur brings first aid box and puts the bandage remembering mayank
n-tum ladke bi na bahut laaparvah ho
s- aap to aise baat karrahi hain jaise hume bahut ache se jaanti hain
she becomes silent. he continues
waise aap yeha doctor hain kya. aap ka naam kya hain
n- main yeha doctor nahi in bacho ki caretaker hoon aur mera naam nupur hain kyun complaint karenge kya
s-nahi aise hi puch raha ta
after 2 days in temple
nupur praying to god samar sees her and goes to her
s-aap yahan very happy to see u
n- tumhe maine nahi pehchana
samar shows his hand she remembers
n-oh tum tum yaha tumhe dekhkar nahi lagta kitum mandir bhi aate ho
s- woh actualy maakehti hai aadmi ka sar teen logo ke samne jukhta hain
n- maa, devi ma aur better half
s-aap ko kaise pata
n-yeh k2h2 ka dailogue hai kuch naya try karo
s-aap films dekhti hain
n-dekthi thi lekin ab
s-ab kya
n-tum nahi samjoge and she leaves he follows her
on the road she is looking for rickshaw mayanks car comes through dat road whiles she sees her she was getting into auto so she sees only her back but he sees samar and stops the car
m- tum yaha kuch to gadbad hain
s- aapne dekh liya actual maine use airport main dekha tha love at first sight
m- tumkiski baat kar rahe ho
s-us ladki ki aap kiski baat karrahe hain
m-tumhe mandir main dekhkar hairan tha main iske bare me pooch raha tha
s- oh woh sir yeh baat college main kisi ko mat bataiyein image ka sawaal hain
m-try karta hun hume college ko der ho rahi hain chalein
samar goes to hospital daily and soon both of dem become gud friends.even mayank and samar become close
one day a party was going to be held in excel samar asks nupur to come but she rejects with lot of difficulty he convinces her
similarly ria and samrat convince mayank all are in the party but everyone wear masks ria forces mayank and samar forces nupur to dance floor both are not dancing but just standing back to back dey feel something different just den nupur slips and mayank holds her but both dont recognise just den nupur leaves as she feels suffocated nupur leaves door just den mayanks mask falls down nupur forgets her purse so she comes in andwhile she is leaving sees mayank she is shocked she runs to him and hugs him and starts crying. all are shocked mayank also but later sees the person and hugs tighter for 10 minutes both cry like hell catching each other sajan recognises nupur(by d way gunjan abhi samrat par gussa hain) and gunjan runs to her and hugs her all the four r happy but others dont understand wat is happening all are confused
g-di aap tik ho itne din kaha thi mujhe chod kar kyun chali gayi pata hain maine aap ko kitna mis kiya aap promise kijiye ki phir mujhe chod kar kahi nahi jayengi
n(holding gunjans face)- gunjan gunjan shant kitna bolne lagi hain lagta hain meri bimari tujhe lag gayi maine bhi tujhe bahut mis kiya main promise karthi hun ki tujhe chod kar kahi nahi jaungi aaj main bohut bohut bohut kush hun
sayank are staring at dem
n- tum hamein aise kya dekh rahe ho
sayank- kuch nahin bahar chalein varna sab party chod kar hame hi dekhenge
dey four go out sayank have secret chat and go to gunur
m- ghar chalein
n-haan chal gunjan
s-chashmish nahi aayegi hum dono date pe jaa rahe hain
g- kya tum paagal hogaye ho main tumhare saat nahi aarahi
n-agar tum logo ka plan hain to tum jao main baad main milti hun
g- aise koi baat nahin hain samrat mazak kar raha hain main tumhare saath ghar chalti hun
s- tum apna promise todogi kya mayank tum kuch bolkyun nahi rahe
m- haan gunjan tum jao uske baad milna ghar pe bye
saying mayur leave in car
g- samrat tumne di se jhoot kyun bola
s- chashmish sorry gunjan maine jooth mayank ke liye bola hain
g- matlab
s-car main baitho raaste main bolunga
dey also leave
mayur in car (both are silent and feeling different suddenly both start at same time)
m-tum bolo
n-nahin tum
m-pls nupur tum bolo main sunna chahtha hun pata hain maine tumhare bato ko kitna mis kiya
n-aur mujhe(eye lock)
m-tumhe bhi
n-tumne apna mba complete kiya
m- haan ab main excel main proffesor hoon, gunjan councellor, samrat trustee
n- par tumhare dreams kuch aur the na
m-haan lekin mere dreams tumhare saat judhe the jab tum nahin thi main tumhare yaadon ke saath rehna chahta tha isiliye excel join kiya(his eyes get teary) aur tum
n- main teensaal tak coma main thi jab mujhe 3 mahine pehle hosh aaya tum log mere saath nahin the ye teen mahine bahut mushkil se gujare hain tum teeno toh saath the lekin main akeli thi
m- aur hum sab saath hoke bhi akele the
n-matlab(he stops car)tumne car yeha kyun roka
m-kyunki yaha hamari bahut saare yaadein hain main unhe taaza karna chahtha hun
(he takes her to beach )
n-tumne mere sawaal ka jawaab nahin diya
m-woh actually (he narrates the whole story)
n-mayank tumne aise kyun kiya tumhara gussa bhi na tumhe handle karna sirf mujhe aata hain bechara samrat tumne aur gunjan ne tik nahin kiya tumhe gunjan ko samjana chahiye tha na tumne uska saath kyun diya
m-mujhe samrat par nahin apne faith par gussa aa raha jo maine us par nikala lekin baad main maine use maaf kiya aur gunjan ko rokta to woh mujh se bhi ladti thi aur fir akele ho jaati thi
n- tumhe use samjana tha na
m- samjane ki koshish ki par main uska di nahin huna isi liye nahin suni
n- mayank pls mujhe tumhe chod kar phir nahin jaana hainmujhe tumhare saath rehna hain(she hugs him and crys)
m-ek baar tum mujhse dur gayi badi mushkil se mili phir aisa hone nahin dunga
(dey sit holding each others hands later mayank recieves a call thik hain hum aarahe hain saying dis he drop the call)
m- nupur raat bahut hogaya hame chalna chahiye
n-chalo
(both leave to home der sajan are ready with all arrangemnts nupur again does griha pravesh samrat gives aarthi to dem and have der food prepared by sajan and chat the whole night about der experiences dese three years nupur asks gunjan to forgive sam dey dont sleep dey sleep at around 2 '0 clock)
at 8'o clock nupur goes to wake up mayank mayank in sleep riya tumyaha kya kar rahi ho mainkitna acha dream dekh raha tha tumne disturb kiya
n- yeh ria kaun hain kahin woh principal ki beti tumne mere jaate hi kisi aur ke saath tumne apna promise tod diya(sajan were staring and laughing)
m-nupur relax riya peincipal ki beti nahin meri student kal raat bataya tha na woh paagal ladki bilkul tumhari xerox copy hain
n- acha woh ab jaldi se ready ho jao college nahin jaana hain mujhe bhi hospital jaana hain
g- di aap hamare saath college chaliye na
samrat- haan nupur maintumhe ria ko introduce kartha hun
mayank stares angrily at samrat
n-par mujhe hospital jaana hain
m-kal chale jana chalo nupurplease
n- acha tik hain ab jaldi se ready ho jao
m-so sweet
all get ready and leave to college
in college all are still in confusion nupur wears a white sari and puts mangalsutra and sindoor she looks damn gorgeous, she leaves her hair open nupur enters and wanders around college remembering past moments sajan were out with some work, mayank was parking his car all are looking at her ash, rohan, ria, samar go to her

actually main kuch reasons kiwajah se wapas update karne ke chances kam hain isiliye yeh main part jaldi update kiya jaldi main kuch boring ho gaya ill try to update again if i can and it will be a good part
part 3
in college all are still in confusion nupur wears a white sari and puts mangalsutra and sindoor she looks damn gorgeous, she leaves her hair open nupur enters and wanders around college remembering past moments sajan were out with some work, mayank was parking his car all are looking at her ash, rohan, ria, samar go to her
ash- aap di ko kaise jaanti hai
rohan- aap sam sir ko kaise jaanti hain
ria-woh baad main aap mayank sir ko kaise jaanti hain aur aap ne unhe hug kyun kiya
samar-aapne toh kaha tha aapka koi nahi hain phir yeh log kaun hain
n-bygod tum log bhi na lagatar ek ke baad ek cid ki tarah mujhe questions puch rahe ho by d way tum ash, rohan aur ria hona
ash- aap hame kaise jaante hain aur abhi tak apne mere question ka answer nahi diya
n-woh actually kal raat bar gunjan, mayank, samrat tum logo ke baare main bata rahe the aur samar tumhare baare main bhi
shukla sir enters is hellshocked to see nupur
s- nupur bhushan sharma aap yeh sach hain a koi maya hain
n-sir main such main hoon aap kaise hain
s-aapko waapas dekh kar athyant prasannatha hui aap ke bina aapke dost kali lagte the aap laut aayi acha laga aapke aane se excel ka purani yaad phir se taza ho gayi
n- shukriya sir unka pyar ne hi mujhe wapas laaya
s-mujhe kaam hain main jaa raha hoon aap se baad main milta hoon
n- thik hain sir (all 4 r still waiting for der conversation to complete )
n- tumlog gaye nahi abhi tak
a- aapne hamare question ka answer nahi diya
n- main kyon do tumlogo ko kade rehna hain to raho main jaa rahi hoon waise samar thanks mujhe excel wapas laane ke liye saying dis she leaves
rohan-yeh nupur bhushan sharma hain kaun(all look at each other faces)
dey see mayank talking to nupur and move towards dem
m- nupur tum kaha chali gayi hi maine tumhe pure college main doonda
n-relax mayank main koi choti bachi nahi ki beed main kho jaonge waise main is college ko achi tarah se jaanti hun
m- acha nupur main class ke liye der ho raha hun baad main milta hun ek minute (looking at 4 of dem ) tum log class chod ke yeha kya kar rahe ho aur ria maine tumhe kal kuch kaam bataya tha complete hua kyan
ria- sir woh
m- nahi hua hoga kaam chod kar aise gumoge toh kaise complete hoga tum sab apne apne classes jao
rohan-sir hum madam kaun hain yeh jaanne ki koshish kar rahe hai
m- tum logo ko koi kaam nahin hain kya jasoosi karte phir rahe ho
n- mayank chodona tumne apne aap ko hitler samaj rahe ho kya ab gussa chodo aur class jao
m- par tum kya karogi
samrat -(sajan enter) uski chinta aap mat kijiye nupur mere saath rahegi mujhe tum dono ki complaint karni hain(pointing majan) chale nupur
n-chalo(dey both leave)
m- par nupur chali gayi. ab tum sab mujhe aise kya dekh rahe ho apne apne classes jao chalo gunjan(dey also leave)
rohan- mujhe dal main kuch kala dikh raha hain(to himself)
ash-kya
rohan - kuch nahin class chale
in sams cabin both are busily checking files
n-sorry samrat
s-tum paper niche girane ke liye sorry bol rahi ho itna formal hone ki zaroorat nahin hain
n-main paper niche girne ki nahi mayank aur gunjan ki baat kar rahi hoon meri wajah se tumhe unse kitna kuch sunna pada
s- dost bolti h aur agle hi pal paraye kar dete ho wow kitna filmi hain tumhare sangat ka asar mujh par pad gaya
n-(beats him)acha bachu ab tum mere taang kich rahe ho
s- kya karu adat se majboor hoon aur waise mayank aur gunjan ne jo kuch bhi kaha woh unka tumhare liye pyaar hain aur mujhe acha laga unhone mujh par apna gussa utara akhir gussa apno par hi nikalte hain
n-sorry
s-phir sorry kis liye
n- sorry sorry bolne ke liye friends(gives her hand0
s-aise nahi aise
n-tumhe abhi tak yaad hain
s-nupur bhushan ko bulana aasan nahi hain
n-woh toh hain
(both smile)
mayank samrat ke cabin main jaata hain sam bahar jaata hain aur nupur ek file study kar rahi hain seeing her alone he hugs her from back nupur tries to shout he closes her mouth
m-chilana mat main hun
n- tum yaha kya kar rahe ho aur ye kya hain koi dekhega toh kya sochega
m- yahi ki ek husband apne wife se pyar kar raha hain
n- oh really waise tumhara class complete hua kya
m- haan kahi bahar chale
n-par tumhara class
m- abhi break hain canteen jayenge
both go to canteen chinu is happy to see nupur. later she comes to know about mayank not drinking coffee for her. she feels bad . later sajan join dem. and nupur comes to know dat from 3 years college has completely changed. she joins excel as proffesor after seeing excels current halat ria ash and rohans behaviour with lecturers. she wants to teach dem lesson. now der is funny war between nupur and newbies. atlast dey become friends. again talent parede, valentine malls everything starts again in excel. finally sajan marraige is fixed and dey get married . next day mayur will have a baby. abig reception is held for marraige all old charecters benia, adhaani, uday,cj, shilpa , bui, ravi bhushan,etc etc new charecters attend marriage der is group dance sequence by all guys and gals. later mayur go to us sajan go to london dey settle der mjht ends and even my os i cant write all tracks so i wrote in shortcut. ill try to come with new os bye take care however ill continue my ff hum saath saath hain
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