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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey friends i am new on this forum :) I am starting my first FF-


Love, Trust and Jelousy
KDMHMD Fan-Fiction
Characters-

Heer Banerjee- A fun-loving, supercool, college diva, cutest girl with high attitude.
Prem Juneja- A very sweet, simple, cuteset, handsome, brilliant guy, who is waiting for his princess

Gayatri Juneja- Prem's mother. She loves her son a lot. She is prem's best friend too.
Prakash Junega- Prem's father. He is very loving father and understanding too.

Pooja Banerjee- She is Heer's mother. She is very close to heer and her best friend too. Heer always share her everything only with her mother.
Anurag Banerjee- He is Heer's father. He loves heer a lot and can do anything for his princess heer.

Story starts from a college campus-
Heer enter to college and song starts-

Hey boy get me dripping with ice (She is coming out from car)
Get down on you knees and say whats nice (Her hair was flying in air)
Hey boy get me dripping with ice (Everyone is seeing her)
Get down on you knees and say whats nice (She checks her make-up)
Uske bare mein pada tha kahin (She removed her sunglasses)
Karta hoga woh intezar kahin (She is going to her friendgroup)
Hoga woh bhi to mujhsa dilnasheen (Every boy giving her a rose)
Uski jannat ho meri hi zameen (She is giving a smile to everyone)
Koi aisa ho koi waisa ho (Her friends points there fingers to every boy)
Kisi ek mein woh baat kahan (Her friends saying to her)
O baby sach to hai main kahan tu kahan (She is saying to everyone)

Yamini- Hey heer, aaj itni jaldi aa gayi?
Heer- yeah. Aaj dad ke friend ke beta aane wala hai.
Jennifer- So?
Heer- So woh bhi isi college mein addmission lene wala
Yamini(with evil smile)- oh. To phir khatirdani to karni padegi
Heer- yup. Ek saal se kisi par bhi koi prank nahi khela.
Jennifer- don't worry princess. Abhi uspar hi utne pranks khelenge ki bechara wapas chala jayega.
Yamini- Waise woh kehan se aa raha hai.
Heer- Delhi se
Jennifer- and what's his name?
Heer- Prem

A scene shifts to Mumbai Airport-
A boy is coming out from airport.
And a song starts-

Kahin to.. kahin to (A blow of wind)
Hogi wo,
Duniya jahan tu mere saath hai..(He smiles)

He goes to Banerjee House. Heer's Mom-dad were waiting for him. After he came they called heer and told to come fast.
Meanwhile they shows him his room, which specially they decorated for him. The room is very beautifully decorated with colorfull lights, guitar, television and laptop. Prem is started stying in that room and when heer came she heard the beautiful melody comes from the upstairs and someone was singing the lovely song too.

Tu hi haqeeqat khwaab tu (he started singing the song)
Dariya tu hi pyaas tu (Slowly camera is coming on his smile first)
Tu hi dil ki bekarari (Then camera is coming on his eyes)
Tu sukoon tu sukoon (Then camera is coming on his face)
Jaoon main ab jab jiss jagah (he is playing guitar)
Paoon main tujhko uss jagah (Heer forgot everything...even herself too)
Saath hoke na ho tu hai (She just falled into this song)
Rubaroo rubaroo (She is running to upstairs to see the singer)
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera (She enters to prem's room)
Tu humsafar tu humkadam tu humnawah mera (Prem and heer watching each other)

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Posted: 15 years ago
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HEy this is my 1st Fan-fiction.Please read it and tell me kya main ise continue karu?
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice concept
pls pm me when u update
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Posted: 15 years ago
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its a nice concept.do continue soon and add me to ur pm list and pm me whenever u update.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice concept.👍🏼 plzzzzzzzzzz yaar cont soon........... its really really nice. plzzzzzzzzzz add me 2 ur pm list n pm me when u r goin 2 update. plzzzzzzzzzz cont dont stop it.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Thank you so much heer_varsha, Sadhz, Swa291 😊
I already wrote 25% of FF 😊 So i can update everyday😃
Heres the next part-


Heer- Tum Prem ho right?
Prem- Haa...Heer
Heer-tumhe mera naam kaise pata hai?
Prem- kyunki yeh naam mere....
Tabhi Pooja wehan aa jata hai.

Pooja- Hey heer tum kab aayi?
Heer- abhi(she is blushing to say anything in front of prem)
Pooja-ok. Hey prem lunch ready hai.ok?
Prem-Haa aunty
Pooja- tum dono khana khane jaldi aa jana.
Pooja went from prem's room.

Heer- See you at lunch
Prem kuch kahe isse pehle hi heer wehan se khudke room mein chali jati hai.

Heer(saying to herself)- oh god princess, what happened to you? Why are you blushing to say anything in front of prem. Mujhe mere pranks nahi bhulne chahiye.
Then she went to do lunch.

On Lunch Table-
Pooja- Heer kal se prem bhi tumhara college join karega
Heer-cool
Pooja- Ya :) Tum bahut excited hoge na prem?
Prem-haa
Pooja- arey tum dono kuch bol kyun nahi rahe ho? Heer tu ghar pe rehti hai to ek minute bhi chup nahi rehti aur prem tum aaye the tab kitna bol rahe the...phir abhi kya hua tum dono ko?
Prem and heer- kuch nahi
Heer- Mom lunch ke baad main prem ko lekar college jau?
Pooja- great. Jao.
Heer- Thanks mom :D
Pooja- but koi pranks mat khelna ok?
Heer-no mom. (looking at prem) aaj ka din to main prem ka sabse memorable day bana dungi.
Pooja-ok

In college-
Heer prem ko college lekar aati hai. Prem ko dekhkar sabhi girls pagal ho jati hai aur uspar se najar hi nahi hata pati.
Yamini-Hi. Tum prem ho na?
Jennifer- Humein tumhare barien mein heer ne bataya tha
Prem-ya. Hi.

Heer-Hey tum dono ko yaad hai na ki maine tum dono se kya keha tha?
Jennifer- ofcourse yaad hai Princess
Prem- Princess. Nice name. Heer yehan pe basketball court kehan hai?
Yamini- wow tum bhi basketball khelte ho? Princess to basketball champion hai.
Prem- that's great. Par abhi hum lecture attend karenge aur uske baad basketball
Heer- Hey no. Lectures abhi nahi hai. Tum yehan ke boys ke sath basketball court jao tab hum teeno aate hi hai.
Prem-ok

Prem wehan se BB chala jata hai.
Jennifer(laughing)-Acha maza chakhaya bacchu ko. Use kya pata ki abhi sharma sir ka lecture hai. Unka lecture miss karna to bahut hi dangerous hai.
Yamini- Ya heer. Nice pranks.
Heer-Thanks angels. Let's go.

BB court-
Prem sab boys ke sath BB khel khel ke boar ho jata hai. Aakhir woh khud ke lecture ka classroom dhund leta hai but wehan lecture chal raha hota hai.

Sharma sir- hey i think tum prem juneja ho na? A new student?
Prem- yes sir.
Sharma- tum ab aaye ho jab lecture khatam ho raha hai aur woh bhi first day pe.
Prem-sir i am sor....
Sharma- ab kuch mat kehna. Ab to tumhe principle ke pass hi le jana hoga.
Prem- par sir
Sharma- Don't say anything. Chalo principle ke pass.

Un dono ke jate hi teeno angels ek-dusre ko hi5 date hai.
In Principle Cabin-
Sharma sir- sir yeh prem juneja hai. Humare class ka new student aur aaj pehle din hi yeh tab aaya jab mera lecture khatam ho raha tha.
Prem-Sir i am really sorry. Mujhe kisine bataya tha ki lecture ko abhi der hai.
Principle- ok aaj tumhara first day hai isliye
Sharma- but sir
Principle- Mr.Sharma. New student hai aur aaj uska first day hai. Isliye usko maaf kar dete hai. But aaj ke baad kabhi late mat hona ok?
Prem-ok sir. Thanks

Prem cabin se bahar nikalta hai. Woh ab heer ka plan samaj chuka hota hai.
BB court-
Heer was playing BB with her friends. Prem comes there.
Prem- Heer tumne bahut hi bakwas prank khela hai. Aise dar-dar ke prank khelne se acha mujhe BB mein harakar dikhao.
Heer- tum mujhe challenge kar rahe ho?
Prem- kuch aisa hi samjhlo
Jennifer-hey not bad idea guys
Yamini- but BB mein to tum dono hi ache ho. Koi aisa challenge lagao jo tumhe nahi aata. Jaise ki....jaise ki Dance competetion.
Heer-ok
Prem- nice idea.
Heer- to aaj...
Prem- no. Prank tumne decide kiya ab meri baari. Main decide karunga timing. Hum kal 4 baje isi college ke theatre mein dance competetion rakhenge
Yamini- haa aur hum dono cheerleaders rahenge
Heer-ok aur dance?
Jennifer- main batau? Tum dono ko ek solo dance karna hoga aur ek salsa dance.
Prem and heer-ok
Prem- all the best heer.
Heer- same here prem.
Yamini- ok guys. To kal milte hai. Bbye
Heer-bbye. Take care sweethearts.

Prem aur heer wehan se gusse mein hi ghar chale jate hai.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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hey i read both chapters its great
please add me to ur pm list
and update soon
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Posted: 15 years ago
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Hey Thanks a lot Sonia, heer193, Sadhz 😊
Heres the next part-


In Prem's Room-
Prem can't decide the song. Then suddenly Anurag comes to his room.
Anurag- Hey prem.
Prem- oh hello uncle.
Anurag-so how was your day?
Prem-nice. Bus ek dance competetion tair hua hai uske liye song decide nahi ka pa raha hoon
Anurag- competetion with Heer?
Prem(shocked)- Uncle aap ko kaise pata?
Anurag-I know her prem. But usko to dance nahi aata. To dance competetion?
Prem- dance to mujhe bhi nahi aata but yeh competetion uske friends ne decide kiya hai.
Anurag-ok. So don't worry. Main tumhe support karunga.
Prem-thanks uncle. Ab hum dono song sochte hai.
Anurag- ya and humare team ka naam hoga 'Handsome Hunk Prem'
Prem- cool name uncle. Thanks.

Prem song soch leta hai.
Prem- uncle maine song soch liya. Just do it from chance pe dance?
Anurag- That's cool prem

In Heer's Room-
Pooja- hey princess, to kal ke dance ki practise ki?
Heer- mom aapko kaise pata?
Pooja- I know dear. Your dad told me. He is supporting Prem. But i am supporting you.
Heer-oh :) Love you mom
Pooja- love you too my angel. To tumne koi song socha?
Heer- Three songs ko mix karke ek song banaungi
Pooja-which three songs?
Heer- Hey ya(kidnap), arabic music, hips don't lie(shakira)
Pooja- great to abhi se rehearsal shuru karte hai. Bus uske pehle humari team ka naam batadu jo maine decide kiya hai- Heer the Diva!!!
Heer- so sweet of you mom. Very nice name.
Pooja- thanks princess.

In college at 3 pm-
Heer and prem theater mein aate hai.

Jennifer- hey guys tum logo ne rehearsal ki na?
Heer-yup
Yamini- hey prem main na tumhari cheerleader banungi :D
Prem-ohk. Thanks :)
Heer-what? To meri cheerleader?
Jennifer- it's ok angel. Main tumhari cheerleader banungi
Heer- oh thanks Jenni.

Then heer's parents comes there.
Anurag- all the best prem.give a rocking performance
Pooja- all the very best angel. Sabki chutti kar dena aaj toh :)
Yamini- hey but kya tum logo ne salsa ke liye song socha?
Prem & heer-oh no. Nahi socha
Jennifer- don't worry. Humne soch liya hai. Song hoga 'khuda jaane kyun'
Heer's parents-wow
Heer- but rehearsal?
Prem- yahin to real challenge hai heer.
Heer- fine. Isi song par dance hoga. All the best prem.
Prem- same here.

4pm-
The theater is now filled with audience. All guys were comes for Heer the Diva!!! and all girls were comes for Handsome hunk Prem!!!

Yamini- hey girls, now hold your breath because abhi perform karne aa raha hai Handsome Hunk Prem
all girls- yeah!!! Prem....Prem....Prem. Go prem go!!!

Prem comes to stage. He wore black t-shirt and dark blue jeans.
The song starts-


Check It Out, Check It Out (moving light comes on him)
Dance Is Dance Is...
I Ll Tell You What Dance Is

A song suddenly stopped. Anugrag goes backstage and starts a song again. Prem was shocked by this incident.But He gave his 100% to this locking and popping dance. After his performance-
Jennifer- very nice performance prem. But ab prem ko harane aa rahi hai Heer the Diva!!!
all guys- come on heer....you rock...you can do it. Yeah!!!

Heer comes to stage. She wore a white top with pink short skirt and high-heels sandals.

The song starts-
I need you….
Jaana mera janam tu, aur mein hun teri jaane jaan (laser lights comes on her)
Aisa boloon waisi mein latki hun kahan
Tujhe dil de dun mein, aaja tera dil le lun mein

She done a bollywood style dance on this song.after this song she done a belly dance on arabic music and hips don't lie

After her performance-
Yamini- good performance heer. But ab bahut jaldi jeetne wala hai handsome hunk prem!!!
Jennifer-woh to ab pata chal hi jayega. Abhi aapke samne aa rahe hai Prem-heer

Prem-heer comes on stage. He wore a white shirt and blue jeans. She wore a white knee-lenth dress with white sandals.
Everyone- prem....heer....prem....heer.
After coming on stage they start dancing. But music stopped again. Heer stopped dancing.
All girls- oh....Heer you are a loser......loser.....loser.....
A tears started coming from her eyes
Prem- heer what happened?
Heer- Prem bina music ke ab hum kaise dance karenge?
Prem- Tum tension mat lo. Hum aisa dance karenge ki sab log bas dekhte reh jayenge. Tum bas rona band karo. Please.
Heer(smiles)-ok
Prem(smiles)- that's my sweetest heer :) ab tum dil se song ko imagine karo...aur dekhna song apne aap bajne lagega
The dance starts- (focus lights comes on them)

Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon (He is looking into her eyes)
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se (She is looking at him too)
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..(He is coming close to her)

Sajde Mein Yuhin Jhukta Hoon Tum Pe Aake Hi Rukhta Hoon (He holds her hands)
Kya Yeh Sabko Hota Hai Humko Kya Lena Hai Sab Se (He is sitting down in his knees)
Tum Se Hi Sab Baathe Ab Se Ban Gaye Ho Tum Meri Dua..(He is singing)

Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon (He hold her in his arms)
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya..(pulling her close to him)
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda..(she turned)

Dil Kahe Ke Aaj Chupa Lo Tum Panaahon Mein (moving lights comes on them)
Ke Dar Hai Tumko Kho Dunga (he gives her a sweet hug)
Dil Kahe Sambhal Zara Khushi Ko Na Nazar Laga (he is saying to her)
Ke Dar Hai Mein To Ro Dunga.. (he is looking deep in her eyes)
Hooo Karthi Hoon Saugaate Tumse (she is singing)
Baande Dil Ke Waade Tumse, Yeh Tumhe Na Jaane Kyan Hua..(she holding his face)
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Fidaa Hoon (he is saying to her)
Khuda Jaane Ke.. Mein Mit Gaya.. (they turned)
Khuda Jaane Yeh Kyun Hua Hai Ke Ban Gaye Ho Tum Mere Khuda (they hugged each other)

They stopped singing. Everyone was watching them happily :)
Yamini-Prem and heer. Very very beautiful dance. Guys please clap your hands for Prem & Heer.

Boys & girls- Prem...Heer....Prem....Heer.....Prem Heer you rock
Heer- Thanks a lot friends. But yeh dance sirf main Prem ki wajah se kar payi. Thanks a lot prem and I am sorry :(
Prem-It's ok
Jennifer- so guys winner kise banna chahiye?
Boys & girls- Prem and heer dono ko
Jennifer- ok. To draw hua
Yamini- ya. To prem and heer tum dono hi winners ho. Congrats
Jennifer- but maybe you don't know guys ki abhi yehan pe principle sir bhi hai
Everyone-What? Oh, sir aap?
Principle- don't worry students. Main bhi yeh performance enjoy ka raha hoon. Prem-Heer very good performance :)
Prem & Heer- Thanks a lot sir. Sir hum chahte hai ki aap bhi stage pe aake kuch kahe
Jennifer- guys please give a round of applause for principle sir.
Principle sir- Thank you. Prem-Heer tum dono ke itne best performance ke baad main tum dono se request karta hoon ki is baar 'Jashn-E- ' mein tum dono ko dance karna hi hoga.
Everyone-yeah....Prem....Heer....Prem....Heer
Jennifer- Thanks you so much sir yehan aane ke liye :) so guys see you tomorrow. Because competetion ab khatam ho chuka hai. Bbye guys.
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Posted: 15 years ago
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heyyyyyyyyy vry nice part....👏👏 love this collage love story........ waiting for nxt part....................
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Posted: 15 years ago
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nice concept!
seems interesting......do continue soon!

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