Little Personal-POEM on Pg 26(19th July) - Page 14

@Sneha, Shags- Still in Dreamland, Ain?

On Jiya di's encouragement i tried my hand at writing a poem...didnt know what to write on, so thought better write on something thats always on my mind.
I am still not out of this dreamland..so here it is, the first poem i have ever wrote myself..i know its very childish, but cant be better from me!😆

Hope u enjoy reading it...as much as i enjoyed writing it!😃


Life gives us rare moments to live our dream,
This time was the rarest of all - Meeting the CID Team.😍
A Dream that I never thought would come true,
Not before I got connected on FB to the show's crew.
Like angels they responded to me cordially,
Also confirmed about the success of the SIGNATURE CAMPAIGN unofficially.😉

Finally the wait was over, 16th June was the day,
"What if they cancelled the shoot?" was the only thought on my way.
Then came as a support my two sweet friends,🤗
Never felt it was our first encounter, we chatted till the day's end.

The moment we entered the lane our hearts skipped some beats,
Followed by the glimpse of the Team that made us jump of our seats.
Surprising I know but we all saw our respective favourites at first,
But the Classic moment was when we saw the entire team at their best.
Coming out of the car, we didnot know what to do,
We did not know whom to approach or who do we talk to.😕

After this everything happened as if all in an instant,
We lived our life as we experienced all the best moments.
They welcomed us with smiles on their faces,
Our expressions and words had nothing but praises.
The team was just like what we had thought of,
Humble and caring but not that Rough and Tough.❤️

Satam Sir was the sweetest, there can be no doubt,
To Adi Sr and Dinesh Sir, we spoke our hearts out.😃
Daya Sir was at a distance, we didn't know what to say,
Now we regret that, how much we had to tell him that day.😔
Vaishnavi and Hrishikesh were personally very sweet,
But we missed Viivek and Narendra Sir a lot during the meet.

Thank You God for writing this day in OUR destiny,
At the end of the day, we had cherishable moments many.🥳
For others the day was over as 16th June,
But we three have left our hearts there, hoping to meet again soon.❤️
Mumbai was never prettier for me,
How could it even be, I saw best of its beauty.

Long Live CID, let them solve hundreds of more cases,⭐️
Reading this poem must have brought smiles to some of your faces!!!😆


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Whatever it is, this is my FIRST creation... as a poet!

Dedicated to Sneha di and Ujjwala di...😃😃

Love u Jiya di for the encouragement! without that, i would have never ever attempted to something like this.🤗

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Lovely poem Shaggy, Thanx Jiya for bringing out next great poet in IF Keep writing and seriously You spoke my heart. Thanx for everything

meine kaha tha na tum likh sakati ho..aur u r best....agar koi kami ho to sneha bata sakati ..lekin muze nahi lagati...wecome to poet biradari..😃 my sweet heart son..love u a lot.

Originally posted by: sneha_fighter

Lovely poem Shaggy, Thanx Jiya for bringing out next great poet in IF Keep writing and seriously You spoke my heart. Thanx for everything

Actally speaking sneha when I read this artical I thought espe poem achhi kar sakati hein..shaggy chuupi rustam hein...wo dikhati hein usase jyada talented hein..actally I was expeting from you also...tuzya shivay ajun koni changal nahi karu shakat...he trikala badhit satya aahe..pan i must say shaggy pan tuzya eatakich talented aahe...😃

I agree rather she is more talented than me, Waise I thougt of this idea magar sapne se bahar niklu toh kuch sochu aur likh pau naa 😆

Originally posted by: sneha_fighter

I agree rather she is more talented than me, Waise I thougt of this idea magar sapne se bahar niklu toh kuch sochu aur likh pau naa 😆

ok mat nikalana lekin 1hours ke liye nikalana aur phir eak poem likhake phir se ghus jana..tuze koi distrub nahi karega..lekin hum eak achha cretion miss kar rahein hein😕

Originally posted by: jiya1

<div></div>ok mat nikalana lekin 1hours ke liye nikalana aur phir eak poem likhake phir se ghus jana..tuze koi distrub nahi karega..lekin hum eak achha cretion miss kar rahein hein😕

Ok madam aapki itni iccha hain toh i will try

Originally posted by: sneha_fighter

Ok madam aapki itni iccha hain toh i will try

e meri iccha nahi order hei tumko😉 just kidding yaar😃

thanx a lot Jiya di and Sneha di for appreciating my work..😃
But please yeh kuch jyada ho gaya...main aur aap logon se jyada talented???😲😲

U guys are just superb...meri to ek stupid se creation kar di..

Sneha di..waiting for urs!😃