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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara...OMG dm's letter 2 santu was so touchng nd painful...its true...he mised her a lot...post next soon dear
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Posted: 15 years ago
sheela he miss her as he was away from everyone .....so away
@thanks mula :) u such are sweet persone
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Posted: 15 years ago

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pain

Santo say in very painful voice ………

Santo: malik……dhram……..

In that moment it be like there is something in her throat and she cold not speak at all her eyes sink in the storm of tears ……santo just need him too much …..But she found that he need her more then she need him …….santo in sudden put her head on DM lap ……….her hair separated all over the on his laps on his leg …….

DM surprised from her acting………put he just throw the letter from his hand as he like saying …….that all past why we bring it to today ………I was wanting her to feel all the pain that I was in it not to make her feeling guilty just to make her understand that after she coming back he can't pain her can't lose her …….ha he know she is always there for him but he is there for her?????

DM shocked from this question and he put his hand on her head rapping her hair lost in her sadness ………..lost in that day when she come for the first time as bride and he all what he do is point by his finger to stay there outside the house as stranger as outsider ……it is the same women who caring on his laps ….crying his pain ……….

Then santo feel of small drop of wet coming from up she just make her head move a little and her eyes catch lost in DM eyes catch his pain ………..she couldn't bear it

And santo head remain in it place as her hands hold him more to her hold his dota so tightly as DM notice that…………DM hand……….

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara...nice dear...the way u compard santu's past wit present was wowowow....realy sweet lovely scene...bt very shorttttt
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Posted: 15 years ago
Sara sorry for the late reply been busy just had moment to read both your ffs and they are both soo emotional and lovely...dm's ltrs both their reactions and he remembering how he treated Santu when he 1st brang her home to now 😭
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Posted: 15 years ago

awwww thanks guys shahara and sheela

love u both awwwwwwwwwwwwww

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Posted: 15 years ago
your FFs are breath taking. you have given a new meaning to our sanraj.
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Posted: 15 years ago

Originally posted by: hbuy

your FFs are breath taking. you have given a new meaning to our sanraj.

thanks dear u are such lovely friend happy it make u smile😊
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Posted: 15 years ago

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Stop be far


And santo head remain on DM laps as her hands hold him more to her hold his dota so tightly as DM notice that……DM hand cover her hand so warmly …..she feel his hand and her tears fall more and more ……..DM hear …ehh ehh….of santo and he just press more on her hand as his other hand rub on her head ………

They remain like that for same time ……then slowly and quietly DM hold santo shoulder and make her sit facing him …….he just keep look at her mess hair ….her mess look but what interested him more is the remain tiny tears on her eyes …..She not looks at him….. Her eyes move here and there but not straight at him at all …….

DM just move to her and when he become so close to her he keep looking at her shack lips ……he not touching her …..He just so close to her …….and in low voice DM says….

DM: stop these tears ……meri jaan …..It is killing me so deeply every drop of u tears is a knife cutting me so deeply ……..stop or I will be a dead body front u…..

Santo hand rise too fast to cover his mouth and her eyes look straight to his eyes …….silent moment of mess emotion controlling them ………..she stop crying……she stop everything ……..just she cover his mouth and nod her head in no …………like it is a big sadma to her ….oh malik what u say ….saying to her self

DM holds her hand the one which cover his mouth and in so soft way he removes her hand and says …………….

DM: so the tears stop……….

Santo: the tears are not……….Dhramraj u are the most important person to me ………me tears bec of u pain ……..how I will kill u with it for u I will stop everything and will begin anything for u …..Just u ……..

DM: then smile……..for me

From her tears santo smile a lovely smile which like a light sun come through the clouds of stormy sky……..

DM hand move on her soft skin …..Move on her lovely face …….and that is the sign of his happiness ………..in that moment santo thought ……..

I destroy the last day of our honeymoon in tears and sadness why?................

The past was gone and disappear from this moment he is here and I will never leave him ……………never and santo place a warm kiss on his smiley lips and DM like had a shock of emotion in suddenly …………he miss her ….saying to him self and

TBC

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Posted: 15 years ago
Touchng dear...both dnt want thr separation again...thy love eachother unconditionaly.OMG tis is the last day of the honeymoon?????Nooooo

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